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Eternal Dominion #16
Amelioration
Life never seems to slow down!
Join Alex/Xeal and company as they continue their journey to the top of the world of Eternal Dominion and fend off against ambushes, test alliances, forge new ones and deal with family matters. All of this and more as Xeal find himself facing the largest quest that he has ever seen in this life or his last!
Join Alex/Xeal and company as they continue their journey to the top of the world of Eternal Dominion and fend off against ambushes, test alliances, forge new ones and deal with family matters. All of this and more as Xeal find himself facing the largest quest that he has ever seen in this life or his last!
269 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 1, 2023
About the author
Bern Dean
40 books59 followersAs a child I did not read unless Pokémon cards count. It wasn’t until middle school when my mother played a trick on me, she got me entranced in the Harry Potter books. She would read the first few to me before switching to reading me a chapter and leaving the book out for me to read if I wanted more. Thus started my love of reading, at least in part. I still didn’t go out of my way to find books to read and after high school I could count on one hand how many books I would read each year. Life continued like this for over five years before I was hooked on an anime and searched out its light novel. This led to the phase where I was reading at least a couple books a month to now where I have gone through over 300 books in the last year.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
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March 15, 2023
I really like LitPrg books without all the Stats
I know some people love the Stats and want an update every time it increases. Not me. I want to know that the characters are advancing but this author for me does it just right. Great job and I read books 6 thru 16 in the last 10 days. I highly recommend all of his books and even though some people will get scared by the whole harem type storyline he does a great job of not getting into all the physical aspects just the relationships. Will definitely signup for his newsletter.
I know some people love the Stats and want an update every time it increases. Not me. I want to know that the characters are advancing but this author for me does it just right. Great job and I read books 6 thru 16 in the last 10 days. I highly recommend all of his books and even though some people will get scared by the whole harem type storyline he does a great job of not getting into all the physical aspects just the relationships. Will definitely signup for his newsletter.
March 11, 2023
Plot is moved forward more quickly in this book
I appreciate that this book quickly moves past some of the repetitive activities, and advances several of the plot threads a bit more quickly than previous books. There is still humor around Alex's large family, both in game and out, and so much is going on now that it's hard for Alex/Xeal to juggle it all. But I'm sure he'll figure it all out...
I appreciate that this book quickly moves past some of the repetitive activities, and advances several of the plot threads a bit more quickly than previous books. There is still humor around Alex's large family, both in game and out, and so much is going on now that it's hard for Alex/Xeal to juggle it all. But I'm sure he'll figure it all out...
March 15, 2023
More, please?
I just finished the series so far. Yes, all 16 books completed in just over a week. They are all well written, entertaining, funny, and the only set of harem novels that I would recommend and re read. Thank you for a modest, gentlemanly hero, who truly respects women. What a novel concept!
I just finished the series so far. Yes, all 16 books completed in just over a week. They are all well written, entertaining, funny, and the only set of harem novels that I would recommend and re read. Thank you for a modest, gentlemanly hero, who truly respects women. What a novel concept!
March 2, 2023
Very good read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with real world tie in. Plenty of action and intrigue.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with real world tie in. Plenty of action and intrigue.
March 3, 2023
Great addition to the series
Love the direction the series is taking and the continuing development of the different characters. Look forward to continuing to see where the series will take us.
Love the direction the series is taking and the continuing development of the different characters. Look forward to continuing to see where the series will take us.
March 15, 2023
Back up as one of the best
This series is one of my top 5, if not top 3. I download every month and it is one of the reasons I have kept my kindle unlimited membership. I look forward to next month.
This series is one of my top 5, if not top 3. I download every month and it is one of the reasons I have kept my kindle unlimited membership. I look forward to next month.
March 1, 2023
Great story
I’m looking forward to when the war starts. So far this story was really good. I’m looking forward to the next book.
I’m looking forward to when the war starts. So far this story was really good. I’m looking forward to the next book.
March 5, 2023
More, more, more!
I can never get enough of your writing. You have me actually dreaming about this book and the characters when I sleep as if I am there myself.
I can never get enough of your writing. You have me actually dreaming about this book and the characters when I sleep as if I am there myself.
March 9, 2023
too long of a series
It seems the series is dragging on too long. Everything is starting to get very repetitive. The time in ED and in real life is flying by very quick. A week can go by kna single paragraph. There were no major developments or fights going on.
It seems the series is dragging on too long. Everything is starting to get very repetitive. The time in ED and in real life is flying by very quick. A week can go by kna single paragraph. There were no major developments or fights going on.
March 30, 2023
Entertaining Story
This story of a guy who gets a do over and becomes a billionaire and guild leader of a very successful gaming guild was awesome.
This story of a guy who gets a do over and becomes a billionaire and guild leader of a very successful gaming guild was awesome.
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