He just wanted some peace. Roland Willemsen left Los Angeles, California and landed in a subdivision outside of Knoxville, Tennessee. A strange move, but for someone who just wanted to be left alone, it was perfect. There were benefits he hadn't thought about, like cleaner air, less traffic, friendlier people and no one knew his name. Oh, and he had a new recliner. Roland was made Vampyre at twenty-five and to everyone appeared even younger. It was an advantage he had used in his favor for all eight hundred and sixty-five years of his new life. Especially after the sexual revolution began. Good times. Yes, life was good, his relationship with the coven was good and there wasn't another vampyre for a hundred miles. He should have known his life was just too good. Roland would never guess who or what was about to befall him, but when it did, he showed them what eight hundred and sixty-five years of fighting his enemies had taught him and how Roland could be very bad.
Very readable. Only let down by the odd bit of dodgy grammar or garbled sentence. A proofreader might have fixed that right up. I know some readers hate that but I can usually figure out what the author was trying to say. In addition, a lot of the authors I read, at least initially, don’t have the resources some other writers do. As I said good read. Excellent, strong MC and decent orbital characters.
Very fun read and good story. I would raise this to a four or five star rating after an editor got a hold of it and cleaned up some fairly simple grammar and punctuation errors along with pov consistency.