Oh the drama! I say this sarcastically, though not meanly. What a romance story this is! What started as a rather complicated political intrigue, ended as a very emotional, sometimes irrational, always in extremes of joy or anger, love story. So very different from the first installment, ‘Kidnapped,’ that I don’t wonder the boys who loved the first book aren’t very inclined to read this: a lengthy volume of Davie’s enraptured thoughts and swooning over grey-eyed Catriona. Dear me, what a lot of ups and downs! And arguments, and misunderstandings, and passionate emotions! Whew! I was relieved to have done with them both by the end.
Alan figured only very little into this tale, popping up in the first half for a quick adventure, complaining about living in a bale of hay, and (what this book seems to view as chiefly important) to impart how very much he admires Davie’s courage. And he also pops in helpfully at the end to help his poor young friend patch his romance and life back together. (Yes, I agree with you, Alan. Davie is quite blind.)
“ye seem to me to be born blind, and there’s where the deefficulty comes in.”
“And can you no help me?” I asked, “you that are so clever?”
“Ye see, David, I wasnae here,” said he. “I’m like a field officer that has naebody but blind men for scouts and éclaireurs; and what would he ken? ”
And once he’s seen Catriona and observed her himself, and David asks if his friend has any insights on whether Catriona likes him, Alan outbursts:
“Mean? What do I mean! It’s extraordinar, David man,” say he, “that you should be so mortal stupit.”
It is extraordinary, Alan. But then again, I’m not sure I’ve ever read about quite so confusing a girl as Catriona.
But oh my! That closing! It about burst my heart when it was revealed Davie was telling the entire story to their two children: Barbara and Alan!
“And now, Miss Barbara Balfour (to set the ladies first), and Mr. Alan Balfour younger of Shaws, here is the story brought fairly to an end.”
It was too, too adorable.
The old fashioned honor of David was very humorous and very like to all of Henty’s main characters. I found myself laughing over passages like:
“I have a respect for you, David, mingled with awe,” says he, smiling” (Where political men in power express their respect to our young MC’s morals)
Lastly, I will be putting a few various quotes that amused or struck me, for your enjoyment:
“You are either very simple, or extremely the reverse, and I see that I must deal with you more confidentially,” says he. ”
“He wagged his bald eyebrows at me. “You are pleased to make experiments in the ironical, I think,” said he. ”
“It was not for my sake - but I need not be telling that to you, that cannot look at me without laughter.”
“I do laugh at you a good deal, and a good deal more than is quite civil,” said she”
“I was like Christian in the slough - the more I tried to clamber out upon the side, the deeper I became involved; ”
“What we spoke was usually of ourselves or of each other, so that if anyone had been at so much pains as overhear us, he must have supposed us the most egotistical persons in the world.”
“There is not anything more bitter than to lose a fancied friend.”
****And on a final, though more unpleasant tack, I will be noting this one had more language than the previous book****