It took me a while to finish this book; with the first half a slog to get through it was only sheer stubbornness (and, I admit, a tiny smidge of curiosity about the final concluding moment) that got me through it. By the time I actually wanted to read it I was half way through, and while the second half was decisively better it was not so good as to make the effort worthwhile.
So what exactly didn't I like about it?
Predictability - Certain elements of this book were highly predictable, such as the "required" and obvious romance, the sheer naivety of certain characters, and more. And when there were twists they were rather more akin to "uh, really?" moments.
Characterisation - The characters in this book lack something. They're not quite fleshed out, they seem wedged into molds that they don't quite fit, and it is clear they are mostly there to serve their purpose. Hero, heroine, romantic interest, villain, etc., etc. I have a bone to pick with Mr Cordy about his villain, because frankly...uh, really? That was probably one of the worst things about this story.
Subtly - AKA, there was none.
The suspense - AKA, for me there was none. Oops? I'm sure there was meant to be some.
The Endling - ahem - I mean, the ending - To be frank the ending was, I suppose, your very typical "it's over, but is it" moment that horror movies have a tendency to do depending on the current trend, year, budget, etc. I honestly feel I'd have been more satisfied without that ending, and I wouldn't have felt beaten over the head by a point that had, I felt, already been made.
And finally, the writing which was, at times, just plain bad. Peaked around the middle, I guess, which seems to be the part Cordy wanted to actually write.
Basically the concept was interesting, but the execution could have done with a little more work.