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The Sunset Sovereign
There are seven Supplicants destined for the Capital, chosen as children by mysterious Voices, who are known as the Sovereigns.
Lynn and Willow go to Sunrise, who are devoted to beginnings and the morning. Fabio and Aidan go to Day, Isobel and Hollie go to Sunset, Yvaine goes to Night.
Will the seven Supplicants pass the Trials and achieve their dreams? Or are they entering a nightmare?
Lynn and Willow go to Sunrise, who are devoted to beginnings and the morning. Fabio and Aidan go to Day, Isobel and Hollie go to Sunset, Yvaine goes to Night.
Will the seven Supplicants pass the Trials and achieve their dreams? Or are they entering a nightmare?
306 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 25, 2023
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About the author
E.M. McConnell
42 books120 followersEryn was born and raised in the UK, emigrating to Germany in 2017. They work freelance and live with their family.
Eryn studied Poetry, Literature and Playwriting at University, continuing to write poetry. They began to write fiction in 2021, starting with fan fiction, then flash fiction, then short stories, and finally novellas and novels.
They describe themselves as a non genre specific writer, preferring to dip toes into different genres, stories and ideas. Currently they write Poetry, Fantasy, Dystopian, Scifi and Horror but they may diversify further in the future.
Eryn studied Poetry, Literature and Playwriting at University, continuing to write poetry. They began to write fiction in 2021, starting with fan fiction, then flash fiction, then short stories, and finally novellas and novels.
They describe themselves as a non genre specific writer, preferring to dip toes into different genres, stories and ideas. Currently they write Poetry, Fantasy, Dystopian, Scifi and Horror but they may diversify further in the future.
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April 4, 2023
Enjoyed it very much
What an interesting read. Written beautifully with fantastic descriptions, I could easily visualize what the author was describing. The characters have depth and I began to truly care for them. I very much recommend this book and can't wait to find out what happens next. Bravo!
What an interesting read. Written beautifully with fantastic descriptions, I could easily visualize what the author was describing. The characters have depth and I began to truly care for them. I very much recommend this book and can't wait to find out what happens next. Bravo!
July 26, 2023
Let me start by saying that this is a debut novel, a fact I had to remind myself of, because, you see, it reads like a seasoned author of many books under her belt. Right off the bat I was intrigued, I found my fingers and eyes were working in tandem. As I finished a page, my fingers automatically turned the page, wanting, needing to know more. I HAD to know what or who the Voices were, who IS Rusty? What fate awaits Isobel? Are the Voices benevolent? See? Very intriguing...
It's really a multi faceted story, spanning over various...now there's the question! Dimensions? Timelines? Realms? Hmm, all of these, I think? The author was so talented in tantalising me to believing it's all of them but keeping the certainly just out of my grasp. Which obviously has me even more intrigued! What is certain is the beautifully written story, taking me to the unknown and the stars, yesssss... literally to the stars!
Isobel, as many children throughout the world, hear a Voice, which no one else can. These children and their families know they are eligible to be part of a ceremony called the Calling. If Chosen, they are sent to the Capital to undergo training and trails. Sounds like everyone's dream doesn't it? Well, it WAS Isobel's dream. She enters the Capital full of awe and determination to become a Scion, to be able to communicate with the Sovereigns. Oh, let me mention that the Sovereigns are Dragons, they are caring, benevolent creatures who guide the people in the Capital and help those outside it. Isobel, a loner, who's best friend was Rusty, her "Voice" for so many years, finds herself with real friends in this new home. This euphoria was not to last however, Isobel couldn't put her finger on it, but something doesn't smell quite right for her, there are too many unanswered questions, too many irregularities and when she discovers what, well, she's rightly horrified! Hidden agendas and lies are the order of the day!
I was very impressed with the characters, I got to see them in their entirety, all their flaws and strengths. The friendships were beautiful and so real, their feelings so raw, it was easy to feel their pain and the deep uncertainty. I loved the Dragons, their roles expand within the story but there is oh so much more that's coming! Not because I'm psychic, the author had put down a lot of crumbs, ones I'm eager to scoop up as I follow the trail. With the events in the latter half of the book, you betcha I want more than just the crumbs, I was the full load, I want to know if Aiden is truely listed, I want to know how Isobel is going to tackle the Analysts, I want to know about Isobel and Rusty's reunion, gee whiz, I want to know it all!
This is such a wonderful combination of "old world", "new world", "magical world" with a definite sci-fi undertone. Cool right? All the best in one. Well done Ms McDonell on a very impressive debut novel! I enjoyed it immensely and I'm looking forward to continuing the journey!
It's really a multi faceted story, spanning over various...now there's the question! Dimensions? Timelines? Realms? Hmm, all of these, I think? The author was so talented in tantalising me to believing it's all of them but keeping the certainly just out of my grasp. Which obviously has me even more intrigued! What is certain is the beautifully written story, taking me to the unknown and the stars, yesssss... literally to the stars!
Isobel, as many children throughout the world, hear a Voice, which no one else can. These children and their families know they are eligible to be part of a ceremony called the Calling. If Chosen, they are sent to the Capital to undergo training and trails. Sounds like everyone's dream doesn't it? Well, it WAS Isobel's dream. She enters the Capital full of awe and determination to become a Scion, to be able to communicate with the Sovereigns. Oh, let me mention that the Sovereigns are Dragons, they are caring, benevolent creatures who guide the people in the Capital and help those outside it. Isobel, a loner, who's best friend was Rusty, her "Voice" for so many years, finds herself with real friends in this new home. This euphoria was not to last however, Isobel couldn't put her finger on it, but something doesn't smell quite right for her, there are too many unanswered questions, too many irregularities and when she discovers what, well, she's rightly horrified! Hidden agendas and lies are the order of the day!
I was very impressed with the characters, I got to see them in their entirety, all their flaws and strengths. The friendships were beautiful and so real, their feelings so raw, it was easy to feel their pain and the deep uncertainty. I loved the Dragons, their roles expand within the story but there is oh so much more that's coming! Not because I'm psychic, the author had put down a lot of crumbs, ones I'm eager to scoop up as I follow the trail. With the events in the latter half of the book, you betcha I want more than just the crumbs, I was the full load, I want to know if Aiden is truely listed, I want to know how Isobel is going to tackle the Analysts, I want to know about Isobel and Rusty's reunion, gee whiz, I want to know it all!
This is such a wonderful combination of "old world", "new world", "magical world" with a definite sci-fi undertone. Cool right? All the best in one. Well done Ms McDonell on a very impressive debut novel! I enjoyed it immensely and I'm looking forward to continuing the journey!
August 22, 2023
Disclaimer: I read this as a judge for Fantasy Faction as part of SPFBO9. This review and rating is MY opinion only.
Some children hear voices in their heads and more often than not, the voices disappear after a few years; the children who continue to hear them become supplicants and they leave their home towns to move to the supposedly perfect Capital which is led by these voices - also known as Sovereigns.
The Supplicants are drawn towards the Sovereigns of groups; Sunrise, Day, Sunset and Night and other than Night there are 2 children per quarter.
The Sovereigns are Dragons and they had created the city as a place of learning for humans with themselves as benign rulers, however the utopia that was promised is becoming a facade. Some supplicants become one with their dragons, others decide to live their lives without them and then there is a group of people called Analysts born within the city who have decided that dragons are no longer a necessity and are going to extreme lengths to create ways to make it so.
This book was a bit hit and miss for me - I thought the characters were well written; from children hearing voices to them growing and experiencing what life throws at them as well as self determination and affirmation of what they wanted as they grew into young adults. The politics and life in the city compared to the outside towns was explained rather well too.
However one of my pet peeves in fiction kept cropping up - when the main character is repeatedly told by different people "you don't need to know this yet", "we'll tell you when you're older" etc and off course the MC then does something ridiculous or dangerous with irreparable or damaging consequences. This happened a few times too many.
Also on a personal level I felt at times there was too much packed into the story with little explanation, though we are left with a couple of excellent cliffhangers regarding a couple of characters (one in particular, Yvaine - I need to know what lies in store for her).
Some children hear voices in their heads and more often than not, the voices disappear after a few years; the children who continue to hear them become supplicants and they leave their home towns to move to the supposedly perfect Capital which is led by these voices - also known as Sovereigns.
The Supplicants are drawn towards the Sovereigns of groups; Sunrise, Day, Sunset and Night and other than Night there are 2 children per quarter.
The Sovereigns are Dragons and they had created the city as a place of learning for humans with themselves as benign rulers, however the utopia that was promised is becoming a facade. Some supplicants become one with their dragons, others decide to live their lives without them and then there is a group of people called Analysts born within the city who have decided that dragons are no longer a necessity and are going to extreme lengths to create ways to make it so.
This book was a bit hit and miss for me - I thought the characters were well written; from children hearing voices to them growing and experiencing what life throws at them as well as self determination and affirmation of what they wanted as they grew into young adults. The politics and life in the city compared to the outside towns was explained rather well too.
However one of my pet peeves in fiction kept cropping up - when the main character is repeatedly told by different people "you don't need to know this yet", "we'll tell you when you're older" etc and off course the MC then does something ridiculous or dangerous with irreparable or damaging consequences. This happened a few times too many.
Also on a personal level I felt at times there was too much packed into the story with little explanation, though we are left with a couple of excellent cliffhangers regarding a couple of characters (one in particular, Yvaine - I need to know what lies in store for her).
August 8, 2023
A solid, entertaining read. Not much action to it, which is a bit out of my niche, but it was still a great, intriguing book, so no regrets.
First and foremost, I really liked the worldbuilding on this one. The Sovereigns are benevolent-ish figures with their own agenda, and I had a great time trying to figure out what their game was throughout the book. The "Capital and Outside" system reminded me of the Hunger Games (in a good way), and I look forward to finding out the rest of the dirt in next installments.
I also liked the characters. They were an excellent source of drama throughout the read, and I couldn't help but feeling for their individual plights -- which, I must say, is a plus in this book. Instead of only having the collective hurdle, each character had their own problems going on (though the collective hurdle was also there), which kept me hooked.
Finally, the plot. The mystery on this was very good, with the dystopic elements slowly coming to the surface rather than being dumped straight away, and I greatly enjoyed the way the main character, Isobel, used to get past a certain problem.
The beginning was a bit slower than I'm used to, which might throw some people off, but I seriously recommend giving this one a chance. You won't regret it.
First and foremost, I really liked the worldbuilding on this one. The Sovereigns are benevolent-ish figures with their own agenda, and I had a great time trying to figure out what their game was throughout the book. The "Capital and Outside" system reminded me of the Hunger Games (in a good way), and I look forward to finding out the rest of the dirt in next installments.
I also liked the characters. They were an excellent source of drama throughout the read, and I couldn't help but feeling for their individual plights -- which, I must say, is a plus in this book. Instead of only having the collective hurdle, each character had their own problems going on (though the collective hurdle was also there), which kept me hooked.
Finally, the plot. The mystery on this was very good, with the dystopic elements slowly coming to the surface rather than being dumped straight away, and I greatly enjoyed the way the main character, Isobel, used to get past a certain problem.
The beginning was a bit slower than I'm used to, which might throw some people off, but I seriously recommend giving this one a chance. You won't regret it.
July 13, 2023
Beautiful world with powerful messages
I was enthralled in this world. It starts out with an idealistic girl, both doubtful of her future but hopeful all the same. Isobel is a wonderful protagonist for that. Yet, as she gains wisdom, it’s puts her in a difficult place—knowing she can no longer tolerate the status quo, knowing what she knows.
I love this magic system. Inner voices connected to dragons? Different factions with different levels? A corrupt government and ‘gods’ who remain indifferent? Yes, please! It all creates a bundle of awesome tension!
I cannot wait to see where this goes. The messages about friendship, duty, morality, nature vs industry are all wrapped so well in this beautiful piece of art.
I was enthralled in this world. It starts out with an idealistic girl, both doubtful of her future but hopeful all the same. Isobel is a wonderful protagonist for that. Yet, as she gains wisdom, it’s puts her in a difficult place—knowing she can no longer tolerate the status quo, knowing what she knows.
I love this magic system. Inner voices connected to dragons? Different factions with different levels? A corrupt government and ‘gods’ who remain indifferent? Yes, please! It all creates a bundle of awesome tension!
I cannot wait to see where this goes. The messages about friendship, duty, morality, nature vs industry are all wrapped so well in this beautiful piece of art.
November 25, 2023
The Sunset Sovereign is a YA dystopian perfect for fans of classics from the genre who are also on the lookout for something a bit different. Based on things McConnell has stated online, I know later volumes will push the narrative in new directions that break genre conventions, but I honestly think that will make Sunset all the more of a rewarding read.
Right away, Sunset comes off as highly critical of uninterrogated YA tropes such as the Harry Potter "sorting" system that slots children into predetermined roles. McConnell instead starts us off by introducing us to the concept of four "Sovereigns" (dragons aligned with Sunrise, Day, Sunset, and Night). From an early age, certain children across Sunset's world hear the voices of the Sovereigns through a psychic connection that leads them to bond with their respective dragon and prepares them to potentially be chosen to be taken to the Capital. Once there, the children will be trained and face trials intended to prepare them for a kind of cosmic union with the Sovereigns. What to the majority of the novel's characters would appear to be a Utopia disguises something much darker. In order to ascend and be with the Sovereigns, the chosen children must make huge sacrifices--ones they aren't given enough information to fully understand.
Our main character, Isobel, is intriguing, not least of all because of how enraptured she is with the whole process. While other chosen ones are justifiably suspicious from the get-go, Isobel maintains a steadfast trust in the institutions that control the Capital and its provinces till quite late in the story. This trust lends a further creepiness to the overall feel of the book--are the Sovereigns to be trusted? Are they as benevolent as they appear? And what about the insistence of the administration of the trials (includings its ominous Analysts) that chosen children will have the option to decide not to ascend?
It's these mysteries that gripped me, and as Sunset ramps up and Isobel starts not to be able to ignore the fundamental injustices around her I found myself unable to put the book down.
For me, the stars of the cast were Yvaine, a fellow trainee (Supplicant) of Night, Fabio (Day), and Poll (a younger teenager or preteen condemned to death). Although Isobel is our main POV and I would call the book single POV, Poll and another character do have one POV chapter each and I very much enjoyed Poll's down-to-earth and textured voice. Her story as it unfolds is truly heartbreaking.
Yvaine is such a curious character. She's far more cynical and aloof than the other Supplicants and as the only Supplicant of Night there's immediately a sense of her (and her seeming magical abilities) that sets her apart. As the story continues, .
I'm very excited for the sequels, as I have so many questions, especially about how the world works and what's really happening. There were elements of the worldbuilding that reminded me of the 1998 movie, Dark City, with just as much potential for fucked-upness.
Right away, Sunset comes off as highly critical of uninterrogated YA tropes such as the Harry Potter "sorting" system that slots children into predetermined roles. McConnell instead starts us off by introducing us to the concept of four "Sovereigns" (dragons aligned with Sunrise, Day, Sunset, and Night). From an early age, certain children across Sunset's world hear the voices of the Sovereigns through a psychic connection that leads them to bond with their respective dragon and prepares them to potentially be chosen to be taken to the Capital. Once there, the children will be trained and face trials intended to prepare them for a kind of cosmic union with the Sovereigns. What to the majority of the novel's characters would appear to be a Utopia disguises something much darker. In order to ascend and be with the Sovereigns, the chosen children must make huge sacrifices--ones they aren't given enough information to fully understand.
Our main character, Isobel, is intriguing, not least of all because of how enraptured she is with the whole process. While other chosen ones are justifiably suspicious from the get-go, Isobel maintains a steadfast trust in the institutions that control the Capital and its provinces till quite late in the story. This trust lends a further creepiness to the overall feel of the book--are the Sovereigns to be trusted? Are they as benevolent as they appear? And what about the insistence of the administration of the trials (includings its ominous Analysts) that chosen children will have the option to decide not to ascend?
It's these mysteries that gripped me, and as Sunset ramps up and Isobel starts not to be able to ignore the fundamental injustices around her I found myself unable to put the book down.
For me, the stars of the cast were Yvaine, a fellow trainee (Supplicant) of Night, Fabio (Day), and Poll (a younger teenager or preteen condemned to death). Although Isobel is our main POV and I would call the book single POV, Poll and another character do have one POV chapter each and I very much enjoyed Poll's down-to-earth and textured voice. Her story as it unfolds is truly heartbreaking.
Yvaine is such a curious character. She's far more cynical and aloof than the other Supplicants and as the only Supplicant of Night there's immediately a sense of her (and her seeming magical abilities) that sets her apart. As the story continues, .
I'm very excited for the sequels, as I have so many questions, especially about how the world works and what's really happening. There were elements of the worldbuilding that reminded me of the 1998 movie, Dark City, with just as much potential for fucked-upness.
March 30, 2023
This debut novel was a slowly unfolding bit of mystery. What felt initially like some "The Hunger Games" vibes, in terms of young ones being Chosen and taken from their villages to the main city, the Capital, in time evolved into something else entirely. The story drew me into its world, and I felt I could see the way the light played, the changing colours of the space itself. And I was also wanting to learn more about where we were, this strange city and its somewhat unusual inhabitants.
Nor was it the kind of dragon fantasy story I'd perhaps expected to walk into, either. Who are the Sovereigns, where do they come from, and what do they do? What do they want? Although there's this cool patina of benevolence going on, something seems to suggest there are perhaps more nefarious things in store. We follow these developments along with main character Isobel, one of the Chosen and apparently destined to become a Scion in service to the Sovereigns. But it's only later when she begins to see that all is not quite what it seems.
I'm looking forward to seeing how Ms. McConnell reveals what lies ahead in the coming saga!
Nor was it the kind of dragon fantasy story I'd perhaps expected to walk into, either. Who are the Sovereigns, where do they come from, and what do they do? What do they want? Although there's this cool patina of benevolence going on, something seems to suggest there are perhaps more nefarious things in store. We follow these developments along with main character Isobel, one of the Chosen and apparently destined to become a Scion in service to the Sovereigns. But it's only later when she begins to see that all is not quite what it seems.
I'm looking forward to seeing how Ms. McConnell reveals what lies ahead in the coming saga!
April 4, 2023
Wow what a fantastic book.
Wonderfully written with great characters.
I was on the edge of my seat as the tension grew.
I can't wait to read the next book and find out what happens next.
Wonderfully written with great characters.
I was on the edge of my seat as the tension grew.
I can't wait to read the next book and find out what happens next.
November 8, 2023
"The Sunset Sovereign" by E.M. McConnell is a fantasy novel that introduces readers to a world filled with mysterious Voices, chosen Supplicants, and the trials they must face. The concept of seven Supplicants destined for different times of day is intriguing and sets the stage for a unique and imaginative storyline.
McConnell creates a vivid and immersive world, particularly in the factions of Sunrise, Day, Sunset, and Night. The groups hold distinction as in similar academy stories.
The characters, while diverse and interesting, could benefit from further development. Lynn, Willow, Fabio, Aidan, Isobel, Hollie, and Yvaine each bring their own strengths and vulnerabilities to the story, but at times their actions and motivations feel a bit flat.
The pacing of the plot is generally well-maintained, with a good balance of action and character-driven moments. The Trials that the Supplicants face are engaging and provide moments of tension and excitement. However, some transitions between scenes felt abrupt, and a smoother flow could enhance the overall reading experience.
For fans of imaginative world-building mixed with coming-of-age stories.
McConnell creates a vivid and immersive world, particularly in the factions of Sunrise, Day, Sunset, and Night. The groups hold distinction as in similar academy stories.
The characters, while diverse and interesting, could benefit from further development. Lynn, Willow, Fabio, Aidan, Isobel, Hollie, and Yvaine each bring their own strengths and vulnerabilities to the story, but at times their actions and motivations feel a bit flat.
The pacing of the plot is generally well-maintained, with a good balance of action and character-driven moments. The Trials that the Supplicants face are engaging and provide moments of tension and excitement. However, some transitions between scenes felt abrupt, and a smoother flow could enhance the overall reading experience.
For fans of imaginative world-building mixed with coming-of-age stories.
April 10, 2025
Mind-speaking with DRAGONS. Need I say more??
Since childhood, Isobel has been communicating with a dragon in her mind. As a teen, she is chosen to go to the Capital with six others to learn to serve their respective Sovereigns. But in this idyllic city, all might not be as it seems.
I really enjoyed the emotional depth of the characters, particularly Isobel. How she felt was conveyed in such a real way that it made me get invested in her story immediately. She is young to be thrown into an unknown city with a different way of living, and yet she has the emotional intelligence to help her survive and make sometimes unlikely friends.
I always enjoy found family, particularly when personalities are quite different, since it allows the exploration of nuanced and complex relationships. I also loved the ominous details interspersed throughout; it gave me a sense of unease that kept me captivated throughout the book. Themes of power, control and othering were present enough to make me think, without it being too heavy-handed.
Overall, a thoroughly enjoyable read and I am looking forward to continuing with this series! I would definitely be a Day Sovereign 🌳
Since childhood, Isobel has been communicating with a dragon in her mind. As a teen, she is chosen to go to the Capital with six others to learn to serve their respective Sovereigns. But in this idyllic city, all might not be as it seems.
I really enjoyed the emotional depth of the characters, particularly Isobel. How she felt was conveyed in such a real way that it made me get invested in her story immediately. She is young to be thrown into an unknown city with a different way of living, and yet she has the emotional intelligence to help her survive and make sometimes unlikely friends.
I always enjoy found family, particularly when personalities are quite different, since it allows the exploration of nuanced and complex relationships. I also loved the ominous details interspersed throughout; it gave me a sense of unease that kept me captivated throughout the book. Themes of power, control and othering were present enough to make me think, without it being too heavy-handed.
Overall, a thoroughly enjoyable read and I am looking forward to continuing with this series! I would definitely be a Day Sovereign 🌳
September 19, 2023
a whimsically dystopian tale
This is not my usual dark fantasy read, and I admit it’s been a long time since I’ve read a dystopian novel, but it was lovely with a wonderfully dark end, and yet still a bit of hope.
There are hints from the start of the book that things are not quite what they seem. As the young MC sets off toward a deeply desired but poorly understood future, we get to see a “perfect” society.
As she and her companions set through the trials, cracks begin to show. For readers who love subtlety and a slow build, this is a wonderful choice.
The enemies were not who I expected and the worldbuilding was unique and not just run-of-the-mill dragons. These dragons are ethereal and otherworldly, while occasionally taking human-like form to commune with chosen humans.
Perfect for those who enjoy whimsical, magical tales where the MC experiences growth and makes grave mistakes with real consequences.
This is not my usual dark fantasy read, and I admit it’s been a long time since I’ve read a dystopian novel, but it was lovely with a wonderfully dark end, and yet still a bit of hope.
There are hints from the start of the book that things are not quite what they seem. As the young MC sets off toward a deeply desired but poorly understood future, we get to see a “perfect” society.
As she and her companions set through the trials, cracks begin to show. For readers who love subtlety and a slow build, this is a wonderful choice.
The enemies were not who I expected and the worldbuilding was unique and not just run-of-the-mill dragons. These dragons are ethereal and otherworldly, while occasionally taking human-like form to commune with chosen humans.
Perfect for those who enjoy whimsical, magical tales where the MC experiences growth and makes grave mistakes with real consequences.
April 12, 2023
Beautifully written story. Fantasy with a little bit of SF. Isobel is the made character who often feels overwhelmed but still pushes forward to do what she feels is right for her friends. The story feels like it’s set in the future and the past at the same time, which is appropriate since some of the characters can see all time all at once. Looking forward to the next book to learn more of the story.
April 14, 2023
Sunset Sovereign is a very nice read. It is light, with well-developed characters and an engaging story line in the world of fantasy. The author has an easy touch that makes the reading very relaxing. It was a perfect book to read after a stressful week. I would highly recommend it for teens on up.
May 10, 2023
Had me since the first line
As soon as I picked up this book, I couldn’t put it down. The story takes you on a captivating journey of discovery, an awakening of sorts as to life as it is versus how we imagine it to be. The characters are rich and beautiful and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Well done!
As soon as I picked up this book, I couldn’t put it down. The story takes you on a captivating journey of discovery, an awakening of sorts as to life as it is versus how we imagine it to be. The characters are rich and beautiful and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Well done!
June 1, 2023
The review may contain some mild spoilers!
Whew! This was a quick read! I started reading this book without reading the premise to keep a 100% open mind, which helped me enjoy the book a bit more.
Before I really venture into the meat of the story, the book gave me very vague Hunger Games vibes. Different villages of varying degrees of quality of life present a small group of young teenagers to some selectors. The selected are whisked to the mysterious capital where very few people are ever allowed to visit, most likely never to see their friends and family ever again (and even if they did, they would return so changed that their families would no longer recognize them). These selected candidates would then compete with each other to a certain degree to win a prize where the truth is not as good as it might seem at first sight.
Looking back, the fairytale utopia we are fed at the story's beginning is much more a house of falling cards that seems to collapse as our protagonist Isobel becomes older and wiser. I usually dislike stories where young teenagers huddle together, act very bubbly with seemingly perfect lives, and say their names real fast. I tend to end up not really remembering anyone 5 minutes later. The only character alongside Isobel that stands apart is the sulking Night applicant named Yvaine. She intrigued me from the start, and it felt refreshing to have a few POV chapters where an applicant lived a depressing childhood whose dourness never allays the idealized perfection of the Capital. For some odd reason, I always imagined Yvaine physically resembling Heather from that cartoon Total Drama Island with a perpetual frown.
The book has a bit of an uneven pace with a lot of slow-building the first 40% of the way, a pretty stable middle, and it moves lightning fast for its dramatic finale. And yes, the ending is really good. In some ways, this book felt very reminiscent of the 2011 anime Blood C: Last Blood.
Both stories have a protagonist who spends an insanely long time giggling among her friends with very little going on. And then, the story turns darker, and everyone becomes well aware at the very last minute. The main differences are that the dark revelation in this book was done fabulously, and Isobel exerts tints of a difference in opinion from her peers. Through her blind faith in being chosen, she is actually the only person among her peers rebelling against the system.
I will try not to spoil more about the plot and let readers enjoy it for themselves. There are a few reasons why I sadly could not give it the full 5 stars.
Despite the great finale and little nibbles of the truth we get during the story, some things are never explained, and it just drove me nuts because the first half of the book never answers anything, so I kept on fretting about those little details ad nauseum.
When Isobel stands on the dais in her village to find out if she became chosen, who told her parents to mend a specifically orange dress? Is there some kind of transportation system that is only accessible to the Analysts where they inform families to dress their kids in specific pre-approved colored clothes? Isobel mentions she still remembers the choosing that preceded hers 10 years ago. Yet she never mentions the colored dresses or why every applicant stood next to someone with the same dress color. The choosing also mentioned there were supposed to be 10 applicants. Still, we only know 7 were mentioned (and I suppose Yvaine wasn't there because she got a special automatic permit, perhaps? The book never explains why she ends up in Isobel's portal batch but was never present in the choosing.)
It took us ages to find out Isobel is 16 years old. I spent 52% of the book wondering if she was 6 years old... or 12... or 13... Wondering her age through half of the book was driving me insane. I will give the book the benefit of the doubt that her huge degree of innocence that made her a LOT younger than her true age was because she spent so much of her life interacting with an invisible voice. But not knowing her age made me wonder why a young adult like Caleb would be so romantically interested in her (when I assumed she was 10 or something). I loved her interactions with her Voice named Rusty, only wished the scenes where their connection becomes severed early on had been more traumatic. She seemed very indifferent about no longer having anyone to speak to when she was alone.
Book also never agrees on whether the economic system of the Capital was truly communist or socialist capitalism. One chapter, the candidates talk about how everyone barters goods in the Capital. In another, they use coins to pay for bread. If candidates' bodies start suffering from physical changes, how come every ordinary civilian in the Capital could recognize Isobel as a candidate so early in the story? I would have liked to know why so many candidates from Rowan's birth city are Non-binary. Is it simply because that place is so culturally enlightened?
In essence, the book was great, I liked the writing style and loved the worldbuilding, but these questions just nagged into my head nonstop. Otherwise, this book would have most certainly won 5 stars. Great read, would love to read the sequel someday.
Whew! This was a quick read! I started reading this book without reading the premise to keep a 100% open mind, which helped me enjoy the book a bit more.
Before I really venture into the meat of the story, the book gave me very vague Hunger Games vibes. Different villages of varying degrees of quality of life present a small group of young teenagers to some selectors. The selected are whisked to the mysterious capital where very few people are ever allowed to visit, most likely never to see their friends and family ever again (and even if they did, they would return so changed that their families would no longer recognize them). These selected candidates would then compete with each other to a certain degree to win a prize where the truth is not as good as it might seem at first sight.
Looking back, the fairytale utopia we are fed at the story's beginning is much more a house of falling cards that seems to collapse as our protagonist Isobel becomes older and wiser. I usually dislike stories where young teenagers huddle together, act very bubbly with seemingly perfect lives, and say their names real fast. I tend to end up not really remembering anyone 5 minutes later. The only character alongside Isobel that stands apart is the sulking Night applicant named Yvaine. She intrigued me from the start, and it felt refreshing to have a few POV chapters where an applicant lived a depressing childhood whose dourness never allays the idealized perfection of the Capital. For some odd reason, I always imagined Yvaine physically resembling Heather from that cartoon Total Drama Island with a perpetual frown.
The book has a bit of an uneven pace with a lot of slow-building the first 40% of the way, a pretty stable middle, and it moves lightning fast for its dramatic finale. And yes, the ending is really good. In some ways, this book felt very reminiscent of the 2011 anime Blood C: Last Blood.
Both stories have a protagonist who spends an insanely long time giggling among her friends with very little going on. And then, the story turns darker, and everyone becomes well aware at the very last minute. The main differences are that the dark revelation in this book was done fabulously, and Isobel exerts tints of a difference in opinion from her peers. Through her blind faith in being chosen, she is actually the only person among her peers rebelling against the system.
I will try not to spoil more about the plot and let readers enjoy it for themselves. There are a few reasons why I sadly could not give it the full 5 stars.
Despite the great finale and little nibbles of the truth we get during the story, some things are never explained, and it just drove me nuts because the first half of the book never answers anything, so I kept on fretting about those little details ad nauseum.
When Isobel stands on the dais in her village to find out if she became chosen, who told her parents to mend a specifically orange dress? Is there some kind of transportation system that is only accessible to the Analysts where they inform families to dress their kids in specific pre-approved colored clothes? Isobel mentions she still remembers the choosing that preceded hers 10 years ago. Yet she never mentions the colored dresses or why every applicant stood next to someone with the same dress color. The choosing also mentioned there were supposed to be 10 applicants. Still, we only know 7 were mentioned (and I suppose Yvaine wasn't there because she got a special automatic permit, perhaps? The book never explains why she ends up in Isobel's portal batch but was never present in the choosing.)
It took us ages to find out Isobel is 16 years old. I spent 52% of the book wondering if she was 6 years old... or 12... or 13... Wondering her age through half of the book was driving me insane. I will give the book the benefit of the doubt that her huge degree of innocence that made her a LOT younger than her true age was because she spent so much of her life interacting with an invisible voice. But not knowing her age made me wonder why a young adult like Caleb would be so romantically interested in her (when I assumed she was 10 or something). I loved her interactions with her Voice named Rusty, only wished the scenes where their connection becomes severed early on had been more traumatic. She seemed very indifferent about no longer having anyone to speak to when she was alone.
Book also never agrees on whether the economic system of the Capital was truly communist or socialist capitalism. One chapter, the candidates talk about how everyone barters goods in the Capital. In another, they use coins to pay for bread. If candidates' bodies start suffering from physical changes, how come every ordinary civilian in the Capital could recognize Isobel as a candidate so early in the story? I would have liked to know why so many candidates from Rowan's birth city are Non-binary. Is it simply because that place is so culturally enlightened?
In essence, the book was great, I liked the writing style and loved the worldbuilding, but these questions just nagged into my head nonstop. Otherwise, this book would have most certainly won 5 stars. Great read, would love to read the sequel someday.
June 25, 2023
4.5 rounded up
Wonderful story. Made me cry
Full review to come
Wonderful story. Made me cry
Full review to come
Want to read
January 27, 2024This is not a full review. I read through the beginning of all 300 SPFBO9 contest entries. This was a book I wanted to read more of.
Some children hear a voice around the age of 7. It is a pleasing voice, and fills them with wonder. Sometimes the voice stays with them as they grow. Those so Chosen are taken to serve the Sovereign.
This has a slow, but interesting beginning, focused on, at least at the present, one child as she begins to hear the magical, pleasing Voice while watching spiders - which shows us something about the kind of child she is.
The narrative does a good job of telling us directly about this Voice, and what it will mean for the children if they continue to hear it - how they will be parted from the life they know to the secret sorrow of their family.
Adult stories that focus on children can be hazardous when those children are written too realistically. This, I think, is managing not to make too much of a point to emphasize the childishness of our 6yr old mc.
Something happens, as we would expect, to our 6yr old. She hears the Voice one day. It is a pleasant voice, perhaps a bit “rusty” sounding. But it’s kind, and interested in what she is doing.
That in and of itself is interesting, tho I wonder if it’s not also rather ordinary? I come away from this opening engaged, but wishing it had done more.
But it has done enough for me to want to continue. The prose is clear and competent. The narrative is not dragging its feet with tangents or spates of dry worldbuidling.
It maintains an adult sensibility (such as including extra-narrative chapter bumpers w/ in world text). The story feels careful to me. It feels intentional. Its building towards something specific and is taking its time to gather the necessary story threads together.
I’m interested to know more about what this Voice is and what it will really mean for our characters. It’s a quiet, simple beginning, but it’s working. I’m in.
Some children hear a voice around the age of 7. It is a pleasing voice, and fills them with wonder. Sometimes the voice stays with them as they grow. Those so Chosen are taken to serve the Sovereign.
This has a slow, but interesting beginning, focused on, at least at the present, one child as she begins to hear the magical, pleasing Voice while watching spiders - which shows us something about the kind of child she is.
The narrative does a good job of telling us directly about this Voice, and what it will mean for the children if they continue to hear it - how they will be parted from the life they know to the secret sorrow of their family.
Adult stories that focus on children can be hazardous when those children are written too realistically. This, I think, is managing not to make too much of a point to emphasize the childishness of our 6yr old mc.
Something happens, as we would expect, to our 6yr old. She hears the Voice one day. It is a pleasant voice, perhaps a bit “rusty” sounding. But it’s kind, and interested in what she is doing.
That in and of itself is interesting, tho I wonder if it’s not also rather ordinary? I come away from this opening engaged, but wishing it had done more.
But it has done enough for me to want to continue. The prose is clear and competent. The narrative is not dragging its feet with tangents or spates of dry worldbuidling.
It maintains an adult sensibility (such as including extra-narrative chapter bumpers w/ in world text). The story feels careful to me. It feels intentional. Its building towards something specific and is taking its time to gather the necessary story threads together.
I’m interested to know more about what this Voice is and what it will really mean for our characters. It’s a quiet, simple beginning, but it’s working. I’m in.
April 24, 2025
I enjoyed this story a great deal. Children with potential have their minds touched and nurtured from a young age by a being older & wiser. The “Voice” introduces them to concepts while nurturing their interests & unique talents. When they come of age, they may go to the Capital to face trials & eventually become a representative of the Sovereigns.
The Capital sounds idyllic, but underneath the shiny & sparkling surface something not so shiny is happening.
As the Chosen go through their trials & face choosing how they will live the rest of their life the machinations of those who seek more power are slowly revealed. Are these Supplicants really free to choose their own paths or will others force them into decisions they would not have freely made?
In the end, I felt as if I’d been asked…
“What would you be willing to do or give up to have a chance to change the future for the better?”
The Capital sounds idyllic, but underneath the shiny & sparkling surface something not so shiny is happening.
As the Chosen go through their trials & face choosing how they will live the rest of their life the machinations of those who seek more power are slowly revealed. Are these Supplicants really free to choose their own paths or will others force them into decisions they would not have freely made?
In the end, I felt as if I’d been asked…
“What would you be willing to do or give up to have a chance to change the future for the better?”
July 29, 2023
This was a cute story and short read, but I found it hard to stay interested. The dialog is kind of choppy and there were times where I became confused on who was speaking. I would have to go back to see and even then sometimes I guess I was just supposed to read between the lines and know that we had moved on to another person. I don’t particularly care for the main character, Isobel. She is very childish and I’m also confused about her relationship with Caleb. She’s 16… they just met… now he wants her to give up everything and stay with him? Same with Hollie and Jed. There wasn’t even building in their relationship. One minute they meet, the next they’re in love 🤷🏼♀️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 12, 2023
This book could be utterly amazing, it has so much potential to be mindblowing for a variety of reasons, but it fell flat for me as well. Being able to see the incredible potential of this book does make leaving a review hard, but I will do my best to stay as objective as possible.
What worked for me:
I absolutely loved the idea. The basic premise is unique and so very different. The setting and the slow drip of information reveals a dystopian nightmare worthy of Orwell and Atwood, but blends it together with fantasy elements such as dragons and unique types of magic. It honestly could be brilliant.
I also really liked the characters. The group of Supplicants were a lot of fun to get to know and once I connected with them, I was very much invested in their stories and wanted so, so much to know more about each one. Towards the end, things really picked up and I raced through the last few chapters because I couldn't bear how things were developing and the dystopian nature of all the unfolding events got me good. There's a lot of that hopelessness so characteristic of Orwell in this book, but thankfully the author has left us with a grain of hope
What worked less well for me:
The culture is good, but not brilliant. Mostly, this is due to the fact that some minor elements from our own real-world traditions have found their way into this story even though they don't quite fit. I got the impression they were mentioned in this book simply because the author didn't take the time to consider that taking it for granted as a given was not really something that fit this story and the culture being created for it. An example: white wedding dresses. Somehow, with the Sunset Sovereigns being the ones to oversee change, and marriage is such an important change in a person's life, the colour white didn't seem to fit the cultural specifications of the world the author built in this book. There were other things taken for granted form our world that found their way into the book that were a little jarring for me and detracted from all the amazing work the author did to create an otherwise compelling, different and very believable world.
What didn't work for me:
The writing style doesn't do the idea justice. There's a lot of focus on dry recounting of events. The author states things how they are and doesn't really manage to paint all that many pictures, which made some sections of the book dreary to read. Additionally, I think a different structure might have been more fruitful to keep the story going. At times, I felt like the author couldn't decide whether this needed to be a single point of view or multiple point of view story, and the switches in narration were jarring.
Personally I think this book could be absolutely brilliant in either form. It would make a wonderful single point of view from Isobel with only throw-ins from the Adminsitrative paperwork, which I found ingenious. Or, this book could be equally amazing if it were openly multi-perspective. If we got to know what was happening with the characters from the other Sovereign quadrants over the course of the story, that would make it really compelling too. As I mentioned, I liked finding out more about the characters because they were all really well done, but the haphazard presentation in terms of when they were given a voice threw me off. If, from the start, we had alternating chapters from Isobel, Yvaine, Fabio and maybe Lynn, and then everything ties together with Isobel at the end, that could have made for an interesting read too and I think it would help to alleviate the drag in the middle where Isobel has no clue what's going on and takes her time putting the pieces together.
On the balance of things, I give this book 3.5 stars, as the good does tip things slightly for me. Honestly, if the author reworked it I think I might LOVE it. This book could meld the relentless, unforgiving, hopelessness of 1984 with the mad science horror of the MaddAddam series and combine both these dystopian nightmares with the utter awesomeness of magic, dragons and a compelling cast of characters. The Capital and some of the hints given towards the end even made me think of Gulliver's Travels, and I'm most definitely curious to see where the author takes things in the next book. Overall, a great idea, but needs work in terms of the execution.
What worked for me:
I absolutely loved the idea. The basic premise is unique and so very different. The setting and the slow drip of information reveals a dystopian nightmare worthy of Orwell and Atwood, but blends it together with fantasy elements such as dragons and unique types of magic. It honestly could be brilliant.
I also really liked the characters. The group of Supplicants were a lot of fun to get to know and once I connected with them, I was very much invested in their stories and wanted so, so much to know more about each one. Towards the end, things really picked up and I raced through the last few chapters because I couldn't bear how things were developing and the dystopian nature of all the unfolding events got me good. There's a lot of that hopelessness so characteristic of Orwell in this book, but thankfully the author has left us with a grain of hope
What worked less well for me:
The culture is good, but not brilliant. Mostly, this is due to the fact that some minor elements from our own real-world traditions have found their way into this story even though they don't quite fit. I got the impression they were mentioned in this book simply because the author didn't take the time to consider that taking it for granted as a given was not really something that fit this story and the culture being created for it. An example: white wedding dresses. Somehow, with the Sunset Sovereigns being the ones to oversee change, and marriage is such an important change in a person's life, the colour white didn't seem to fit the cultural specifications of the world the author built in this book. There were other things taken for granted form our world that found their way into the book that were a little jarring for me and detracted from all the amazing work the author did to create an otherwise compelling, different and very believable world.
What didn't work for me:
The writing style doesn't do the idea justice. There's a lot of focus on dry recounting of events. The author states things how they are and doesn't really manage to paint all that many pictures, which made some sections of the book dreary to read. Additionally, I think a different structure might have been more fruitful to keep the story going. At times, I felt like the author couldn't decide whether this needed to be a single point of view or multiple point of view story, and the switches in narration were jarring.
Personally I think this book could be absolutely brilliant in either form. It would make a wonderful single point of view from Isobel with only throw-ins from the Adminsitrative paperwork, which I found ingenious. Or, this book could be equally amazing if it were openly multi-perspective. If we got to know what was happening with the characters from the other Sovereign quadrants over the course of the story, that would make it really compelling too. As I mentioned, I liked finding out more about the characters because they were all really well done, but the haphazard presentation in terms of when they were given a voice threw me off. If, from the start, we had alternating chapters from Isobel, Yvaine, Fabio and maybe Lynn, and then everything ties together with Isobel at the end, that could have made for an interesting read too and I think it would help to alleviate the drag in the middle where Isobel has no clue what's going on and takes her time putting the pieces together.
On the balance of things, I give this book 3.5 stars, as the good does tip things slightly for me. Honestly, if the author reworked it I think I might LOVE it. This book could meld the relentless, unforgiving, hopelessness of 1984 with the mad science horror of the MaddAddam series and combine both these dystopian nightmares with the utter awesomeness of magic, dragons and a compelling cast of characters. The Capital and some of the hints given towards the end even made me think of Gulliver's Travels, and I'm most definitely curious to see where the author takes things in the next book. Overall, a great idea, but needs work in terms of the execution.
March 27, 2023
There are many layers to this novel which the author manages to weave together in a highly effective way, deftly managing to avoid all the tropes that can reside in any book that involves dragons. In fact, you may well think there is nothing new to say about them but having read ‘The Sunset Sovereign’, I have to disagree entirely.
The story begins with Isobel, a young girl who lives in a small village with her parents who can hear a Voice. To the reader, it appears there’s nothing extraordinary about her other than her imagination but we quickly learn, this means she is a special child who can attend the Calling ceremony. If she is one of the Chosen, Isobel will leave her rural home and go to the mysterious Capital, where, with other children from across the world, she will train to become a Scion. The Scion are those who can communicate with the Sovereigns, the dragons who are guardians of both the Capital and the Outside.
I don’t feel it’s a spoiler to say Isobel is chosen and travels, brimming with excitement and some anxiety, to the Capital to begin her training. She meets others who have gone through the same process, some of whom immediately embrace their new life but, from the outset, Isobel seems to sense things are not all as they appear. As time goes on, she realises, that perhaps everything she had been told about her new life as a Scion, is a long way from the whole story.
As obviously I don’t want to give away any spoilers I won’t say anymore, rather than assure you, the plot is both intricate and beautifully told. We experience growing friendships and, as the children become young adults, their first loves, all of which are handled with great sensitivity without straying into becoming cloying.
When an author builds a world, however fantastic or far removed from our own, there does need to be a core of truth and this runs through the whole novel like a seam of pure gold. Everything that happens, even those events which are obviously completely removed from reality, the characters never lose their authenticity and so as a reader, you are deeply involved from the beginning to the end. As I understand, this is only the first book meaning there will be others that continue the story which I feel, will come as very welcome news to anyone that has entered this world.
Finally a word about the author, this a debut novel for Ms McConnell, who until this point has published very well received poetry collections. Her gift with words has certainly transitioned into prose with great ease and there are descriptive passages within the book which are extremely lyrical, thus betraying her talent. All in all, this is an incredibly impressive start as a novelist and I have no hesitation in recommending ‘The Sunset Sovereign.’
The story begins with Isobel, a young girl who lives in a small village with her parents who can hear a Voice. To the reader, it appears there’s nothing extraordinary about her other than her imagination but we quickly learn, this means she is a special child who can attend the Calling ceremony. If she is one of the Chosen, Isobel will leave her rural home and go to the mysterious Capital, where, with other children from across the world, she will train to become a Scion. The Scion are those who can communicate with the Sovereigns, the dragons who are guardians of both the Capital and the Outside.
I don’t feel it’s a spoiler to say Isobel is chosen and travels, brimming with excitement and some anxiety, to the Capital to begin her training. She meets others who have gone through the same process, some of whom immediately embrace their new life but, from the outset, Isobel seems to sense things are not all as they appear. As time goes on, she realises, that perhaps everything she had been told about her new life as a Scion, is a long way from the whole story.
As obviously I don’t want to give away any spoilers I won’t say anymore, rather than assure you, the plot is both intricate and beautifully told. We experience growing friendships and, as the children become young adults, their first loves, all of which are handled with great sensitivity without straying into becoming cloying.
When an author builds a world, however fantastic or far removed from our own, there does need to be a core of truth and this runs through the whole novel like a seam of pure gold. Everything that happens, even those events which are obviously completely removed from reality, the characters never lose their authenticity and so as a reader, you are deeply involved from the beginning to the end. As I understand, this is only the first book meaning there will be others that continue the story which I feel, will come as very welcome news to anyone that has entered this world.
Finally a word about the author, this a debut novel for Ms McConnell, who until this point has published very well received poetry collections. Her gift with words has certainly transitioned into prose with great ease and there are descriptive passages within the book which are extremely lyrical, thus betraying her talent. All in all, this is an incredibly impressive start as a novelist and I have no hesitation in recommending ‘The Sunset Sovereign.’
November 25, 2023
Isobel is one of several children who grow up hearing the “Voice,” which are telepathic bonds with dragons who guide children from a young age. When she comes of age, she is chosen to go to the Capital to become a Scion in the hopes to one day directly serve her dragon companion. But the capital is not as it seems.
Much of the beginning of the book was spent exploring the different children that are Chosen, their experiences adjusting to a new location, and how the Capital functions. I admittedly really struggle with books that lack a clear conflict and stakes from the outset of the narrative. The elements of interest, such as the Analysts and the trial for Poll, were one of the most fascinating parts of the book and I wish that, instead of the narrative shoveling these plot points toward the end of the book, that these elements were setup once the children entered the capital. I really loved the moral and ethical stakes introduced with the trial and I wish that arc got the time to really breathe in the narrative. For example, Isobel could have easily learned more about the Capital while she was searching for ways to help Poll. In addition, introducing the Analysts sooner would have added much needed tension while the illusions of the Capital were slowly being unraveled. I also thought that the worldbuilding, especially the culture of the Capital, had room to be more nuanced.
All that being said, I really loved the ending. Once the horror elements really started seeping in, I was invested. I also enjoyed how involved these telepathic dragons were in guiding humanity, and what the pros and cons of this particular worldbuilding choice might look like for humanity. I liked how the trial with Poll was resolved and how ultimately, the book ended on a beautiful haunting note.
This book is perfect for readers looking for a different sort of dragon companion story, a story that has an interesting take of the dragon telepathic bond, cities that exist out of time, and with dystopic/horror elements.
Personal Rating: 3.5 stars
Indie Rating: 5 stars
Much of the beginning of the book was spent exploring the different children that are Chosen, their experiences adjusting to a new location, and how the Capital functions. I admittedly really struggle with books that lack a clear conflict and stakes from the outset of the narrative. The elements of interest, such as the Analysts and the trial for Poll, were one of the most fascinating parts of the book and I wish that, instead of the narrative shoveling these plot points toward the end of the book, that these elements were setup once the children entered the capital. I really loved the moral and ethical stakes introduced with the trial and I wish that arc got the time to really breathe in the narrative. For example, Isobel could have easily learned more about the Capital while she was searching for ways to help Poll. In addition, introducing the Analysts sooner would have added much needed tension while the illusions of the Capital were slowly being unraveled. I also thought that the worldbuilding, especially the culture of the Capital, had room to be more nuanced.
All that being said, I really loved the ending. Once the horror elements really started seeping in, I was invested. I also enjoyed how involved these telepathic dragons were in guiding humanity, and what the pros and cons of this particular worldbuilding choice might look like for humanity. I liked how the trial with Poll was resolved and how ultimately, the book ended on a beautiful haunting note.
This book is perfect for readers looking for a different sort of dragon companion story, a story that has an interesting take of the dragon telepathic bond, cities that exist out of time, and with dystopic/horror elements.
Personal Rating: 3.5 stars
Indie Rating: 5 stars
September 18, 2023
I’ve been searching for a coming-of-age fantasy that tickles both my teenage nostalgia and my need for a strong main character, and I’ve found it in The Sunset Sovereign.
The narrative is familiar, yet elegant. Isobel is a special child chosen for a greater purpose than the circumstances of her birth dictate. She’s taken from her home and brought to the Capital, a place where she and other chosen teens and children are shown their individual gifts and given their purposes.
While the bulk of the book is warmer and dedicated to world building and character exploration through the myriad difficult choices these kids must make, there is a sinister thread running through it that paints the themes of growth and dealing with unwanted changes and ambiguity in a darker light toward the end.
While the story is meant to span several books, it doesn’t *feel* like a cliffhanger. It’s closer to Isobel taking the next step in her development into something greater.
This book is well put together. The characters are rich, and their personalities shine through. I do hope a couple of them carry over into subsequent novels – Hollie and Yvaine being the two I feel most invested in, next to Isobel.
If you’re looking for a focused, fairy tale-like fantasy, this is the book for you.
The narrative is familiar, yet elegant. Isobel is a special child chosen for a greater purpose than the circumstances of her birth dictate. She’s taken from her home and brought to the Capital, a place where she and other chosen teens and children are shown their individual gifts and given their purposes.
While the bulk of the book is warmer and dedicated to world building and character exploration through the myriad difficult choices these kids must make, there is a sinister thread running through it that paints the themes of growth and dealing with unwanted changes and ambiguity in a darker light toward the end.
While the story is meant to span several books, it doesn’t *feel* like a cliffhanger. It’s closer to Isobel taking the next step in her development into something greater.
This book is well put together. The characters are rich, and their personalities shine through. I do hope a couple of them carry over into subsequent novels – Hollie and Yvaine being the two I feel most invested in, next to Isobel.
If you’re looking for a focused, fairy tale-like fantasy, this is the book for you.
August 27, 2023
The Sunset Sovereign is a wonderful story about choices you make and choices made for you. It is set in a world filled with beauty and unknowable beings. E.M. McConnell has created a new and alien race of Dragons. I admit I went in thinking I was going to read a traditional medieval, sword and sorcery type of book but The Sunset Sovereign is a sci-fi/fantasy hybrid written with a poet's ability to capture a moment with an elegant phrase. E.M. McConnell paces the story perfectly building from innocent wonder to paranoid apprehension. This original and engaging story is filled with memorable characters and comes to a very satisfying conclusion leaving us to wonder about the next tale in the saga of the Sovereigns and their Scions.
Side note: beautiful cover and I loved the chapter title font.
Side note: beautiful cover and I loved the chapter title font.
September 30, 2023
I loved THE SUNSET SOVERIGN, a gorgeous coming of age fantasy set in a world where some children begin to hear voices at a young age and are taken from their parents and sent to the Capital for “special” chosen futures. Isobel has always heard the voice of “Rusty”, her sovereign and loves the things he teaches her. She is excited to go to the Capitol and go through the different ceremonies and tests as a supplicant of the sunset sovereign, those chosen to hear the memories of those who are at the ends of their lives. I thought the world building in the novel was outstanding. Such amazing descriptions and really interesting and clever set up. When Isobel is tested with a controversial situation, she is put in a difficult position. Will she go through with the trials? I loved how the book showed the pain her parents go through when giving her up, the different choices those who are chosen to serve the sovereigns must make. I loved Yvaine’s character especially. She was so interesting. And I felt my heart break for Poll on every page. Very well written! 5/5 stars.
July 19, 2024
Excellent book
The author has an excellent talent for writing realistic, complex characters and the moral, political and social dilemmas they must navigate.
The world building in this book is great. Part high fantasy, part future science fiction, it blends to create an intriguing and immersive world.
I loved the sovereigns of this book and I look forward to learning more about them in the sequels. The author shows why some people follow the sovereigns and some don’t, but I want to be a scion!!
Isobel is a wonderful main character. While all the characters are great, I loved her best. I can’t wait to find out what happens to her next.
The author has an excellent talent for writing realistic, complex characters and the moral, political and social dilemmas they must navigate.
The world building in this book is great. Part high fantasy, part future science fiction, it blends to create an intriguing and immersive world.
I loved the sovereigns of this book and I look forward to learning more about them in the sequels. The author shows why some people follow the sovereigns and some don’t, but I want to be a scion!!
Isobel is a wonderful main character. While all the characters are great, I loved her best. I can’t wait to find out what happens to her next.
March 31, 2023
A powerful, highly unusual and beautifully written story. I never knew quite where this was going - it doesn't so much subvert genre expectations as transfigure them. Prepare to be immersed in a world of magic that's as genuine as it gets, where the dragons are utterly unique, and the people who interact with them are changed into something much more than human. Some of the passages in this book are simply mesmerizing. They border on descriptions of a religious experience, and this reader found himself whole-heartedly converted. Exceptional!
June 11, 2023
Just finished this book was so captivating. Complete emotional rollercoaster. I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for the second. So many questions I'm left with. So many parts tearing my heart. Definitely recommend to everyone.
March 18, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this. I found myself warming more and more to all is the characters throughout. I’m very much looking forward to the next instalment and meeting them all again.
May 18, 2025
What a great start to a new fantasy series! From the first pages I was invested in the story, and felt like I was right there with Isobel. There are many mysteries to uncover, and not all are revealed in this book. The author has created a fascinating new world for us to experience and explore, and I’m excited for the next installment.
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