Welcome to Oakley An Active Adult Communityjust outside of Phoenix, Arizona.
Easter is another fun time at Oakley Ranch. We reach out to the kids in the area and have an egg hunt at the dog park and various games. Just lots of fun.
As everyone started preparing for the weekend festivities and old panel truck stalls in the Sandtrap Bar’s parking lot. An apparent truck problem turns into something much more when drugs are found in the rear of the van.
At the egg hunt things turned rotten. A body of a prominent resident is found dead in the park. Murdered. Detective Ferguson and Officer Rizzo were already at the Ranch for the drug incident. Now they were off to the dog park.
Resident Sarah Sandberg and her neighbor, Mary, are on the scene with Sarah’s dog, Jethro checking things out. Again, Jethro uncovers the evidence that solves the murder.
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This is a short story and complete. It could have been shorter, yet should have been a little longer. Why? For the shorter part, there is a lot of repetition, especially in the first few pages. A lot should have been cut, but then it might have seemed more like an essay than a short story. The ending wasn't very satisfying for me. In fact, it seemed rather abrupt. The entire story held lots of potential, but didn't quite hit the mark because of that ending. This is the last of four stories featuring the Oakley Ranch retirement community. I have bought all four, but this was the first I read. I'll give another a chance even though this one could have been so much better, IMO, because I did enjoy the writing style.
You gotta give it to the over 55 crowd! They keep track of everything and all of their neighbors. This Adult Community is really community minded and throw all kinds of activities--the most current being an Egg Hunt for Easter. First a truck is stalled in the popular Sandtrap Bar’s parking lot. When drugs are found inside the truck the authorities are called in.
Meanwhile at the egg hunt a man is found murdered. Thankfully Resident Sarah Sandberg and her neighbor, Mary, are on the scene with Sarah’s dog, Jethro checking out how things were proceeding. It is Jethro who manages to find the evidence. Thank heavens for nosy seniors and especially dogs!!
Really enjoy reading James' short stories. A senior retirement desert location is ideal for them and when murder strikes everyone is on the lookout for the culprit. Very entertaining.