Reviewed for Love Bytes – 2.5 hearts.
Wren is tasked to take over the shrine of the seven lanterns, which is a connection to seven Gods. While there, he meets Uli, a warrior who is more than a burly bloke with a sword.
Lantern is the first in a series of standalone stories along the Danube River Region. With the promise of Gods, magic, and mystics, this was a futuristic story I looked forward to reading and desperately wanted to like. Unfortunately, for me, it fell well short.
The story is told in the first person, exclusively from Wren’s viewpoint. Technically, it wasn’t great. Among other things, there were phrases like ‘I would now’ (mixed tenses) and ‘I myself’ (redundant intensive pronoun). There is the argument for saying that these are merely turns of phrase, but they set off my irritation scale. Worldbuilding is also detailed, with Wren describing his actions down to closing a bolt and why. This level of detail seems to be a marmite thing among readers.
At the beginning of the book, there is a glossary of terms and a cast list - which I found helpful. From that, it was clear that being physical with others was permitted, and I looked forward to reading more. However, many explanations were repeated multiple times, as Wren tended to think and repeat something aloud. I also lost count of the times I was told Wren spent fifteen years at the monastery and that he and his lovers were no more, and when Wren left, Marit and Corbi, it was a truly emotional experience. However, at one point, Wren stated that he couldn’t return to the monastery three times over three paragraphs in a row.
The images of the area around the cabin were lovely, and I got a sense of the simple life surrounded by mountains and trees. Wren had to relocate from a monastery to a recluse’s hut with a dog, and the loneliness came through. But, he was also there to look after the Gods, or at least do something with them, which got somewhat lost between Wren’s moping for his old life, doing his laundry, and missing Uli.
The story is the authors' view of Austria three hundred years in the future. However, I think the author has tried to include too much. Less would have been more. The Gods are there, but they don’t feature much other than in a few visions, or a flickering candle, and there are multiple explanations instead of story progression. More could have been made from Wren learning to converse with people on a higher plane of existence and their influence over the King’s reign. E.g., the use of phantasms could have been put to better use.
For most of this story, I was overwhelmed with repeated explanations about astral planes and other things, which made me feel like an onlooker rather than a participant. All this interrupted the story flow, further disconnecting me from the characters. It is a shame because this tale had great potential. All it needed was more focus and a damned good edit – hence the mediocre marking.
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