London in Black, while initially jarring in its stylistic choices, is definitely a book that grew on me. As many others have commented, the short sentences made my reading experience a little choppy, but the more I read, the more I enjoyed it. As readers, we are placed so deeply into Lucy's mind, never getting anything from another character's point of view. Her guilt, her frenzied character, her personality, they all lead to her rapid-fire narration. Either Lutz found his footing as he wrote, or I did as I read because, by the end, I was so hooked that I couldn't care less about sentence structure. Even in the beginning, when I felt more unsure of the read, I never had the urge to abandon it because of the great job Lutz does weaving a compelling story, and my roommate can attest that in the last 50 pages, I was reacting audibly.
As we learn more about Lucy and her past, she makes her development steadily, and it's such a treat to see her final realization at the very end, even if I didn't expect it. (As an additional note, Lutz sets this up so well--great foreshadowing, but I never saw it coming!) Sharp, brave, and (at the risk of sounding dumb) just super cool, Lucy becomes someone you root for wholeheartedly. I definitely recommend this book as long as you stick with it!
Thanks so much to NetGalley, the publishers, and the author for the opportunity to read this as an eARC!