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Chicago Mafia Vows #1

Promised at Birth

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♥♥♥The ruthless Capo of the Chicago Outfit…A billionaire’s innocent daughter…The violent Russian Bratva that wants to tear them apart.♥♥♥
A mafia arranged marriage? Two people from two different worlds must learn to co-exist, or risk losing everything. A gripping tale of passion and power set against the backdrop of the seedy Chicago underworld. A must-read for all fans of mafia romance…
Get ready to be swept away by Bobby Vincenzio, Chicago’s notorious underworld king, who has seduced his way through half of Hollywood’s movie starlets.
Ruthless. Heartless. Walking sin.
Bobby has no intention of settling down. But his life is changed forever when his father forces him to marry Gwen Fielding, a young woman inexperienced with men, thrown into a dangerous and passionate world of mobsters and violence.
With the brutal Russian Bratva fighting to rule Chicago and bring Bobby’s reign to a deadly end, will Gwen and Bobby’s arranged marriage bring them closer together or tear them apart? Find out in this sexy tumultuous journey of a mafia arranged marriage! Promised at Birth , with a thrilling mix of romance and danger, will have you hooked until the very last page. If you love the mafia and romance, then you will love this talented author’s best work yet.
Read now.
An all-new dark mafia romance from the author of Obsessed . ★★★WARNING: This book contains triggers and scenes that may be disturbing to some readers.★★★ Genres:

238 pages, ebook

Published February 24, 2023

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159 reviews
June 23, 2023
🙄.

I think my emoji speak volumes, or even my 2 star rating. I went from the beginning to the end of this book because it was getting on my last nerve. It felt like I was reading a bad attempt at a Mafia romance by a high schooler. I not a blogger or anything, but I know what I like and this did not do it for me.
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167 reviews
May 28, 2023
dnf at 63%

there are so many things that are wrong with this book istg

1- the amount of exclamation points is so ducking annoying

2- most wattpad books have editing better than this

3- bobby is disgusting

4- gwen is annoying

please for the love of god stop with the nonsense (he only talks about her boobs and etc)(she says stupid shit constantly)
1,605 reviews13 followers
June 23, 2024
Promised at Birth is the first book of the Chicago Mafia Vows. After I read the overview for this book, I just knew that I had to read it. To say the least I was NOT disappointed with the book. In fact I absolutely enjoyed reading Promised at Birth. I thought the author did an amazing job with telling Bobby and Gwen’s story. I also found that Promised at Birth to be an exceptionally well written book. I found the book to be both suspenseful and a page-turner. I could barely set my kindle down before finishing the book. Now I’m not going to give out any details because I don’t want to spoil the book for future readers. However, I would highly recommend this book to others. One amazing Mafia Romance book!!!.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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60 reviews3 followers
September 5, 2023
Ugh that was a tough book to finish. I’m sorry but I’m not a quitter and I so wanted to quit reading this book. I know we all have our own opinions and the actual story of this book wasn’t bad but the mmc and the mfc were awful!!!!!!!
162 reviews1 follower
March 9, 2023
Somewhat far fetched

I felt the dialogue was pretty poor and the story rushed. it was hard to engage with the characters..
Not the worst book I’ve read but instantly forgettable.
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1,450 reviews7 followers
April 12, 2024
Bobby Vincenzio is the Capo of the Chicago Mafia. He is cruel, egotistical and needs to know that this is no longer just a man’s world! Gwen Fielding is the sweet, pure, innocent daughter of one of his father’s business associates. When Bobby finds out that he is to marry Gwen, he is not happy about this and plans to continue his playboy ways after he is married. Gwen only agrees to the marriage after her father tells her that he is in trouble and this is the only way she can be protected. From the beginning, someone is out to stop this marriage – kidnapping Gwen the day that Bobby finds out that he is to marry her, multiple accidents occurring and even kidnapping her a 2nd time.

Bobby is all about the power and wealth he will incur when her marries Gwen. But what happens when Mr. this is just a business transaction, starts to have feelings for his wife? He will do everything he can to protect her – from the Russians, others in the mafia, and even himself if he has to. Gwen will do everything she can to not fall in love with Bobby – if only to protect herself, but boy does that fall to the wayside! This is all new to Bobby as he feels this is a weakness. I am not a fan of Bobby’s! I couldn’t connect to his character because he was just an a**hole and I wanted Gwen to have amore of a backbone! But she was only 18 and innocent.

I do plan on reading more of this series and cannot wait to see what comes next! I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
767 reviews4 followers
June 6, 2024
Promised at Birth is a wonderfully crafted story that will remind you of the transformative power of love. Bobby (MMC), Capo of the Chicago mob and notorious womanizer, and Gwen (FMC), an innocent 18-year-old college student, are in an arranged marriage. Gwen’s father is a Chicago real estate tycoon and Bobby’s father is the former Capo of the Chicago mob. The fathers had been friends for a long-time and Gwen was promised to one of Paul’s sons many years ago in exchange for that son to eventually run the real estate business. Add in some stereotypical mafia business and characters and the story takes off with short chapters that have new revelations coming out frequently so to keep the reader turning the pages.

Bobby and Gwen’s relationship was a slow burn that eventually became a blazing love affair that would cool off, then heat back up. Repeat. Then repeat again. Bobby’s journey from casual encounters to deep emotional bonds with Gwen was a joy to read. Gwen’s journey was sometimes frustrating, but then again, she was just a teenager. It was also good to see her mature somewhat. When they finally do come together, their chemistry is burning hot, and they will get their happy-for-now.

Readers will be shocked, angry, frustrated, and feel other emotions with this action-packed story full of angst, grit, betrayal, spice, and complex main and supporting characters. Although the story is brutal at times, it is all in context. I recommend this book and look forward to reading more of the Chicago Mafia vows series. My only complaint is the inadequate editing.
2,614 reviews26 followers
June 17, 2024
I voluntarily reviewed a copy of "PROMISED AT BIRTH"
about an arranged Mafia marriage both to learn to be with each other both from different worlds or risk losing everything.
This is a gripping adventure of passion, power, danger, situated in the seedy Mafia underworld of Chicago, Bobby Vincent notorious underworld King, no intensions of settingling down his life changes when his father forces him to marry Gwen Feilding a young inexperience women with men she's thrown into a dangerous & passionate world of mobsters & violence.
I definitely recommend to get this riviting story the Brutal Russian Mafia fighting to rule Chicago & bring Bobby Vincent reign to a deadly end.
I definitely recommend to get this riviting adventure a thrilling mix of passion, danger, violence, you'll be hooked to the end, will Gwen & Bobby get a HEA or end on disaster a must find out.
EXCELLENT ADDICTING, INTENSE, HOT MAFIA ROMANCE I LOVED IT 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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3,336 reviews48 followers
April 8, 2024
I enjoyed the narration of Kathy Handrock

Bobby is a successful and twenty-eight years old, the youngest Capo of the Chicago Outfit. He loves power, money and sex. Bobby had dated a actress but he didn't want a relationship with love. His has called him back to his childhood home. Both of Bobby's brothers are married and his father Paul wants him married. Paul's friend Zachary has a daughter Gwendolyn that has turned eighteen. Years ago Paul and Zachary agreed that one of the three sons would marry Gwendolyn. Bobby's other two brothers are already married, so that leaves Bobby.
What started off as fake slowly turns into something real...

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626 reviews4 followers
March 15, 2024
This is a case of an arranged marriage. Their parents promised their infant daughter to marry another’s son to settle a debt. She is being treated as a pawn, and her own wishes do not matter. I bothered me she was not resistant to this scheme, more outraged. Bobby is a womanizer, but needs to settle down with one women to start a family. Eventually they realize they are growing to love each other, and they have a HEA. Despite my issues with the story line, it was well written and interesting. The narration was well done. I would be interested in more works by this author. I received a free copy of this audiobook and am voluntarily leaving my review.
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254 reviews1 follower
March 17, 2024
Bobby Vincenzio vows to never fall in love. He didn’t think he was capable of loving a woman.

Bobby Vincenzio is successful and twenty-eight years old, the youngest Capo of the Chicago Outfit.

I wasn’t the biggest fan of this book… I did read it in one sitting but I think that was just so I could start a new book🤨

I never really connected with the MMC or MFC. I know sometimes that happens in books. But i think i got turned off in the first part, mostly with bobby

Was glad to see Bobby finally stop waffling about his feelings for his wife and whether or not he planned to cheat on her, but a little disheartening to see him continue to neglect her….
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4,167 reviews21 followers
April 20, 2024
This is book 1 in Peterson's Chicago Mafia Vows series. Well written and narrated, this book is dark, steamy and captivating. Our main characters are Capo Bobby - head of the Chicago mafia and Gwen, daughter of a business associate. Bobby is an entitled, playboy, jerk with Gwen being innocent and seemingly clueless. Promised to each other, both agree to their marriage for their own reasons only as time passes and danger becomes prevalent feelings also come into play. A good mafia romance read / listen. Definitely looking forward to more.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
*this review is based on the audio version of this read.
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6,326 reviews47 followers
November 6, 2024
If you like mafia romances, you’ll enjoy this book. What a great start to the Chicago Mafia Vows Series. As with most mafia romances, there’s no shortage of danger, drama, and lots of action. Bobby and Gwen’s arranged marriage will pull you in emotionally from the beginning. For someone who doesn’t do love, it didn’t take him long for fall for Gwen, although he kept his feelings secret. They were opposites in every way in that he was a mafia playboy while she was a young and naive,. The writing was a little repetitive but overall a good book. I read a free book via the author and voluntarily chose to review it.
410 reviews1 follower
August 27, 2023
unexpectedly falling in love

Bobby Vincenzio vows to never fall in love. He didn’t think he was capable of loving a woman. He has merely ever enjoyed sex with them. He has always been a selfish lover; only concerned with his needs until he meets the girl who was promised to him at birth. He fell for her immediately. He found himself doing and feeling things that were foreign to him. Eventually, he would recognize these all as tell tale sign of being in love. Then, he would do anything for her.
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120 reviews
July 29, 2024
4.75 ⭐️ I really wanted to jump through my Kindle and kick Bobby in his manhood because he was such a dickhead. All that, I’m still going to sleep with other women bullshit was making me mad….but Gwen, without even knowing her power put him right in his place….lol. And Gia, Nick, and her father….ugh! And the Russian Brothers….someone always feel like they have to take over and have more power, and look at what that got them….in jail! All in all, I definitely enjoyed Bobby and Gwen’s unexpected Love story!
💜💜💜💜💜
385 reviews1 follower
March 5, 2024
Not sure

I know, it's strange to not be sure how you feel about a book. Unfortunately this is my case. I don't think i ever felt the chemistry between the lead roles. I never really connected with the MMC or MFC. I know sometimes that happens in books. But i think i got turned off in the first part, mostly with bobby, n never got a good feeling back, even as he was supposedly redeemed. Anyway, the book wasn't bad. It just didn't do it for me.
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17 reviews
April 19, 2024
The build up between the MFC and MMC was perfect. A few of the sex scenes felt rushed but most of them were overall satisfying. I enjoyed the mafia aspects balanced with the relationship plot. The twist of character betrayal was believable but felt a bit rushed. I would've enjoyed a more drawn out version of that storyline. I enjoyed the story and would recommend this book to anyone that enjoys a mafia romance.
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13.7k reviews156 followers
May 30, 2024
She was promised at birth to fulfill a debt. Bobby and Gwen's story will keep you all caught up in this one. He is a womanizer but marrying Gwen changes him. Gwen is determined not to compromise her heart to him, but fate has other plans for these two in this intriguing story. Will they finally get their chance for happiness in the end.

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810 reviews17 followers
May 22, 2025
First up, read through the triggers. There are someThen get ready. Bobby didn't want to get married, ever. He loved women and women loved him. Only problem is New York, doesn't like him footloose and fancy free. Especially some of the women he has been with.

Gwen just wanted to finally get some freedom. After being the good girl, she was going to college and nothing was going to stop her. Until it did. Now she has to be a mob wife and she isn't liking it.

This was a great read.
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11 reviews
September 14, 2023
good idea bad execution

From spelling errors to an outright annoying FMC, the idea was good, but the book bombards you with information, it didn’t let the story tell the background, just used Bobby POV to do so. And there was the MC being clingy after barely meeting him without any backbone nor really a personality
9,006 reviews65 followers
December 29, 2023
Bobby didn't do love, that is until the girl who was promised to him at birth comes into hisblife as a woman, Gwen stirs feelings like no other but cam he keep her safe? Engaging story that held my attention through out.

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1,935 reviews8 followers
February 26, 2024
Gwen is simply a pawn in the grand scheme of things, when she learns that she will be marrying Bobby, she is not happy about it. However as she comes to grips with what is going on around her and with her family, she starts to understand things a little better, even her hard hearted husband.

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69 reviews
March 18, 2024
Gwen was not my favorite

Every time they interacted or spent any time together Gwen always had to ask him if he was going to cheat on her. She asked him I don't even know five or six times straight. She was really insecure. But then again. He was doing her clothing stylist before they even got married so he was that guy.
2 reviews
November 21, 2024
Not a fan

I admit the bio had me when I first read it. Unfortunately it wasn’t fulfilled by the end of the book. The F character came across more of a 12 year old who turned into a sex kitten after one night and then back to a 12 year old all the way thru. Not a truly believable mafia read .
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178 reviews
March 5, 2024
Meh. I love me a good mafia romance, but I did not feel like they really loved each other, but the sex. Not the same. There was no bonding. Plus him sleeping with the woman who literally picked out her wedding dress and wardrobe and stuff…. Nope I didn’t like it.
1,106 reviews2 followers
March 22, 2024
Jesus

Holy wow, I wish I could use curse words on here to explain my feelings on this book efficiently. Gwen and Bobby are too hot together. She is innocent, and he is the Devil!! He took her for granted at first, but fate never lets you get away.
49 reviews
May 6, 2024
awful

Please don't waste your money. This is by far the worst possible book. Although it was pure torture, I had to finish it to give it a fair review. It's so so bad, it should be unpublishable
35 reviews1 follower
June 3, 2023
Que historia tan mala y tan mediocre
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