Mr. Clean

Lust at First Sight #6

by Penelope Rivers

Mr. Clean: Mike's lover isn't tall, dark, or handsome. In fact, his lover isn't even a human being. Mike's in love with cleaning supplies. That's why when he gets a job as a live-in maidservant at Stanley Burgess's house, he is more than excited to get started. What he doesn't realize, though, is that he'll be washing more than a floor.

Genres: M M Romance, Short Stories

24 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 12, 2011

About the author

Penelope Rivers is a good girl from Utah with a naughty side!

Penelope Rivers is a bestselling erotic novelist of M/M romance novels and short stories. A hopeless dreamer, she spends her day thinking about all things fantasy, romantic and not. It is her view that when you start choking on the occasionally dry bread of life, you need something sinfully delicious to chase it down with. Currently, she lives in Utah with an abnormal amount of pets.

The first four erotic M/M short stories, Eyes on You, Lollipop Lick, The Naughtiest Student, and Dr. Perfect in Penelope's new series, Lust at First Sight, are now available from New Line Press.

Reviews

[Log M · Rating 1 out of 5]

MR.CLEAN

[Phaney · Rating 1 out of 5]

This has got to be a parody. And a bad one at that. Assuming that much is the only way to even read this.

OCD isn’t a funny subject by itself and the way it’s presented here is just for the laughs, entirely ignoring the apparent severity of the kid’s condition. Ha… ha… ha.
Neither is it funny if an entirely innocent eighteen-year old is sexually assaulted by his much older employer. What is this? Bad yaoi? Oh god, I think it is!

Seriously, this was atrocious and about as unsexy as it gets. It takes some kind of talent to write this badly…