I’m a very picky reader, but sometimes I’ll get into certain reading moods, where I’ll read something that perhaps any other time I may dnf or it won’t have my type of heroine for example-so I will bail early…this book should’ve been a book I put down, but something about it made me keep reading, I was really enraptured with all the drama with these characters and the folklore stuff piqued my interest.
I actually think the combination of it being a fairly short read, along with the rock romance, love triangle, folklore aspect, and the flawed heroine that wasn’t exactly likable, plus the toxic chemistry with the main male leads made the story feel more exciting and real, even though there’s a scary element to it, it all mixed together shouldn’t have worked for me personally, but it did. I couldn’t stop reading and although this isn’t exactly my typical read….I like dark romance and gothic romance, but I haven’t liked much of the folklore reads I have tried in the past, so this one was both entertaining and passed the time.
The only thing I would’ve changed would be to add in some transitional scenes. Like one second they’re talking on a sidewalk and next thing it says is they’re driving. Maybe just a quick sentence of dialogue exchange as they hop in the car to smooth that out, so the story flows a bit better.
There was a scene in particular, where I had to go back and reread a tiny line I missed where the fmc said “I think I left my clothes in the bathroom”. Prior to that we knew she had nothing on but a big shirt on, so in the next scene when the mmc was “unbuttoning her jeans” I’m like huh? What jeans lol. When did she even put her clothes back on? There was nothing written about her changing, only that she thought she may have left them there. I guess I’m weird because as the mmc was undoing her clothes, I was still thinking she never found her clothes in the bathroom since there was no scene saying she got changed.
I guess I’m weird but just a few instances of those things which had me combing back over words looking for a sentence or two I missed where maybe someone did something or something happened that wasn’t described to the reader but something is implied and we are to fill in the blank. I’d rather know for sure then it be loosely implied, because then I know for sure where the story is going and I don’t need to go back and double check to make sure I didn’t miss anything.
Also, I love character descriptions, everything from their hair, lashes, their voice, imperfections, lips, chin cleft, vices, quirks, mannerisms etc, imo you can’t have too much, because it builds up the characters better in your mind. This book I struggled a bit with seeing everyone and there’s quite a few different people in the story, so I would’ve liked to see them a bit better with more descriptions for each character, so I can see each person more vividly throughout.
It’s also a crazy cliffhanger ending, and I had no idea before diving in. I thought it was a standalone, so that’s totally on me. I still have a lot of questions and like I said, this heroine is not exactly my type. She didn’t make me dnf so that’s a plus, but I’m still undecided when it comes to her. I like that she’s flawed and makes mistakes, I mean she’s human and she’s not exactly brass knuckle, but she’s dealing with her own past mistakes & demons and perhaps let’s her passions consume her a bit much. I found her very indecisive when it came to both of the brothers. I’m hoping this all ends well lol 😂 it was definitely a nice way to escape and was worth reading something out of my typical genres.
Breakdown: (look away possible spoilers)
Love triangle
Twin brothers
Cheating trope
Toxic romance
Degradation
Tatted twin brothers
Twin mmcs have piercings
Cliffhanger
Steamy scenes
h ran away from the band years ago
h comes back to town to help her parents with the band
Setting -Texas
Folklore aspect, bruja, horror, dark magic, witchcraft
Flawed heroine who is unlikeable and wavers between brothers
Music industry
Twin H’s and the rest of the crew are in a band called Timeless
Told linear (but mentions of the past are reflected throughout)
Twin H proposed onstage when she was with the band and she said no, moved away and ghosted everyone because she cheated and didn’t want to face the music
Other Twin she cheated with, they both were drunk at the time
Aiden (twin 1) and Stephanie have a very toxic relationship
Zac (twin 2) is her ex, the one she was dating steadily for years, but refused to marry and left because she slept with Aiden, she didn’t want to stick around and ruin the band or mess things up even more so she moved away and left him & the band
Unique story, I would’ve liked it to be a bit more descriptive and fleshed out