The author can construct a decent plot but that’s about all she accomplished. On kindle this novel weighs in at 440 pages when it needs only 200 or fewer to tell the story. So to begin with, this is slow, verbose, boring narrative. Then the secrets were less interesting for the repetitions of their portentousness and snail’s pace of revealing the obvious secrets. The conversations are occasionally mildly humorous but more often wooden.
The characters are not believable enough for me and their lives aren’t realistic for supposed menial working class people.
The heroine did not attract me at all, despite the author taking many long pages to explain her fine qualities and her plight. For example, Lavinia May, our heroine, is never described as doing household chores! She reads, wanders around, rarely picks up a needle, hides herself to point of idiocy, and visits her only 2 friends. That is pretty much her described life. But a woman or girl who is the daughter of a gardener, even a head gardener, is in the lower blue collar working class, and cannot afford to lead such an idle life. She’d be working alongside a maid and cook or or doing the duties of the cook in such a small household of the 2 Mays. Her father couldn’t make ends meet if she didn’t do household necessities. At least a good part of each day would be spent cleaning, preparing and preserving food, taking care of laundry, sewing and mending, even with the stated maid of all work and a cook. And for only 2 plus maid, Livvie ought to do the cooking!
Lavinia is also described as a moral, sensitive person but in truth she would be a woman without conscience or morals to be in an indolent position and yet is never described as doing any voluntary help for the poorest neighbors, anyone sick or in distress, families with new babies, her church, etc. She comes across as extremely self absorbed, as a cold, negative sort of hermit who doesn’t contribute to any community good.
The hero, August Moon, is also not credible. His family has inherited a fortune that could and should allow him to buy a piece of land to garden upon and farm upon as he chooses rather than tremble in dread of losing what is in truth a very poorly paid under gardener job. Not believable.
The book is highly rated but I found it barely tolerable. The author needs to cut down her verbiage; she’s not a Charles Dickens who’s manages to encompass many more believable and fascinating works yet written more sparingly. The author needs to develop her characters more realistically, who are appropriate to their culture and socio-economic positions. The book feels like she’s done her research well about the physical place, but not any research about the people and culture of the time period she has chosen for her novel.