This book was so unnecessarily dramatic, and the characters felt like teenagers instead of adults in their thirties. Garland was insufferable, over-the-top dramatic, childish and very indecisive. I did like Stevie, she brought a bit of fun into the novel, but not enough to make it good.
Pros:
– Stevie
– the LGBTQ+ and PoC representation, also in the other campers
– the summer vibes
Cons:
– the childish way Garland saw everything and behaved. She felt "so proud" wearing a shirt matching with the camp leaders, for God's sake
– the book was cringey (the competition felt like it'd have been better in a YA book with teenagers as protagonists and Garland was incredibly childish)
– the insta-love: they've known each other for five days and are just soooo in love
– it wasn't believable. There was no build-up whatsoever, no scene where I actually thought "Oh, yeah, I can feel they love each other"
– Garland's weird visions; they seemed so unneccesary and weren't explained at all
– befote meeting Stevie, Garland never before qiestioned if she was queer. Then, within three days of knowing her, it's suddenly "I've always been queer", "It was always there", "It has always been you". No. There was no realization, no feeling, nothing. If you're going to write a coming oit or realization scene, make it realistic!
– Garland was so insecure at first and then, bam, it's "Oh my God, I love her, she's the love of my life!" All in one day
– the ending. Too much wrapping-up
– this entire novel was "tell" instead of "show". It didn't feel lively.
I wanted to like this, unfortunately, I really didn't.