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Zincian Legend #1
The Chosen
Kaia’s entire life has erupted in flames after an assassin appears and burns her village down. She’s rescued by a god from another planet who requests her help because she’s the descendant of their last savior. Together with Reeze — the only other survivor from her village and her appointed guardian — they set off on a quest to find the treasures of the gods in hopes of preventing a dire prophesy.
Kaia and Reeze quickly meet the Tueors, a group of people many thought extinct, who are searching specifically for Kaia. Their to protect the truth. As Kaia discovers more about the truth and her family’s past, she also learns of the Tueors’ bloody secret. Will Kaia be the savior the gods have been waiting for? Or will she let the prophesy come true?
Kaia and Reeze quickly meet the Tueors, a group of people many thought extinct, who are searching specifically for Kaia. Their to protect the truth. As Kaia discovers more about the truth and her family’s past, she also learns of the Tueors’ bloody secret. Will Kaia be the savior the gods have been waiting for? Or will she let the prophesy come true?
234 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 12, 2010
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Sheenah Freitas
14 books37 followersA neek at heart, Sheenah Freitas has a love for the whimsical and magical. She looks to animated Disney movies and Studio Ghibli films for inspiration because of the innovative twists on fairytales, strong story structures, and character studies. When not writing, you might find her in a forest where she's yet to find any enchanted castles.
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March 20, 2011
I have a lot to say, so I’m just going to dive in and start with some plot elements and then move on to the actual writing. If you want a short synopsis, skip to the last paragraph.
The storyline of The Chosen - unremarkable girl and her motley group of new friends have to save the world - is interesting, but not exactly “new.” I think that the author tried to make it such by having it take place on Earth’s sister planet, Zinc, but this was unnecessary. Zinc is basically Earth’s clone - aside from some fantastical creatures (merpeople, elves, vampires, dragons) there is nothing that sets the two worlds apart. We have learned from other literature, however, that Earth can also contain all of these elements. If Zinc had been significantly different from Earth in landscape, air quality, anything, it would have made all the difference for me.
By the last quarter of the book, I was starting to feel some attachment to characters and curiosity about their futures in this trilogy, which is kind of surprising considering that they were moderately one-dimensional. For example – Kaia’s entire village got burned down and everyone she knew and cared for is dead. This is a HUGE deal for anyone, yet we barely see any emotion from her. I hope that the characters are more developed in the sequel or it is going to be another flat reading.
The sequels need to be more developed in every aspect, actually. I would like to see characters with greater emotional spectrums; details and descriptive language that go beyond simple hair color; and dialogue beyond superficial bickering and teenage angst.
I can get past the above complaints, but there are several issues which almost made me abandon the book. I don’t know if the following issues stem from a lack of knowledge of good writing, or if they were a result of careless composition, but the effect was the same: they made me want to stop reading.
Firstly, there were some inaccuracies with descriptors: in the beginning, Kaia grabs a wicker basket to collect blackberries. Later, she is dropping the same blackberries into a bucket. It’s a small thing, but to me they are completely different items. Secondly, there were some words that were used incorrectly - the merpeople eat mussels, not muscles, and light covers someone, it doesn’t covet them. Lastly, there were many sentences that were structurally incorrect or just not quite right, and there was an overuse of commas. All of these issues could have been solved had she had someone carefully read through the manuscript before it was published.
To sum everything up, I am intrigued by the story at this point and wish to know where it goes from here, but I had an incredibly difficult time reading The Chosen because of the poor writing and editing. These obvious errors could have easily been seen and corrected with careful reading and editing before publication. The plot, while not new, has potential, but I hope the sequels display much more character development, better and more involved descriptions of just about everything, and vastly improved writing/editing.
The storyline of The Chosen - unremarkable girl and her motley group of new friends have to save the world - is interesting, but not exactly “new.” I think that the author tried to make it such by having it take place on Earth’s sister planet, Zinc, but this was unnecessary. Zinc is basically Earth’s clone - aside from some fantastical creatures (merpeople, elves, vampires, dragons) there is nothing that sets the two worlds apart. We have learned from other literature, however, that Earth can also contain all of these elements. If Zinc had been significantly different from Earth in landscape, air quality, anything, it would have made all the difference for me.
By the last quarter of the book, I was starting to feel some attachment to characters and curiosity about their futures in this trilogy, which is kind of surprising considering that they were moderately one-dimensional. For example – Kaia’s entire village got burned down and everyone she knew and cared for is dead. This is a HUGE deal for anyone, yet we barely see any emotion from her. I hope that the characters are more developed in the sequel or it is going to be another flat reading.
The sequels need to be more developed in every aspect, actually. I would like to see characters with greater emotional spectrums; details and descriptive language that go beyond simple hair color; and dialogue beyond superficial bickering and teenage angst.
I can get past the above complaints, but there are several issues which almost made me abandon the book. I don’t know if the following issues stem from a lack of knowledge of good writing, or if they were a result of careless composition, but the effect was the same: they made me want to stop reading.
Firstly, there were some inaccuracies with descriptors: in the beginning, Kaia grabs a wicker basket to collect blackberries. Later, she is dropping the same blackberries into a bucket. It’s a small thing, but to me they are completely different items. Secondly, there were some words that were used incorrectly - the merpeople eat mussels, not muscles, and light covers someone, it doesn’t covet them. Lastly, there were many sentences that were structurally incorrect or just not quite right, and there was an overuse of commas. All of these issues could have been solved had she had someone carefully read through the manuscript before it was published.
To sum everything up, I am intrigued by the story at this point and wish to know where it goes from here, but I had an incredibly difficult time reading The Chosen because of the poor writing and editing. These obvious errors could have easily been seen and corrected with careful reading and editing before publication. The plot, while not new, has potential, but I hope the sequels display much more character development, better and more involved descriptions of just about everything, and vastly improved writing/editing.
February 5, 2012
A fascinating story that blends mythology with modern fantasy fare…
Some writers are born with talent and others with a book in their hands. In Sheenah Freitas’ case, I dare say that both were true. In the “The Chosen” she has crafted a fascinating novel that captures the modern magic of supernatural vampires, mermaids, and dragons and has effectively combined them with a mythology that echoes the finest historical fantasies.
Kaia Ketoki is a simple girl growing up in a rural community. But when her entire village is destroyed, she is magically whisked away by members of an otherworldly priesthood and soon learns that her destiny is anything but simple. As a descendant of Shanti, a helper to the gods, Kaia is asked to assist in returning the proper balance of good and evil to Earth’s sister world Zinc. As luck—or divine intervention—would have it, the only other young survivor from her village is asked to protect her during a quest to retrieve a series of magical items. As young Kaia encounters supernatural and magical creatures of nearly every stripe, she experiences the elations of success and true friendships as well as the stinging wounds of defeat and betrayal.
Come join brilliant author Sheenah Freitas on a fantasy journey fraught with danger and steeped in discovery. This fabulous first book in the Zincian Legend is sure to leave you pleading for more.
Reviewed by “Maine’s Other Author” TM Tim Greaton
Some writers are born with talent and others with a book in their hands. In Sheenah Freitas’ case, I dare say that both were true. In the “The Chosen” she has crafted a fascinating novel that captures the modern magic of supernatural vampires, mermaids, and dragons and has effectively combined them with a mythology that echoes the finest historical fantasies.
Kaia Ketoki is a simple girl growing up in a rural community. But when her entire village is destroyed, she is magically whisked away by members of an otherworldly priesthood and soon learns that her destiny is anything but simple. As a descendant of Shanti, a helper to the gods, Kaia is asked to assist in returning the proper balance of good and evil to Earth’s sister world Zinc. As luck—or divine intervention—would have it, the only other young survivor from her village is asked to protect her during a quest to retrieve a series of magical items. As young Kaia encounters supernatural and magical creatures of nearly every stripe, she experiences the elations of success and true friendships as well as the stinging wounds of defeat and betrayal.
Come join brilliant author Sheenah Freitas on a fantasy journey fraught with danger and steeped in discovery. This fabulous first book in the Zincian Legend is sure to leave you pleading for more.
Reviewed by “Maine’s Other Author” TM Tim Greaton
April 9, 2012
3.5 stars
As Catrina is cleaning out an old bar she hears children playing in the street, it’s not long before the children notice her as well. They hurry to her and beg her for a story. She tells them she will tell them a story they have never heard before: the story about how the war actually started.
Our story starts on the planet earth in a small village where Kaia Ketoki lives in a small village with her mother. Kaia is sent on an errand to pick blackberries for her mother and while she is gone an evil man named Tipton appears and sets her village on fire. There are no survivors except Kaia and a strange young man named Reeze. Reeze sends Kaia to hide at the shrine while he confronts Tipton and they fight. When Reeze arrives at the shrine, he is mortally wounded but Kaia manages to get him inside the shrine where two priestesses appear to them. The two priestesses take Kaia and Reeze to their council where it is decided Kaia is actually The Chosen, the granddaughter of a goddess thought to be dead who is destined to save the world. Kaia, with Reeze as her guardian, is sent off to earth’s sister planet, Zinc, where she is to gather the treasures of the Gods. They are to meet up with a guide named Catrina, who will help them on their quest. Catrina is a Mitem, one of the people who have been chosen to hold the treasures.
Catrina, Kaia and Reeze meet up and begin their journey, encountering the merpeople, Derek and Princess Recla, along the way. Derek and Recla know the Mitem who holds the second of the treasures they are to collect and agree to take them. The four travelers will encounter more creatures of fantasy along their journey, fight for their lives and bond with each other.
This is an interesting book that combines mythology and today’s fascination with creatures that go bump in the night. Just about every manner of creature one can imagine is encountered along our intrepid treasure hunter’s journey. They come across vampires and dragons, witches and mermaids, to just name a few. Kaia, as The Chosen, is the heroine of the story but we get to know Reeze, Catrina, Derek and Recla quite well along the way as well. Kaia is a smart girl, probably around 17 years old, curious and brave she handles most of what she encounters with grace and dignity. Reeze is just the opposite, a silent strong young man. About Kaia’s age, he is a mystery throughout most of the book. Derek gives us comic relief, he likes the girls – no matter what species and loves to tease both Recla and Catrina. Catrina is a warrior through and through. She can fight with the best of them, yet she does have a gentle side, she just hides it well. Recla is what one would expect of a princess, slightly aloof yet approachable. I enjoyed all of them and found myself totally engrossed in their adventure.
I’m not a lover of fantasy books, in my real life outside of the review world, I don’t read them. In spite of that, when I was able to get around my natural dislike of strange names (why can’t fantasy writers name their characters Bob?), I enjoyed this book. There were a few issues with it; it could have used one more pass with the editor as there were some grammar errors. I also had a few story inconsistency issues; there are people we know were on earth that appear on Zinc. How did they get there? At one point dragons were used to get to a destination but not mentioned when a fight occurred, wouldn’t one use them as a weapon if they were hanging around, etc. All little issues, but just enough to dampen my enjoyment just a bit. There is some violence, you can’t have all these creatures running around and a group on a quest to save the world without a fight or two breaking out, but it’s not too graphic and does fit into the story. There is a slight cliffhanger of an ending, but it works so I didn’t have a problem with it. My issues aside, I think anyone who enjoys fantasy will enjoy this book.
Reviewed as a Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Review Team
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As Catrina is cleaning out an old bar she hears children playing in the street, it’s not long before the children notice her as well. They hurry to her and beg her for a story. She tells them she will tell them a story they have never heard before: the story about how the war actually started.
Our story starts on the planet earth in a small village where Kaia Ketoki lives in a small village with her mother. Kaia is sent on an errand to pick blackberries for her mother and while she is gone an evil man named Tipton appears and sets her village on fire. There are no survivors except Kaia and a strange young man named Reeze. Reeze sends Kaia to hide at the shrine while he confronts Tipton and they fight. When Reeze arrives at the shrine, he is mortally wounded but Kaia manages to get him inside the shrine where two priestesses appear to them. The two priestesses take Kaia and Reeze to their council where it is decided Kaia is actually The Chosen, the granddaughter of a goddess thought to be dead who is destined to save the world. Kaia, with Reeze as her guardian, is sent off to earth’s sister planet, Zinc, where she is to gather the treasures of the Gods. They are to meet up with a guide named Catrina, who will help them on their quest. Catrina is a Mitem, one of the people who have been chosen to hold the treasures.
Catrina, Kaia and Reeze meet up and begin their journey, encountering the merpeople, Derek and Princess Recla, along the way. Derek and Recla know the Mitem who holds the second of the treasures they are to collect and agree to take them. The four travelers will encounter more creatures of fantasy along their journey, fight for their lives and bond with each other.
This is an interesting book that combines mythology and today’s fascination with creatures that go bump in the night. Just about every manner of creature one can imagine is encountered along our intrepid treasure hunter’s journey. They come across vampires and dragons, witches and mermaids, to just name a few. Kaia, as The Chosen, is the heroine of the story but we get to know Reeze, Catrina, Derek and Recla quite well along the way as well. Kaia is a smart girl, probably around 17 years old, curious and brave she handles most of what she encounters with grace and dignity. Reeze is just the opposite, a silent strong young man. About Kaia’s age, he is a mystery throughout most of the book. Derek gives us comic relief, he likes the girls – no matter what species and loves to tease both Recla and Catrina. Catrina is a warrior through and through. She can fight with the best of them, yet she does have a gentle side, she just hides it well. Recla is what one would expect of a princess, slightly aloof yet approachable. I enjoyed all of them and found myself totally engrossed in their adventure.
I’m not a lover of fantasy books, in my real life outside of the review world, I don’t read them. In spite of that, when I was able to get around my natural dislike of strange names (why can’t fantasy writers name their characters Bob?), I enjoyed this book. There were a few issues with it; it could have used one more pass with the editor as there were some grammar errors. I also had a few story inconsistency issues; there are people we know were on earth that appear on Zinc. How did they get there? At one point dragons were used to get to a destination but not mentioned when a fight occurred, wouldn’t one use them as a weapon if they were hanging around, etc. All little issues, but just enough to dampen my enjoyment just a bit. There is some violence, you can’t have all these creatures running around and a group on a quest to save the world without a fight or two breaking out, but it’s not too graphic and does fit into the story. There is a slight cliffhanger of an ending, but it works so I didn’t have a problem with it. My issues aside, I think anyone who enjoys fantasy will enjoy this book.
Reviewed as a Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Review Team
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February 27, 2012
I've been wanting to read this book for so long. I must admit that I was originally drawn to it for the cover art, but several other factors pulled me in. One, I read her bio and blog, and loved that she studied Disney films. That would mean she'd do a great job at setting up an emotional story. But I also wanted to read it because of the synopsis. This book had all the potential in the world.
Overall:
The book is great, but that Disney factor played a large role that I didn't expect. *Warning, here's a small spoiler: The second the book opens up, Kaia's mother dies. The first thing I thought was, I have no emotional attachment to this character so why should I care? I even tried thinking of how I would feel if my mom were murdered at that age, but that only made things worse. Kaia didn't seem as emotionally ripped as she should have been if everything she knew and loved had been torn from her. The entire book started off poorly for me, but I kept pressing on.
Characters:
I won't spoil any more of the story, but I will say that the characters are appealing for the most part. Catrina is my favorite. I love her fire. She's the only reason I could press on. Kaia was weak and a stereotypical boring fantasy girl with no real spine. She relied on everyone too much and it made the story drag out. With Catrina, there was depth and a true back story. I was thrilled when Derek found out about her secret, but wanted more. I don't want to spoil it, but I wanted so much more fire and anger.
Settings:
Around 40% of the novel, the settings were described very well and detailed. However, I couldn't picture the worlds in the first half. Freitas did spend time describing them in the beginning, but it didn't work for me. Out of no where, things picked up and I got great mental images.
Minor Issues:
Here's a pet peeve that may bother some readers, but not others. At one point, the reading really slowed down for me. Kaia, Kaitlin, and Catrina were all in one scene. Fine, but I really had to pay attention to the names because they all blended. It's just one minor thing, but I would hope an author would choose more unique names to help with my flow.
Other Minor issues include the varying ellipsis usage, the confusing scene changes, and the quick topic changes in some dialogue.
Strengths:
Zinc is amazing. You'll love this place and want to meet some people. The second I read about mermaids I was all in. The weapons and gods are interesting as well. Freitas was definitely flexing her mental muscles when building this place.
To conclude, I liked it though I wanted to love it. This is a great story for someone that has some extra time and wants change from the vampires and werewolves lurking in so many different indie books. I'd be all for this book if the content editing was a bit better. The transitions needed strengthening and some of the dialogue should be picked up. But the characters are very complex and have a long history. I just wish they were a bit more interesting.
I'm so in the middle on this novel but I wish the author the best. I don't know if I'll read the second book, but I'm definitely going to read Freitas's next series. I think as she grows as a writer, the stories will get epic.
Overall:
The book is great, but that Disney factor played a large role that I didn't expect. *Warning, here's a small spoiler: The second the book opens up, Kaia's mother dies. The first thing I thought was, I have no emotional attachment to this character so why should I care? I even tried thinking of how I would feel if my mom were murdered at that age, but that only made things worse. Kaia didn't seem as emotionally ripped as she should have been if everything she knew and loved had been torn from her. The entire book started off poorly for me, but I kept pressing on.
Characters:
I won't spoil any more of the story, but I will say that the characters are appealing for the most part. Catrina is my favorite. I love her fire. She's the only reason I could press on. Kaia was weak and a stereotypical boring fantasy girl with no real spine. She relied on everyone too much and it made the story drag out. With Catrina, there was depth and a true back story. I was thrilled when Derek found out about her secret, but wanted more. I don't want to spoil it, but I wanted so much more fire and anger.
Settings:
Around 40% of the novel, the settings were described very well and detailed. However, I couldn't picture the worlds in the first half. Freitas did spend time describing them in the beginning, but it didn't work for me. Out of no where, things picked up and I got great mental images.
Minor Issues:
Here's a pet peeve that may bother some readers, but not others. At one point, the reading really slowed down for me. Kaia, Kaitlin, and Catrina were all in one scene. Fine, but I really had to pay attention to the names because they all blended. It's just one minor thing, but I would hope an author would choose more unique names to help with my flow.
Other Minor issues include the varying ellipsis usage, the confusing scene changes, and the quick topic changes in some dialogue.
Strengths:
Zinc is amazing. You'll love this place and want to meet some people. The second I read about mermaids I was all in. The weapons and gods are interesting as well. Freitas was definitely flexing her mental muscles when building this place.
To conclude, I liked it though I wanted to love it. This is a great story for someone that has some extra time and wants change from the vampires and werewolves lurking in so many different indie books. I'd be all for this book if the content editing was a bit better. The transitions needed strengthening and some of the dialogue should be picked up. But the characters are very complex and have a long history. I just wish they were a bit more interesting.
I'm so in the middle on this novel but I wish the author the best. I don't know if I'll read the second book, but I'm definitely going to read Freitas's next series. I think as she grows as a writer, the stories will get epic.
October 5, 2015
My review:
Having been contacted by the author to review this for her, I pleasantly accepted ‘cause I love reading new stories from new authors and I was glad I did so ‘cause I thoroughly enjoyed the tale that the author composed in this beautiful story. It’s not often I read about Gods in stories and prophesies, the only other one being Starcrossed I’ve read by Jospehine Angelini but I’m glad there was more to it in this (:
Analysis of plot:
In this story about Kaia, we are quickly yet expertly indulged into the story where we learn how Kaia’s village was destroyed in a ravaging fire and many of her family and friends were killed. Yet we don’t lose the main character as another survivor by the name of Reeze rescues her, and we see them start on a journey that will change both of their lives.
Following the fire, both survivors find shelter with some unlikely characters which however, adds to the magic of the story as then they are transported into a new world where they meet more delightful characters who add to the context of the story. The journey continues and while it may have started off at a slow pace at first as the author builds the story and its characters, onto the second half we are rushed off our feet as we see the story unfold and without giving much away, I can definitely say the slow pace at the beginning was more than made up for by the later events!
Analysis of characters:
Beyond the storyline though, I loved the character of Kaia! She’s different from the usual girls we see as heroines in novels today, for the author built her up so that she can take pain, she doesn’t complain, she takes what she gets and learns to deal with it, which makes her an admirable character to read about and following her on her journey proves to be that much more amazing. Kaia believes, she absorbs, she questions, she hurts and she moves on, and I love that about her.
Also, while there were two sorts of love interests following Kaia in the story, I found myself drawn to Reeze who we see as the mysterious and serious one. We see him as one of those characters who doesn’t speak much and when he does it’s not the usual lengthy replies I’ve come to view from heroes in other novels, but his affection comes across in the way he acts with Kaia. Actions, here at least, speak louder than words ;) Silent but strong. *thumbs up*
Overall:
Overall, I definitely enjoyed reading this book. The author spins an amazing tale full of love, courage, a good basis on mythology about Gods and such, and she manages to bring it all together with writing that flows. I seriously can’t wait to read the next in the series! So thank you again, so Sheenah for giving me the chance to read and review her story and I urge you all to go pick it up in whatever format you can get your hands on!
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Having been contacted by the author to review this for her, I pleasantly accepted ‘cause I love reading new stories from new authors and I was glad I did so ‘cause I thoroughly enjoyed the tale that the author composed in this beautiful story. It’s not often I read about Gods in stories and prophesies, the only other one being Starcrossed I’ve read by Jospehine Angelini but I’m glad there was more to it in this (:
Analysis of plot:
In this story about Kaia, we are quickly yet expertly indulged into the story where we learn how Kaia’s village was destroyed in a ravaging fire and many of her family and friends were killed. Yet we don’t lose the main character as another survivor by the name of Reeze rescues her, and we see them start on a journey that will change both of their lives.
Following the fire, both survivors find shelter with some unlikely characters which however, adds to the magic of the story as then they are transported into a new world where they meet more delightful characters who add to the context of the story. The journey continues and while it may have started off at a slow pace at first as the author builds the story and its characters, onto the second half we are rushed off our feet as we see the story unfold and without giving much away, I can definitely say the slow pace at the beginning was more than made up for by the later events!
Analysis of characters:
Beyond the storyline though, I loved the character of Kaia! She’s different from the usual girls we see as heroines in novels today, for the author built her up so that she can take pain, she doesn’t complain, she takes what she gets and learns to deal with it, which makes her an admirable character to read about and following her on her journey proves to be that much more amazing. Kaia believes, she absorbs, she questions, she hurts and she moves on, and I love that about her.
Also, while there were two sorts of love interests following Kaia in the story, I found myself drawn to Reeze who we see as the mysterious and serious one. We see him as one of those characters who doesn’t speak much and when he does it’s not the usual lengthy replies I’ve come to view from heroes in other novels, but his affection comes across in the way he acts with Kaia. Actions, here at least, speak louder than words ;) Silent but strong. *thumbs up*
Overall:
Overall, I definitely enjoyed reading this book. The author spins an amazing tale full of love, courage, a good basis on mythology about Gods and such, and she manages to bring it all together with writing that flows. I seriously can’t wait to read the next in the series! So thank you again, so Sheenah for giving me the chance to read and review her story and I urge you all to go pick it up in whatever format you can get your hands on!
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July 5, 2011
Source: Received from author as part of the Teen Book Scene blog tour. Many thanks goes to Sheenah Freitas for sending me a copy of her book for review. I received this book free of charge in exchange for an honest review.
My rating: 3/5
Kaia is out picking blackberries and enjoying the beautiful day. When she returns home though, her world is shattered completely. With the destruction of her village, and the realization that nothing will be the same, she finds out that she is the last descendant of her world's previous saviour. Now, she is on a quest to collect the treasures of the gods in an effort to stop the prophecy from being fulfilled. However, she doesn't realize that all is not as it seems, and she may actually unleash the prophecy, instead of preventing it from happening.
Kaia is an interesting character. She's strong, yet easily frightened, and constantly is questioning her destiny and those around her. Her fellow travelers are also interesting in their own ways. Reeze is an intriguing character, especially when faced with the decisions he has to make. Both Derek and Catrina add flair and adventure to the group as they round out Kaia's entourage. Seeing the sparks and witticisms fly between them is enticing.
I found the read was a bit rough at times though. This is an unedited arc, but there were quite a few sentence phrasings that were odd. With a bit of tightening up this could be a fantastic read. The ideology behind a world with different circles of gods was interesting. How each related to the other, and how they needed balance to function efficiently was neat. Especially once Kaia's thrown into the mix to change the balance. Whether she does or not, is yet to be determined. Another aspect that I found could have been extrapolated on is the fact that as a sister world to Earth the world-building wasn't completely fantastical. Sure there were beings from myth, but then there were also modern appliances like televisions, and conveniences such as pizza delivery. It just didn't seem to mesh well with the gods and goddesses theme that the book is built around.
All in all, a good read. The Chosen is an intriguing read, and I'll be interested to see what happens next. This edition had some rough spots due to sentence phrasing and structure, but if the reader perseveres they will be rewarded with an engaging and descriptive read. I'm definitely wondering what is set to happen next in the follow-up to The Chosen.
My rating: 3/5
Kaia is out picking blackberries and enjoying the beautiful day. When she returns home though, her world is shattered completely. With the destruction of her village, and the realization that nothing will be the same, she finds out that she is the last descendant of her world's previous saviour. Now, she is on a quest to collect the treasures of the gods in an effort to stop the prophecy from being fulfilled. However, she doesn't realize that all is not as it seems, and she may actually unleash the prophecy, instead of preventing it from happening.
Kaia is an interesting character. She's strong, yet easily frightened, and constantly is questioning her destiny and those around her. Her fellow travelers are also interesting in their own ways. Reeze is an intriguing character, especially when faced with the decisions he has to make. Both Derek and Catrina add flair and adventure to the group as they round out Kaia's entourage. Seeing the sparks and witticisms fly between them is enticing.
I found the read was a bit rough at times though. This is an unedited arc, but there were quite a few sentence phrasings that were odd. With a bit of tightening up this could be a fantastic read. The ideology behind a world with different circles of gods was interesting. How each related to the other, and how they needed balance to function efficiently was neat. Especially once Kaia's thrown into the mix to change the balance. Whether she does or not, is yet to be determined. Another aspect that I found could have been extrapolated on is the fact that as a sister world to Earth the world-building wasn't completely fantastical. Sure there were beings from myth, but then there were also modern appliances like televisions, and conveniences such as pizza delivery. It just didn't seem to mesh well with the gods and goddesses theme that the book is built around.
All in all, a good read. The Chosen is an intriguing read, and I'll be interested to see what happens next. This edition had some rough spots due to sentence phrasing and structure, but if the reader perseveres they will be rewarded with an engaging and descriptive read. I'm definitely wondering what is set to happen next in the follow-up to The Chosen.
June 20, 2013
I thoroughly enjoyed The Chosen and it was a fantastic introduction into the world that Sheenah Freitas has created. The creatures, worlds and the history associated are fantastic and I am hooked on this series. The growth that the characters have throughout is great and my attention was held until the end.
The story starts off with Catrina working in a bar, then at the end of her shift, she tells a story to the children of her village. The book is of the story that Catrina is telling of a 17 year old girl, Kaia and her adventure.
Kaia was a typical teenager living in a small village with her Mother. Her Father died early on and Kaia loved helping her Mother to bake Blueberry pies. This one particular day, Kaia went into the forest in search of berries for her Mother. Taking a side trip to a temple, Kaia went to give respect to the Priestesses and Gods that are worshipped. Heading back toward the village, Kaia smells smoke and starts running back to her Mother. She is too late; Kaia’s entire village is burned to the ground. The only survivors are Kaia and Reeze. Reeze takes Kaia back to the temple and they are summoned before the Gods of Earth’s sister planet, Zinc and rescued from the assassins that destroyed their village.
The Gods have given Kaia a quest to find all the treasures of the Gods. Reeze is burdened with the task of protecting Kaia. There is a prophecy that tells of The Chosen that will save the world and bring peace and Kaia is The Chosen.
How can a 17 year old girl be The Chosen and save the world? Will Reeze really protect Kaia from harm or does he have ulterior motives? Reeze seems to be hiding something and Kaia is determined to work out what it is. They find a guide to help them look for the treasures; Catrina is a young girl, but a demi-goddess. They accumulate friends along the way that are only too willing to help bring the prophecy true, but are they honest and trustworthy?
By the end I was hooked and with the twists and unexpected turns, I didn’t know who was a traitor or if Reeze can really be trusted. The Chosen is full of magical creatures from dragons, mermaids/mermen to vampires and elves. Discover with Kaia the full responsibility that she has on her shoulders and watch her grow and make hard decisions regarding the world and the people around her. This is highly enjoyable and I can’t wait to read The Number, book 2.
The story starts off with Catrina working in a bar, then at the end of her shift, she tells a story to the children of her village. The book is of the story that Catrina is telling of a 17 year old girl, Kaia and her adventure.
Kaia was a typical teenager living in a small village with her Mother. Her Father died early on and Kaia loved helping her Mother to bake Blueberry pies. This one particular day, Kaia went into the forest in search of berries for her Mother. Taking a side trip to a temple, Kaia went to give respect to the Priestesses and Gods that are worshipped. Heading back toward the village, Kaia smells smoke and starts running back to her Mother. She is too late; Kaia’s entire village is burned to the ground. The only survivors are Kaia and Reeze. Reeze takes Kaia back to the temple and they are summoned before the Gods of Earth’s sister planet, Zinc and rescued from the assassins that destroyed their village.
The Gods have given Kaia a quest to find all the treasures of the Gods. Reeze is burdened with the task of protecting Kaia. There is a prophecy that tells of The Chosen that will save the world and bring peace and Kaia is The Chosen.
How can a 17 year old girl be The Chosen and save the world? Will Reeze really protect Kaia from harm or does he have ulterior motives? Reeze seems to be hiding something and Kaia is determined to work out what it is. They find a guide to help them look for the treasures; Catrina is a young girl, but a demi-goddess. They accumulate friends along the way that are only too willing to help bring the prophecy true, but are they honest and trustworthy?
By the end I was hooked and with the twists and unexpected turns, I didn’t know who was a traitor or if Reeze can really be trusted. The Chosen is full of magical creatures from dragons, mermaids/mermen to vampires and elves. Discover with Kaia the full responsibility that she has on her shoulders and watch her grow and make hard decisions regarding the world and the people around her. This is highly enjoyable and I can’t wait to read The Number, book 2.
October 25, 2011
This is a fantastical journey across planets. Kaia is a quiet young woman with mysterious powers she herself doesn't even realize. Vulnerable and trusting, she has the potential to be a deep and intriguing character, but her development fell somewhat flat for me. I wanted to like her and be interested in her, but I didn't have enough of a feel for her to really engage with her character. Although none of the characters really jumped off the page for me, what I did love was the connections between the various characters (which included mermaids/mermen, gods and their children, and other fantastical beings). I liked discovering how they were related and how they related to one another, but I didn't always understand these connections. During parts of the story, I felt like I was an outsider who didn't quite get what was going on, like the third wheel at a party.
The writing style is fitting for its intended young adult audience, but I found the plot events somewhat difficult to follow at times. Sometimes there would be a time jump for which I wasn't prepared, or a change in scenery that was disorienting. Most of the story takes place on Zinc, a sister planet to Earth. In the description, it sounded more like the Earth we are familiar with in our current time. I would have loved more development regarding the planet of Zinc.
In spite of what I felt were shortcomings to the book, something kept me reading. I wanted to uncover the secrets, and I was definitely interested. The ending of the story felt at once incomplete while offering some closure at the same time. If this were meant to be a stand-alone book, I would have felt disappointment. Knowing there is a continuation of this series in the works, the ending feels more satisfactory.
I think this book will certainly find a young adult fan base in readers who love fantasy, but my hope is that the next book will offer more in terms of depth in character and plot development, with smoother transitions and more clarity in direction. There is a potential gem in the foundation of this fantasy, but it needs additional development for the characters, setting and plot to jump off the page and become a real world in which we can completely engage.
(Compete review at GraceKrispy's MotherLode blog)
The writing style is fitting for its intended young adult audience, but I found the plot events somewhat difficult to follow at times. Sometimes there would be a time jump for which I wasn't prepared, or a change in scenery that was disorienting. Most of the story takes place on Zinc, a sister planet to Earth. In the description, it sounded more like the Earth we are familiar with in our current time. I would have loved more development regarding the planet of Zinc.
In spite of what I felt were shortcomings to the book, something kept me reading. I wanted to uncover the secrets, and I was definitely interested. The ending of the story felt at once incomplete while offering some closure at the same time. If this were meant to be a stand-alone book, I would have felt disappointment. Knowing there is a continuation of this series in the works, the ending feels more satisfactory.
I think this book will certainly find a young adult fan base in readers who love fantasy, but my hope is that the next book will offer more in terms of depth in character and plot development, with smoother transitions and more clarity in direction. There is a potential gem in the foundation of this fantasy, but it needs additional development for the characters, setting and plot to jump off the page and become a real world in which we can completely engage.
(Compete review at GraceKrispy's MotherLode blog)
July 29, 2015
Originally posted at Butterfly-o-Meter Books on Mar 12 2012:
Well…MG/YA (more MG, I think though) fantasy/adventure. Rrrright. Exactly what my phunk is on. I’ve been putting off reading this book for a couple of week now, but my phunk is not going anywhere, so there we go. Reading in the phunk – fabulous stuff, lol.
The plot was fun, interesting and there were a couple of turns there that really took me by surprise. I really enjoyed that. However, the writing was a bit too calming to keep much on the edge of my seat. I think I’m seeing a pattern here with the third person narrative, lately it’s not been doing it for me for some reason. First person is always more exciting, third seems to sort of not engage me emotionally or help me connect with the characters.
Take Kaia, She was a lovely (young…) character, I think I would have connected with her more if she’d been speaking to me directly, you know? As things were, the narrative was well done and appealing, but not emotionally gripping – for me. So I didn’t much connect with any of the characters, though I did like them by large. I loved the diversity of the fantastic characters, that’s something I always deeply enjoy in reading fantasy worlds.
The tone of writing was more towards the fairy tale end of the specter, and I’m having one of those phunks when I just don’t seem to respond to it much. It read good, clean, well put together, but it didn’t feel exciting – again, to me. It comes as no big surprise, it’s rare I find YA exciting and even rarer that I find MG exciting.
So overall, it was a well done book, with nice characters and intriguing adventure, but I wasn’t all that much into it. If you are into that sort of read though, I’m quite sure you’ll like it substantially more, so give it a try.
Well…MG/YA (more MG, I think though) fantasy/adventure. Rrrright. Exactly what my phunk is on. I’ve been putting off reading this book for a couple of week now, but my phunk is not going anywhere, so there we go. Reading in the phunk – fabulous stuff, lol.
The plot was fun, interesting and there were a couple of turns there that really took me by surprise. I really enjoyed that. However, the writing was a bit too calming to keep much on the edge of my seat. I think I’m seeing a pattern here with the third person narrative, lately it’s not been doing it for me for some reason. First person is always more exciting, third seems to sort of not engage me emotionally or help me connect with the characters.
Take Kaia, She was a lovely (young…) character, I think I would have connected with her more if she’d been speaking to me directly, you know? As things were, the narrative was well done and appealing, but not emotionally gripping – for me. So I didn’t much connect with any of the characters, though I did like them by large. I loved the diversity of the fantastic characters, that’s something I always deeply enjoy in reading fantasy worlds.
The tone of writing was more towards the fairy tale end of the specter, and I’m having one of those phunks when I just don’t seem to respond to it much. It read good, clean, well put together, but it didn’t feel exciting – again, to me. It comes as no big surprise, it’s rare I find YA exciting and even rarer that I find MG exciting.
So overall, it was a well done book, with nice characters and intriguing adventure, but I wasn’t all that much into it. If you are into that sort of read though, I’m quite sure you’ll like it substantially more, so give it a try.
October 14, 2011
Originally posted at Fragments of Life.
The Chosen is the first book of a trilogy. The beginning – a peaceful chapter shattered by a tragedy – was intense. The action that ensued was captivating. The violence level was just right for me. It was not too bloody and not too boring. Reeze, the mysterious boy and the only other survivor of the fire, was cold, emotionally careful and silent. He was Kaia’s guardian and he took his job very seriously. He reminded me a bit of Ash from The Iron Fey series.
I found Kaia simple, hesitant and observant. Shaken from the recent events in her life, the silence from her and the absence of complaints were new to me. I liked this side of her. I just wish that I could have read her thoughts. Kaia’s village was burnt down to the ground. She lost all her neighbors, friends and her mother. And yet, she seemed to be okay after all of that. I am used to intense emotional baggage from main characters so I was surprised when Kaia didn’t even mourn for her mother. It would have been better if there were more emotional manifestations from her. I’m eager to see how she develops as a character in the sequel.
The mythology was something that I really appreciated. It was a mix of everything. The three circles of the system of the gods was a fascinating concept. The inclusion of mortals to the circles and the twist that came with their presence were two of the things I liked most.
The writing was good. I was able to grasp the events in full detail but I sensed that it would have been better if there were commentaries from the characters. I like humor, sarcasm and musings peppered all over the novels that I read. I recommend this to fantasy readers.
The Chosen is the first book of a trilogy. The beginning – a peaceful chapter shattered by a tragedy – was intense. The action that ensued was captivating. The violence level was just right for me. It was not too bloody and not too boring. Reeze, the mysterious boy and the only other survivor of the fire, was cold, emotionally careful and silent. He was Kaia’s guardian and he took his job very seriously. He reminded me a bit of Ash from The Iron Fey series.
I found Kaia simple, hesitant and observant. Shaken from the recent events in her life, the silence from her and the absence of complaints were new to me. I liked this side of her. I just wish that I could have read her thoughts. Kaia’s village was burnt down to the ground. She lost all her neighbors, friends and her mother. And yet, she seemed to be okay after all of that. I am used to intense emotional baggage from main characters so I was surprised when Kaia didn’t even mourn for her mother. It would have been better if there were more emotional manifestations from her. I’m eager to see how she develops as a character in the sequel.
The mythology was something that I really appreciated. It was a mix of everything. The three circles of the system of the gods was a fascinating concept. The inclusion of mortals to the circles and the twist that came with their presence were two of the things I liked most.
The writing was good. I was able to grasp the events in full detail but I sensed that it would have been better if there were commentaries from the characters. I like humor, sarcasm and musings peppered all over the novels that I read. I recommend this to fantasy readers.
November 10, 2011
3.5 stars
This was a very interesting novel, especially as it deals with different worlds, complete with mermaids/mermen, gods and goddesses, and even vampires. Although I didn’t always agree with, or like, Kaia’s character, I must say that she has spunk! She has the world pulled out from under her, in a way, as everything she ever knew, and everyone she ever loved, is taken away from her in one foul swoop, yet she remains strong and is able to quickly overcome feelings of despair. I really liked her based on this aspect alone, and though I thought some of the decisions she made were not the best, per say, I think, overall, that Freitas did a great job creating a round main character in Kaia.
Reeze is another interesting character, and though all the foreshadowing within the novel pointed in one direction, I remained stoutly by his side, even as he was cast into doubt by others around him. He’s a quiet brooding type, handsome and reclusive, yet caring just the same. Just like with Kaia, although I didn’t always agree with him or his actions, I truly enjoyed him as a character.
Freitas has created a great novel for MG and YA, and although it can be a little slow at times, the plotline and characters are interesting enough that it keeps the reader bound to it. I really enjoyed reading about the many different types of heroes that Freitas has strung together in her novel, and watching this unlikely crew, humans, mermaids, vampires, Tuoers, and demigods all work together to save and protect Kaia was a real treat...
To read my full review (11/14):
http://bookvacations.wordpress.com/20...
This was a very interesting novel, especially as it deals with different worlds, complete with mermaids/mermen, gods and goddesses, and even vampires. Although I didn’t always agree with, or like, Kaia’s character, I must say that she has spunk! She has the world pulled out from under her, in a way, as everything she ever knew, and everyone she ever loved, is taken away from her in one foul swoop, yet she remains strong and is able to quickly overcome feelings of despair. I really liked her based on this aspect alone, and though I thought some of the decisions she made were not the best, per say, I think, overall, that Freitas did a great job creating a round main character in Kaia.
Reeze is another interesting character, and though all the foreshadowing within the novel pointed in one direction, I remained stoutly by his side, even as he was cast into doubt by others around him. He’s a quiet brooding type, handsome and reclusive, yet caring just the same. Just like with Kaia, although I didn’t always agree with him or his actions, I truly enjoyed him as a character.
Freitas has created a great novel for MG and YA, and although it can be a little slow at times, the plotline and characters are interesting enough that it keeps the reader bound to it. I really enjoyed reading about the many different types of heroes that Freitas has strung together in her novel, and watching this unlikely crew, humans, mermaids, vampires, Tuoers, and demigods all work together to save and protect Kaia was a real treat...
To read my full review (11/14):
http://bookvacations.wordpress.com/20...
August 18, 2011
This book is perfect for those who enjoy mythology. The book starts out by almost shocking the reader. The first chapter lulls the reader into a sense of security until, about halfway through, the action breaks in and chaos begins. Readers don't have to worry about the violence too much-there isn't that much gore...it is at the right level for the reader to appreciate the scene without wanting to wash his/her hands. The book's action takes off from there.
The characters were nice to read about. Kaia, the main character, was very humble and calm. She surprises the reader with both her resilience and her ability not to mourn for her mother and friends...this is a little odd and may make it slightly hard for the reader to connect to Kaia right away. Reeze, the enigma and other survivor of the fire, is just as calm and stoic. These two characters will keep the reader occupied during the novel, however, they could have had more fire. It is slightly difficult to get into the characters' heads as well, they don't really project their thoughts to the reader...at times, it is almost as if the reader is an observer.
The writing is smooth and detailed, the reader will be able to picture the scenes taking place. The mythology ties in perfectly to the plot. This book is recommended for teens/young adults who enjoy young adult fiction combined with mythology.
The characters were nice to read about. Kaia, the main character, was very humble and calm. She surprises the reader with both her resilience and her ability not to mourn for her mother and friends...this is a little odd and may make it slightly hard for the reader to connect to Kaia right away. Reeze, the enigma and other survivor of the fire, is just as calm and stoic. These two characters will keep the reader occupied during the novel, however, they could have had more fire. It is slightly difficult to get into the characters' heads as well, they don't really project their thoughts to the reader...at times, it is almost as if the reader is an observer.
The writing is smooth and detailed, the reader will be able to picture the scenes taking place. The mythology ties in perfectly to the plot. This book is recommended for teens/young adults who enjoy young adult fiction combined with mythology.
September 1, 2011
The first in a trilogy. The story was about a girl named Kaia whose life changed after her village was burned and was taken to another planet named Zinc, only to find out she was "The Chosen" and she has to save the world.
The story is pretty interesting, with gods and goddesses involved. Kaia is a bit hard to read. One moment she's sad, and then the next thing she's giggling over something small. And even though her whole village burned, killing everyone she knows, she didn't even mourned for them. Well, this is probably her way of coping, but I'm hoping to see more about her and her "feelings" in the next book. The other characters were lovable, especially Derek and Catrina. Reeze was mysterious, and I want to know why he acts like that.
There were parts that were boring since the story's progress is somewhat slow, but overall, the story is good, and the twists wasn't what I really expected at all.
I'm looking forward for the next book and I'm excited to know what will happen next. For those who love fantasy, I recommend this book :D
The story is pretty interesting, with gods and goddesses involved. Kaia is a bit hard to read. One moment she's sad, and then the next thing she's giggling over something small. And even though her whole village burned, killing everyone she knows, she didn't even mourned for them. Well, this is probably her way of coping, but I'm hoping to see more about her and her "feelings" in the next book. The other characters were lovable, especially Derek and Catrina. Reeze was mysterious, and I want to know why he acts like that.
There were parts that were boring since the story's progress is somewhat slow, but overall, the story is good, and the twists wasn't what I really expected at all.
I'm looking forward for the next book and I'm excited to know what will happen next. For those who love fantasy, I recommend this book :D
April 18, 2013
I really enjoyed the story of Kaia Ketoki and her journey of discovery. She discovers that she is a descendant of Shanti a powerful goddess and that she is to aid in bringing balance between good and evil.
I loved the dynamics of the characters who surround Kaia to protect her on her journey. Particularly Reeze, he is dark and broody which is often great in a hero and protector. And I really felt for Shawn, he clearly cares for Kaia but in truth is a deadly warrior.
This is clearly a fantasy quest and I love the way her companions split off at times onto their own journey. All of the characters had their chosen goals and nothing would divert them from it.
It has everything needed in a good fantasy. Dragons, demi-gods, mer-folk and even vampires.
The ending was terrific and definitely left me wanting more.
I loved the dynamics of the characters who surround Kaia to protect her on her journey. Particularly Reeze, he is dark and broody which is often great in a hero and protector. And I really felt for Shawn, he clearly cares for Kaia but in truth is a deadly warrior.
This is clearly a fantasy quest and I love the way her companions split off at times onto their own journey. All of the characters had their chosen goals and nothing would divert them from it.
It has everything needed in a good fantasy. Dragons, demi-gods, mer-folk and even vampires.
The ending was terrific and definitely left me wanting more.
August 24, 2011
The Chosen was a great read for me, and I believe for anyone interested in fantasy. It's a story that takes it's time to develop, but is enjoyable all the way through. The story is based on the main character's perspective and by this you will be able to sympathize for her. You will clearly understand how she is feelings about her situations and her friends, or are they actually her enemies? Anyways, as the book progresses you can see Kaia mature from her various hardships. Then the mythology in the book is great. It seems to be based off of a few, if not more, mythologies/religions. The final thing about this book is the ending. The ending was superb! If you liked this book at all the ending will make you want the next one for sure. Yes, it's that good.
July 14, 2015
Original Post: http://booknauthors.blogspot.com/2015...
Another mermaid book. One of the good things in the book is the mystery. I loved the world, Aquabella and the whole Kaia and Reeze mystery. The plot had some suspenseful scenes too, which were amazing.
I was very eager to know the future of Kaira. The voice inside her head had totally made her mad, but it was an incredible guidance. The voice was anonymous until the end! The story was very smooth and not complicated. I loved the friendship between Catrina and Kaia. Catrina was another interesting character.
Sheenah's writing style is very fascinating, and fans of YA mermaid books would love it.
Another mermaid book. One of the good things in the book is the mystery. I loved the world, Aquabella and the whole Kaia and Reeze mystery. The plot had some suspenseful scenes too, which were amazing.
I was very eager to know the future of Kaira. The voice inside her head had totally made her mad, but it was an incredible guidance. The voice was anonymous until the end! The story was very smooth and not complicated. I loved the friendship between Catrina and Kaia. Catrina was another interesting character.
Sheenah's writing style is very fascinating, and fans of YA mermaid books would love it.
August 17, 2011
I'm just going to get to the point. I liked the Sheenah didn't feel the need to rush the plot, but instead allows it to develop naturally. Which helps you to really get to know the characters. I also felt like I was going through their trials and tribulations with them. I found "The Chosen" to be a refreshing read. I'm totally hooked! Can't wait for the next book in the series!
April 21, 2012
The book is about Kaia, a young girl who had her simple, happy life turned upside down suddenly when her village was destroyed, along with the people in it. She's suddenly thrust into a life of danger and responsibility that just may be too much for her...
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January 16, 2012
Book 1 of the Zincian Legend sets the scene for a tale epic in both nature and adventure. It begins with a sheltered young girl of breath-taking naiviety and ends with her as a young woman ready to confront her destiny. It leaves the reader reaching for Book 2.
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May 8, 2012
An intriguing story with many plot twists. Definitely not predictable.
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