This undoubtedly ambitious novel attempts to combine drama, satire and an expose of the financial sector, through examining a selection of lives across London at the end of 2007. Unfortunately, it probably misses more targets than it hits.
Creating a range of characters (most of whom are middle class, some exceeding wealthy), Faulks uses them to conjure a picture of London just before the financial crash. So, we have a failing barrister, a tube driver, a Premiership footballer and a would-be suicide bomber, amongst others. Unfortunately, in the early sections, I wasn’t convinced by a great many of these characters. They mostly seemed somewhat flat and un-lifelike, as if the author knew what he wanted them to represent but hadn’t grasped who they really were. For me, the only two characters who truly leapt out were Hedge Fund Manager John Veals, and bitter literary man R. Tranter. Now both of these are white men of a certain age – as is Sebastian Faulks – and it may be that they came to life easier because he was on a surer footing when creating them. To be fair, as the book continues, the other characters do start to grow so it seems like they have their own existence, but it takes a while to get there.
I was also not particularly convinced by the stabs at satire. In ‘A Week in December’, this largely involves changing something real into something slightly different, but with a sillier name. So that ‘Big Brother’ becomes a show called ‘It’s Madness’ which has people actually diagnosed with mental problems locked together in a house; MySpace (or is it Facebook?) becomes a website called YourPlace; there’s a Damien Hirst-esque artist who’s made a cow out of fifty pounds notes; while literary awards are handed out by high-street chains like ‘Pizza Palace’. Even Liverpool FC’s former striker Robbie Fowler seems to make an appearance, as IQ challenged striker Gary Fowler. But oftentimes these jokes are made and then lie inert on the page, doing nothing but waiting to be made again. These ideas don’t develop or go anywhere. (Curiously, despite there being a different Leader of the Opposition in December 2007, Gordon Brown still appears to be Prime Minister, while John Prescott is a former Deputy Prime Minister. Even Prince Charles, who makes a brief cameo, is the same). It ends up as satire which has a lot more snarl than it does bite.
With so many different plot strands, there’s a high risk that some will fail – but unfortunately Faulks has more than his fair share. There’s briefly an angry teacher in South London, whose plot goes nowhere and does nothing; while more damagingly, given the amount of space it takes up, the suicide bomber plot fizzles out in a most unsatisfactory manner. Indeed, the book’s ending is one of the least successful parts of it. A much mooted dinner party which brings together a lot of the characters we’ve met (and some we haven’t), but fails to resolve anything. Even the moment of confrontation it produces seems to have little consequence. (And really, after what had happened in her life earlier that day, would Mrs Veals really be in the mood to attend?) As such, a book which began flat, ends with a sighed whimper.
There are things I like about this novel. Throughout there are well written passages and some sharp descriptions and dialogue (although, I find it hard to believe that any real person would say “the kind of thing they sell in their most famous high-street family stationer” when they clearly mean W.H. Smiths.) However, there are a lot more disappointments than successes between these covers. In an ideal world Faulks would have focused on either Veals or Tranter, and placed him at the very centre of a book. As it is, there’s a lot of mud to get through to reach the gold.