I honestly can't quite decide on the review for this one.
On the one hand, I enjoyed the POVs and most of the characterization, but on the other I had a few quibbles that I'm definitely on the fence about.
I like Obi-Wan, but that's probably because this generally felt like the Prequel Era Obi-Wan.
I was okay with Anakin, except I'm not entirely sure that his portrayal was as faithful, but this stems from a much larger issue in this book, which is that the author seems to be under some sort of misapprehension that Obi-Wan and Anakin spent the ten years or so together constantly at logger-heads with no affection between them. It somehow paints Anakin as this solo island in the Jedi order (which, admittedly, he was definitely one towards the end) without ever reaching for Obi-Wan, which ... feels entirely wrong to me.
Even watching Attack of the Clones alone, you can see that, beyond their back-and-forth and banter, there's a warmth and worry and connection between the two that isn't built solely on Anakin snarking back at Obi-Wan, trying to one-up him, or Obi-Wan trying to constantly reprimand him. You can see that Obi-Wan worries, that he cares enough to gently guide him, but also to be stern when need be. You can also see that Anakin looks up to Obi-Wan, that he respects him even if he might disagree with him, and that he often calls him "grumpy" in obvious affection which is meant to convey that it really doesn't bother Anakin but it's just communication.
I feel this is where the author missed his mark - he portrays the bond that is probably the most important and strongest in the galaxy with way too much barbed wire wrapped around it that never existed except where book authors suddenly invented it. Were the two often times arguing? Yes. It must have been exhausting and exasperating being Obi-Wan sometimes, dealing with teenage Anakin. At the same time though, you CAN see he isn't just doing it because he promised Qui-Gon, but because he legitimately cares for Anakin as a person, within the tenements of the Jedi Order.
Also, Qui-Gon. For a man who literally only went through Anakin's life for a handful of days, he sure does spend a whole lot of time parked in the guy's mind. WAY more than Obi-Wan, which makes no sense at all, because - and we quote Lucas here - OBI-WAN is the closest thing Anakin's ever had to a father. Qui-Gon may have been the means of getting them together, but it is OBI-WAN who does the heavy lifting. It's a disservice to the character AND the Kenobi/Skywalker bond by implying otherwise, and by enlarging Qui-Gon's role so much.
Yes, things MAY have been different with Qui-Gon being Anakin's Master, but it did not happen. What ifs are just that, what ifs. The reality will always be Obi-Wan.
And what's with the Mace Windu hate? I get that he was against training Anakin - so was Yoda - but the two never gave me hatred vibes in anything I watched in the visual medium. This feels like another sort of author-inserted situation that has little to nothing to do with the characterization we get in the movies and Clone Wars.
Finally, I'd like to touch on the character of Mill who was made specifically for this book - and that's fine. I actually enjoyed seeing Anakin with a youngling and realizing that, welp, handling a full group of them is hard. The thing I'm bothered with is this: Mill supposedly feels emotions, right, at a very strong level, pain, suffering, that stuff. But don't Jedi feel them as a whole? Or am I missing something? Literally, in Attack of the Clones, Obi-Wan tells Anakin that his thoughts betray him when they go up to Padmé's apartment, meaning he can sense the waves of emotion coming off his Padawan, and also later can sense Padmé's happiness, so HER emotions as well.
So you're telling me that two seasoned Jedi couldn't handle this without a kid along to add to the danger bit of the book without actually adding anything meaningful, other than reminding us, once again, that for some reason - despite the fact George Lucas has said and stated before that it's OBI-WAN who is Anakin's go-to for everything, which makes the secret of Padmé and their marriage that much bigger - the author decided Anakin hasn't told Obi-Wan things and has been keeping secrets.
It's this that I have a problem with, and this that eventually knocks down my star rating from what COULD have been a really good one. But the book is much too focused on all the wrong and sometimes even made-up things, rather than the actual reality, which is that Skywalker and Kenobi work in this sprawling galactic tale precisely because they have a bond and attachment that gets irreparably broken when Anakin chooses the Dark Side. Yes, Obi-Wan failed Anakin, but he didn't fail him in all the ways the author tried to explain in this: Obi-Wan failed his former Padawan and friend and brother because he didn't acknowledge (or want to acknowledge out loud) that his emotional attachment was so incredibly strong it incinerated everything else around them. It's the Padmé secret and the marriage and the pregnancy which broke Pandora's box wide open, not some childhood stories from his mother that Anakin somehow didn't want to share with his one close link in an otherwise unknown world.
It really isn't as complicated as authors are trying to make it - it didn't build up over the years with these "little things". It was the one secret, the one secret that shouldn't have been secret, and the only thing Anakin never told Obi-Wan that tolled the death bell.
And I'm actually miffed that someone would imagine a character like Padmé Amidala mocking anyone. The word literally means 'tease or laugh at in a scornful or contemptuous manner'. Excuse me, have you met Senator Amidala? Or Padmé, at all? Would she ever, in her right mind, be scornful or contemptuous of a person who saved her life not just once, but two or three times in a row? Even Anakin going that route is a stretch, because it makes him downright mean and disrespectful to his Master - which he never was. He pushed boundaries, yes, but he RESPECTED OBI-WAN, always. He respected Mace Windu, always. He respected Yoda, always.
There were definite creative choices made in this novel that significantly lower the rating I would have otherwise given it, and I disagree with the lot of them.
Sadly, because it COULD have been great. As it is, I liked it, but it was, overall, just ok.