Was this book RUSHED, by any chance (pun intended)? It lacked depth.
The story felt incomplete, as though the writing was hurriedly done. So many ridiculous mistakes where the wrong character began speaking in the first person during the other's POV. Case in point, the following is Mia's POV:
“You can’t just walk up in here and demand some dick like everything’s okay ‘cause it ain’t.” He grabs his cock and strokes himself.
“I wouldn’t dare to presume.”
“Lift my jersey and spread your legs open for me.” I do as I’m told.
“Touch yourself,” I tell her. “Touch your pussy for me.”
Wrong - if anyone is going to tell someone to touch their pussy, it should read "he orders," or " he tells me, " not "I," as it isn't Rush's POV, but Mia's. Too many goofs, not enough proofing and corrections.
Besides, there was no building of those types of feelings between the two mc's. There was absolutely no drooling or "my god, he's so sexy and gorgeous - I wanna jump him, but he doesn't see me that way, so kill it, Mia" self-talking that took place. Rush and Mia went from zero to a thousand rpm's in their relationship that had always been platonic with nary a sexy vibe from either character. It wasn't very believable, so half the book felt off. Two stars.