A solid story, but not outstanding like I think it could have been
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 7/10
PROS:
- Michael captures the fractured mind of an obsessive artist very well. Giles is flighty and endlessly distractable, and he sees everything in terms of its artistic merit. He injures his feet at one point, and when Harrison wraps them for him, Giles wonders, “idly, if his feet [will] leave interesting patterns on the gauze.”
- Harrison is the perfect complement for Giles, as is the case with every Sean Michael Dom-sub pairing. Harrison has infinite patience, and he knows exactly the best way to talk (or touch) Giles down when he starts to freak out.
- Giles is sensitive about his psychological issues, but he’s also got a sense of humor about his tendency toward madness.
- I really liked Giles’ sister. She’s understanding of his personality, but she’s also tough. She doesn’t belittle his emotional and psychological problems, but she doesn’t baby him either.
CONS:
- The book is short, and although it feels complete to me, I was also left with the impression that it would have been a stronger story if it had dug just a little deeper into the characters’ lives, particularly Giles’ neuroses. Especially when compared with some of the longer Hammer stories (Bent, for example, or Found), this one seems a bit shallow.
- Sean Michael’s novels all have a problem with editing, so listing it as a con is almost unnecessary. But when the errors are blatant…and when the first one occurs just halfway through the first PAGE of the book…you know it’s a pretty serious problem. Sometimes I wonder whether the author even rereads the stories after having written them, not to mention an editor.
Overall comments: There are about five paragraphs in one of the earlier Hammer stories about these two characters, and ever since I read that story, I’ve wanted to know more about Giles and Harrison. I can’t say that I was blown away by this story--some of the other Hammer books simply have more depth and are thus more interesting--but I enjoyed it. If you’re a fan of the Hammer universe, this is another good installment.