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452 pages, Paperback
Published February 14, 2023
I definitely liked the Zorro vibes from the book - Lysandro being the masked Shadow of Theron and trying to do good for his people, but I felt he kind of lost focus of his main mission which means eliminating the bad guys who he knew are, instead he fell head over heels for Sera and just became overly obsessed with her, and his silly games were just making me more annoyed.
I thought Sera has potential, but she just lost her spark and became another girl who just obeys whatever the patriarchy is telling her to do, instead of standing her ground and her morals - that plot would've been a really nice touch to the story, especially since the story is very old fashioned where females have to marry and so on and so forth.
I definitely enjoyed Eugenie and Sasha, I think they were my fave in the entire book and I hope they are together in the next book because they for sure deserved that.
I felt a bit weird about Sancio, I felt his character was always put into a corner for liking food and being fat, and kind of those were his all qualities? As someone else mentioned, it felt a bit fatphobic - instead of using his character and showing us the readers that no matter how he looks he can still be a good addition to their fighting brothers and sisters, I just felt he got the short straw in the entire book.
The story in general didn't feel like a bad book to me, I enjoyed a few things, and disliked some things, I do think the book needed a bit more brushing, more character development and perhaps the history thought out more so us the readers don't get lost into so many details at once without a proper explanation and/or a proper linage of events, so we can actually understand what or why X, Y is happening. And also if the book has a lot of POVs jumping from one scene to another scene with another pov is not the greatest idea in my opinion because more often than not I was just confused who's pov is it now and why is this scene happening.