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India Was One
...Suddenly, he saw something shiny at the bottom of the abyss. He squinted his eyes to see what it was. He ran back to his binoculars and turned them to see what it was. Sharp barbed wires that separated the two mountains came into focus. He had come as far as he could in his country. But she was standing in another country. He was in South India and she was in North India... Have you ever imagined India being divided into two countries? What happens to the millions of Indians who are from South India but are now residing in North India? Kaahi & Jai were two such people who got trapped in this situation. Everything was going smoothly for them and suddenly, their world turned upside down. How will they get together? Will India become one again? Take an exciting journey with them from their college days in Mumbai to their life in the US and back to India when they find out that India is divided.
370 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 6, 2011
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An Indian
4 books278 followersI was born and raised in Mumbai, India. I came to the US in 1989 and lived in New York. I currently reside in Los Angeles with my wife and two children.
I've written three books.
I term my first book, India Was One, as a realistic fiction, a fiction based on some real events. Find out more about it at www.IndiaWasOne.com. It has a brief synopsis, various artworks used in the book, the poem used in the book, a few reviews (including several media reviews in magazines and newspapers in the US, Canada and India), an interactive map of India, and much more. You can read a few sample chapters here - https://issuu.com/indiawasone/docs/sa...
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My second book, Beyond The Milky Way, is a science fiction. It's the first book in The Galaxy Series. Return To Earth is my latest book of this series. Find out more about it at www.TheGalaxySeries.com.
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In addition to writing books, I've also written a few articles. Find them at https://medium.com/@indiawasone.
I've written three books.
I term my first book, India Was One, as a realistic fiction, a fiction based on some real events. Find out more about it at www.IndiaWasOne.com. It has a brief synopsis, various artworks used in the book, the poem used in the book, a few reviews (including several media reviews in magazines and newspapers in the US, Canada and India), an interactive map of India, and much more. You can read a few sample chapters here - https://issuu.com/indiawasone/docs/sa...
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My second book, Beyond The Milky Way, is a science fiction. It's the first book in The Galaxy Series. Return To Earth is my latest book of this series. Find out more about it at www.TheGalaxySeries.com.
More...
In addition to writing books, I've also written a few articles. Find them at https://medium.com/@indiawasone.
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September 4, 2017
More like 4 1/2 stars, yaar!
"'I didn't call you BLOODY, I called you BUDDY, a friend. But if you don't take my friend's advice, he will make you bloody...that I can promise you'" (page 9).
"'It says on the card "RESIDENT ALIEN." ALIEN? Made me feel so strange and unwelcome here, like I was from some other planet. ... I felt so bad that day, but not as bad as when I became a US citizen'" (p. 214).
"Actually, it was a sign that had said 'Welcome to India,' but someone had altered it, and put a caret between 'to' and 'India' and added 'South' above it in a hurry. IT LOOKED UGLY" (p. 270).
"'I have always wondered, why do they leave out the letter b on 'Garage Sale' signs?'" (p. 214).
INDIA WAS ONE was one "North and South" tale that needed to be told, and now needs to be read and shared. Thank you, An Indian!
"'I didn't call you BLOODY, I called you BUDDY, a friend. But if you don't take my friend's advice, he will make you bloody...that I can promise you'" (page 9).
"'It says on the card "RESIDENT ALIEN." ALIEN? Made me feel so strange and unwelcome here, like I was from some other planet. ... I felt so bad that day, but not as bad as when I became a US citizen'" (p. 214).
"Actually, it was a sign that had said 'Welcome to India,' but someone had altered it, and put a caret between 'to' and 'India' and added 'South' above it in a hurry. IT LOOKED UGLY" (p. 270).
"'I have always wondered, why do they leave out the letter b on 'Garage Sale' signs?'" (p. 214).
INDIA WAS ONE was one "North and South" tale that needed to be told, and now needs to be read and shared. Thank you, An Indian!
July 27, 2017
This was an interesting book, and one that cannot be easily categorized.
There is a love story. Jai and Kaahi meet in college and fall in love. Their story threads through the book, including their initial attraction, time spent with each other and friends in college, their marriage after graduating, and their lives together – and apart – and together again.
There is a culture log. Indian culture, Los Angeles culture as experienced by Indian immigrants, and European culture as experienced by Indian tourists.
There is a war story. A country split and divided and at war, not armed but fighting through determination and reason to remain united.
There is terrorism. Based on real events, a fictional account where real people are injured and families torn apart by terrorists.
This book covers a lot of territory and I found it held my interest and broadened my experience by getting to know Indians and their culture better. I learned so many things: about cricket, about the food, the transportation system, the film industry, music, dance, India’s education systems, weddings and funerals. I learned that there are 15 National languages and over 1600 dialects. As a Canadian, I found it fascinating that one of the languages is called Kannada and is spoken in the State of Karnataka. There are many States and other regions and I thoroughly enjoyed my armchair travels to Rajashan and, of course, the time spent in Mumbai.
I even learned things about Los Angeles and San Francisco that I didn’t know before. And following along on a trip to Europe, I also discovered facts and places that were new to me.
The format of this book was different, and I enjoyed it immensely. There were many language references and historical references that were explained in italics on the fly. This made for a much more elegant and fluid read than had the author chosen to footnote these important pieces of information. I was able to stay immersed in the story and enjoy the information as part of the story, which was much appreciated by this reader.
For all of the places traveled and all of the information that flowed through the storyline, the greatest impact I felt was an underlying plea – not just to Indians, but to everyone – to celebrate our diversity as nations. The message I heard is one we all can benefit from: that it is in our commonalities as humanity rather than our differences (be it skin color, religion, language, customs, or cultures) that will keep our countries – and our world – strong, safe, and something we can build upon together for future generations.
This book was downloaded in digital format by invitation of the author with no obligation to review.
There is a love story. Jai and Kaahi meet in college and fall in love. Their story threads through the book, including their initial attraction, time spent with each other and friends in college, their marriage after graduating, and their lives together – and apart – and together again.
There is a culture log. Indian culture, Los Angeles culture as experienced by Indian immigrants, and European culture as experienced by Indian tourists.
There is a war story. A country split and divided and at war, not armed but fighting through determination and reason to remain united.
There is terrorism. Based on real events, a fictional account where real people are injured and families torn apart by terrorists.
This book covers a lot of territory and I found it held my interest and broadened my experience by getting to know Indians and their culture better. I learned so many things: about cricket, about the food, the transportation system, the film industry, music, dance, India’s education systems, weddings and funerals. I learned that there are 15 National languages and over 1600 dialects. As a Canadian, I found it fascinating that one of the languages is called Kannada and is spoken in the State of Karnataka. There are many States and other regions and I thoroughly enjoyed my armchair travels to Rajashan and, of course, the time spent in Mumbai.
I even learned things about Los Angeles and San Francisco that I didn’t know before. And following along on a trip to Europe, I also discovered facts and places that were new to me.
The format of this book was different, and I enjoyed it immensely. There were many language references and historical references that were explained in italics on the fly. This made for a much more elegant and fluid read than had the author chosen to footnote these important pieces of information. I was able to stay immersed in the story and enjoy the information as part of the story, which was much appreciated by this reader.
For all of the places traveled and all of the information that flowed through the storyline, the greatest impact I felt was an underlying plea – not just to Indians, but to everyone – to celebrate our diversity as nations. The message I heard is one we all can benefit from: that it is in our commonalities as humanity rather than our differences (be it skin color, religion, language, customs, or cultures) that will keep our countries – and our world – strong, safe, and something we can build upon together for future generations.
This book was downloaded in digital format by invitation of the author with no obligation to review.
February 7, 2017
The author immerses us in the culture of India-- its foods, hobbies, daily life, religions in a way no outsider could. We then get to see his perspective of America as he migrates here for work, and his view of Europe on vacation. I liked seeing how someone from another country sees things that we are so used to. In the book, trouble then erupts in India... the northern India being divided from Southern India. Whether the divisions where caused by regional differences or religion does not matter; the author makes the point, (which would be wise for the peoples of all nations to remember), that the measure of a country's strength and greatness can be measured by how unified they are. Putting aside what is different among the various peoples of a nation and focusing on what they have in common is a wonderful trait the population of a great country should display. I would like to thank the author for providing me with a copy of this book for an honest review.
November 29, 2016
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Love, Loyalty, Traditions
Discover India through the eyes and heart of one of her sons.
INDIA WAS ONE romances the love of country and the love between a man and woman. Two tales intertwined to showcase the cultural heritage of a country with a kaleidoscope of religions, ethnic backgrounds and even dialects unfolding simultaneously to reveal the human side of life in a country steeped in traditions, in a time of heartbreaking conflict. The author, known as An Indian, further compels the reader to delve into a world he clearly loves deep in his soul. His lack of personal identity shows the depth of his beliefs in the country he was raised in, he is clearly stating his preference to be known as “An Indian.”
What starts as a sweet romance between Kaahi and Jai, reads like a tale of their day to day lives, their plans for the future and their desire to honor their cultures and families. There are bumps in the writing, but this inside view of real human emotions and the joy of young love is refreshing to read as these two bravely move on to adulthood and marriage in a foreign country, the United States. Their cultural shock rings true as what Americans take for granted, they find unusual and even daunting at times. I think it opens ones eyes to the reality of being a stranger in a foreign country.
That said, when India becomes a divided nation, North versus South and battle lines are being drawn, Kaahi and Jai never hesitated to go “home” to be with family in a time of crisis. Their own differences come to full and horrific light as they are separated with little hope of being reunited. What has happened to the country that has always been a melting pot of diversity? Will countryman kill countryman on the orders of foreign higher ups who avoid battle themselves or will the loyalty to their flag, their country and their fellow citizens rise up within them?
An Indian has created a tale fed with the brutal facts of reality and the fictional characters that give this tale life. I was moved by the heartfelt writing of this author who shared the India he knows with far more depth than a dry textbook or travel log. This is how we should learn of other cultures, countries and a world filled with diversity. An Indian has brought India to life and the world needs to step out and see the sights, feel the emotion and take note that everywhere, it is the individuals that make a country and the world what it is. All cultures deserve respect and should be recognized for their unique lives. Highly recommended for all readers from all cultures.
I received this copy from the author, An Indian in exchange for my honest review.
Publication Date: March 6, 2011
Publisher: An Indian
ISBN: 1450543332
Genre: Cultural Heritage - Literary Fiction
Print Length: 370 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
Love, Loyalty, Traditions
Discover India through the eyes and heart of one of her sons.
INDIA WAS ONE romances the love of country and the love between a man and woman. Two tales intertwined to showcase the cultural heritage of a country with a kaleidoscope of religions, ethnic backgrounds and even dialects unfolding simultaneously to reveal the human side of life in a country steeped in traditions, in a time of heartbreaking conflict. The author, known as An Indian, further compels the reader to delve into a world he clearly loves deep in his soul. His lack of personal identity shows the depth of his beliefs in the country he was raised in, he is clearly stating his preference to be known as “An Indian.”
What starts as a sweet romance between Kaahi and Jai, reads like a tale of their day to day lives, their plans for the future and their desire to honor their cultures and families. There are bumps in the writing, but this inside view of real human emotions and the joy of young love is refreshing to read as these two bravely move on to adulthood and marriage in a foreign country, the United States. Their cultural shock rings true as what Americans take for granted, they find unusual and even daunting at times. I think it opens ones eyes to the reality of being a stranger in a foreign country.
That said, when India becomes a divided nation, North versus South and battle lines are being drawn, Kaahi and Jai never hesitated to go “home” to be with family in a time of crisis. Their own differences come to full and horrific light as they are separated with little hope of being reunited. What has happened to the country that has always been a melting pot of diversity? Will countryman kill countryman on the orders of foreign higher ups who avoid battle themselves or will the loyalty to their flag, their country and their fellow citizens rise up within them?
An Indian has created a tale fed with the brutal facts of reality and the fictional characters that give this tale life. I was moved by the heartfelt writing of this author who shared the India he knows with far more depth than a dry textbook or travel log. This is how we should learn of other cultures, countries and a world filled with diversity. An Indian has brought India to life and the world needs to step out and see the sights, feel the emotion and take note that everywhere, it is the individuals that make a country and the world what it is. All cultures deserve respect and should be recognized for their unique lives. Highly recommended for all readers from all cultures.
I received this copy from the author, An Indian in exchange for my honest review.
Publication Date: March 6, 2011
Publisher: An Indian
ISBN: 1450543332
Genre: Cultural Heritage - Literary Fiction
Print Length: 370 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
July 22, 2017
3.5/5
I'm madly in love with the Indian culture and this book is exactly what I needed, a beautiful journey to India. 💕🇮🇳
When I first started reading this, I didn't expect it to be so lovely. 😍
This is the love story of Jai and Kaahi, but it was more of a Travel book to me.
Nevertheless, I'm quite impressed with this one, it's very informative, enlightening and different from what I usually read. 👏🏼
Glad that I was provided with a copy from the author! Many thanks to you sir and good luck. 🙏🏼
I'm madly in love with the Indian culture and this book is exactly what I needed, a beautiful journey to India. 💕🇮🇳
When I first started reading this, I didn't expect it to be so lovely. 😍
This is the love story of Jai and Kaahi, but it was more of a Travel book to me.
Nevertheless, I'm quite impressed with this one, it's very informative, enlightening and different from what I usually read. 👏🏼
Glad that I was provided with a copy from the author! Many thanks to you sir and good luck. 🙏🏼
January 7, 2014
I read this sneaky book a few weeks ago but didn't feel ready to write about it for some time. I call it sneaky because it found it's way into my head and heart. The love story was, may I say, lovely? The group of friends were silly, funny, loyal and finding their way in a somewhat privileged atmosphere which made what happened in their country even more shocking. It was fascinating to learn the history of the political difficulties in India and of how the division of the country affected individuals and families.....of how major separations occurred. It was enlightening to learn of all the different languages and religious practices that exist in India in relative peace. I believe the author is a fairly new novelist - if so he certainly shows great talent, particularly at character development. There were some rough patches such as poorly developed segues. Some will find the frequent foray away from the story into informational passages disconcerting. It was helpful to have that information to hand but there should be a less discomfiting place for it or way to introduce it. Still, I am giving 4 stars because the story is good and this writer is, also, very good with dialogue - one of the hardest things to master.
I was given an e-book by the author for an honest review.
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I was given an e-book by the author for an honest review.
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July 18, 2017
I was granted a free sightseeing tour through the eyes of the author that guided me through the busy streets of Mumbai, India. Fascinating detail of the country's many local charms, foods and pastimes were proudly put on display. There was a lot to soak in. It was quite a ride. Throughout the narrative, many notations of popular foods, expressions and even some mild expletives were written in the language of Hindi followed by an explanation in English. That was an interesting "first".
I made the acquaintance of Jai and his close friends who were all college students at a local University in Mumbai. It was there that Jai came to meet his future wife, Kaahi. From the get-go, they were both magnetically drawn to each other. Things were definitely looking up.
Keeping with tradition, upon their graduation, they were wed. The ceremony was unlike anything I've ever witnessed - uh read. It was a New Orleans Mardi Gras - Mumbai Style. I marveled at how the author laid everything out as if I was actually there in attendance. Actually, I wished I had been.
Not long afterward, they found themselves on a plane headed for the good old U.S. of A. All Aboard, next stop Los Angeles. Upon arrival, culture shock had began to kick in. "Toto, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore". Everything was different: steering wheel on the wrong side of the car, driving on the wrong side of the street, every type of food imaginable and oh yes, let's not forget about earthquakes. Fortunately though, to help with the unsettling transition, there was Little India. Home sweet home. More or less.
Friendships and bonds were soon established with many of Jai's co-workers many of whom were Indian. Naturally, this included several of the co-workers wives destined to be friends with Kaahi. Little by little, life was beginning to come around. That was soon to change.
A coup swept across India. The government had lost all control. It was now under military rule. There was now a North and a South India separated by a wall of heavily guarded barbed wire. People were being rounded up and sent either north or south according to their home of origin. It was a mess. Families were torn apart. Businesses came to a standstill. The universities cancelled classes. There was no communication whatsoever: cell phones, internet, radio and TV were all silent. Welcome back in the stone ages.
Jai and Kaahi were unable to communicate with their parents back home. They didn't know what to do or how they could help but felt they needed to go back home. There was a problem though. Kaahi was from the new divided North India. That's where her parents were from. Jai was from the south as were his parents. She could only go north - he could only go south "and never the twain shall meet". That was their predicament. To their astonishment, they discovered that her parents were in Mumbai, the "south". Kaahi was a political prisoner in the North. With martial law in full force, it was not known if they would ever see each other again. However, Jai would not take this lying down - no matter what!
An Indian (the author) narrated a colorful read that kept me entertained from beginning to end. I did not expect to learn so much about the Indian culture and way of life. I would recommend this novel to anyone who would want a light-hearted adventurous read.
I made the acquaintance of Jai and his close friends who were all college students at a local University in Mumbai. It was there that Jai came to meet his future wife, Kaahi. From the get-go, they were both magnetically drawn to each other. Things were definitely looking up.
Keeping with tradition, upon their graduation, they were wed. The ceremony was unlike anything I've ever witnessed - uh read. It was a New Orleans Mardi Gras - Mumbai Style. I marveled at how the author laid everything out as if I was actually there in attendance. Actually, I wished I had been.
Not long afterward, they found themselves on a plane headed for the good old U.S. of A. All Aboard, next stop Los Angeles. Upon arrival, culture shock had began to kick in. "Toto, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore". Everything was different: steering wheel on the wrong side of the car, driving on the wrong side of the street, every type of food imaginable and oh yes, let's not forget about earthquakes. Fortunately though, to help with the unsettling transition, there was Little India. Home sweet home. More or less.
Friendships and bonds were soon established with many of Jai's co-workers many of whom were Indian. Naturally, this included several of the co-workers wives destined to be friends with Kaahi. Little by little, life was beginning to come around. That was soon to change.
A coup swept across India. The government had lost all control. It was now under military rule. There was now a North and a South India separated by a wall of heavily guarded barbed wire. People were being rounded up and sent either north or south according to their home of origin. It was a mess. Families were torn apart. Businesses came to a standstill. The universities cancelled classes. There was no communication whatsoever: cell phones, internet, radio and TV were all silent. Welcome back in the stone ages.
Jai and Kaahi were unable to communicate with their parents back home. They didn't know what to do or how they could help but felt they needed to go back home. There was a problem though. Kaahi was from the new divided North India. That's where her parents were from. Jai was from the south as were his parents. She could only go north - he could only go south "and never the twain shall meet". That was their predicament. To their astonishment, they discovered that her parents were in Mumbai, the "south". Kaahi was a political prisoner in the North. With martial law in full force, it was not known if they would ever see each other again. However, Jai would not take this lying down - no matter what!
An Indian (the author) narrated a colorful read that kept me entertained from beginning to end. I did not expect to learn so much about the Indian culture and way of life. I would recommend this novel to anyone who would want a light-hearted adventurous read.
October 9, 2014
Who can ever forget John Lenon's spectacular lyrics of Imagine? Here are the few remarkable lines:
“Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace
You may say that I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one”
John Lenon undoubtedly talks about one true thing that holds nations together- unity, which is a damn precious thing.
An anonymous author, who calls himself, An Indian, has also remarkably put the spotlight on unity and its effects and how life becomes without any unity in a nation, in his book, India Was One. This is the heart-wrenching story about a young couple's love and life amidst of opposition and denial in their birth-land. A meager story which has been turned into a beautiful, colorful and soul-touching journey of a young-couple who finds their heart's desire above all partitions among their cultures.
Jai and Kaahi, as you can see from the blurb, is the sweetest and most happening couple in their college. They fulfill each other completely. Hence their parents tie them up in the bond of marriage and finally they get settled in the US, where they learn to cope with a new culture and to absorb in the ocean of such a vast diversity. But they had to separate when India gets divided in two- North and South. Well, the boy was from South and the girl was from North. To protect their family they go into their individual directions, but will they also carry their heart in the partitioned path and let their beautiful relationship to be ruined? Guys, it’s worth finding it out!
I don't know the name of this author, but he is a brilliant writer, who has thrown all these now-a-days modern trash writers off the scene. This is what we should be reading instead of "Now that.., let's.." or any such bullshit, which are I don't know why are still rocking the best sellers bookshelves in Oxford and Starmark. I really enjoyed it and there's lot to learn from the book- I don't know how the author got hold of him about learning so many diverse cultures in our country, even the proverbs to every minute details about a culture is so apt. It seems the author has done a great job to give an edge to this book. The characters are very simple, but the issue is mind-blowing and the twist that shakes Jai and Kaahi's lives is really shocking and it is quite intriguing and compelling to follow on their individual footsteps. I couldn't blame Jai and Kaahi for their decisions, people tend to act emotional during a crisis period. I so wanted them to handle things with each other, instead of separating their ways. I also liked how the author stressed upon the fact that when we shift to a foreign land, we tend to become so home-sick that our first job is to find a local Indian restaurant and neighbor to guide us our steps in such an alien land.
One thing I would like to agree with the author,
We are not Bengali or Marwari or Kashmiri, or Tamilian or Marathi or Punjabi, we are Indian at the end of the day- End of story!
Well, I think for the next million years, I'd not like to think about such a dreading situation- partition part II in India.
Don't miss such an epic love-story which is going to grip you from the very beginning and take you on a journey that might become an eye-opener for you!
I'd like to thank this anonymous author for providing me with a copy of his incredible book, in return for an honest review.
PS: The Bengali proverb that you have used is completely correct!
“Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace
You may say that I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one”
John Lenon undoubtedly talks about one true thing that holds nations together- unity, which is a damn precious thing.
An anonymous author, who calls himself, An Indian, has also remarkably put the spotlight on unity and its effects and how life becomes without any unity in a nation, in his book, India Was One. This is the heart-wrenching story about a young couple's love and life amidst of opposition and denial in their birth-land. A meager story which has been turned into a beautiful, colorful and soul-touching journey of a young-couple who finds their heart's desire above all partitions among their cultures.
Jai and Kaahi, as you can see from the blurb, is the sweetest and most happening couple in their college. They fulfill each other completely. Hence their parents tie them up in the bond of marriage and finally they get settled in the US, where they learn to cope with a new culture and to absorb in the ocean of such a vast diversity. But they had to separate when India gets divided in two- North and South. Well, the boy was from South and the girl was from North. To protect their family they go into their individual directions, but will they also carry their heart in the partitioned path and let their beautiful relationship to be ruined? Guys, it’s worth finding it out!
I don't know the name of this author, but he is a brilliant writer, who has thrown all these now-a-days modern trash writers off the scene. This is what we should be reading instead of "Now that.., let's.." or any such bullshit, which are I don't know why are still rocking the best sellers bookshelves in Oxford and Starmark. I really enjoyed it and there's lot to learn from the book- I don't know how the author got hold of him about learning so many diverse cultures in our country, even the proverbs to every minute details about a culture is so apt. It seems the author has done a great job to give an edge to this book. The characters are very simple, but the issue is mind-blowing and the twist that shakes Jai and Kaahi's lives is really shocking and it is quite intriguing and compelling to follow on their individual footsteps. I couldn't blame Jai and Kaahi for their decisions, people tend to act emotional during a crisis period. I so wanted them to handle things with each other, instead of separating their ways. I also liked how the author stressed upon the fact that when we shift to a foreign land, we tend to become so home-sick that our first job is to find a local Indian restaurant and neighbor to guide us our steps in such an alien land.
One thing I would like to agree with the author,
We are not Bengali or Marwari or Kashmiri, or Tamilian or Marathi or Punjabi, we are Indian at the end of the day- End of story!
Well, I think for the next million years, I'd not like to think about such a dreading situation- partition part II in India.
Don't miss such an epic love-story which is going to grip you from the very beginning and take you on a journey that might become an eye-opener for you!
I'd like to thank this anonymous author for providing me with a copy of his incredible book, in return for an honest review.
PS: The Bengali proverb that you have used is completely correct!
March 22, 2017
Personally I like it as read.
It is a story written with so much bubbling; it’s rightfully “rollercoaster ride” and can be put in different genre the way of story progresses.
India has vast heritage of its beliefs, history, communal sagas and regional traditions. And there with it also have benefits and consequences. Book reminds many common issues out of ocean filled problems.
The book had transcendent storyline and my expectations are usually high with it but some places the story abruptly shortened and diverted, feeling plot is strangled to corner.
It is a story written with so much bubbling; it’s rightfully “rollercoaster ride” and can be put in different genre the way of story progresses.
India has vast heritage of its beliefs, history, communal sagas and regional traditions. And there with it also have benefits and consequences. Book reminds many common issues out of ocean filled problems.
The book had transcendent storyline and my expectations are usually high with it but some places the story abruptly shortened and diverted, feeling plot is strangled to corner.
November 27, 2013
A story with a human touch!
Particularly, I liked all the descriptions of culture, art, customs and traditions, family bonds, friendship, love story, travel, leisure activities, social gatherings, societal underpinnings; things that are human indeed. Those things are somewhat omnipresent around the globe in some form or another, supposedly.
The style of the author is exquisite and immersive. The 'yarn' or the 'thread' of the story is believable and quite realistic.
On the other hand, the second part of the book seems rather dramatic, which builds up and leads to the expected culmination. Here, the reader is prompted to critically assess the societies we all live in nowadays. Especially, in terms of imposed separation, divisions, 'walls', stereotypes etc. Whereas, these physical or psychological 'boundaries' artificially disregard the human side of the latter process and, thus, could entail numerous tragedies, distorted destinies, strife.
In conclusion, I was intrigued to ponder over the emergent discrepancies between the personal aspirations, family relationships and overall societal arrangements. Otherwise, factors that originally were supposed to complement and enhance each other.
This is an outstandingly deep book that is definitely worth reading.
Particularly, I liked all the descriptions of culture, art, customs and traditions, family bonds, friendship, love story, travel, leisure activities, social gatherings, societal underpinnings; things that are human indeed. Those things are somewhat omnipresent around the globe in some form or another, supposedly.
The style of the author is exquisite and immersive. The 'yarn' or the 'thread' of the story is believable and quite realistic.
On the other hand, the second part of the book seems rather dramatic, which builds up and leads to the expected culmination. Here, the reader is prompted to critically assess the societies we all live in nowadays. Especially, in terms of imposed separation, divisions, 'walls', stereotypes etc. Whereas, these physical or psychological 'boundaries' artificially disregard the human side of the latter process and, thus, could entail numerous tragedies, distorted destinies, strife.
In conclusion, I was intrigued to ponder over the emergent discrepancies between the personal aspirations, family relationships and overall societal arrangements. Otherwise, factors that originally were supposed to complement and enhance each other.
This is an outstandingly deep book that is definitely worth reading.
June 27, 2018
Being in contact intensively with Indian people in the past months I am on a journey on finding more about the country and its people. This book surely brought me what I initially hoped for, getting to know more about the culture of India, daily life, religions, history and mentality. I do believe that one could find the same interest in reading also about the life in USA and travel through Europe from the eyes of a foreigner and especially as an Indian. The love story was pure, honest and touchy and towards the end also heartbreaking, especially when it happened that for a while India wasn’t one. I do applaud also the nice ending that makes you think really deep, being an Indian or not.
August 6, 2017
India Was One is about Jai who was from the south India and Kaahi was from the north India and this cause them to have some challenges long the way. Readers of India Was One will follow Jai and Kaahi journey and to see what happens to them.
India was One is the first book I have read of An Indian. I enjoy reading India Was One. I like the way An Indian portrayed his characters. I like the way An India includes drawings has headings to each chapter. Also, the inclusion of maps to allow the readers of India Was One to feel they are part of the trips that Jai and Kaahi undertook through out the book. I enjoy that each chapter of India Was One cover a different topic.
Readers of India Was One would learn to have a better understanding of the customs and culture of India. India Was One does highlight that India is made up of different beliefs and culture. However, we should still recognise them as one nation. An Indian does include his native language thought out the India Was One, however, none-Indian speakers will not be forgotten the meaning of the Indian words is always included.
Thanks to the Author for my free copy for an honest review. I recommend this book.
India was One is the first book I have read of An Indian. I enjoy reading India Was One. I like the way An Indian portrayed his characters. I like the way An India includes drawings has headings to each chapter. Also, the inclusion of maps to allow the readers of India Was One to feel they are part of the trips that Jai and Kaahi undertook through out the book. I enjoy that each chapter of India Was One cover a different topic.
Readers of India Was One would learn to have a better understanding of the customs and culture of India. India Was One does highlight that India is made up of different beliefs and culture. However, we should still recognise them as one nation. An Indian does include his native language thought out the India Was One, however, none-Indian speakers will not be forgotten the meaning of the Indian words is always included.
Thanks to the Author for my free copy for an honest review. I recommend this book.
March 25, 2018
While I can’t say I was overly impressed with the first 75% of the book, the author’s efforts to inform readers unaware of his native country’s culture and charm were successful. Diverse items from university life to food to the game of cricket were explained on a very natural level. At first, I wasn’t sure about the constant Hindi writing that eventually was translated to English, but I soon became used to the interruptions and assimilated them easily into my reading flow.
The last part of the book could have been much better. {Potential Spoilers, though I will try to explain in general terms} The book’s description talked of an India divided, yet the story could give no acceptable reasons for the actions taken by the country, its government, or its populace. Jai (a main character) forgets a major danger involved with returning to India until it is too late to do anything about it. Once in India, the entire plot slid into unbelievability and each scene appeared more contrived than the last. I get that the author was trying to make a point, but I feel he lost the direction of the book in his efforts to do so.
The foreshadowing of the future by describing future events in Chapter 1 and then starting the story in Chapter 2 was unnecessary. I thought the introduction of the characters in chapter 2 (and the budding relationship between Jai and Kaahi) was strong enough to stand on its own without resort to one of today’s most overused methods to hook readers.
Bottom line: Mildly entertaining story of two people who meet, fall in love, and then have a crisis enter their life is an okay read, though the last part of the book is a bit forced to fit in with the author’s plot. Three stars.
The last part of the book could have been much better. {Potential Spoilers, though I will try to explain in general terms} The book’s description talked of an India divided, yet the story could give no acceptable reasons for the actions taken by the country, its government, or its populace. Jai (a main character) forgets a major danger involved with returning to India until it is too late to do anything about it. Once in India, the entire plot slid into unbelievability and each scene appeared more contrived than the last. I get that the author was trying to make a point, but I feel he lost the direction of the book in his efforts to do so.
The foreshadowing of the future by describing future events in Chapter 1 and then starting the story in Chapter 2 was unnecessary. I thought the introduction of the characters in chapter 2 (and the budding relationship between Jai and Kaahi) was strong enough to stand on its own without resort to one of today’s most overused methods to hook readers.
Bottom line: Mildly entertaining story of two people who meet, fall in love, and then have a crisis enter their life is an okay read, though the last part of the book is a bit forced to fit in with the author’s plot. Three stars.
April 17, 2014
This is a beautiful and exciting love story full of action, adventure and magnificent descriptions. The book is also a wonderful opportunity to learn about the fascinating history and culture of India. Bonus there are some great illustrations.
When Jai and Kaahi return to India after several years in America they are cruelly separated by new geopolitical barriers, with Kaahi trapped in the the North of India and Jai trapped in the South. Will their love and determination to be together be strong enough to overcome the obstacles in their way?
This is a very entertaining and compelling novel for a wide variety of readers. It combines the genres: action-adventure, political thriller and romance.
When Jai and Kaahi return to India after several years in America they are cruelly separated by new geopolitical barriers, with Kaahi trapped in the the North of India and Jai trapped in the South. Will their love and determination to be together be strong enough to overcome the obstacles in their way?
This is a very entertaining and compelling novel for a wide variety of readers. It combines the genres: action-adventure, political thriller and romance.
December 21, 2016
This story was a breath of fresh air a wonderful story I enjoyed reading this book but sorry to say it lacked some thing but I did enjoy reading it all the same I would be delighted to recommend this story to my friends. My sincere thanks to the author An Indian for the pleasure of reading this book so to all happy reading fromm me.
May 31, 2013
Those familiar with my reading tastes & my views on literature (no matter how amateurish they sound) will know that I do not hold popular fiction written by Indian authors in high regard. I mean, the disappointments I've suffered at the hands of some 'top' authors makes me apprehensive & cautious. And then once in a while, I come across books like 'India Was One' which revive my hopes that there are authors who are willing to try something beyond just college misadventures & romances.
That's not to say this book doesn't have those aspects - it does have a bunch of friends going back to their college days & a happily married couple, deeply in love with each other. But there's more to it than just that.
The story starts off in a jungle in Central India where the protagonists Jai & Kaahi see each other standing on two different ends of a ravine & the reader is told that one of them is currently in North India while the other is in South India. Before one can even ponder on what might have happened, we go back in time when both Jai & Kaahi meet each other for the first time as college students in Mumbai & eventually fall in love. The friends (Jai, Kaahi, Bunty, Subra & Punk) are a motley bunch who enjoy doing everything a youngster loves to do - from driving around the city to partying to watching cricket, something that happens to be the religion that binds most Indians.
The two get married & move to the United States. As they both try & settle into their lives in an alien country, they learn more about the American culture & their own culture as well. There's a detour to Europe too, where they explore Europe beyond the Iron Curtain. Just when everything seems to be going perfect, an event of catastrophic proportions back home threatens to change Jai & Kaahi's lives forever. What transpires next makes up for the final third of the plot as it is unraveled why Jai & Kaahi happened to be standing in two different parts of India in the first place.
Coming to the narrative, there is one thing about it that immediately grabs your attention - that the author has unabashedly used Indian words (not just in italics, but in the original Indian script at times) & also, he introduces the reader to many aspects of Indian culture as well as American culture by including the same in the narrative itself. Now, while I appreciate the author's good intentions of telling us about both cultures, it is a major hindrance to the storytelling aspect. I can understand a few important terms being explained then & there but most books have a 'Notes' section at the end where one can find the meanings of all those terms. After a point, it can get really exasperating & I preferred to ignore or just skim through whenever I saw italics.
Also, I felt that the dystopian element - though well-written - happens just too quickly to make adequate sense. Most stories involving such an element have some kind of political tension building throughout the course of the plot. Here, the situation changes so swiftly & though the author correctly points out recent instances of demands for separatist states in India, the event in the book is too magnanimous to happen so quickly. Nonetheless, the author presents a harrowing version of India ravaged by another 'Partition' & the sentiments expressed by some characters are relevant to our times.
The prose is quite good by popular fiction standards, though it is occasionally marred by rather mediocre dialogue & cliched moments. I think the book would've come out much better overall if the author had expanded the dystopian theme more than what it is actually in the book.
Still, thumbs up to the fact that the author took up the task of writing on such a difficult, controversial subject & succeeds in getting his message across - the essence of a nation like India, the idea behind the world's largest democracy. I give 2.5 to 3 stars to 'India Was One' by An Indian & I recommend this book to readers of Indian popular fiction who are looking for a slice of something different than the usual fare.
P.S. I received a free ebook from the author & I solemnly maintain my review was not influenced by that in any manner.
That's not to say this book doesn't have those aspects - it does have a bunch of friends going back to their college days & a happily married couple, deeply in love with each other. But there's more to it than just that.
The story starts off in a jungle in Central India where the protagonists Jai & Kaahi see each other standing on two different ends of a ravine & the reader is told that one of them is currently in North India while the other is in South India. Before one can even ponder on what might have happened, we go back in time when both Jai & Kaahi meet each other for the first time as college students in Mumbai & eventually fall in love. The friends (Jai, Kaahi, Bunty, Subra & Punk) are a motley bunch who enjoy doing everything a youngster loves to do - from driving around the city to partying to watching cricket, something that happens to be the religion that binds most Indians.
The two get married & move to the United States. As they both try & settle into their lives in an alien country, they learn more about the American culture & their own culture as well. There's a detour to Europe too, where they explore Europe beyond the Iron Curtain. Just when everything seems to be going perfect, an event of catastrophic proportions back home threatens to change Jai & Kaahi's lives forever. What transpires next makes up for the final third of the plot as it is unraveled why Jai & Kaahi happened to be standing in two different parts of India in the first place.
Coming to the narrative, there is one thing about it that immediately grabs your attention - that the author has unabashedly used Indian words (not just in italics, but in the original Indian script at times) & also, he introduces the reader to many aspects of Indian culture as well as American culture by including the same in the narrative itself. Now, while I appreciate the author's good intentions of telling us about both cultures, it is a major hindrance to the storytelling aspect. I can understand a few important terms being explained then & there but most books have a 'Notes' section at the end where one can find the meanings of all those terms. After a point, it can get really exasperating & I preferred to ignore or just skim through whenever I saw italics.
Also, I felt that the dystopian element - though well-written - happens just too quickly to make adequate sense. Most stories involving such an element have some kind of political tension building throughout the course of the plot. Here, the situation changes so swiftly & though the author correctly points out recent instances of demands for separatist states in India, the event in the book is too magnanimous to happen so quickly. Nonetheless, the author presents a harrowing version of India ravaged by another 'Partition' & the sentiments expressed by some characters are relevant to our times.
The prose is quite good by popular fiction standards, though it is occasionally marred by rather mediocre dialogue & cliched moments. I think the book would've come out much better overall if the author had expanded the dystopian theme more than what it is actually in the book.
Still, thumbs up to the fact that the author took up the task of writing on such a difficult, controversial subject & succeeds in getting his message across - the essence of a nation like India, the idea behind the world's largest democracy. I give 2.5 to 3 stars to 'India Was One' by An Indian & I recommend this book to readers of Indian popular fiction who are looking for a slice of something different than the usual fare.
P.S. I received a free ebook from the author & I solemnly maintain my review was not influenced by that in any manner.
March 27, 2012
"India Was One" is a book that asks "What if this is possible?" A very unique and novel idea from the novelist who goes by the name An Indian. Very fitting as this book was written for Indians every where by an Indian.
I am Indian by ancestry and though I have never visited Mother India, this book paints very vivid imagery of India. The author very vividly describes local foods, customs, clothing and festivals religious or not to enhance the reader's enjoyment and understanding of the story.
The story takes the reader from the rain washed mountains, to the misty jungles, to treacherous cliffs, to the much loved chaos that is Mumbai, to the organized highways of San Francisco to the beautiful European countryside and back again.
Each new chapter begins with a beautifully done pencil drawing of a symbol of the chapter, adding to the visuals.
At the heart of the book is a story of true love, friendship, family loyalty, love of country and personal heartbreak.
The main characters meet, fall in love and no this is not a boy meet girl, boy and girl fall in love, boy loses girl story. This is a story of two friends falling in love, starting a life together and then finding each other amidst the turmoil and upheaval of their beloved homeland torn into two.
The chemistry between these two characters falls easily into one of camaraderie and deep love. Jai's demeanor lets us see why Kaahi a strong independent thinker of a woman (certainly not your average meek Indian girl) would fall in love with him.
When their country is ripped apart, their hearts are ripped alongside it and they put their lives on hold to try to understand what could have gone wrong with an entire nation. This book also shows the tenacity and power of the determined Indian population who once was able to wiggle out from under the firm British ruling thumb.
At the very climatic end the author interweaves the story with a twist of fate where one of the characters of the story emerges a hero.
The author poses a question to us the reader "What is being an Indian to me?"
"An Indian lies in the eyes of the beholder…what you choose to see.
You can travel the length and breadth of India, from Kashmir to Kanyakumari and from Mumbai to Kolkota, and not see a single Indian. You will see Hindus, Muslims, Sikhs, Christians, Jains, Buddhists, etc. You will see Maharashtrians, Gujaratis, UPites, Biharis, Bengalis, Tamils, Telugus, Malayalis, etc.
Or you will see Indians."
I am Indian by ancestry and though I have never visited Mother India, this book paints very vivid imagery of India. The author very vividly describes local foods, customs, clothing and festivals religious or not to enhance the reader's enjoyment and understanding of the story.
The story takes the reader from the rain washed mountains, to the misty jungles, to treacherous cliffs, to the much loved chaos that is Mumbai, to the organized highways of San Francisco to the beautiful European countryside and back again.
Each new chapter begins with a beautifully done pencil drawing of a symbol of the chapter, adding to the visuals.
At the heart of the book is a story of true love, friendship, family loyalty, love of country and personal heartbreak.
The main characters meet, fall in love and no this is not a boy meet girl, boy and girl fall in love, boy loses girl story. This is a story of two friends falling in love, starting a life together and then finding each other amidst the turmoil and upheaval of their beloved homeland torn into two.
The chemistry between these two characters falls easily into one of camaraderie and deep love. Jai's demeanor lets us see why Kaahi a strong independent thinker of a woman (certainly not your average meek Indian girl) would fall in love with him.
When their country is ripped apart, their hearts are ripped alongside it and they put their lives on hold to try to understand what could have gone wrong with an entire nation. This book also shows the tenacity and power of the determined Indian population who once was able to wiggle out from under the firm British ruling thumb.
At the very climatic end the author interweaves the story with a twist of fate where one of the characters of the story emerges a hero.
The author poses a question to us the reader "What is being an Indian to me?"
"An Indian lies in the eyes of the beholder…what you choose to see.
You can travel the length and breadth of India, from Kashmir to Kanyakumari and from Mumbai to Kolkota, and not see a single Indian. You will see Hindus, Muslims, Sikhs, Christians, Jains, Buddhists, etc. You will see Maharashtrians, Gujaratis, UPites, Biharis, Bengalis, Tamils, Telugus, Malayalis, etc.
Or you will see Indians."
March 28, 2017
I finished this book in two sittings, I couldn't stop reading.
To me this book is a love story. Yes, it's a love story between Jai and Kaahi, but it's also a love story about India; an ode to India, if you will.
This book was very well-researched and informative. Having never been to India, I found all the descriptions and explanations fascinating. The author takes you on a journey all over India, explaining the different traditions, languages, and religions. It is incredible to me that so many seemingly different people can co-exist peacefully and, as was demonstrated in the end, no one can tear apart their unity.
The author also takes you on a journey through Europe and the US, which was very enjoyable.
I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who wants to experience a different culture and go through a journey all over the world.
To me this book is a love story. Yes, it's a love story between Jai and Kaahi, but it's also a love story about India; an ode to India, if you will.
This book was very well-researched and informative. Having never been to India, I found all the descriptions and explanations fascinating. The author takes you on a journey all over India, explaining the different traditions, languages, and religions. It is incredible to me that so many seemingly different people can co-exist peacefully and, as was demonstrated in the end, no one can tear apart their unity.
The author also takes you on a journey through Europe and the US, which was very enjoyable.
I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who wants to experience a different culture and go through a journey all over the world.
May 25, 2016
This book should be reached out to every individual. A great love story and a lot to learn from!
Author, you have done a great job!
Author, you have done a great job!
May 11, 2014
I’ve always been fascinated by the way a country like India can be so full of innumerable states and languages and ethnicities and different cultures, and yet be “one” – so this book sounded very promising. Considering the background and its conflicts, the concept of the country being divided into South India and North India, much like South Korea and North Korea, doesn’t seem far-fetched at all and is portrayed in a shocking way that makes it even more credible.
“India was One” by An Indian is a book that makes you think and that is filled with interesting information. The latter is provided in sentences or whole paragraphs in italic that follow the introduction of a word, food, custom or traditional concept. This sort of interrupts the reading flow, but is also a good way of learning more about India and of emphasizing how different yet unquestionably Indian all of it is. Whether you know most of it—like me—or not, these side notes are well-written and help to paint the bigger picture.
To me, the story is divided into three parts. The first third is reserved for introducing the two protagonists Jai and Kaahi and getting to know them. They meet at campus, fall in love, spend joyful days with friends and family and get married. All of it reads almost too good to be true. There’s no conflict at all, not even lying dormant. That, however, is just as well, because it will highlight the contrast between the rosy life before and the terrors after the division of the country. The author also uses this part to establish a cast of people who come from all corners of India, always illustrating their background. Everything is part of the puzzle that seems impossible to piece together after the separation of the two Indias.
The second third focuses on the happy couple’s life after they migrate to the United States of America. Being half Asian and half European, I could relate to or at least imagine a lot of what they went through. They are still happy, but now they have to face new experiences and the reader can sense a storm cloud looming. Some chapters deal with Jai and Kaahi travelling to Europe, which was fun to read for me and portrayed as credibly and well-researched as the rest of the book.
The last third hits you hard. From one moment to the other, smiles and success and affection turn to tears and fear and separation. You can hardly believe that you’re reading the same book. The author shocks you with his all too real description of a country and its people torn apart cruelly. Husband and wife are left stranded in the two halves of India, fighting a losing battle to be reunited. Everybody’s suffering is palpable and you are gripped by the story, racing toward the end that is uncertain until it swoops down upon you. This last part of the book is the one where the writing is most powerful.
There are some nice little touches to “India was One” that had me like it even more. First, there are the sketches that are full of life and details and fit the exotic image of the book. Second, you’re treated to some Hindi words spelled out in the Devanagari script, including phonetic translation and English meaning. Third—if my basic Hindi skills don’t fail me—the hero’s name means “victory” (Jai) and the heroine’s name means “story” (Kahaani), which is just perfect considering their story and role.
Due to the unusual writing style and the conflict occurring so late, this might not be a read for everybody. I, however, really enjoyed it and would recommend it especially to everybody who wants to get to know more about India. Asians / Indians will also find a lot to treasure and ponder. I understand why the author prefers to remain anonymous.
“India was One” by An Indian is a book that makes you think and that is filled with interesting information. The latter is provided in sentences or whole paragraphs in italic that follow the introduction of a word, food, custom or traditional concept. This sort of interrupts the reading flow, but is also a good way of learning more about India and of emphasizing how different yet unquestionably Indian all of it is. Whether you know most of it—like me—or not, these side notes are well-written and help to paint the bigger picture.
To me, the story is divided into three parts. The first third is reserved for introducing the two protagonists Jai and Kaahi and getting to know them. They meet at campus, fall in love, spend joyful days with friends and family and get married. All of it reads almost too good to be true. There’s no conflict at all, not even lying dormant. That, however, is just as well, because it will highlight the contrast between the rosy life before and the terrors after the division of the country. The author also uses this part to establish a cast of people who come from all corners of India, always illustrating their background. Everything is part of the puzzle that seems impossible to piece together after the separation of the two Indias.
The second third focuses on the happy couple’s life after they migrate to the United States of America. Being half Asian and half European, I could relate to or at least imagine a lot of what they went through. They are still happy, but now they have to face new experiences and the reader can sense a storm cloud looming. Some chapters deal with Jai and Kaahi travelling to Europe, which was fun to read for me and portrayed as credibly and well-researched as the rest of the book.
The last third hits you hard. From one moment to the other, smiles and success and affection turn to tears and fear and separation. You can hardly believe that you’re reading the same book. The author shocks you with his all too real description of a country and its people torn apart cruelly. Husband and wife are left stranded in the two halves of India, fighting a losing battle to be reunited. Everybody’s suffering is palpable and you are gripped by the story, racing toward the end that is uncertain until it swoops down upon you. This last part of the book is the one where the writing is most powerful.
There are some nice little touches to “India was One” that had me like it even more. First, there are the sketches that are full of life and details and fit the exotic image of the book. Second, you’re treated to some Hindi words spelled out in the Devanagari script, including phonetic translation and English meaning. Third—if my basic Hindi skills don’t fail me—the hero’s name means “victory” (Jai) and the heroine’s name means “story” (Kahaani), which is just perfect considering their story and role.
Due to the unusual writing style and the conflict occurring so late, this might not be a read for everybody. I, however, really enjoyed it and would recommend it especially to everybody who wants to get to know more about India. Asians / Indians will also find a lot to treasure and ponder. I understand why the author prefers to remain anonymous.
October 22, 2016
‘There were ten terrorists, and they came from Pakistan.’
An Indian is the author of this short book – no name is offered. He was born and raised in Mumbai, India, came to the US in 1989 to New York and currently resides in Los Angeles. His book contains illustration drawings by Darshini
This is a love story between Jai and Kaahi who grow into the mysticism of India with all the elegant traditions, most assuredly about Indian weddings as stated on the author’s website – ‘Indian Marriage is lavish. A grand Indian wedding ceremony is ceremony about faith and a lifelong trust for which our families try to fix things, such as, finding a proper bride/groom (which sometimes they, i.e. the youth, find out for themselves), dresses and others items, such as, music for the DJ, a ‘ghodi’ (a horse), a good caterer and finally a ‘mandap’ (a covered structure with pillars—temporarily erected for the purpose of a wedding) under their set budgets for their daughter's or son's marriage. However, these days, brides and grooms speak to their parents about their desire for a lavish marriage with all those bells and whistles like: a ‘mehndi’(henna) ceremony, a ‘sangeet’ (song) ceremony and their attires, such as, their choice of ‘lehenga and choli’ with matching accessories. It is a long and expensive affair with an ever increasing demand for those good and services.’ It is also about change in India and the longing for tradition that appears to be disappearing.
The author’s synopsis distills the story well – ‘Suddenly, he saw something shiny at the bottom of the abyss. He squinted his eyes to see what it was. He ran back to his binoculars and turned them to see what it was. Sharp barbed wires that separated the two mountains came into focus. He had come as far as he could in his country. But she was standing in another country. He was in South India and she was in North India...Have you ever imagined India being divided into two countries? What happens to the millions of Indians who are from South India but are now residing in North India? Kaahi & Jai were two such people who got trapped in this situation. Everything was going smoothly for them and suddenly, their world turned upside down. How will they get together? Will India become one again? Take an exciting journey with them from their college days in Mumbai to their life in the US and back to India when they find out that India is divided.’
Also on the author’s website is the following poem that deserves reader attention:
She stands with arms open,
steadfast in times of turmoil,
donning the lovely tri-colors,
holy rivers making a beautiful smile.
She is the mother of pearls.
The land of festivals,
with a romantic history,
language and God of choice,
and culture has an identity.
Here music finds its voice.
Her magnetic architectures,
as old as her mysterious traditions,
hold beautiful treasures.
When people want to break her,
it so pains my heart,
the image of her future seems,
a mirror of the past.
And my dreams remain just memories.
But India has won,
you and I can live together
as one,
now and forever.
The use of Indian language throughout requires a bit of patience on the part of the reader, but the story is quietly elegant and deserves attention. The more we know and understand other countries’ traditions and history the better we are to integrate that acceptance into our knowledge of the relationship of all humanity.
An Indian is the author of this short book – no name is offered. He was born and raised in Mumbai, India, came to the US in 1989 to New York and currently resides in Los Angeles. His book contains illustration drawings by Darshini
This is a love story between Jai and Kaahi who grow into the mysticism of India with all the elegant traditions, most assuredly about Indian weddings as stated on the author’s website – ‘Indian Marriage is lavish. A grand Indian wedding ceremony is ceremony about faith and a lifelong trust for which our families try to fix things, such as, finding a proper bride/groom (which sometimes they, i.e. the youth, find out for themselves), dresses and others items, such as, music for the DJ, a ‘ghodi’ (a horse), a good caterer and finally a ‘mandap’ (a covered structure with pillars—temporarily erected for the purpose of a wedding) under their set budgets for their daughter's or son's marriage. However, these days, brides and grooms speak to their parents about their desire for a lavish marriage with all those bells and whistles like: a ‘mehndi’(henna) ceremony, a ‘sangeet’ (song) ceremony and their attires, such as, their choice of ‘lehenga and choli’ with matching accessories. It is a long and expensive affair with an ever increasing demand for those good and services.’ It is also about change in India and the longing for tradition that appears to be disappearing.
The author’s synopsis distills the story well – ‘Suddenly, he saw something shiny at the bottom of the abyss. He squinted his eyes to see what it was. He ran back to his binoculars and turned them to see what it was. Sharp barbed wires that separated the two mountains came into focus. He had come as far as he could in his country. But she was standing in another country. He was in South India and she was in North India...Have you ever imagined India being divided into two countries? What happens to the millions of Indians who are from South India but are now residing in North India? Kaahi & Jai were two such people who got trapped in this situation. Everything was going smoothly for them and suddenly, their world turned upside down. How will they get together? Will India become one again? Take an exciting journey with them from their college days in Mumbai to their life in the US and back to India when they find out that India is divided.’
Also on the author’s website is the following poem that deserves reader attention:
She stands with arms open,
steadfast in times of turmoil,
donning the lovely tri-colors,
holy rivers making a beautiful smile.
She is the mother of pearls.
The land of festivals,
with a romantic history,
language and God of choice,
and culture has an identity.
Here music finds its voice.
Her magnetic architectures,
as old as her mysterious traditions,
hold beautiful treasures.
When people want to break her,
it so pains my heart,
the image of her future seems,
a mirror of the past.
And my dreams remain just memories.
But India has won,
you and I can live together
as one,
now and forever.
The use of Indian language throughout requires a bit of patience on the part of the reader, but the story is quietly elegant and deserves attention. The more we know and understand other countries’ traditions and history the better we are to integrate that acceptance into our knowledge of the relationship of all humanity.
December 11, 2011
When I was asked to review this book I was a bit sceptical, not because of the book itself, but because this is totally outside of my regular reading genres. I personally hate anything with politics in it, so I felt a bit dubious.
But I either do something thoroughly, or not at all. So, having committed to the task I closed my eyes and dived in.
And what a pleasant read it was!
First we meet Jai and his friends Bunty, Subra and Punk in college in Mumbai. Then a beautiful girl, Kaahi, also joins the college and she becomes part of Jai's circle of friends when Bunty rescues her from the clutches of a sleazy senior who was forcing unwelcome attentions on her.
From day one Jai falls in love with Kaahi and gradually their friendship grows into a relationship, ending in marriage. They honeymoon in Rajasthan, then return to Mumbai to settle into married life and Jai starts working in his father's business.
The couple relocates to the United States, where Jai has to manage the American office of his father's business.
The transition is difficult for them both, but especially for Kaahi, who has to cope in a foreign country, with no family support at hand. They spend their weekends site seeing and get to know all the great cities near Los Angeles, where they live and work. A year or so later their travel dreams are fulfilled, when they tour Europe.
Then disaster strikes. There is civil unrest in India, so bad that the country is "divided" into a southern and northern state, and each person is required to move back to his/her town/city of origin! There is a total communication block-out, so the only way to make contact with their families is to go to India. But this poses a problem, as Kaahi's parents originally come from the north while Jai's family are from the south.
When going to check on the welfare of their families they have to split up. To further complicate matters there is a rule: you can fly in, but once in, you can't leave. So Jai and Kaahi are split, in their quests to seek out their parents. Will they ever see each other again? How and when?
I won't give away the story, but now it's all up to Bunty to help the two get together again.
This is a delightful story of love and friendship, playing off over three continents and several years. It's an easy read, and although politics enter and play a large role at the climax of the story, even I – as one who hates politics, did not find it over dramatised.
If you like love stories, especially those with suspense or a twist, you'll love this book. (David Fritz)
But I either do something thoroughly, or not at all. So, having committed to the task I closed my eyes and dived in.
And what a pleasant read it was!
First we meet Jai and his friends Bunty, Subra and Punk in college in Mumbai. Then a beautiful girl, Kaahi, also joins the college and she becomes part of Jai's circle of friends when Bunty rescues her from the clutches of a sleazy senior who was forcing unwelcome attentions on her.
From day one Jai falls in love with Kaahi and gradually their friendship grows into a relationship, ending in marriage. They honeymoon in Rajasthan, then return to Mumbai to settle into married life and Jai starts working in his father's business.
The couple relocates to the United States, where Jai has to manage the American office of his father's business.
The transition is difficult for them both, but especially for Kaahi, who has to cope in a foreign country, with no family support at hand. They spend their weekends site seeing and get to know all the great cities near Los Angeles, where they live and work. A year or so later their travel dreams are fulfilled, when they tour Europe.
Then disaster strikes. There is civil unrest in India, so bad that the country is "divided" into a southern and northern state, and each person is required to move back to his/her town/city of origin! There is a total communication block-out, so the only way to make contact with their families is to go to India. But this poses a problem, as Kaahi's parents originally come from the north while Jai's family are from the south.
When going to check on the welfare of their families they have to split up. To further complicate matters there is a rule: you can fly in, but once in, you can't leave. So Jai and Kaahi are split, in their quests to seek out their parents. Will they ever see each other again? How and when?
I won't give away the story, but now it's all up to Bunty to help the two get together again.
This is a delightful story of love and friendship, playing off over three continents and several years. It's an easy read, and although politics enter and play a large role at the climax of the story, even I – as one who hates politics, did not find it over dramatised.
If you like love stories, especially those with suspense or a twist, you'll love this book. (David Fritz)
May 5, 2011
I have to admit that if I was in a bookshop I would have walked straight past this book. So, when I was given the opportunity to read it, I checked out a few reviews on it and, although a little apprehensive, decided, well, why not. I thought: what do I really know about India other than the Taj Mahal, Bollywood, Imran Khan and a cracking good Vindaloo on a Friday night? Well, alright, not that little – but my point is, I don’t know much. The reviews seemed to suggest that there would be something to learn from the book. My apprehension was happily misplaced. The first chapter – more of a prologue – drew me in straightaway. Whilst the novel is fictional, the story of boy-meets-girl-marries-girl (Jai and Kaahi) is interwoven with a treasure trove of facts about India – sometimes in the characters’ conversations, sometimes as explanatory paragraphs. The author’s uncomplicated style never makes the latter heavy-reading. The facts that are interspersed in the conversations do make the dialogue a little strange at times, especially between the two main characters – it’s sometimes hard to believe that two people in love would actually talk like reference books – but you become so engrossed in the information you overlook this. Even the references to cricket (which to my mind is marginally more exciting than watching paint dry) are interesting.
If you separate the story from the factual content, you are left with a rather unsubstantial, rather frail boy-meets-girl tale, which would not stand alone. If you separate the factual content from the story, you have an ordinary, but easy-to-read guide book that could sit happily next to a Lonely Planet guide. Put them together you have a unique, enjoyable book that has you caring deeply about Jai and Kaahi’s life and future and the opportunity to learn more about the richness of India’s tapestry of culture, language, food, costume, religion, customs and geography. The author has now managed to put India on my bucket list of places to visit. I wish all my geography books had been written like this – I might have learnt more.
This book is quite a little gem.
If you separate the story from the factual content, you are left with a rather unsubstantial, rather frail boy-meets-girl tale, which would not stand alone. If you separate the factual content from the story, you have an ordinary, but easy-to-read guide book that could sit happily next to a Lonely Planet guide. Put them together you have a unique, enjoyable book that has you caring deeply about Jai and Kaahi’s life and future and the opportunity to learn more about the richness of India’s tapestry of culture, language, food, costume, religion, customs and geography. The author has now managed to put India on my bucket list of places to visit. I wish all my geography books had been written like this – I might have learnt more.
This book is quite a little gem.
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February 11, 2017I purchased this book on Amazon some time ago, and prioritized reading it due to a review request from the author.
I often discuss genre in books. India Was One straddles two genres. The first 75% is a romance dealing with the relationship of Jai and Kaahi, the two protagonists. The last 25% is a powerful thriller type plot dealing with how Jai and Kaahi are separated in a divided India. Actually, there is a sub-genre of romance called romantic thriller. This book could fit into that sub-genre. Given the predominance of romance in the content that would be the best solution.
The last quarter of the novel makes the book more significant. The theme of divided countries is of urgent importance for our current world. Many countries, including my own, are extremely troubled by ideological, economic and religious divisions. If people believe that they can't live together in peace, then countries may splinter like North India and South India in India Was One. That last 25% of this book shows readers how this unwillingness to deal with diversity can have terrible impact. Our world is in the process of imploding along its fracture lines. Learning how to co-exist with differences is the most paramount priority of our time.
For my complete review see http://shomeretmasked.blogspot.com/20...
I often discuss genre in books. India Was One straddles two genres. The first 75% is a romance dealing with the relationship of Jai and Kaahi, the two protagonists. The last 25% is a powerful thriller type plot dealing with how Jai and Kaahi are separated in a divided India. Actually, there is a sub-genre of romance called romantic thriller. This book could fit into that sub-genre. Given the predominance of romance in the content that would be the best solution.
The last quarter of the novel makes the book more significant. The theme of divided countries is of urgent importance for our current world. Many countries, including my own, are extremely troubled by ideological, economic and religious divisions. If people believe that they can't live together in peace, then countries may splinter like North India and South India in India Was One. That last 25% of this book shows readers how this unwillingness to deal with diversity can have terrible impact. Our world is in the process of imploding along its fracture lines. Learning how to co-exist with differences is the most paramount priority of our time.
For my complete review see http://shomeretmasked.blogspot.com/20...
June 21, 2013
I am giving 1 star for this book, not out of dismay but more out of anger. The author has touched upon a very fragile topic, one which is very very relevant and it is seen happening around. But instead of circulating the entire book around this, the author chose to write a lot about the life of Jai and Kaahi and their romance, their wedding planning, their vacation and so on. 75% of the book is about the couple and only the last part of the book is related to the title.
There is one thing which I did not understand. To whom was this book targeted to? certainly not to Indians living in India. Lots of description is given about things which are not necessary, like who is a Gujrathi, a Tamilian, what is cricket, what are its rules, who is Sachin Tendulkar and many more such small passages, which irked me the most! I know who Sachin Tendulkar is and I know about the cricket very well! So I am really curious to know what the author had in mind when all these were being described.
But what I really want to know is why the author did not write more about the topic? Why the story was not handled more seriously? Why was it concluded so abruptly? Because it was this part that could have made this book truly memorable!
There is one thing which I did not understand. To whom was this book targeted to? certainly not to Indians living in India. Lots of description is given about things which are not necessary, like who is a Gujrathi, a Tamilian, what is cricket, what are its rules, who is Sachin Tendulkar and many more such small passages, which irked me the most! I know who Sachin Tendulkar is and I know about the cricket very well! So I am really curious to know what the author had in mind when all these were being described.
But what I really want to know is why the author did not write more about the topic? Why the story was not handled more seriously? Why was it concluded so abruptly? Because it was this part that could have made this book truly memorable!
November 30, 2017
India was one is an action adventure story written about Jai and Kaahi. It is a journey into India and a simple love between the two of which is disrupted once the country gets divided into south and the north.
I found the story to be interesting for various reasons. The initial cultural experience was, for instance, a very nice addition to the story. Not knowing much about India or the culture, the book introduced a sort of backstory for people like me, and I liked that.
The other thing interesting about this story was that it introduced the character’s perspective from an Indian’s view and its cultural clash with the city of Los Angeles. This fictional book also discusses the division and segregation of a country, splitting into one. The complications from this also created a very dynamic and multi-dimensional approach towards the plot.
Altogether, I believe the author has created a very unique story and one that is worth the read. I recommend this book for people that like action and a little romance.
I found the story to be interesting for various reasons. The initial cultural experience was, for instance, a very nice addition to the story. Not knowing much about India or the culture, the book introduced a sort of backstory for people like me, and I liked that.
The other thing interesting about this story was that it introduced the character’s perspective from an Indian’s view and its cultural clash with the city of Los Angeles. This fictional book also discusses the division and segregation of a country, splitting into one. The complications from this also created a very dynamic and multi-dimensional approach towards the plot.
Altogether, I believe the author has created a very unique story and one that is worth the read. I recommend this book for people that like action and a little romance.
September 30, 2017
India Was One, penned by An Indian, is a story of romantic love and the carefree nature of a group of friends in their youth. Most of the timeline is set in the backdrop of the country of India; one India, a united India, until the cruel and unforeseeable happens. North India splits up from South India. The author describes not only the obvious problems on a political front, but the nuances of how devastating and disruptive this scenario is on a personal level.
An's writing style is unique. The narrator takes the time to explain, utilizing italicized font: the history, geography, food, language, and culture of particular regions of India. Reading the book is a great way to discover more about India, while enjoying the storytelling. My favourite learning experience was absorbing the rituals and customs surrounding the wedding event.
The book is fiction, but based on a real threat. Hopefully India being split into two countries (North and South India) will never happen.
December 29, 2016
This is a great book to read if you're interested in learning about other cultures and ways of life. The detail given in the story itself and as extra information throughout the book really helps to bring India and her people to life. There is also a mound of historical information about past events that is fascinating given that it is from the perspective of An Indian rather than the media.
The book is quite an easy read although it can be a dry one at times. My only disappointment with it would be the editing isn't always what it could be and that detracts from the wonderful writing style. I would still very much endorse and recommend this book to everyone.
I chose to review a free copy of this book
The book is quite an easy read although it can be a dry one at times. My only disappointment with it would be the editing isn't always what it could be and that detracts from the wonderful writing style. I would still very much endorse and recommend this book to everyone.
I chose to review a free copy of this book
August 29, 2017
I enjoyed this story about 2 young Indians meeting, falling in love, and the troubles they encountered in their lives. This story was very well written. I really liked the way he explained the culture as only someone born to it could. I also liked the way he showed the history of India that is not really shown to us in the US. The characters were all likeable and your really cared about them. I did get very tired of some parts of the story. Like when the group of friends were all watching and discussing a cricket match. I do not care for sports and the scene went on page after page after page. But that is just me. I was happy with the ending knowing that a civil war tears up many lives. I would certainly recommend this story to anyone that would like to learn more about India.
April 8, 2014
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What will you do if your country is divided into two?
Are we ready to revisit the 1947 era again and be sure of not making the same mistakes this time?
What will you do if your loved ones are divided because of this partition?
India Was One is a story that puts forth these questions and much more for the reader to analyze. Jai and Kahaani lived in India. Although from families both regionally and culturally diverse, they still were Indians. They had the same dreams of success, love, family, happiness etc. They met in college, fell in love, got married and then shifted to the United States to pursue their career.
But this serene and happy bubble of their life bursts when they hear that their beloved country has been partitioned into two and that they both now belong to different countries!
Though they are in the United States, their families are in India. Afraid for their safety and unaware of their current situation, they plan on separating and determining their family's safety by going to their own respective new country.
But planning is one thing and destiny is another. Things don't go as per their plans and Jai and Kahaani are faced with situations that will test every belief that they had and then some more.
India Was One does not fall under a given genre. It is not simply a love story nor a patriotic saga nor a historical. It crosses genres and gives us a glimpse into a situation which though hypothetical is enough to raise some very relevant questions about the current situation in our country.
The cover is creative and intriguing and catches the eye of the reader at first glance.
The idea is new and plot is admirably executed. The story flows beautifully from a college romance to a married couple's ambition of a successful family to the love and responsibilities of a citizen towards his country to a son's/daughter's love and responsibility towards their parents. The story is nothing extraordinary but it still manages to keep the reader interested and turning pages till the end.
The author has clearly written this book keeping in mind the non Indian readers and so he gives a background on every ethnic thing he uses in his story whether it be a dish, a place or an event. Although this is a good thing to do but including the explanations along with the story flow was sometimes very distracting. I dont like glossaries because then everytime I dont understand something, I have to stop, find that thing in the glossary and check it! But he could have given the explanation at the bottom of the same page by putting a star in front or something. Also the explanations should have been toned down a bit. I felt some explanations too tedious and too long like the story of the highway from Mumbai etc.
The writing style of the author is simple yet captivating and can be polished more with more practice. This is his first work which is very promising. I loved the beautiful sketches he includes in chapters depicting some very varied things which may seem irrelevant but are integral to the story like a lantern, a car, a bungalow, a pair of walky talkies etc.. Basing the chapters on such things is very creative and noteworthy of him.
I wasn't glued to the book and didn't feel any urgency to finish it in one sitting but was duly captivated by the story and felt that this can be read in several sittings. The good thing about it is that it remains with the reader till the next time he resumes reading it further.
A very promising effort on a topic that is both scary and very relevant today, I give India Was One a 4 out of 5 and recommend it to people who want to get a closer look at modern India and also are attracted by the questions this book raises.
I received the book from the author to read and review and I am very thankful to him. The above review is my honest and unbiased opinion and in no way influenced.
What will you do if your country is divided into two?
Are we ready to revisit the 1947 era again and be sure of not making the same mistakes this time?
What will you do if your loved ones are divided because of this partition?
India Was One is a story that puts forth these questions and much more for the reader to analyze. Jai and Kahaani lived in India. Although from families both regionally and culturally diverse, they still were Indians. They had the same dreams of success, love, family, happiness etc. They met in college, fell in love, got married and then shifted to the United States to pursue their career.
But this serene and happy bubble of their life bursts when they hear that their beloved country has been partitioned into two and that they both now belong to different countries!
Though they are in the United States, their families are in India. Afraid for their safety and unaware of their current situation, they plan on separating and determining their family's safety by going to their own respective new country.
But planning is one thing and destiny is another. Things don't go as per their plans and Jai and Kahaani are faced with situations that will test every belief that they had and then some more.
India Was One does not fall under a given genre. It is not simply a love story nor a patriotic saga nor a historical. It crosses genres and gives us a glimpse into a situation which though hypothetical is enough to raise some very relevant questions about the current situation in our country.
The cover is creative and intriguing and catches the eye of the reader at first glance.
The idea is new and plot is admirably executed. The story flows beautifully from a college romance to a married couple's ambition of a successful family to the love and responsibilities of a citizen towards his country to a son's/daughter's love and responsibility towards their parents. The story is nothing extraordinary but it still manages to keep the reader interested and turning pages till the end.
The author has clearly written this book keeping in mind the non Indian readers and so he gives a background on every ethnic thing he uses in his story whether it be a dish, a place or an event. Although this is a good thing to do but including the explanations along with the story flow was sometimes very distracting. I dont like glossaries because then everytime I dont understand something, I have to stop, find that thing in the glossary and check it! But he could have given the explanation at the bottom of the same page by putting a star in front or something. Also the explanations should have been toned down a bit. I felt some explanations too tedious and too long like the story of the highway from Mumbai etc.
The writing style of the author is simple yet captivating and can be polished more with more practice. This is his first work which is very promising. I loved the beautiful sketches he includes in chapters depicting some very varied things which may seem irrelevant but are integral to the story like a lantern, a car, a bungalow, a pair of walky talkies etc.. Basing the chapters on such things is very creative and noteworthy of him.
I wasn't glued to the book and didn't feel any urgency to finish it in one sitting but was duly captivated by the story and felt that this can be read in several sittings. The good thing about it is that it remains with the reader till the next time he resumes reading it further.
A very promising effort on a topic that is both scary and very relevant today, I give India Was One a 4 out of 5 and recommend it to people who want to get a closer look at modern India and also are attracted by the questions this book raises.
I received the book from the author to read and review and I am very thankful to him. The above review is my honest and unbiased opinion and in no way influenced.
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