I received an ARC for an honest review.
Let me first say, this book is well written. I find a lot of books I read are just poorly crafted and have lazy editing. Not this book. My objection is entirely with the how the story unfolded.
The story starts with a titillating prologue that was vaguely Dom/Sub and I thought, not going to like this, not my thing. But then the book jumps back in time to introduce these characters and lead us to how we got to this point. Cool.
Asher and Scarlet knew each other in high school. He was the nerdy 90 pound weakling who had a mad crush of the super cute red haired cheerleader who didn't know he existed. Asher and his pals were the target of ruthless bullies. Scarlet was a popular girl who felt pressure to stay in her friend group so they wouldn't turn on her. I'm good with all of this, I can point to people I knew in school for whom this was reality.
So here they are 12 years post high school back in each others orbit. Asher is the triumphant geek and has grown out of his awkward late bloomer self, but still carries all of those awful insecurities, but he thinks he has the way to win Scarlet this time. Scarlet doesn't remember him at all, but this secret stranger who promises her hearts desire is something she is down for.
I mostly didn't like Scarlet. I felt like she was kind of whiny. Not super fond of her bestie Nicole either. The idea that she needed to be adored by a man to be happy in life, nope. But at the point when the story blows up, my opinion changed about Scarlet. She owned who she was and her pain, and I started to like her and want her to win at life.
Asher I was rooting for from the get go. He just needed to realize he already was the man he wanted to be. He should have listened to his friends, but I get that his self doubt was too much. Asher went on a quest to better himself, hiring a trainer, getting out of his comfort zone, learning to dance. This was all great, but Asher's self improvement journey was left behind to focus just on the mysterious stranger meetings. Then he devolved into a complete asshole and I don't believe he should or could be redeemed, and that was a damn shame.
The problem is, this book is a romance and the genre says we need an HEA, so here we are. Once the stranger is exposed, in a completely awful moment, we still have chapters to go and a relationship to repair. The only way to do this is forcing Scarlet to accept the shitbag back. The idea that men can be broken assholes and still worthy of redemption by women is a story line I hate. Why can't women own their worth?
For me the story could have been really great, but the mysterious stranger crossed way to many lines, and Scarlet was way to willing to let him. It was unnecessary, and done, I guess to add the required sex into the story. I would have taken the story without it, because I liked the premise the author set of who these people were as kids, and who they became to be as adults, who still carry that hurt child inside them. When the mysterious stranger takes physical advantage of his position I wanted Scarlet to walk away. It was just a total turnoff to me.
What could have been a great story, for me, missed the mark.