"I love you, I want to have another kind of monday with you," the main character says to whom he loves.
This near excellent book immediately sucks you in like dirt into a vacuum. I commend William E. Coles Jr.'s ability to keep Another Kind of Monday flowing throughout the entire book, but think he should add a bit more fervor to the book.
When Mark checks out Great Excpectations from his school library minutes before it closes, he has no idea what he is about to get himself into. Halfway through Great Expectations, Mark comes across two pages stuck together with evident but uncanny deliberateness; he opens them to find three one-hundred dollar bills and an anonymous letter inviting him to go on a hard but important quest. There are eight to this quest strewn out around Pittsburgh, each one leaving an obscure clue helping Mark find the next step. At one point he has to choose someone to continue the quest with him. He is required to choose a female who he doesn’t have a relationship with; he is prevented form choosing his loving but frequently irksome girlfriend, Merial, so should he choose a girl from school?
The main character of this book, Mark, is an extremely determined, tenacious, and intelligent young man, and he is aware of everything that goes on around him. He lives in the exciting city of Pittsburgh in a house with his divorced mom ( who has a boyfriend named Guy). Throughout this book while Mark is putting all of his time and energy into completing the quest there are several things preventing him from doing so: the constant wonder of where his dad might be, the frequent displeasure with Merial, the difficulty to work with whom he is partnering with for the quest, and the overt vagueness of the quest and where to find the other pieces.
While reading this book I noticed both good aspects and flaws. Also, I made correlations with other writing. What I enjoyed most about this book was the subtle but sure way William E. Coles Jr. sucked me into the story, and got me extremely involved, and it encouraged me to predict what might happen next. Before reading this book I didn’t even know Mark, but now, though he is fictional, I feel that I truly know him.
Along with the great things about the book, there were certain aspects about the book that didn’t appeal to me. This book often lacked energy, and to suck the reader in more the author should add in more. Also, I feel elaboration at the end of the book is needed because I can’t say that I was completely satiated. Conclusively, I think this would be an excellent book for Shoshana Goldman to pick off of the shelf. She would surely enjoy the well-written piece, how it flows, and its subtlety, and I think that she would take pleasure in getting to know all of the characters.