This is a BL written for straight people.
And yes, I know, I know, BL as a genre is targeted to different audiences, and straight women finding escapism is definitely a crucial part of its history...but this one really comes across as a straight story packaged in two male bodies. (Part of the time, since there's an MMO game aspect with male/female avatars who are also shown having sex.)
Shoujo is even repeatedly referenced throughout, with Usagi wanting to live his life in a shoujo story (specifically being the girl), calling Gakuto a shoujo hero, then frequently going, "omg, they never have sex this fast or on screen in shoujo!!"
His female coworkers, upon finding out that he's gay and in a relationship with his manager's nephew (something that was announced at a company event against his will, which is also a thing I have a major issue with), go, "omg it's a real life BL!" and then give him sex advice based on their consumption of BL, explaining the "male and female" roles of a gay relationship. To a 25 year old gay man. Who then uses that advice in a love hotel with his boyfriend, because he clearly couldn't figure any of this out on his own? He had to be instructed by straight women? It's...kind of off-putting.
And quite frankly, I don't read much shoujo because I find it boring, so trying to write something as shoujo but sexy isn't really my genre to begin with.
I was a little surprised that Seven Seas picked up something this unapologetically smutty, with little to the plot beyond "horny things," but I realized partway through that it reminds me a lot of their Steamship line ("sexy romance for women"), which I always mark as no interest in their surveys.
The more I think about it, the more disappointed I am. And it had such an interesting setup!
Two straight stories I do love are Wotakoi: Love Is Hard for Otaku and Recovery of an MMO Junkie, so I was excited at the idea of a BL that used the MMO and gamer otaku worlds. I liked the idea of them meeting in an online world and then discovering that they had an offline connection, too. I was surprised and pleased that only a couple pages in, we discover that Gakuto already knew long before their in-person meetup that Usagi is a man using an in-game female avatar. No big shocker of an unveiling; they're just getting to know each other better outside of the game.
And there's other stuff that isn't bad; their bonding over their fandom event was cute, and I liked how seamlessly their personalities transferred over to the real world, and how Gakuto struggled with his attraction to Usagi, even after finding out he wasn't a sexy lady with huge gamer boobs. (The boobs are drawn a lot, and lovingly. The author's note indicates that this was one of their favorite parts of this story. Can't relate.)
But there isn't much to their characters or personalities beyond that. We know very little about Gakuto as a person, other than being "super hot" and "a perfect shoujo hero"...neither of which is very substantial. Plus Gakuto's uncle, Usagi's boss, is an absolutely horrible character. Extraordinarily invasive, obsessed with his subordinate's sex life, and completely disrespectful of any boundaries whatsoever. I hated the drinking scene, where he finally managed to bully/threaten/blackmail Usagi into going out with coworkers, then outed him.
And there's no consequence!
Plus it's honestly a little weird that he found out about Usagi's relationship with his nephew and didn't care at all, other than being skeevy and leering about it.
No plot to speak of, characters that were either thinly developed or unlikeable, and way too much straight stuff for a supposedly queer story. Not keeping this one.