Primal Instincts

Forgotten Realms #1

by Raven Willow-Wood

Goldie Lockswood is on the last leg of her trip when she crashes on Sirius A. Her situation was dire before she wrecked her ship! Upset but determined, she sets off to find what she needs to repair her ship and get her cargo to market. She hadn't counted on crashing on a foreign planet and she definitely hadn't counted on making contact with three bear shifters.

Novella
Paranormal/ Futuristic Romance
erotica, ménage a trois mating, sex with alien bear shifters in human form, philatio, oral sex, anal penetration, multiple sexual partners. Warning!: Multiple heroes complete with alien cocks.

Genres: Erotica, Science Fiction, Menage, Fairy Tales, M F M, Shapeshifters, Paranormal Romance

60 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 1, 2011

About the author

AKA Mandy Monroe & Megan Ziese

She is published by New Concepts Publishing

Reviews

[T00zday · Rating 3 out of 5]

The abrupt ending was annoying.

It took a little bit to get into - but the story was enjoyable. Erotica content was yummy too.
I think I would have gone 4 stars if the story went on a bit more. I was waiting for Goldie to lay into the guys for keeping valuable info from her. The reader doesn't get that.

Recommended but beware the abrupt end.
HEA? I assume.
Erotica.

[Netanella · Rating 1 out of 5]

Goldie Lockswood does three alien bear shifters from Sirius A, after she crash lands on their planet. There's a huge mating tree thing going on at the end that had a slight WTFery going on. But, this met a purple-cover challenge spot, and thankfully it was a short read.

[Brutally Honest · Rating 2 out of 5]

Hmm... a bit lame, and didn't like the OW drama.

[Christine · Rating 3 out of 5]

Another on my bought a while ago and am just now reading.

Meh. Just Meh. Nothing exciting here.

[Amy · Rating 3 out of 5]

An ok read. Most easily summed up as saying an intergalactic shifter romance version of Goldilocks and the Three Bears. I would have liked it a heck of a lot better if more effort had been put into creating the characters as was put into the detailed descriptions of the scenery. It was ok for a short story but I think I might have liked it better as a full length developed story and not just a spin off of the Three Bears story. The characters and the plot had potential to be a very good full length novel... if it wasn't for the bad spin off puns. *sigh*

[Karen · Rating 4 out of 5]

short story well written quite funny with original them, goldie locks and the three bears when you are reading this book and realize the theme it was based off you are shocked and are forced to continue reading... a hoot!! pretty good story and quite the imagination from the author, shame on you all from a childs book but this is not childs book believe me.....

[Melissa · Rating 3 out of 5]

The premise was great and the story had a lot of promise. Why waste such a good idea on a short book. This could have been a phenominal book if the characters were fleshed out more. I loved the whole Goldie Locks and the Three Bears parrallels. I liked what I read but-greedy me, I just wants more substance.

[Lisa · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was okay. The story part was so so; I would have enjoyed it more if it was longer. The sex was pretty good. In fact the sex scenes were way better than the actual story.

They even have the alien penis thing going on. They have spurs on their penises.

This is a erotic take of the fairytale of Goldilocks and the Three Bears.

[wingdreams pheung · Rating 2 out of 5]

Goldie and her three bear shifters. A very short read, it would have been better if it is longer. It is like going from A to Z without too much details in between. You miss stuffs in the middle of the journey, (be nice if more lovely dovey scene please)

[Angela · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5
I WISH this were longer!!! A Funny charming story but, I wish it were longer!!!

[Carolyn F. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short story. 33 pages.

A different take on Goldilocks and the Three Bears. I wish the story were just slightly larger but it was still thoroughly enjoyable.

[Ashley · Rating 2 out of 5]

lol alien bear shifter sex with golilocks?? rolled my eyes the whole time lol idk what i expect from reading this crap ! hahaha

[Sofia · Rating 1 out of 5]

Annoying female main character - also, she dropped the f-bomb way too many times! The trick is to swear when needed xp