It was fine. I liked that the FMC was an alpha and the MMC, while dominant, was not. I loved the way the author wrote him. He was not threatened in any way by the FMC’s alpha status, pushing her when she needed it and backing off when it was clear she wasn’t ready. He quietly knew what had transpired for her to be coming to his pack but he wanted her to share it with him on her own.
The way the FMC is written is perplexing. She believes everything that went wrong with her previous packs rests solely on her shoulders. But believing that, she keeps making the same mistakes and never works out that the first pack incident in no way could possibly have been her fault. It’s a weird stance for the author to take and I don’t know what she thought she was accomplishing with that perspective because it ultimately makes the FMC look dumb.
Lastly, spellcheck is not your friend. Get a proofreader. Author clearly meant to use the word ‘homey’ but instead used ‘homely’ and they do not mean the same thing; quite the opposite.