Okay so I’m going to say that this book gets three stars for the consent that is sought throughout the book series it is nice to see that someone cared about consent. I will say though that a lot of this could have been cut out and made for a shorter book. Right anyway on to the review.
The Story:
The plot is very slow to have any kind of movement. We spend most of the first book not making much progress in the “find Emma” plot. Then most of the second is like now we have to find who is pulling the strings to find Emma. But like they spend most of the books either going to school, playing the “game”, or fucking or thinking about it. So right now wr are like okay so they know who did it and? So I was a little let down with how little the plot moved in nearly 1000 pages between the first two novels. I admit I got board a few times. Also the internal monologue in all thes heads is confusing as hell. They are still hiding stuff from Willa and us the readers and I am a bit frustrated about it now. I get all three of them were in love with her for forever but why? She stood up to Neos dad one time? Wut? Why? I just need more then that. Also why put SA in this book, only to have her be fine right after. Dear Sadie a girl never nearly get raped and is totally cool afterwards. PTSD is real and it can affect you the rest of your life. I feel like she just put it in there to have a reason for the guys to come save her. But why she did that I don’t know because the guys save her a lot elsewhere so??? Was it the shock value? It was really out of place.
Characters:
Willa: I swear there is nothing that won’t turn this woman on. Burgers, cheesecake, doughnuts, the hot tub, classes at school, bring in the woods, cameras, projector rooms. You name it it’s all there. She seemed to have very little defining character other than she’s hot and bothered by everything, puts herself in danger for stupid reasons and trying not to like the guys. She’s fairly one dimensional. Also can we discuss how many times Willa refers to her pussy as doing various things? She says her pussy is clawing, throbbing, sitting up and taking notice and more but those three are the ones I remember. The clawing one got me because I feel like if my vagina is clawing for something I need to have a discussion with the demon who inhabits my body about pain to me and other people because damn I feel like that would hurt like hell. I will give her the throbbing one sorta the clit can throb but I’ve never had my whole vagina throb. Anyway Willa also talks about her Vagina like it’s a sentient being. Sorta the same way in most novels the guys talk about their penis. Was this just as weird? Yes.
The guys: as usual I thought the male characters had a little more depth to them. Not much but some. They weren’t always thinking with their ducks. Well sometimes but it wasn’t as over the top as I was expecting. I will say the fact that all of them got consent was nice to see. I will also add Willa asking Neo for consent was nice to see. It goes both ways so I liked that aspect. The guys all have their thing. Neo was a fighter, Drago had his films and cameras, and Rock liked to cook. So it was nice to see they had some sort of personality going. So I wasn’t as disappointed as I was thinking I would be.
Random thoughts:
I feel like Willa is probably going to end up pregnant at the end of the third book. Either that or at the beginning of the third we will find out she was carrying Neos baby but she lost it in the accident. We’ll see.Also can we discuss what sort of person, especially someone in that kind of world wouldn’t be on birth control? Like wth! Willa had also been gone a year to travel the world and she wasn’t on the pill an IUD or something?! Anything?! Like how irresponsible is she? Either that or she’s just dumb I can’t decide which. All in all the books were okay I will probably read the last one just to check if my prediction is correct but maybe not.