The references in this book made no sense at all, time wise, so much so that I was too distracted to even think if the book was good or not. It was ok. But the main character's internal monologue was SO repetitive and made the book move way too slowly. The scenes where the girls were in the canyon after their car had been pushed off the road, to the point where the men found them again and put Laura in the truck, took FOREVER. It dragged so badly, and this was because of this repetitive monologue where every single action was excruciatingly planned, then replanned, then two other plans were thought about (the same plans that were repeatedly mentioned- nothing new), and then finally painstakingly described in extreme depth. Every footstep was detailed. And the Mc's shoes were not consistent- one second she was wearing flats, the next second sandals. Maybe the author was thinking calling sandals flats was a thing, but it is not. Flats are their own distinct shoe, that apparently get filled constantly with rocks and dirt. You would think at one point no more debris could get in the mc's shoes-- think again, bc her shoes filling with dirt will be mentioned 3 more times while still in the canyon portion of the novel. The shoes were just one inconsistency among many. And it annoyed me so much, I did my research. Twitter (came into being July 2006), Facebook, Myspace (03-08), Ask Jeeves (ended Feb. 06) were all mentioned. Did you catch that Ask Jeeves (which the mc mentioned recently using) ended before Twitter began-- making the timeline of the story IMPOSSIBLE!! I think this is supposed to be set fall/winter times (exact year is never mentioned), and she mentions using the search engine to look up amusement rides- so maybe she used it that summer-- that STILL doesn't work bc it ended in Feb! Also flip phones are mentioned with some sort of green text bubble. To me this is a reference to the bubbles used in texting while a continuous conversation shows up on the screen- modern day texting. I believe this texting form came into being with the first iPhone- which came out in 2007. Flip phones, to my knowledge gained from being alive at this time period, NEVER had texting like this. It was a single message every single time, so you had to open old messages one by one to see what was previously said. Yet another inconsistency. Additionally "fuckboy" and "extra" were used. "Fuckboy" first came into being in a song in 2002, but I will argue this term, and calling someone "extra" didn't become a mainstream thing until the 2010s- again we have an impossible time setting. One more thing that was dumb was the car the girls was using has a boom box in it since the radio/players don't work- I literally tried this in my car when my radio stopped working-- it skips like a mother. Unless they have magical, extreme no-skip technology (which never really works anyway) this would not be practical. Additionally, the identity of one of the bad guy was obvious from 1,000 miles away, yet dumb dumb Olivia could only figure out who it was once she saw his face. Basically, the inconsistencies of the time setting of this book were so annyoing and obvious that it ruined the book, I guess just for me though, as this seems to have good ratings.