Nonsensical
This book was confusing and things didn't make sense. it felt like the author was putting pen to paper to come up with a story, but they couldn't quite pull it together.
The first thing that didn't quite make sense was Tom's story. I believe his name was Tom. It's the character that got arrested after he stole diapers or formula for his girlfriend. It doesn't make sense because who steals diapers and formula when your girlfriend is still pregnant? you steal that s*** After she's given birth and your baby needs them. So it didn't quite make sense. if I got the story wrong, or I remembered the story wrong, and he stole prenatal vitamins instead, again, this really doesn't make any sense. Considering that when they get to the ranch, almost like a fairytale, the girlfriend comes to see him, he sees his baby girl for the first time. And then the next day he's announcing, he's getting married and her father's giving him a job at his business. So everything gets tied up in this cutesy, little bow. When my first thought is, okay, so did the father have a change of heart? He went to jail for nothing? the father pulls up to the ranch in an expensive looking truck and he has a successful business, so where was he when the poor man was stealing non essentials for the girlfriend?
Then you have the side characters of Kurt and Wayne. They brought nothing to the story and didn't even need to be characters. I did not understand why they were even part of the non existent plot. Kurt was in and out so quickly I was like, what was the point of that. Wayne brought what to this? Nothing, that's what. The story could have been Tom and blaze, one who apparently is innocent and one who was doing it for love, then Tom runs off into the sunset and blaze is left to forge his own path, and in so doing, builds a strong bond with Gabe and they fall in love, that would have been a story I would have applauded. But the maze, like complicated backwards twisty thing that was this book made no sense. And in the end, I didn't even sense a real attraction, there was nothing to pull me into the story, and it was just words, even the sexy times felt lame and tame.
This entire journey for blaze started with trying to get his GED and the author didn't even make it a priority after he was on parole at no point unless I missed it. Did he say that's my goal. I want to at least get my GED 'cause that's what I was doing when I was accused, that's what I was trying to do while I was in jail. Now, I want to accomplish this. None of, that happens. It would have showed their budding love even if Gage suggested he help him. What happens instead is this irrational fear that seems to come out of nowhere. Blaze gets roughed up before he leaves prison, and of course, just a small victimization can be a big deal to someone, but it doesn't seem rational. How it plays out all of a sudden. He doesn't want to be alone, is afraid of the dark and instead of utilizing the therapy that, of course, the author put into the beginning of this book, where they're supposed to have group therapy and individual therapy, that idea of him building up himself and bettering himself falls to the wayside. Instead when Tom leaves he just ends up in Gages bed. it seems like there are all these really good ideas that could have built this story and make it a really great one, but they got forgotten for nonsensical stuff.
Not to mention, it seems this entire romance happens in a week and a 1/2 or in 2 weeks, 2 weeks. Why couldn't the entire summer have progressed while they are getting to know each other deeper and building a strong bond?
This is the first book in this series. Considering how this book played out, I have no desire to read any further book in the series or the series that this spins from.