Maybe I wasn't giving this one my full attention as I listened to the audiobook, but it felt a little light on plot, short in length. Definitely shy on Rochester-involvement. Re: the cover image, there is no mention of him getting doggles for Rochester. I could've sworn when he rented the motorcycle it said he got a helmet for Rochester, but then when he went riding with him, he said he didn't have one. (I know, too many "he's" in that sentence, bad grammar, but I think you can figure it out.) Another biker thing: the one time Lily road on the back with him she wore a DRESS?! Not only is it going to blow around, but I thought bikers always wore something on their legs to protect from road burn in case they go down?
There seem to be fewer errors as the series goes along, but there are still some. Some writing, some reading.
• "...eyes were rimmed with black mascara". Eyes get rimmed with eye liner. Mascara goes on the eye lashes. (Obviously a writing error. Even if the mascara was running, it would only run DOWN, & "rimmed" means something that's all the way around. I suppose theoretically it's possible for someone to use their make-up in the wrong place--using their mascara as eye liner--but I don't think that's what this sentence was trying to say.)
• "...seeing the curls come WANTINGLY loose"
WANTONLY. WAHN-tun-ly. No G. No "ing" sound.
• "...us HONING in on your vacation"
HORNING.
Not sure if those previous 2 are writing or reading errors. But this one is definitely a reading error:
• "...imPOtently"
IM-po-tent-ly