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The Accidental Love #2
An Accidental Scandal
What do you do when the woman you’re trying to forget saves your life?
Fitzwilliam Darcy believes he has finally conquered his infatuation with Elizabeth Bennet, until an unexpected encounter at a London theatre ends in near disaster. As scandal threatens, Darcy must examine his highly-prized sense of duty before he can admit he is in love—and that he has no idea what to do about it.
Elizabeth is determined not to be forced into an unhappy marriage like her parents, but every step she takes to distance herself only brings her closer to Darcy. Is it bad luck or is it fate?
_An Accidental Scandal_ is the second standalone novella in the Accidental Love series. If you enjoy funny stories with smitten heroes, clever heroines, and more than a dash of romance in the regency world of _Pride and Prejudice_, this is the series for you..
Fitzwilliam Darcy believes he has finally conquered his infatuation with Elizabeth Bennet, until an unexpected encounter at a London theatre ends in near disaster. As scandal threatens, Darcy must examine his highly-prized sense of duty before he can admit he is in love—and that he has no idea what to do about it.
Elizabeth is determined not to be forced into an unhappy marriage like her parents, but every step she takes to distance herself only brings her closer to Darcy. Is it bad luck or is it fate?
_An Accidental Scandal_ is the second standalone novella in the Accidental Love series. If you enjoy funny stories with smitten heroes, clever heroines, and more than a dash of romance in the regency world of _Pride and Prejudice_, this is the series for you..
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March 29, 2023
There is no such thing as an accident. What we call by that name is the effect of some cause which we do not see. ~ Voltaire
“An Accidental Scandal” begins with what could have been a fatal accident.
Elizabeth Bennet is leaving a crowded theater after attending with her sister and her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. Someone yells “FIRE” in the crowded theater. At the top of the stairs, Elizabeth recognizes Fitzwilliam Darcy, the man in front of her. He is shoved by a man in the crowd and loses his balance on the stairs. Elizabeth prevents his fall: “There was a sharp tug at the back of his neck. Darcy’s vision cleared enough to see that the slight Miss Elizabeth had taken hold of the front of his cravat, her entire body leaning backwards, her little silk slippers not affording her much purchase on the carpet.”
Elizabeth Bennet also recognizes someone that Darcy could not see: the man who caused the fall. The accident was no accident!
We don’t meet people by accident. They are meant to cross our path for a reason. ~ Author Unknown
Darcy is ultimately saved by Colonel Fitzwilliam who was on a lower step and ran upstairs to push Darcy forward. He falls to the floor, trapping Elizabeth beneath him. Today they would have been embarrassed. In Regency times, their position is considered scandalous.
Canon “Pride & Prejudice” depends on a series of chance meetings to move the plot forward. So, too, does “An Accidental Scandal”.
Relatives encourage both Darcy and Elizabeth to leave London for a time. Neither set of relatives realizes that both people are off to Kent, at Hunsford parsonage and Rosings Park.
Quote from the book: “You must admit, Darcy,” Fitzwilliam said with a little laugh, “either she is the best fortune hunter you or I have ever encountered, or...”
“Or what?”
“Or fate has taken a hand.”
Fate has much more in store.
Misfortunes one can endure. They come from outside. They are accidents. But to suffer for one’s own faults — ah, there is the sting of life. ~ Author Unknown
Scandal or no scandal, Fitzwilliam Darcy must atone for previous slights and court the lady of his choice.
Much repartee is necessary to lead to an understanding. Caroline Bingley receives a set-down from her brother in the presence of her friend, Miss Grantley. Loved it!
I want someone who comes into my life by accident, but stays on purpose. ~ Author Unknown
The author gave me a free copy of this book. I am voluntarily leaving a review.
“An Accidental Scandal” begins with what could have been a fatal accident.
Elizabeth Bennet is leaving a crowded theater after attending with her sister and her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. Someone yells “FIRE” in the crowded theater. At the top of the stairs, Elizabeth recognizes Fitzwilliam Darcy, the man in front of her. He is shoved by a man in the crowd and loses his balance on the stairs. Elizabeth prevents his fall: “There was a sharp tug at the back of his neck. Darcy’s vision cleared enough to see that the slight Miss Elizabeth had taken hold of the front of his cravat, her entire body leaning backwards, her little silk slippers not affording her much purchase on the carpet.”
Elizabeth Bennet also recognizes someone that Darcy could not see: the man who caused the fall. The accident was no accident!
We don’t meet people by accident. They are meant to cross our path for a reason. ~ Author Unknown
Darcy is ultimately saved by Colonel Fitzwilliam who was on a lower step and ran upstairs to push Darcy forward. He falls to the floor, trapping Elizabeth beneath him. Today they would have been embarrassed. In Regency times, their position is considered scandalous.
Canon “Pride & Prejudice” depends on a series of chance meetings to move the plot forward. So, too, does “An Accidental Scandal”.
Relatives encourage both Darcy and Elizabeth to leave London for a time. Neither set of relatives realizes that both people are off to Kent, at Hunsford parsonage and Rosings Park.
Quote from the book: “You must admit, Darcy,” Fitzwilliam said with a little laugh, “either she is the best fortune hunter you or I have ever encountered, or...”
“Or what?”
“Or fate has taken a hand.”
Fate has much more in store.
Misfortunes one can endure. They come from outside. They are accidents. But to suffer for one’s own faults — ah, there is the sting of life. ~ Author Unknown
Scandal or no scandal, Fitzwilliam Darcy must atone for previous slights and court the lady of his choice.
Much repartee is necessary to lead to an understanding. Caroline Bingley receives a set-down from her brother in the presence of her friend, Miss Grantley. Loved it!
I want someone who comes into my life by accident, but stays on purpose. ~ Author Unknown
The author gave me a free copy of this book. I am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 21, 2023
Excellent Book Two in Series
I thoroughly enjoyed this diverting little stand-alone novella, the second book in this Accidental Love Series. Just when Darcy thinks he is over Elizabeth, they are caught up in a potential scandal purely due to an unforeseen and accidental compromise, thanks to a deliberate act on the part of a villain. To escape wagging tongues, Elizabeth and Darcy both leave town, but are again put in each other’s path along the road. They once again part ways, but it won’t be the last time they meet. Darcy family relations play a key role in this story, as do the Gardiners, in keeping the scandal under control.
What I love about many novellas is there’s not much time for our dear couple to overcome past understandings and get to the heart of the matter, which Ms. Rachel has perfectly accomplished in this book. There’s some great communication among the characters, along with a good portion of banter and tongue-in-cheek humour—truly engaging dialogue. ODC really shine in how they handle matters. I definitely smiled often throughout it all.
Highly recommend.
Clean content—hand kisses only.
I thoroughly enjoyed this diverting little stand-alone novella, the second book in this Accidental Love Series. Just when Darcy thinks he is over Elizabeth, they are caught up in a potential scandal purely due to an unforeseen and accidental compromise, thanks to a deliberate act on the part of a villain. To escape wagging tongues, Elizabeth and Darcy both leave town, but are again put in each other’s path along the road. They once again part ways, but it won’t be the last time they meet. Darcy family relations play a key role in this story, as do the Gardiners, in keeping the scandal under control.
What I love about many novellas is there’s not much time for our dear couple to overcome past understandings and get to the heart of the matter, which Ms. Rachel has perfectly accomplished in this book. There’s some great communication among the characters, along with a good portion of banter and tongue-in-cheek humour—truly engaging dialogue. ODC really shine in how they handle matters. I definitely smiled often throughout it all.
Highly recommend.
Clean content—hand kisses only.
September 23, 2023
“Accidents ambush the unsuspecting, often violently, just like love.” –Andrew Davidson, The Gargoyle
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Clean of sexual content but mild cursing.
>>Angst Level: mostly stressful due to the machinations of the villains and ODC caught in the middle. I actually broke out in a nervous sweat during the height of the action.
>>Source: This was borrowed from KU 9-22-23 and I volunteered to leave a review. 18 Chapters plus an epilogue.
>>Trope: accident, compromise [sort of], scandal
“We do not suffer by accident.” –Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
I first read an excerpt of this story and knew I had to read it. I was not disappointed. Melanie Rachel did not give away all the secrets at once. Nope, tidbits would be revealed along the way. Oh-My-Gosh! Several were doozies and I did not see them coming.
The night before Elizabeth, Sir William, and Maria Lucas would travel to Kent, Gardiner had rented a box at the theatre. Plans never go as predicted. Sir William and Maria were unable to attend and Elizabeth’s night out did not go as she hoped. After the performance, as the crowd began to exit, someone yelled fire. Elizabeth suddenly found herself caught in a crush of people attempting to escape. Mr. Darcy was caught on the stairs and someone pushed him causing him to lose his balance. Elizabeth saw it all and grabbed for him and held him thus keeping him from going over the banister. Someone pushed Darcy from the back hard enough to propel him forward and up the stairs. He was unable to stop his momentum and landed on top of Miss Elizabeth who had been holding him by his cravat. The crazed crowd was finally assured that there was NO fire and they soon calmed. Several people teased Darcy for his behavior with the lady. Gardiner quickly arrived to protect Lizzy. No introductions were made as they did not want names mentioned in public.
Damage Control: Both families were now busy trying to do damage control. After the paper began posting salacious comments about the incident, Elizabeth was sent on her journey to Kent. The Earl of Matlock convinced Darcy to leave town to quiet the gossip. He and his cousin Fitzwilliam journeyed toward Kent earlier than they were scheduled. Dun-da-dun! Darcy and Fitzwilliam encountered a broken-down carriage and when Darcy approached the scene, he was greeted by Sir William. Elizabeth was bruised and had sustained an injured ankle.
Lady Catherine was not pleased Elizabeth was at the parsonage and ordered Collins to kick her out. Charlotte politely went toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine and assured her that Miss Elizabeth would leave first thing the next morning. It was too late for her to safely leave that night. Lady Catherine did not care for the safety of their guest. She was to leave that night. Charlotte prevailed and good Lady stormed out of the parsonage leaving behind a distraught Mr. Collins. The next day Charlotte [sneaky lady that she was] put Elizabeth in Mr. Darcy’s carriage. It was returning to London after resting the horses overnight. Charlotte had also supplied a maid and footman for Eliza’s reputation. That was way too cool.
The rest of the story is about Darcy coming to grips with his feelings and conquering his pride. Elizabeth was coming to terms with her ability to sketch people and her growing feelings. She had been woefully wrong about so many things and she needed to understand Mr. Darcy before she could agree to anything between them.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Clean of sexual content but mild cursing.
>>Angst Level: mostly stressful due to the machinations of the villains and ODC caught in the middle. I actually broke out in a nervous sweat during the height of the action.
>>Source: This was borrowed from KU 9-22-23 and I volunteered to leave a review. 18 Chapters plus an epilogue.
>>Trope: accident, compromise [sort of], scandal
“We do not suffer by accident.” –Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
I first read an excerpt of this story and knew I had to read it. I was not disappointed. Melanie Rachel did not give away all the secrets at once. Nope, tidbits would be revealed along the way. Oh-My-Gosh! Several were doozies and I did not see them coming.
The night before Elizabeth, Sir William, and Maria Lucas would travel to Kent, Gardiner had rented a box at the theatre. Plans never go as predicted. Sir William and Maria were unable to attend and Elizabeth’s night out did not go as she hoped. After the performance, as the crowd began to exit, someone yelled fire. Elizabeth suddenly found herself caught in a crush of people attempting to escape. Mr. Darcy was caught on the stairs and someone pushed him causing him to lose his balance. Elizabeth saw it all and grabbed for him and held him thus keeping him from going over the banister. Someone pushed Darcy from the back hard enough to propel him forward and up the stairs. He was unable to stop his momentum and landed on top of Miss Elizabeth who had been holding him by his cravat. The crazed crowd was finally assured that there was NO fire and they soon calmed. Several people teased Darcy for his behavior with the lady. Gardiner quickly arrived to protect Lizzy. No introductions were made as they did not want names mentioned in public.
Damage Control: Both families were now busy trying to do damage control. After the paper began posting salacious comments about the incident, Elizabeth was sent on her journey to Kent. The Earl of Matlock convinced Darcy to leave town to quiet the gossip. He and his cousin Fitzwilliam journeyed toward Kent earlier than they were scheduled. Dun-da-dun! Darcy and Fitzwilliam encountered a broken-down carriage and when Darcy approached the scene, he was greeted by Sir William. Elizabeth was bruised and had sustained an injured ankle.
Lady Catherine was not pleased Elizabeth was at the parsonage and ordered Collins to kick her out. Charlotte politely went toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine and assured her that Miss Elizabeth would leave first thing the next morning. It was too late for her to safely leave that night. Lady Catherine did not care for the safety of their guest. She was to leave that night. Charlotte prevailed and good Lady stormed out of the parsonage leaving behind a distraught Mr. Collins. The next day Charlotte [sneaky lady that she was] put Elizabeth in Mr. Darcy’s carriage. It was returning to London after resting the horses overnight. Charlotte had also supplied a maid and footman for Eliza’s reputation. That was way too cool.
The rest of the story is about Darcy coming to grips with his feelings and conquering his pride. Elizabeth was coming to terms with her ability to sketch people and her growing feelings. She had been woefully wrong about so many things and she needed to understand Mr. Darcy before she could agree to anything between them.
April 4, 2023
thank you Wickham
The accidental scandal is caused by Wickham. But that isn’t important. The story is about everyone trying to negate the scandal or control it. Kind a pretty normal, nothing new here premise.
But the author makes a so-so premise into a 5 star story. Loved it.
The accidental scandal is caused by Wickham. But that isn’t important. The story is about everyone trying to negate the scandal or control it. Kind a pretty normal, nothing new here premise.
But the author makes a so-so premise into a 5 star story. Loved it.
June 30, 2023
Elizabeth attends a play with the Gardiners and Jane and steps out at the end before the others follows. What happens next has to do with the title. Elizabeth basically saves Darcy from a severe fall down some stairs but that results in him landing on top of her. Compromise!
Although Darcy is careful not to say her name out loud, both know he is under obligation to marry her. Both decide to leave London, relying on the gossip settling down. Ironically, they both travel to Kent, she to visit Charlotte, he to visit his aunt. They meet on the road. Lady C. is worse than in canon.
This story has ODC trying to delay the consequences of that initial accident. However, as Darcy comes to know Elizabeth better and better, he admits he is in love. Elizabeth remains prejudiced against him as Wickham has filled her ear with his story. Soon Darcy's character shines through and upon meeting Georgiana and realizing that W. lied about her, Elizbeth realizes Darcy is not the man W. described.
The Gardiners play a large role and it is not just in counseling Elizabeth. Mr. Gardiner's business sense is part of the story...especially in the free extra epilogue available at the end of this story.
Lydia is not part of story. However Wickham's search for an heiress is. His fate is different in this story.
Jane and Bingley meet again in London. And Bingley deals with Caroline in a satisfying manner.
I had read the first in this series and will continue to read this author's stories as I do enjoy them. Although this is a shorter story there is lots going on with maneuvering to downplay the gossip.
Although Darcy is careful not to say her name out loud, both know he is under obligation to marry her. Both decide to leave London, relying on the gossip settling down. Ironically, they both travel to Kent, she to visit Charlotte, he to visit his aunt. They meet on the road. Lady C. is worse than in canon.
This story has ODC trying to delay the consequences of that initial accident. However, as Darcy comes to know Elizabeth better and better, he admits he is in love. Elizabeth remains prejudiced against him as Wickham has filled her ear with his story. Soon Darcy's character shines through and upon meeting Georgiana and realizing that W. lied about her, Elizbeth realizes Darcy is not the man W. described.
The Gardiners play a large role and it is not just in counseling Elizabeth. Mr. Gardiner's business sense is part of the story...especially in the free extra epilogue available at the end of this story.
Lydia is not part of story. However Wickham's search for an heiress is. His fate is different in this story.
Jane and Bingley meet again in London. And Bingley deals with Caroline in a satisfying manner.
I had read the first in this series and will continue to read this author's stories as I do enjoy them. Although this is a shorter story there is lots going on with maneuvering to downplay the gossip.
July 5, 2023
A courageous attempt to save Mr. Darcy from injury ends in an embarrassing accident that starts scandalous rumors spreading about Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. There are of course spiteful people happy to spread them or add more venom to the situation. But as Colonel Fitzwilliam says, sometimes something is just fated.
This is a unique variation on Pride and Prejudice that resolves faster than the original, and in sometimes humorous ways.
This is a unique variation on Pride and Prejudice that resolves faster than the original, and in sometimes humorous ways.
June 24, 2023
Loved it!
July 13, 2023
Opened with an explosive event
I loved this book. The author has a great ability to grab my attention from the very beginning. The story lives up to the title with one shocking scene after another. One near death accident is succeeded by a compromising rescue witnessed by a huge Ton crowd and the gossip goes around London like wildfire.
Elizabeth Bennet’s planned trip to visit Charlotte Collins with Charlotte’s father and sister is interrupted by their carriage breaking down and Elizabeth being injured. Then who should rescue them but Darcy and his cousin the Colonel. The footmen witness Darcy’s concern over the injured Elizabeth and their tongues waggle that surprising action to the servants at Rosings after delivering Elizabeth’s party to the parsonage in grand style in the Darcy coach.
It goes downhill from there when Lady Catherine hears the rumors and bursts into the parsonage to scream Elizabeth out of the house evicting her from the house, and the town not concerned with the fact that it’s dark and she has no carriage or any other means to actually leave. Thank goodness Charlotte has grown a backbone and refuses to kick Elizabeth out of her house. Then Charlotte helps Elizabeth to get back to London with a little plan of her own. And we’re still barely a third of the way through the story.
Whew! The plot is so compelling and of course the writing is great. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam have duel agendas but throughout the story Fitzwilliam has Darcy’s back, and I love it when they have this friendship, this brotherhood, in JAFF variations.
In An Accidental Scandal, the Gardiners play an important part and together with the Colonel’s family, who are not only supportive but fascinating. It’s so much fun watching Darcy’s aunt use her influence in society. Meanwhile, Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is evolving and resolving at a lovely romantic pace. Jane is a great support for Elizabeth in this story.
I loved everything about this story and I don’t think have spoiled anything. There are a lot of goodies to discover and I hope you do so soon. Highly recommended!
I loved this book. The author has a great ability to grab my attention from the very beginning. The story lives up to the title with one shocking scene after another. One near death accident is succeeded by a compromising rescue witnessed by a huge Ton crowd and the gossip goes around London like wildfire.
Elizabeth Bennet’s planned trip to visit Charlotte Collins with Charlotte’s father and sister is interrupted by their carriage breaking down and Elizabeth being injured. Then who should rescue them but Darcy and his cousin the Colonel. The footmen witness Darcy’s concern over the injured Elizabeth and their tongues waggle that surprising action to the servants at Rosings after delivering Elizabeth’s party to the parsonage in grand style in the Darcy coach.
It goes downhill from there when Lady Catherine hears the rumors and bursts into the parsonage to scream Elizabeth out of the house evicting her from the house, and the town not concerned with the fact that it’s dark and she has no carriage or any other means to actually leave. Thank goodness Charlotte has grown a backbone and refuses to kick Elizabeth out of her house. Then Charlotte helps Elizabeth to get back to London with a little plan of her own. And we’re still barely a third of the way through the story.
Whew! The plot is so compelling and of course the writing is great. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam have duel agendas but throughout the story Fitzwilliam has Darcy’s back, and I love it when they have this friendship, this brotherhood, in JAFF variations.
In An Accidental Scandal, the Gardiners play an important part and together with the Colonel’s family, who are not only supportive but fascinating. It’s so much fun watching Darcy’s aunt use her influence in society. Meanwhile, Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is evolving and resolving at a lovely romantic pace. Jane is a great support for Elizabeth in this story.
I loved everything about this story and I don’t think have spoiled anything. There are a lot of goodies to discover and I hope you do so soon. Highly recommended!
July 24, 2023
Avid Reader
Although Wickham could have caused Darcy and Elizabeth serious injuries, he didn't. He eventually caused himself more harm because he actually had to work for a living, something he never wanted to do! Darcy and Elizabeth made the best of a trying situation. Lady Catherine was a piece of work, but she didn't get her way.
Although Wickham could have caused Darcy and Elizabeth serious injuries, he didn't. He eventually caused himself more harm because he actually had to work for a living, something he never wanted to do! Darcy and Elizabeth made the best of a trying situation. Lady Catherine was a piece of work, but she didn't get her way.
April 19, 2025
4.5 stars
April 9, 2023
Sometimes a plot is memorable, but most of the time, I forget them within weeks of reading them. Seriously. But this one, I won't forget, probably because the title is so clarifying, and the one part of the book (I won't spoil if for you, but it's the initial part of a rescue) is so distinctive, I won't forget it. It was almost "could that really happen?"--but I think it could.
I write technical reviews, so there won't be much in the way of subjective analysis or a synopsis.
-With a fantastic, new, and singular premise extremely well plotted out and carried through to a satisfying ending, the main plot is excellent. Some side issues and redundancies do mar it a little.
-Pacing has some slow spots where side stories related to minor characters are drawn out and the early action is retold, but otherwise the forward action keeps one's interest throughout. The early action scene (a rescue) is fast-paced and well-written.
- POV is third person alternating with no head-hopping.
- "Showing, not telling" mode is used successfully.
- Language attempts to be a comfortable reading tone with some Regency style; however, ten non-Regency words or phrases, four non-British uses, and three misused or misspelled phrases were found, above average for a book of this length. Thing is, if I found one mistake, guaranteed I missed another. No dictionary-sized words were found--kudos to the author for not trying to wow the reader with vocabulary.
- The author chose to use the fanon "mask" rather than something more original to describe a neutral facial expression.
- A canon error was that the author missed the fact that Mrs. Younge lived on Edward St.
- A Regency error was that the Argyll Rooms were a disreputable concert hall. It was a place where rich men took their mistresses to see lewd shows. I myself only learned this recently!
- Some new characters should not have gotten as much on-camera time as they were given--they added nothing to the plot and instead, distracted from the story arc. Otherwise, character usage was true to Austen, with minor or new characters being well drafted.
- The romance developed on a believable arc, with appropriate passion shown between the protagonists.
- Although the cover could be for any book, there's evidence of a scene from within this specific novel, making it special. Balance, fonts, size, and colour are all good. It just won't stand out all that well among all those competing covers with a similar polyester/blow-dried man and lady on them, and I feel for the author on that point. It's hard to make your book look enough like the others so as to identify the genre, yet special enough to say "buy me."
Melanie Rachel is a gifted story teller and specifically, has great ideas for very different stories that suit all types of JAFF readers. This book is no exception, taking a vibrant action scene and developing it into a bit of a mild mystery, with the romance following along as we would hope. Some of the scenes had me with all the symptoms I write for tension in my characters, giving me excellent writing fodder. This is a go-to author, who could use an editor with a better eye next time. They're out there editing other authors' books.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might say this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
I write technical reviews, so there won't be much in the way of subjective analysis or a synopsis.
-With a fantastic, new, and singular premise extremely well plotted out and carried through to a satisfying ending, the main plot is excellent. Some side issues and redundancies do mar it a little.
-Pacing has some slow spots where side stories related to minor characters are drawn out and the early action is retold, but otherwise the forward action keeps one's interest throughout. The early action scene (a rescue) is fast-paced and well-written.
- POV is third person alternating with no head-hopping.
- "Showing, not telling" mode is used successfully.
- Language attempts to be a comfortable reading tone with some Regency style; however, ten non-Regency words or phrases, four non-British uses, and three misused or misspelled phrases were found, above average for a book of this length. Thing is, if I found one mistake, guaranteed I missed another. No dictionary-sized words were found--kudos to the author for not trying to wow the reader with vocabulary.
- The author chose to use the fanon "mask" rather than something more original to describe a neutral facial expression.
- A canon error was that the author missed the fact that Mrs. Younge lived on Edward St.
- A Regency error was that the Argyll Rooms were a disreputable concert hall. It was a place where rich men took their mistresses to see lewd shows. I myself only learned this recently!
- Some new characters should not have gotten as much on-camera time as they were given--they added nothing to the plot and instead, distracted from the story arc. Otherwise, character usage was true to Austen, with minor or new characters being well drafted.
- The romance developed on a believable arc, with appropriate passion shown between the protagonists.
- Although the cover could be for any book, there's evidence of a scene from within this specific novel, making it special. Balance, fonts, size, and colour are all good. It just won't stand out all that well among all those competing covers with a similar polyester/blow-dried man and lady on them, and I feel for the author on that point. It's hard to make your book look enough like the others so as to identify the genre, yet special enough to say "buy me."
Melanie Rachel is a gifted story teller and specifically, has great ideas for very different stories that suit all types of JAFF readers. This book is no exception, taking a vibrant action scene and developing it into a bit of a mild mystery, with the romance following along as we would hope. Some of the scenes had me with all the symptoms I write for tension in my characters, giving me excellent writing fodder. This is a go-to author, who could use an editor with a better eye next time. They're out there editing other authors' books.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author, and some might say this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
June 9, 2024
Interesting premise
I don't think I have ever read a story with mostly a London setting. I found it entertaining and a novel idea. The interactions and dialogs are great!
I don't think I have ever read a story with mostly a London setting. I found it entertaining and a novel idea. The interactions and dialogs are great!
August 22, 2024
i love that when lizzy and darcy just talk to each other everything goes so smoothly. my favorite miscommunicative couple ever
August 24, 2023
Its a bit fun even though serious for the times
This is a story full of 17th century compromises. Elizabeth is at the theater when Darcy is pushed and almost falls to certain death except for her grabbing his cravat until someone assists him. Later on her way to Hunsford to escape the gossips a carriage accident results in injury and her receiving a ride to Hunsford in Darcy's carriage ( without him). There she finds more trouble AKA Lady Catherine! Most of this story is of the attempts of the Gardiners, the Matlocks, several family members in the Ton, Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam all to mitigate the " scandal " from the accidents. Of course we find the scoundrel Wickham is involved in the entire mess.
During my reading of this story I was thinking about the huge difference between attitudes in 1811 English society and 2023 society and how very shocking Darcy would be over the huge difference! In his time catching a glimpse of an unmarried woman's ankle was a massive scandal while today even explicit sex tapes don't create much drama! Its an interesting story and worth reading. Miss Rachel has once again written a great story!
This is a story full of 17th century compromises. Elizabeth is at the theater when Darcy is pushed and almost falls to certain death except for her grabbing his cravat until someone assists him. Later on her way to Hunsford to escape the gossips a carriage accident results in injury and her receiving a ride to Hunsford in Darcy's carriage ( without him). There she finds more trouble AKA Lady Catherine! Most of this story is of the attempts of the Gardiners, the Matlocks, several family members in the Ton, Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam all to mitigate the " scandal " from the accidents. Of course we find the scoundrel Wickham is involved in the entire mess.
During my reading of this story I was thinking about the huge difference between attitudes in 1811 English society and 2023 society and how very shocking Darcy would be over the huge difference! In his time catching a glimpse of an unmarried woman's ankle was a massive scandal while today even explicit sex tapes don't create much drama! Its an interesting story and worth reading. Miss Rachel has once again written a great story!
April 14, 2023
After attending a performance in a London theater Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy meet there by chance. Before they can speak to each other, there is an incident which ends in a scandal for both. By chance (or fate?) they meet each other again at Rosings. Here they are not able to speak to each other or get to know each other better, too, because Lady Catherine learns from the events at London and Elizabeth is forced to leave Rosings. Back in London, at her uncles house, Elizabeth encounters … Darcy. Will they now be able to speak to each other thoroughly and get to know and understand each other better? Or will the accidental scandal at the theater force them to do things they don’t want to do? Is there a chance of happiness at all?
The author Melanie Rachel has written a sweet little story, perfectly suitable for an cosy evening at home. The story is well written, you don’t want to put it down because you want to know if our dear couple find their love for each other at the end.
In this book Darcy cares much about Elizabeth from the very beginning but Elizabeth needs more time to like and love Darcy because when they first met she is just about thinking if everything Wickham has told her about Darcy is right. She has, also with the help of other people’s opinion, to reconsider her opinions of Darcy and put her prejudices aside. And than she is able to recognize that she, too, can like and love Darcy.
Another thing I like very much in this story is the relationship between Darcy and the Colonel. They are teasing each other in the hole book (well, Darcy is more often the victim of the Colonel) and it is so much fun to read. But when needed the Colonel is there to help Darcy, as the hole Darcy/Fitzwilliam family and the Gardiners. I like that they all are doing their best to bring Darcy and Elizabeth together and to avert the scandal.
I highly recommend this lovely story and will certainly read it again soon.
The author Melanie Rachel has written a sweet little story, perfectly suitable for an cosy evening at home. The story is well written, you don’t want to put it down because you want to know if our dear couple find their love for each other at the end.
In this book Darcy cares much about Elizabeth from the very beginning but Elizabeth needs more time to like and love Darcy because when they first met she is just about thinking if everything Wickham has told her about Darcy is right. She has, also with the help of other people’s opinion, to reconsider her opinions of Darcy and put her prejudices aside. And than she is able to recognize that she, too, can like and love Darcy.
Another thing I like very much in this story is the relationship between Darcy and the Colonel. They are teasing each other in the hole book (well, Darcy is more often the victim of the Colonel) and it is so much fun to read. But when needed the Colonel is there to help Darcy, as the hole Darcy/Fitzwilliam family and the Gardiners. I like that they all are doing their best to bring Darcy and Elizabeth together and to avert the scandal.
I highly recommend this lovely story and will certainly read it again soon.
October 28, 2024
What a story. A scandal in middle of London. Reluctant Darcy and resentful Elizabeth face situations where they must ask questions about their judgement, their prejudices and their definitions of love and respect
Elizabeth learns about Darcy quickly from the way he behaves in crisis, his care for her, his praise from Hunsford parsonage maid and her own observations
Darcy and Richard learn the hard way on how not to judge people based on their standing in society or their preconceived notions about people.
Both E and D successfully navigate the London society and the scandal surrounding them with help of Lord and Lady Matlock, Mr and Mrs Gardiner
Darcy's realization of Jane's feelings for Bingley and Elizabeth's realization of how much Darcy is esteemed because he is kind, trustworthy and best of gentleman from Agnes the maid were worth reading
The best part of this book is we get to peek in both of their heads and see how guilty/ashamed they feel when they know the truths and how they change themselves.
the side characters were excellent, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner were assertive, intelligent and caring. Lady Matlock was wonderful, Charlotte was deviously intelligent (in a good way), Viscount steals the show with only handful of shows. Caroline Bingley gets a public set down from her brother (Darcy gets a private one from bingley. that was awesome)
Ohh and Wickham is there. he gets what he deserves and along with Richard, i cant stop laughing
Elizabeth learns about Darcy quickly from the way he behaves in crisis, his care for her, his praise from Hunsford parsonage maid and her own observations
Darcy and Richard learn the hard way on how not to judge people based on their standing in society or their preconceived notions about people.
Both E and D successfully navigate the London society and the scandal surrounding them with help of Lord and Lady Matlock, Mr and Mrs Gardiner
Darcy's realization of Jane's feelings for Bingley and Elizabeth's realization of how much Darcy is esteemed because he is kind, trustworthy and best of gentleman from Agnes the maid were worth reading
The best part of this book is we get to peek in both of their heads and see how guilty/ashamed they feel when they know the truths and how they change themselves.
the side characters were excellent, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner were assertive, intelligent and caring. Lady Matlock was wonderful, Charlotte was deviously intelligent (in a good way), Viscount steals the show with only handful of shows. Caroline Bingley gets a public set down from her brother (Darcy gets a private one from bingley. that was awesome)
Ohh and Wickham is there. he gets what he deserves and along with Richard, i cant stop laughing
April 10, 2023
Another winner
This author is an automatic purchase for me since I've read everything available from her on Kindle, and have never been disappointed. The story begins when Elizabeth, on her way to visit Charlotte Collins in Kent, stays with the Gardiners in London. They go to the theater, where Elizabeth encounters Darcy, and there's an incident that has the potential for scandal involving the two of them. At this point, Elizabeth still has no great opinion of Darcy, and Darcy is finding that he's powerless against his strong attraction to Elizabeth. During the subsequent campaign to avoid scandal, Elizabeth quickly realizes that her first impression of Darcy may have been flawed.
I so much appreciate that this author knows how to write humor. The clever and playful banter between many of the main characters is superb, and such fun. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and an Elizabeth who, fortunately, doesn't fight too long against her growing appreciation of Darcy's good qualities. The Gardiners are wonderful in this version, even more so than usual.
The book is well written and well edited. I only wish it was a full length novel because I didn't want the fun to end. I hope this author will create more novel-length stories. I recommend it highly.
This author is an automatic purchase for me since I've read everything available from her on Kindle, and have never been disappointed. The story begins when Elizabeth, on her way to visit Charlotte Collins in Kent, stays with the Gardiners in London. They go to the theater, where Elizabeth encounters Darcy, and there's an incident that has the potential for scandal involving the two of them. At this point, Elizabeth still has no great opinion of Darcy, and Darcy is finding that he's powerless against his strong attraction to Elizabeth. During the subsequent campaign to avoid scandal, Elizabeth quickly realizes that her first impression of Darcy may have been flawed.
I so much appreciate that this author knows how to write humor. The clever and playful banter between many of the main characters is superb, and such fun. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and an Elizabeth who, fortunately, doesn't fight too long against her growing appreciation of Darcy's good qualities. The Gardiners are wonderful in this version, even more so than usual.
The book is well written and well edited. I only wish it was a full length novel because I didn't want the fun to end. I hope this author will create more novel-length stories. I recommend it highly.
June 16, 2023
An excellent variation with a most magnificent Elizabeth
This reader has always loved any P&P variation which features a very intelligent Elizabeth full of integrity, not willing to compromise her principles and requirements for marriage. Elizabeth Bennet is depicted here as very exacting and pointed in her words to Mr. Darcy during their initial confrontations after the incident that resulted to the “accidental scandal”. And that is the very core of what makes this variation memorable and exceptional: the set-downs, the honesty in words, the witty and heartfelt exchanges between the beloved couple, their relations and their detractors. It’s also heartwarming how Mr. Darcy truly means to change for the better, not only for Elizabeth, but for a woman worthy to be pleased. Therefore, he pleads his case to Elizabeth without being patronizing or pathetically begging. Although he learns to humble himself before the woman he loves and whose heart he seeks to win, he still maintains his honorable pride and adorable traits that makes Elizabeth easily decide in the gentleman’s favor.
A wonderfully paced, 5-star, highly-recommended variation by an impressive author, worthy to be followed.
This reader has always loved any P&P variation which features a very intelligent Elizabeth full of integrity, not willing to compromise her principles and requirements for marriage. Elizabeth Bennet is depicted here as very exacting and pointed in her words to Mr. Darcy during their initial confrontations after the incident that resulted to the “accidental scandal”. And that is the very core of what makes this variation memorable and exceptional: the set-downs, the honesty in words, the witty and heartfelt exchanges between the beloved couple, their relations and their detractors. It’s also heartwarming how Mr. Darcy truly means to change for the better, not only for Elizabeth, but for a woman worthy to be pleased. Therefore, he pleads his case to Elizabeth without being patronizing or pathetically begging. Although he learns to humble himself before the woman he loves and whose heart he seeks to win, he still maintains his honorable pride and adorable traits that makes Elizabeth easily decide in the gentleman’s favor.
A wonderfully paced, 5-star, highly-recommended variation by an impressive author, worthy to be followed.
June 17, 2024
I loved it! It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is the second standalone novella in the Accidental Love Series. If you enjoy funny stories with smitten heroes, clever heroines, and more than a dash of romance in the regency world of Pride and Prejudice, this is the series for you. What do you do when the woman you’re trying to forget saves your life? Fitzwilliam Darcy believes he has finally conquered his infatuation with Elizabeth Bennet, until an unexpected encounter at a London theatre ends in near disaster. As scandal threatens, Darcy must examine his highly-prized sense of duty before he can admit he is in love, and that he has no idea what to do about it. Elizabeth is determined not to be forced into an unhappy marriage like her parents, but every step she takes to distance herself only brings her closer to Darcy. Is it bad luck or is it fate? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
June 21, 2023
Fun and well written
I'm rating this as 4 1/2 stars, rounded up to 5. The story is fun, and the characters are mostly in-character, with a good dynamic between the couples (Darcy and Elizabeth, Bingley and Jane, the Gardiners, and even Charlotte and Mr. Collins). There's a wonderful conflict with Lady Catherine and several excellent group scenes that bring out each character's wit nicely. I also really liked this version of Jane. She was herself, yet smarter and stronger and more protective.
The quality of the writing itself was very good. There were only a few typos, and the only grammatical issue was a tendency to use simple past tense in some places where past perfect should have been used. Unfortunately, almost no one seems to get that right these days, but this author was a lot better than most. Beyond that, the wording was often subtle and clever and enhanced the storyline, rather than taking away from it, as I frequently see. I recommend this book and will look for others by this author.
I'm rating this as 4 1/2 stars, rounded up to 5. The story is fun, and the characters are mostly in-character, with a good dynamic between the couples (Darcy and Elizabeth, Bingley and Jane, the Gardiners, and even Charlotte and Mr. Collins). There's a wonderful conflict with Lady Catherine and several excellent group scenes that bring out each character's wit nicely. I also really liked this version of Jane. She was herself, yet smarter and stronger and more protective.
The quality of the writing itself was very good. There were only a few typos, and the only grammatical issue was a tendency to use simple past tense in some places where past perfect should have been used. Unfortunately, almost no one seems to get that right these days, but this author was a lot better than most. Beyond that, the wording was often subtle and clever and enhanced the storyline, rather than taking away from it, as I frequently see. I recommend this book and will look for others by this author.
February 6, 2024
This was such a cute read! I do enjoy a good compromise, and "An Accidental Scandal," by Melanie Rachel, delivered one in such a sweet, humorous way! The book description sets up the story for the reader perfectly, so I will just state why I enjoyed this book so much.
First, although Darcy and Elizabeth seem fated to keep encountering one another, there is a new approach to their happy-ever-after from this author. Instead of the presumed compromise leaving the couple brooding and wringing their hands, they come together with family to determine how best to handle the situation. And oh, so cleverly done!
I loved the author's humorous play while telling this story. I laughed so hard at so many lines in the book. Lizzy wasn't the only witty character, making for such entertaining reading. The book is very light-hearted and most enjoyable to read!
First, although Darcy and Elizabeth seem fated to keep encountering one another, there is a new approach to their happy-ever-after from this author. Instead of the presumed compromise leaving the couple brooding and wringing their hands, they come together with family to determine how best to handle the situation. And oh, so cleverly done!
I loved the author's humorous play while telling this story. I laughed so hard at so many lines in the book. Lizzy wasn't the only witty character, making for such entertaining reading. The book is very light-hearted and most enjoyable to read!
May 25, 2024
Spoiler!!!! In questa variazione i protagonisti sono praticamente i Gardiner. Il loro mondo del commercio viene messo in risalto come non é nel romanzo originale e continuamente messo a confronto con quello della nobiltà.
Per quanto riguarda la trama, l'espediente dell'incidente a teatro lascia il tempo che trova. La storia della presa per la cravatta mi sembra un po' eccessiva e nel finale la descrizione della proposta con tanto di sgabelli mi sembra un po' assurda.
Non capisco a cosa serva per lo svolgimento della trama il fatto che il padre non ha letto le lettere .
Credo che l'autrice abbia fatto uno sforzo, ma mi aspetto di più da Darcy ed Elisabeth perché mancano le loro discussioni e gli accesi confronti. Mancano l'orgoglio ed i pregiudizi che secondo me, nonostante siano comunque variazioni, devono essere sempre presenti.
Per quanto riguarda la trama, l'espediente dell'incidente a teatro lascia il tempo che trova. La storia della presa per la cravatta mi sembra un po' eccessiva e nel finale la descrizione della proposta con tanto di sgabelli mi sembra un po' assurda.
Non capisco a cosa serva per lo svolgimento della trama il fatto che il padre non ha letto le lettere .
Credo che l'autrice abbia fatto uno sforzo, ma mi aspetto di più da Darcy ed Elisabeth perché mancano le loro discussioni e gli accesi confronti. Mancano l'orgoglio ed i pregiudizi che secondo me, nonostante siano comunque variazioni, devono essere sempre presenti.
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July 5, 2024
For only being 150 pages, this took me a long time to get through. I'm an audiobook gal, and this didn't have audio. I read it with my eyes ... and while I liked this, my eyes kept closing (I guess as I'd generally wait until end of day).
I struggled with the start - it didn't really pull me in. I'm not so much frustrated with the writing as with the time, the whole "scandal/ruined" ... that there could be a turmoil (someone shouting "fire" in a crowded theater) and having Darcy/Elizabeth end up crumpled together and ... oh the gossip!
Once that was over and the story started up, I liked it a LOT more. The events, the repartee between E&D, the slow build, all seemed true to the original ... up until the party/engagement, which like the beginning, seemed overblown and over the top.
This is the only one of the "accidental" series I've read.
I struggled with the start - it didn't really pull me in. I'm not so much frustrated with the writing as with the time, the whole "scandal/ruined" ... that there could be a turmoil (someone shouting "fire" in a crowded theater) and having Darcy/Elizabeth end up crumpled together and ... oh the gossip!
Once that was over and the story started up, I liked it a LOT more. The events, the repartee between E&D, the slow build, all seemed true to the original ... up until the party/engagement, which like the beginning, seemed overblown and over the top.
This is the only one of the "accidental" series I've read.
March 29, 2023
Meetings and bruises and falls, Oh my!
Darcy, returned to London from Netherfield after the Ball, thinks he is “over” his “infatuation” with Lizzy, and then he literally falls in her lap at the theatre. Scrambling to avoid scandal, Darcy’s family and Lizzy’s family set up more and more difficult situations as our dear couple find out plenty of truths about each other. Whether you call it coincidence, providence, fate, or just plain luck, these two are meant to be together and there are plenty of giggles along the way, despite some difficult and sneaky villains. Delightfully Austenesque in wit, wry humor, and coincidence.
I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
Darcy, returned to London from Netherfield after the Ball, thinks he is “over” his “infatuation” with Lizzy, and then he literally falls in her lap at the theatre. Scrambling to avoid scandal, Darcy’s family and Lizzy’s family set up more and more difficult situations as our dear couple find out plenty of truths about each other. Whether you call it coincidence, providence, fate, or just plain luck, these two are meant to be together and there are plenty of giggles along the way, despite some difficult and sneaky villains. Delightfully Austenesque in wit, wry humor, and coincidence.
I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
April 2, 2023
Another delightful book from this author! I'm sure I will be re-reading it many times. The dialogue is witty and the characters wonderful. I liked this Darcy very much.
I especially liked the cleverness of Lady Matlock conspiring with Mrs. Gardiner to mitigate the effects of the gossip, and the way the rest of Darcy's family rallied around him. His determination to do what he could to help and protect Elizabeth was sweet, and he was so nice to her while he tried to convince her that she should accept his marriage proposal. Lady Catherine was horrible, but I loved the way that Charlotte and Elizabeth stood up to her - go Charlotte! Wickham got better than he deserved, but he was out of their lives, so things were as they should be.
I highly recommend this book!
I especially liked the cleverness of Lady Matlock conspiring with Mrs. Gardiner to mitigate the effects of the gossip, and the way the rest of Darcy's family rallied around him. His determination to do what he could to help and protect Elizabeth was sweet, and he was so nice to her while he tried to convince her that she should accept his marriage proposal. Lady Catherine was horrible, but I loved the way that Charlotte and Elizabeth stood up to her - go Charlotte! Wickham got better than he deserved, but he was out of their lives, so things were as they should be.
I highly recommend this book!
April 3, 2023
Through no fault of their own, an unfortunate incident at a theatre in London leaves both Darcy and Elizabeth embroiled in a scandal. Both of them involve their families to devise a way to handle it.
This is the closest depiction of Darcy's character to the person Jane Austen imagined him to be, I think. His pride, his internal struggles, his sense of honour and duty, and his inability to occasionally control or dismiss his emotions are brilliantly displayed in this variation. Elizabeth Bennet's wit, intelligence, and resilience are in full display here as well, with scintillating dialogue throughout the book. I loved it!
This is the closest depiction of Darcy's character to the person Jane Austen imagined him to be, I think. His pride, his internal struggles, his sense of honour and duty, and his inability to occasionally control or dismiss his emotions are brilliantly displayed in this variation. Elizabeth Bennet's wit, intelligence, and resilience are in full display here as well, with scintillating dialogue throughout the book. I loved it!
April 28, 2023
This one was cute, light fun, just like with the other book in the Accidental series. Does it defy credulity that coincidence (fate) would keep throwing D&E together, despite them trying very hard to avoid each other by traveling to far-flung places? Absolutely. Did I care? Not a bit. It was funny to see them getting thrown together despite their best efforts. We get some time with the Gardiners, and they are a delight, including their charming children. And we get lots of Fitz and a Lady Matlock similar to the ones in A Gentleman's Honor. Wickham gets off rather easy in this one, which is surprising, but that's probably in keeping with the light tone Rachel established.
April 1, 2023
Darcy and Elizabeth have an accidental encounter at the theatre and it sets gossiping tongues wagging. Lady Catherine is a menace, in particular. He realizes that he is not averse to the obvious solution, and it takes only a few days for Elizabeth to realize that he's a good man to have around in a crisis sort of situation.
I loved this sparkling story. I liked Jane's take on Darcy and Charlotte's approach to the loss of Lady Catherine's society and colonel Fitzwilliam is always amusing.
Steam level: Only in the gossips' imagination.
I loved this sparkling story. I liked Jane's take on Darcy and Charlotte's approach to the loss of Lady Catherine's society and colonel Fitzwilliam is always amusing.
Steam level: Only in the gossips' imagination.
July 16, 2023
An enjoyable "compromise" story with gentle humour throughout.
As with all successful novellas the cast list and the plot are both kept tight without any extraneous characters. In this book the only Bennet family members who make an appearance are Jane and Elizabeth plus the Gardiners with the action taking place in London and, very briefly, in Hunsford.
There is a charming little epilogue available at the end of the book two round it off nicely. This is a recommended read for all fans of Darcy and Elizabeth.
As with all successful novellas the cast list and the plot are both kept tight without any extraneous characters. In this book the only Bennet family members who make an appearance are Jane and Elizabeth plus the Gardiners with the action taking place in London and, very briefly, in Hunsford.
There is a charming little epilogue available at the end of the book two round it off nicely. This is a recommended read for all fans of Darcy and Elizabeth.
March 30, 2023
An Accidental Scandal is another absolutely delightful, seriously swoonworthy and amusing little story by the talented Melanie Rachel. Honestly every story she writes just draws you in and you are glued to the pages until the very end. She’s a must buy author for me and my only complaint as usual is now I have to wait for her next release. I’m hoping she keeps writing more wonderful stories to delight us over the coming years.
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