Hm. Really conflicted about this one. This was written like 25 years after the original trilogy, and I'm assuming that given the recent resurgance of the popularity of Amish fiction, Beverly was motivated to come back to this series with a prequel-- I was wondering if this would have the same feel. Right off the back, the first thing you notice is that there are a LOT more chapters than in the main series, double the amount, in fact. This one also really centers on the women and the relationships between women, particularly the interplay between Ella Mae Zook, the wise-woman, and her great-neice, Clara. They bond because Clara is going through a rough breakup and Ella Mae is trying to cope with the grief of losing her husband and having to move out of her house and in with her adult children. The reader spends the whole book dealing with the tension and the unspoken implication that as they bond, Clara will decide to move in with Ella Mae as her companion, and that... doesn't end up happening.
I'll just come out with my main beef with this book's plot: the ending. Even though you know what you're getting when it comes to Amish fiction, (extremely conservative ideology and heavy religious tones) there was still something charming about this book that made it hard to hate. The writing itself was really vivid and descriptive, but THE ENDING, oh my gosh. The book ends with Clara transferring her church membership to Hickory Hollow, an ultra-fundamentalist sect of the Amish church. She's already Amish, and baptized, mind you, but now she has to prove herself AGAIN so that she can enter this other parish within the same religious sect. It's like Hickory Hollow was splintering off and creating their own specific religious sect. So weird. I can't help but feel the moral of this story was that young women should leave their progressive home-towns and loving supportive families to move to ultra-conservative religious enclaves that directly reduce the amount of rights that women have within the society, all in order to get married-- that young women are the ones who should sacrifice their rights, material well-being, and support systems, for the sake of the man in the relationship. I kept thinking the conflict at the end of the book was going to lead to Clara's boyfriend going 'You don't have to leave your town for me! I'll move here for YOU, sweetheart!'... except he didn't. He was loyal, but it was in a 'I'm not leaving without you until your dad consents to let you come back to Hickory Hollow with me, I'll wait as long as it takes!'... The book ends with her getting accepted into his ultra-restrictive church and moving to his community.. which is NOT a happy ending, by the way, because we know what goes on to happen in the main series! The ultra-conservative, ultra-orthodox, fundamentalist leader of this parish shuns Katie for mourning her dead boyfriend and for running out of her wedding to the PARISH LEADER. Literally shuns and psychologically tortures a young girl for not submitting to this relationship with a huge power differential, ie., a 20 year old girl and the 40 yo RELIGIOUS LEADER OF HER COMMUNITY. Clara moving to this parish is not a happy ending! Anyway, this ending left me cold and uncomfortable. Ideally, Aaron would have moved to First Light, not the other way around.
This book directly confronted the issue of incest within Amish communities, but not in the way you'd expect, i.e., the sex abuse of women and girls that happens within Amish families. In small hyper-religious enclaves that aren't allowed to consort with outsiders, you end up with the problem where eventually, everyone in the community is related. (Ever heard of Mormon face? Yeah.) Young people who want to date will end up finding out that they're actually cousins, and need to go outside of the community to find fresh blood. Clara's break-up is because of an incident like this, and she's so humiliated that she can't bring herself to tell anyone, but eventually opens up to her great-aunt Ella Mae. She's hoping to meet a nice young man in Hickory Hollow, and wow, that was easy! A guy asks her out for a ride at her very first social event. I really thought she was going to end up with Tom, but then she ends up dropping him after the buggy accident and getting with Aaron instead-- which I didn't expect. Tom was way more interesting of a character. I like that Aaron was a writer, and was very tender with Clara, but he seemed flat compared to Tom's bombast. And while Aaron was loyal, it still didn't make any sense that he didn't volunteer to move to HER community. What's that bible verse about a man leaving his father and mother and cleaving to his wife? Why was Clara the one to leave and make all the sacrifices?
Also, you know what makes me laugh? How often tragic buggy accidents happen in Amish-fiction books-- and they usually don't involve cars! But hey, Beverly must have gotten inspired by the past two decades of buggy accidents in Amish-themed books, because the buggy vs. train accident was a big part of Ella Mae's backstory and apparently the 'missing reason' for why Hickory Hollow's parish got so strict. So after the buggy accident, the religious leadership are like 'What caused this! It must be the corrupting influence of the outside world! It can't be that our men and boys are reckless and undisciplined all on their own! It can't be a failing of our male disciples, it must be the outside world! Let's solve this by making the GIRLS wear longer dresses and take away their music and other privileges! That will make the boys less likely to act out!' Even Ella Mae, in the text, is aware that this is ridiculous. It's like shock doctrine, in a way. While everyone is reeling from this buggy tragedy, the conservative religious patriarchs take their chance to do what they wanted to do anyway: Impose even harsher restrictions on the young girls living in their communities.
Another big cricitism: You have to be careful when writing a prequel, because they can create problems that change the main story and make the main story's plot-line dumb. So wait, follow me here. Clara is from another Amish parish that allows music and instruments. Katie is aware that most Amish communities allow instruments in this prequel. So why did the Katie in the main series, just a few years later, suddenly forget that these other communities exist? Why did she need to run away from the Amish church at all and stay with Mennonite family members in the first place then? Why did she have to break Amish? This prequel literally destroys the foundation of the main-line books. It also ruins the touching moment between Ella Mae comforting Katie in the main series-- because in the prequel it's revealed that Ella Mae went through being shunned as a teenager, but in the main series, SHE DOESN'T TELL KATIE ABOUT THIS. Even though it would be a great opportunity to relate to her and comfort her about their mutual experience.
And again, Beverly is really heavy-handed with her own religious beliefs in these books. The narrative keeps insisting that the main character has more of an understanding of TRUE christianity than the other Amish do, and keeps suggesting that the Amish don't... read the bible? All the other amish characters are surprised and alarmed at Ella Mae praying out loud (Like evangelical protestant Beverly Lewis does) and are alarmed to find out that Clara studies bible verses and has them memorized. It's also mentioned that bible studies are forbidden-- which is a weird thing to suggest about a strict religious sect known for being extremely pious. But Bev was crazy enough to suggest that the Amish don't know Jesus in the main series. Weird.
These books betray a fundamental misunderstanding of the Amish and their way of life/religious beliefs-- and this is perfectly encapsulated in the ending, when the new wife/stepmother of Clara openly defies and un-mans her husband by disobeying him in front of other people, which was unrealistic and jarring. Especially since, objectively, Clara's dad is actually RIGHT not to want Clara to move to Hickory Hollow. He tried to stop her from getting trapped in this hyper-patriarchal ultra-conservative enclave. Love shouldn't cloud your vision to the point you get yourself trapped in a situation like that.
But you know, even though the content had a really bad message, I was so charmed by the scenery and the love portrayed between Ella Mae and Clara that I have to give it four stars. It really captured the Amish lifestyle, the food, the kindship, and the rot at the heart of the religious values they practice.
I wonder if this will ever by adapted for TV by hallmark, the Train vs Buggy scene would be exciting for sure!