Paranormal Romance as a genre is a favorite of mine. The world & characters here is very interesting & compelling, yet the author fails to really use the story structure to make the stories fully satisfying to read. This book in particular should come with a warning because the ending probably easily offensive to those who have suffered forceful unwanted actions perpetrated on them by others, think do I.
The narrative style of the author is very jarring. However, the author does us the service of labeling each chapter with source of the point of view narrating. So it is easy to skip Dahl chapters as the author failed to even care to approach the question of why the reader should care about him. That also extends to other family members whos story seems divorced from the primary plot. Again, failing to show why the reader should care.
If the author should happen to read this & is interested in a solution? Stick to the points of view that are telling the story. For instance, the author does a wonderful job in "The Perfect Match" series of books. The characters are both telling the same story instead of being on opposite sides of the planet.
For instance, Princess Leia gives R2D2 information & helps them escape. The droids make it to Luke, then Luke has to chase after R2D2. Then they hire Han & Chewie to escape the planet. Each character has a reason for associating with the others. Princess Leia needs the Death Star plans to escape. The droids need Luke to help them find Obi-Wan Kenobi. In turn, they need to get off planet & join the rebels, so they hire Han Solo & Chewie.
This series of books does the exact opposite of that, and that makes it rather jarring & unpleasant to read. It might be ok with someone with the attention span of a TikTok video but that fails to be a good thing. As one of a myriad of readers, the author probably cares little for the wants & desires of mine. However, if they felt generous enough to grant me a wish? Please stop this... stick to POVs involved in furthering the main plot. Dahl was a joke to me, because everyone of his chapters before he kidnapped his obsession, were skipped by me. Others have said that I am rather easy to please, so please feel free to draw your own conclusions.
These issues aren't even the reason for the lowest rating from me. It takes a lot for a story to be offensive a day after it's read by me. Many authors seem to skimp on editing their novels for grammar & spellchecking. So while it's nice, it is far from immersion breaking to me.
Obsession is a purely selfish feeling that is an anathema to love in any form, let alone romantic love. They are like oil/water & north/south pole of a magnet. They fail to mix & easily repel each other because they are polarly charged. The feeling is known to me, & required a lot of self-reflecting & meditating to get past. Yet the ending wrote by the author fundamentally confuses the two.
Stockholm Syndrome is a real thing, & so for the author to choose to make light of it by giving it even close to a happy ending is offensive to me. Its absurdity is only compounded by a story from one of the side character's childhood of being disciplined for inappropriately behavior. The synopsis written for the book is abundantly false. The ending fails to be a true twist, instead it's a perversions for the character of Amanda.
As it is current written, Amanda fails to care about anyone but herself & her own sexual gratification. When faced with a new role in a relationship that deeply interests her, she abandons her supposed commitment to saving her entire species from extinction. The story shows it as much more than a single act, weakness, or chapter. Instead she thinks about it, & chooses to think her own selfish desires are more important than the future of her family & species. How is that consistent with the character of Amanda written in the first three books?
The previous three books show Amanda as a caring & loving sister. Yet she also feels compelled to rebel against all societal rules on behavior, while still obeys her clan's laws. When faced with a deeply traumatic event in her past, she eventually chose to commit herself to be more than a narcistic socialite. Yet in one book the author showed that was all a lie. It was all an act for whatever reason.
Now Syssi should be facing the realization that one of the most important people in her life made a choice to abandon her & her new clan. That when faced with carnal desire, Amanda failed to care about anyone but herself. How is that satisfying in any way, shape, form, or fashion?
The book is written in such a way that it seems the author will also just gloss over this fundamental & systemic betrayal. This perception of mine could be because her world is fundamentally flawed with how the clan seems to know everything going on in the world, to the distortion of mine. Even if that is false, the author fails to show the clan facing problems sourced by the other secret Powers that Be. Furthermore, the book does Kian a disservice by depicting his reaction as being unreasonable, hateful, & speciesist. All of this makes it likely the next several years in-story will be ignored by me.
The lack of an actual story structure just compounds the response of mine, as it makes the decision easy. If the book was truly satisfying the situation could be overlooked by me. Yet it fails, & so there is a very real desire for me to skip the entire future of this absurdity.
For Gravity being shared by you, grateful am I. May the Goddess be asked to alighten a path towards love, joy , & happiness along the self'determined life'cycle chosen by the higher'self of yours by you, pray do I.