Originally 3 stars but an additional half star for the epilogue...So 3.5 stars!
“I asked you to select a woman to be my duchess, and you chose wrong. But how can I blame you when even I didn’t comprehend that she has been with me the entire time? I would willingly die for you. I will kill for you . . . I will live for you. Miss Penelope Pettypeace, you shall always be the love of my life, the echo of my soul.” Penelope Pettypeace has been the secretary to the Duke of Kingsland for eight years, but her most unpleasant task yet is to find and select the perfect Duchess for Hugh whom she loves. The Duke of Kingsland is confused when he starts seeing Penelope more than the reliable secretary he had all these years…and when an opportunity to dally with her presents itself, he takes it. Nothing would change between them…except everything does. When secrets of the past re-appeared to haunt the two together, he has to decide whether the perfect Duchess he had been looking for all along was his secretary, Penelope, who had been there for him all this time.
The Duchess Hunt is the second book from Lorraine Heath’s newish historical romance series, Once upon a Dukedom. This book is about Hugh Brinsley-Norton, Duke of Kingsland, and Penelope Pettypeace. It is no secret that I loved the first book of this series and I was expecting to love this too, especially since the synopsis sounds like the perfect angst-fest book. The readers met Hugh from book one since he was the Duke Lady Kathryn was betrothed to for quite some time. He seemed like an interesting man so I was excited to read his book.
Meet Penelope Pettypeace: She has been the secretary to the Duke of Kingsland for eight years. And she loves her employer but she never dared dream that she would be the Duchess he would have by his side. After all, she is a mere commoner. Add to that, there is a secret from her past that haunts her up to this day. She is reliable and the best secretary one could ask for. She is smart, practical, competent and clever.
Meet Hugh Brinsley-Norton: He is the Duke of Kingsland. He has a knack for making money. When he inherited the title, it came with a massive debt and he worked hard to ensure that the Dukedom would return to its former glory. He loves his mother and his brother. He has the looks, title and wealth. He is quite the perfect catch. But like Penelope, he has secrets of his own. He has his own issues that leads him to believe that he can’t love anyone, which is the reason why he hunts for the perfect Duchess in the most impersonal manner.
The Duke of Kingsland picked a potential Duchess just last year which had disastrous results for the woman loved another man. But Hugh seems to have not learned a lesson because only two days after the woman rejected his proposal, he was once again hunting for the perfect Duchess. Penelope Pettypeace's task as his secretary is to select Hugh’s future wife. Although it is not the most ideal thing to find a future bride for the man she loves, Penelope will make sure that who she would pick will be perfect for Hugh. Penelope loves Hugh but she knows the two of them can never be together, until one encounter changes everything. Choosing to engage in sexual liaisons with Hugh, she decided, is better than to have nothing with him at all. Nothing would change, or so he says…but feelings complicate matters, and so do secrets of the past. When her particular secret came to light, it was bound to change everything in their lives….decisions, decisions, decisions and finally a HEA.
I had a hard time warming up to the heroine. While she was most definitely sensible and an ideal heroine, there was something about her that I did not like. What I did not like is that she kept her secrets from the readers for too long. Although I am not sure if that’s her fault or the author's. I hate being kept in the dark. I understand that she does not want the hero or anyone in her present life to know her secrets, but was it necessary to keep it from the readers too? It annoyed me. Also, it was more of a telling and not showing when it came to her feelings toward him. So at first, I did not really buy it. We are instantly told that she loves him but I did not feel it until later on. Her running away when things get complicated was very relatable though. Sadly, I did not fall in love with her character.
I was kind of disappointed with the hero’s character. I loved Scoundrel of my heart, and I was definitely intrigued with him when I read his part in that book. I wish I could say I loved him but I really did not. The line between Penelope being his secretary and a woman he starts being attracted to was confusing. It felt like it happened all of a sudden. Like, seriously, the woman had been your secretary for eight years and you are now only realizing how much you’re attracted to her? Meh, didn’t buy it. Again, I’m not sure if that was the character’s fault or the author’s. I also did not like how he reacted to the heroine’s secret, although it was actually very understandable especially during that era. But he does redeem himself. His secret shocked me too! I think his secret shocked me more than the heroine’s. I love how he made sure that Penelope’s secret from the past will never come back to haunt them. While I did not fall in love with his character, his love for Penelope became believable and I could not help but be touched.
This book was disappointing compared to the first book. But I guess it is all because of my own preferences: I find that I do not like the employer-employee trope in HRs. It just feels a touch modern? Something about this book just felt very modern and I did not like that. It took me at least four tries before I could finally continue on with the book. It just did not hook me like other Lorraine Heath books. For most part of the book, I did not feel the chemistry between Penelope and Hugh so when they were mooning over each other, I did not feel anything. The problem is that: we are just told how much Penelope loves Hugh. And now Hugh sees Penelope more than his secretary. I just did not buy it. They were working together for eight years! Seriously. The reason I decided to persevere is because I was curious whether I would end up loving it or not.
The thing is, I feel like Lord Lawrence stole the spotlight from Hugh. I was actually more interested in him! I need his book! Now this is a man whose book would be very enjoyable, I just know it. A wastrel who would later on find purpose in his life? I need it! Lady Sarah Montague’s small scene piqued my curiosity too. I wonder if the gent ended up jealous? Sounds like it would be an interesting book. The Chessmen were interesting too, I wish they would get their own individual books. And we also have Wolf, who is Griffith's older brother. His book is the next one, I know. But the synopsis does not intrigue me, which is unfortunate as his character seems just like the hero I would love. Now you see the problem? I was more interested in the side characters than anything happening between the main characters and their blooming romance.
I guess the problem that this book had is the: It’s not you, it’s me. It is a well-written book, as one would expect from Lorraine Heath. Her characters had substance but there was just something that I did not enjoy very much. Perhaps it was the too modern employer-employee couple dynamic, perhaps it was because both of them kept their secrets for too long, especially the heroine, which did not endear them to me. I was originally going to rate it only three stars but the last paragraph of the epilogue really touched my heart. It made me tear up, which was unexpected because I did not particularly really enjoy the book. It was so bittersweet. Because of that last paragraph, I decided to add another half-star. Overall, it is a well-written book that I am sure many people would enjoy, especially if they enjoy the employer-employee dynamic, mutual pining, and secrets from both hero and heroine.
Some quotes:
“He liked surprising her. Imagined the satisfaction to be found in a lifetime of doing so.”
“His Pettypeace. His. She wasn’t an object or a possession, but she was his secretary, his right hand, his start to the day. His closest ally. Dare he admit, his dearest friend? He couldn’t imagine a world in which she was not at his side.”
“A life without love is . . . even if it doesn’t last, even if it’s only for a short while . . . to find joy in the giving of yourself, to look forward to the day because that person will be part of it. To share your thoughts and not have them judged. To be able to disagree and know the person will listen to your argument and not think less of you for making it. To feel you’re better than you were before that person came into your life. And to weep when they no longer are.” (I loved this quote.)
“I haven’t the words to explain it adequately. While I had him, while he was in my life, what I felt was like sustenance to my soul. The sun, the moon, and the stars were all inside me.”
“How could he have ever thought he needed to hunt for the perfect duchess when she had been with him for so very long? Perfect for his soul, his heart, his body. Perfect as his wife, his lover, his partner. In all things, he’d never find a better match.”