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The Elite #3
Collapsed
A shadow that creeps in the dark is never seen, until he wants to be. His obsession has become my worst nightmare. Just as everything seems to be falling into place, it crumbles to the ground. He wants to break me, to make me fit into his twisted fantasy. I have bad news for him; I will never break, no matter how hard he tries.
I mourned my best friend and the woman I was growing to love. My heart felt complete when we found each other, only for him to rip it open again. Will they find me in time? Are any of them left alive? I will make sure he endures the same pain he has put me through. He may think I’m just another pretty face to be his victim, but sometimes, victims fight back.
Vengeance will come, and this will end once and for all
***Collapsed is a full-length adult romance with dark and suspenseful tones. Trigger Warning for unaliving, torture, SA, and mentions of human trafficking. This is a why choose romance, meaning our baddie main character has more than one love interest. This is the third book in a series and cannot be read as a standalone.
I mourned my best friend and the woman I was growing to love. My heart felt complete when we found each other, only for him to rip it open again. Will they find me in time? Are any of them left alive? I will make sure he endures the same pain he has put me through. He may think I’m just another pretty face to be his victim, but sometimes, victims fight back.
Vengeance will come, and this will end once and for all
***Collapsed is a full-length adult romance with dark and suspenseful tones. Trigger Warning for unaliving, torture, SA, and mentions of human trafficking. This is a why choose romance, meaning our baddie main character has more than one love interest. This is the third book in a series and cannot be read as a standalone.
- GenresWhy ChooseDark Romance
309 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 20, 2023
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G.P. Darling
6 books285 followersG.P Darling is a pen name that pays homage to where a decades-old friendship started and survived the best and worst of times.
Some moms who decided to quit just reading romance and write some of our own. When not reading or writing you can find us together with our 10 kids, drinking a cocktail, and probably cursing like sailors while laughing so hard we tinkle ourselves.
Illinois residents and Taco enthusiasts.
Some moms who decided to quit just reading romance and write some of our own. When not reading or writing you can find us together with our 10 kids, drinking a cocktail, and probably cursing like sailors while laughing so hard we tinkle ourselves.
Illinois residents and Taco enthusiasts.
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April 28, 2023
I really enjoyed reading the third book in this series!! Of course, I absolutely love King & Alexei's vibe with each other. The whole group is just fantastic. I loved how it ended, but I'm glad that there is an opportunity to read another installment
April 30, 2023
As always its always hard to say goodbye to characters and series that you love/enjoy. But I have to admit that I think that this was a great ending/send off for these characters.
I think Nat will always be one of those characters that you either Love or Dislike. I know there were definitely moments where she rubbed me wrong. But on the other hand I really liked that she was a Ki(kA$$ female and could hold/handle her own.
As always I loved the guys Styker, Conrad, Alexie, and even KIng. I loved their camaraderie even though it wasn't always like that. I will say that Styker and Conrad will always be my favorites, with Alexie coming in a close second and it took me a while to get warmed up to King.
Look I'm going to be honest here I'm not really into FF and I didn't realize that this series was going to go that way. And honestly I just skipped past those parts. But that being said I honestly don't get why that brought Katia into the "Harem" that way. I mean I get that she was Nat's best friend and everything. But why Not just leave it that way, why bring her in as a love interest? Especially with Katia's aversion of men. I felt like with adding Katia into the "Harem" it just threw off the dynamics of the group. It made every thing feel awkward at least, IMO. I mean other people may not feel like that and maybe it was just me.
I'm giving this book and series 4 Stars out of 5 all around!!! And can't wait to see what these authors come up with next.
**I received an ARC of this book from the author's for my honest opinion**
I think Nat will always be one of those characters that you either Love or Dislike. I know there were definitely moments where she rubbed me wrong. But on the other hand I really liked that she was a Ki(kA$$ female and could hold/handle her own.
As always I loved the guys Styker, Conrad, Alexie, and even KIng. I loved their camaraderie even though it wasn't always like that. I will say that Styker and Conrad will always be my favorites, with Alexie coming in a close second and it took me a while to get warmed up to King.
Look I'm going to be honest here I'm not really into FF and I didn't realize that this series was going to go that way. And honestly I just skipped past those parts. But that being said I honestly don't get why that brought Katia into the "Harem" that way. I mean I get that she was Nat's best friend and everything. But why Not just leave it that way, why bring her in as a love interest? Especially with Katia's aversion of men. I felt like with adding Katia into the "Harem" it just threw off the dynamics of the group. It made every thing feel awkward at least, IMO. I mean other people may not feel like that and maybe it was just me.
I'm giving this book and series 4 Stars out of 5 all around!!! And can't wait to see what these authors come up with next.
**I received an ARC of this book from the author's for my honest opinion**
April 29, 2023
Glad I stuck it out!
Pay attention to the trigger warnings! I discovered a trigger I didn’t know I had in the last book. Don’t be a ME.
Anyone else read Ivan and Alexie’s voice in a Russian accent? Just me?
I’ve loved the storyline of this series from the first few pages and despite recent issues I’ve had, I really wanted to see how it all ends. However I found this book was extra big on the spicy and less focused on the story itself which bums me out a bit. Yayy for those spicy enthusiasts lol. But I thoroughly enjoyed getting into Ivan’s crazy mind.
Anywho, I was wrong about Katia. She annoyed me so much more in this book. I found myself wanting to skip over her entirely. Sorry G.P. She’s quite insufferable as a character to me now. Some serious gut-wrenching moments. Where I shouted out loud, “come onnnnnnnnn” or held my breath as I read through the pages. Some super tense moments! And some funny af stuff too! I gotta say, the suitcase with poor Marcela? Well I’m sure I laughed for 20 min at least. I’m beyond intrigued with Ginger. I guess there’s no telling what the future holds for our Elite now.
Pay attention to the trigger warnings! I discovered a trigger I didn’t know I had in the last book. Don’t be a ME.
Anyone else read Ivan and Alexie’s voice in a Russian accent? Just me?
I’ve loved the storyline of this series from the first few pages and despite recent issues I’ve had, I really wanted to see how it all ends. However I found this book was extra big on the spicy and less focused on the story itself which bums me out a bit. Yayy for those spicy enthusiasts lol. But I thoroughly enjoyed getting into Ivan’s crazy mind.
Anywho, I was wrong about Katia. She annoyed me so much more in this book. I found myself wanting to skip over her entirely. Sorry G.P. She’s quite insufferable as a character to me now. Some serious gut-wrenching moments. Where I shouted out loud, “come onnnnnnnnn” or held my breath as I read through the pages. Some super tense moments! And some funny af stuff too! I gotta say, the suitcase with poor Marcela? Well I’m sure I laughed for 20 min at least. I’m beyond intrigued with Ginger. I guess there’s no telling what the future holds for our Elite now.
April 22, 2023
*4.5 star review
"Collapsed" is the action-packed finale of the Elite series, filled with action both of the spicy and the non-spicy kind... At times it felt a little as if the authors wanted to add as much spice as possible to the final book, with Nat and her entire harem, even though that didn't feel entirely necessary. Still, the readers who prefer a lot of spice with their plot will definitely feel satisfied after reading this book. I wasn't entirely sure where they were going with the relationship building between all these people, but I truly like where they ultimately ended up. Add to that the friendships all these characters built with each other and their team members, and it's all those relationships together that make this a pretty original why choose series.
One thing I believe deserves to be specifically mentioned, is how much I liked Ivan's background story. I'm not going to give away any spoilers, but it was a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of other villain stories.
"Collapsed" is the action-packed finale of the Elite series, filled with action both of the spicy and the non-spicy kind... At times it felt a little as if the authors wanted to add as much spice as possible to the final book, with Nat and her entire harem, even though that didn't feel entirely necessary. Still, the readers who prefer a lot of spice with their plot will definitely feel satisfied after reading this book. I wasn't entirely sure where they were going with the relationship building between all these people, but I truly like where they ultimately ended up. Add to that the friendships all these characters built with each other and their team members, and it's all those relationships together that make this a pretty original why choose series.
One thing I believe deserves to be specifically mentioned, is how much I liked Ivan's background story. I'm not going to give away any spoilers, but it was a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of other villain stories.
April 23, 2023
Epic Conclusion
Everything collapsed at the end of book 2, and here in book 3, the final of series, you see Nat and her guys and gal rebuild everything back up stronger and better than ever! This one keeps you one the edge of the seat and is such a page turner. The betrayal of one person is so deep that it takes root deep down and is the main focus, the cause of retribution for this book. So much action in this book that it is fast-paced, as well as a lot more steamy times and togetherness between the group. They really come together and learn who they are as a group and as they are as with each other. Their family really evolved in this book. Enjoy the ride with some strong ladies taking back control, a couple guys who can't stop betting with each other, and lots of action and laughs to their HEA.
Everything collapsed at the end of book 2, and here in book 3, the final of series, you see Nat and her guys and gal rebuild everything back up stronger and better than ever! This one keeps you one the edge of the seat and is such a page turner. The betrayal of one person is so deep that it takes root deep down and is the main focus, the cause of retribution for this book. So much action in this book that it is fast-paced, as well as a lot more steamy times and togetherness between the group. They really come together and learn who they are as a group and as they are as with each other. Their family really evolved in this book. Enjoy the ride with some strong ladies taking back control, a couple guys who can't stop betting with each other, and lots of action and laughs to their HEA.
May 3, 2023
Ahh the final book was so richly deserving for this Elite group. This is the 3rd and final book where Natalia and her Elite group finally, finally get that end of the rainbow hea, but first they have to take out the trash as this picks up where book 2 left off at with Nat being taken and the guy's being incapacitated. That just leaves Conrad, Marcela, BJ to figure out what happened, and to quickly find out where Nat is. I swear this book had me tearing up the pages to find out what was going to happen next in between laughing at Alexei and Kings bet's and the suitcase scene that Marcela got an eye full of. This book was so good the whole series is so good, but check the triggers. I can't wait to see what they have coming next.
July 27, 2024
Great Book
WOW!!This is the third, and final book, in the " Elite" series. Please read, the other two books, in this series. Please read, the triggers warning, also. I 💓💓💓 this book and series. I was Hooked, on book 1. I 💓 the ending. I also 💓 Nat and her harem.
This book is a Dark suspenseful, why choose, action packed, no loose ends, wonder characters, Bass*'' women, entertaining, Steamy, unpredictable, romantic, twisted, sad it had to end,conclusion was amazing, emotional, stronger and better HEA, Funny, Bear was a bread of Fresh air, connection with each other was Great, wonderful characters, page turner, I didn't want tis book to end, and so much more.
Definitely, on my reread list. I Definitely Recommend this seties.
A Must Read!!!
WOW!!This is the third, and final book, in the " Elite" series. Please read, the other two books, in this series. Please read, the triggers warning, also. I 💓💓💓 this book and series. I was Hooked, on book 1. I 💓 the ending. I also 💓 Nat and her harem.
This book is a Dark suspenseful, why choose, action packed, no loose ends, wonder characters, Bass*'' women, entertaining, Steamy, unpredictable, romantic, twisted, sad it had to end,conclusion was amazing, emotional, stronger and better HEA, Funny, Bear was a bread of Fresh air, connection with each other was Great, wonderful characters, page turner, I didn't want tis book to end, and so much more.
Definitely, on my reread list. I Definitely Recommend this seties.
A Must Read!!!
August 5, 2024
Wow this one wrapped up a lot from the other 2 books. There are still some unknowns but this book filled in a lot of puzzle pieces. Ivan being the biggest one. Nat learned a lot about him when he did what he did. She ended up getting out of things and away from him. But it took a lot of strength on her part which no doubt she can handle. She went to the warehouse because she over heard him setting a trap for someone she just didn’t know who. She learned very soon after getting there who the trap was for. A lot more events took place in this book. It also ended on somewhat of a cliffhanger. They had help from an unknown source for a few things. I’m sure it will get discovered in the next book. Hopefully there is one. This series was great and I highly recommend it!!
May 1, 2023
Finally its here the conclusion to the Elite trilogy.
This book has it all sex and drugs and rock n roll to satisfy your soul.
Beware off trigger warnings but if you dont have any you are in for a ride of your life.
If the two first books was slow to medium burn this one is like a erupting volcano.
It all hits you with a force of a KO.
Totally loved this book and can actually say its the #1 of the books I read so far this year.
Looking forward to what will come next from G.P. Darling.
I will miss this characters and hopefully see more of them in the future.
Recommends it to everyone that want some excitement in there lives
This book has it all sex and drugs and rock n roll to satisfy your soul.
Beware off trigger warnings but if you dont have any you are in for a ride of your life.
If the two first books was slow to medium burn this one is like a erupting volcano.
It all hits you with a force of a KO.
Totally loved this book and can actually say its the #1 of the books I read so far this year.
Looking forward to what will come next from G.P. Darling.
I will miss this characters and hopefully see more of them in the future.
Recommends it to everyone that want some excitement in there lives
May 9, 2023
You come into this knowing you will get your HEA but it’s always about the journey. Book 3 does not disappoint in being an amazing grand finale to an excellent series. The moment I have been waiting for, took longer to come than I would’ve liked but Umbra is finally gone and the Elite get there happily ever after. What I think I loved most about this book though was Alexis’s relationship with BJ. It added such a beautiful comic relief that was welcome and needed. Along with that was Alexis’s banter with King. What I am left wondering is how the relationships between King and Alexie and King and Katia could continue to evolve. This was a great series and I’m sad to see that it’s over.
May 15, 2023
If you're looking for a hot, suspenseful read with a plot that just pulls your in and doesn't let go... then the Elite Series is definitely for you! Collapsed is the third book in the series, and it did not disappoint.
The harem dynamic was perfect and I loved seeing how Katia fell into place amongst the men. I thought Nat was a feisty one, but try to keep Katia out of the loop, and her wrath is felt by everyone. I also got to see a different side of Conrad and loved that Nat's (and Alexie's) fascination was similar to mine.
I would highly recommend this series to anyone looking for a captivating and entertaining read.
The harem dynamic was perfect and I loved seeing how Katia fell into place amongst the men. I thought Nat was a feisty one, but try to keep Katia out of the loop, and her wrath is felt by everyone. I also got to see a different side of Conrad and loved that Nat's (and Alexie's) fascination was similar to mine.
I would highly recommend this series to anyone looking for a captivating and entertaining read.
July 31, 2024
This series has just got better with every book and this one didn’t disappoint. I love Nat and how strong she is but I also love that she allows her men to take care of her too. Each of the men have things to love about them and it’s great to see that they all provide Nat with something different that she needs. I loved the addition of Katia to the harem and how Nat and the men helped her to heal. The chemistry between Nat & her harem is epic and I loved that it was always there simmering under the surface. The storyline was great and full of twists and turns and I really hope we get to see more of Ginger. Fantastic read!
August 18, 2024
This is the third installment to "The Elite Series." You need to read this series in order. Book 3 picks up exactly where "Exposed" ends. Nat learns alot about Umbra that she never knew before. Doesn't change the way she or anyone else feels about him. Now the team is on edge trying to find Umbra. But as luck would have it they get some help from outside the team. I am so happy it ends the way it does beacsue it leaves it open more more, and i really hope we get more because I'm so in love with these characters. I'm not ready to let them go just yet. And I need more Alexie.
PLOT. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
SPICE. 🌶🌶🌶🌶
PLOT. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
SPICE. 🌶🌶🌶🌶
April 25, 2023
Seppy's Review:
This is the last book in this series and it's full of action and spice too. I loved this series full of action and twists and turns. This book wraps up the story and starts where the last one left off. I loved it but felt that there were a lot more spicy scenes in this book. This changed the pace from fast pace to slower pace which was harder for me to adjust to the switch. I really liked how this group come together to make a family to get Vengeance for all the wrongs Ivan has done. It was a great ending to a great story. I really loved this series.
This is the last book in this series and it's full of action and spice too. I loved this series full of action and twists and turns. This book wraps up the story and starts where the last one left off. I loved it but felt that there were a lot more spicy scenes in this book. This changed the pace from fast pace to slower pace which was harder for me to adjust to the switch. I really liked how this group come together to make a family to get Vengeance for all the wrongs Ivan has done. It was a great ending to a great story. I really loved this series.
April 29, 2023
Good ending
Love the book but tbh I got distracted easily wondering whether or not the fmc would have to share her harem or not. I’ll be honest, I’m not much into FF as MM but this was tastefully done, except there was just random flirting from MMCs to “friends”. I loved the plot! I’m looking forward to further in this world!
-great plot
-psychopaths
-bratva
-good vs evil
-undercover
-RH/why choose with FF and ⚔️
-no privacy during s3xy times
-tr1ggering content
-good suspense/world-building
-b@d@ss females
-@lphaholes
Love the book but tbh I got distracted easily wondering whether or not the fmc would have to share her harem or not. I’ll be honest, I’m not much into FF as MM but this was tastefully done, except there was just random flirting from MMCs to “friends”. I loved the plot! I’m looking forward to further in this world!
-great plot
-psychopaths
-bratva
-good vs evil
-undercover
-RH/why choose with FF and ⚔️
-no privacy during s3xy times
-tr1ggering content
-good suspense/world-building
-b@d@ss females
-@lphaholes
April 30, 2023
I absolutely loved this conclusion to finally see Nat and her harem take down Ivan. This book was filled with some heart felt moments, suspense, action, and spice! The action is fast paced and they all come together to take down the enemy. They also build friendships between the harem and the rest of the team, and to see their family evolve was worth it all. We get to see the rest of the team find their happy ever afters and it was great. There were some up and downs throughout the book, but they made it through it all.
April 30, 2023
COLLAPSED
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4/5 🌶️🌶️🌶️3/5
INTENSE, STEAMY, RESCUE MISSION!!!
Enjoyed the connections the characters had. The way they came together to go rescue Nat because she was taken by Ivan who managed to fool them all and managed to catch them off guard. The things Nat&her guys continued to go through, you just feel for them. This 3rd book takes you through roller coaster of events& emotions. The scenes are steamy, intense and betrayal is painful! Enjoyed this read very much!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4/5 🌶️🌶️🌶️3/5
INTENSE, STEAMY, RESCUE MISSION!!!
Enjoyed the connections the characters had. The way they came together to go rescue Nat because she was taken by Ivan who managed to fool them all and managed to catch them off guard. The things Nat&her guys continued to go through, you just feel for them. This 3rd book takes you through roller coaster of events& emotions. The scenes are steamy, intense and betrayal is painful! Enjoyed this read very much!
April 30, 2023
This is the final book and let me tell you it did not disappoint. It started out with action picking up where the last book left off. The spicy scenes were even better in this book than the previous ones. Getting to see Nat with all her loves and how they are react to here is mind blowing. It is also interesting to see how they interact with each other in this final book. After following their journey I could not have predicted a better outcome for any of them.
April 30, 2023
woohoo 🙌
Yes! Finally after finding Nat and the men healing up from the attack that got Nat kidnapped by Ivan. They start their trek into finding Ivan to be done with him, but before all of that there is some major steam in most of these pages. I was so there for it all. Katia even got some of Nat woohoo. The ending was awesome and I was definitely happy with the ending ,but then the epilogues I can’t wrap my head around it . If it’s a cliffhanger what a way to drop it lol
Yes! Finally after finding Nat and the men healing up from the attack that got Nat kidnapped by Ivan. They start their trek into finding Ivan to be done with him, but before all of that there is some major steam in most of these pages. I was so there for it all. Katia even got some of Nat woohoo. The ending was awesome and I was definitely happy with the ending ,but then the epilogues I can’t wrap my head around it . If it’s a cliffhanger what a way to drop it lol
May 16, 2023
This was a fantastically dark and twisted read. Be sure to check the TW and read the first 2 books in the series before reading. The characters stories continue throughout all 3 books. This is a why choose book but the author does a fantastic job giving us each characters feelings and truly builds up all of the relationships and bond between all of them. If you like dark and disturbed then this book has it all and you won't be disappointed! I highly recommend reading the series!
May 30, 2023
I was amazed throughout reading this series how immersed I became in GP's world. Her characters are so rich in good and bad and the humor about both is so normal in this world.The family GP created with her characters is what everyone wants. Someone to love, to be loved, to protect and to be protected. Strong arms to hold you and the strength to hold onno matter what. All leading to a great HEA and the small hope for another story in this amazing world.
May 17, 2024
Well, we're at the end of their journey and holy cow what a journey it's been! I'm a bit sad it's over. There's lots of steam, drama, excitement and danger in this one too and a little emotional. I completely enjoyed this series. The storyline was really good, there were a couple of things I could have done without but that's me personally and it really didn't affect the story at all. Again, if triggers are a thing for you I would advise checking the trigger warnings before you start.
September 16, 2024
What an Ending to a Fantastic Series!!!
Wow! This series was full of action and heat right up to the end! I love this found family and how strong Nat is with her people and even on her own! This series is well thought out, the plot if full of twists and turns and the heat is set on high! Please check out the trigger warnings because they are real, but if you can deal with them these books are amazing reads!
Wow! This series was full of action and heat right up to the end! I love this found family and how strong Nat is with her people and even on her own! This series is well thought out, the plot if full of twists and turns and the heat is set on high! Please check out the trigger warnings because they are real, but if you can deal with them these books are amazing reads!
March 30, 2025
So good! As amazing if not more amazing than the first 2! Packed with action, sexy men, unhinged stalkers who are obsessed with her, and so much more. This series is amazing. I love Nat & all her men, her friends, & Katia. I only wish it was longer but it was perfect! Loved the relationship between the guys especially the budding friendship between Alexie & King. Those two are a lot alike. Lots of spice! Highly recommend!!
April 4, 2025
I absolutely loved this series! Each book is chocked full of action, suspense, and of course spice. Collapsed focuses on the Elite trying to take out Ivan or The Umbra. Nat continues to be such a baddie! I mean the girl can absolutely handle anything and shows she can save herself. I am going to miss these men! The each bring something different and I love it. I don't know whether to love or be annoyed by the constant competition between Alexie and King. But that is okay because they are my favorites! I enjoyed the ending. The epilogue hints at a new mission that the elite need to solve. I hope that eventually G.P. Darling will decide to add to the Elite books because I will definitely read them!
April 21, 2023
This book was steamier and more intense than the first two books. Ivan has Nat and the gang have to come up with a plan to not only rescue her, but also put an end to Ivan for good. There were so many ups and downs in this book, but I loved the epilogues. I absolutely adore Bj and what looks to be another book set in this world? Cant wait to find out.
April 23, 2023
Sexy, action, betrayal, Ivan was a piece of work, he was really twisted. Nat, Katia and BJ are total BA ladies. Especially the way Katia and Nat take back the control. Nat's relationships with the guys is so awesome but she has also has an amazing relationship with BJ and Katia in different ways.
I received this copy and my spoiler free review is voluntary
I received this copy and my spoiler free review is voluntary
April 30, 2023
I really enjoyed reading this book. It moves along at a pace that makes for an easy and enjoyable read in which you can lose yourself. The characters are amazing and you will find yourself loving them no matter what they need to do and the story will grab you and keep you reading no matter what. This is a book that needs to be on your TBR list there is no doubt about it.
April 30, 2023
What an incredible journey it has been with all of these wonderful characters. To see the growth in each of them. You can feel the love pouring off the pages. And the steam is hot hot hot! 5 alarm hot! This whole series keeps you in your toes with all the twists and turns. Highly highly recommend this series.
May 3, 2023
COLLAPSED
Wow!!! G.P. Darlings has given another page turner.
No it can not be read alone, books one and two are a must but I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.
Ok so no spoilers which is kind of hard for me but I will say get comfy as your in for a ride.
Grab your copy today and happy reading.
Wow!!! G.P. Darlings has given another page turner.
No it can not be read alone, books one and two are a must but I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.
Ok so no spoilers which is kind of hard for me but I will say get comfy as your in for a ride.
Grab your copy today and happy reading.
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