Oh my. I really wanted to like this book. I had such high expectations seeing as how it combines cowboy with vampires. I mean, come on! That should be fantastic, right? It should have been, but this book just fell flat to me.
It started off great. It was cute with the "heroine", Allie, trying to attract the attention of the "hero", Caleb. (Note: I put those words in quotations because I can't call them heroes, even though they are supposed to be.) Then it has good action with a wolf attack and Allie rushing in to help her savior wolf. But then the book seemed to get stuck. Allie gets converted into a vampire, then refuses to feed from anyone but Caleb because she is a vegetarian and is grossed out by blood. Really? There are several pages of inconsistencies. Things are thrown into the story at random but never elaborated on. Like the fact that Caleb and his brothers were converted in 1860 and it's now 250 years later. So that would make this story set in the year 2110, right? Not that you know it because it's never mentioned. And the brothers have no information on vampirism. Really? In 250 years you couldn't find out something?
Also, it's mentioned that the brother, Slade, wants to "run tests" on Allie in his lab because they have no idea what's going on with her, but she refuses. Then later when she actually wants to have a blood test run she says there is no lab to send it to. She thinks she might be pregnant, but says there's no way for her to get a pregnancy test from the store? There's a ton of other people milling about that ranch. One of them couldn't go get you one? Allie is constantly asking questions and no one gives her (or the reader) any answers. Instead Caleb just distracts her by slitting the crotch out of her jeans and having sex. A lot. Everywhere. But they were apparently magical jeans because afterward she would pull them up her hips and button them before someone could walk in the room. Maybe they were all fine with her crotchless state (which was all the time). Seriously, it would have been nice to have one scene without him cutting her clothes up. By this point the sex scenes just felt forced, and while explicit, were lacking any real heat that comes with two characters really connecting.
The men were supposed to be cowboys, but other than wearing a cowboy hat you wouldn't have known it. Calling her "Allie girl" in a drawl doesn't make it any better. I think the author was going for alpha males, but they came off as more caveman and annoying. Not sexy. Caleb was just as whiny as Allie in his "you are my wife and mate because I say so". But then he says he knew the day would come where she wanted to leave and was going to try to respect her decision. ??? That comment came out of nowhere and I had to reread it to make sure it really came from him. Allie behaved more like a teenager than an adult in that she had to argue constantly! She refused to listen to anyone who disagreed with her and wanted to "listen to her gut". The same gut that sent her rushing towards the bad guys thinking that she could have a reasonable chat with them. *heavy sigh*
I know there are people who loved this book. I know there are other books in the series and maybe they have more answers to all of the problems that plagued this book. But frankly I was not intrigued enough to carry on with the series to find out.
Would I reread this book? No
Would I recommend this book to a friend? No