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169 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2022
“Is she giving you orders again?” Barry came into the kitchen. He walked over to me, his hand held out. “Good to see you, Daniel.”
We shook. “Likewise. And of course she’s giving orders. How else can she stay a member of AOSA?” When both of then gave me inquiring glances, I smiled. “Annoying Older Sisters Association.” — Barry Mayweather and Daniel Tremont
Warnings: Mentions of severe depression and suicidal tendencies, references to past homophobia, potentially some internalised self loathing.
This is wonderful, I like K.C. Wells's writing and this showcases it well. It is fun and funny with a suitable level of angst. I like the character choices in particular. The story is set in Milwaukee, Wisconsin, using four main characters firefighter Daniel Tremont, systems analyst Charlie Monroe, his son Tommy and Charlie and Tommy's neighbour Delia. 35-year-olds Daniel and Charlie are the romantic leads, and 50-something Delia acts as 8-year-old Tommy's babysitter when single father Charlie needs help. Okay, so Delia... to a degree Delia is speaking for the reader. I can't quite figure out how her age was decided by K.C. but I'm here for it. At a guess, she's taken the age of ideal/average for some of her readers and just known that the younger would go with it. Because you are never too old to enjoy the scenery. She is living vicariously through Charlie, her words not mine.
I enjoyed this. It suited its purpose for me and delivered on its promises, something that not all novellas do. It is a fairly simple plot with a bit of a twist. It does appear at first as gay for you or a simple bisexual/gay awakening but it's not. Charlie's unwillingness to bring a person into Tommy's life and a past that involves some moments that left him hurting, he is more than meets the eye. Daniel is openly gay in his firehouse, refusing to lie about who he is. They are quite well suited to each other. There is a beautiful moment of one partner ensuring enthusiastic consent is given, not that he is taking advantage of an alcohol-induced state.
There were some editing flaws that I didn't find that distracting but they were there. I looked there is no editor credited and given this wasn't published through a publisher I'm wondering if this was self-edited. Self-editing can be patchy because the author reads what they expect to read, not what is necessarily there. For non-writers think of emails, essays or even just paperwork you've had to fill out. Same thing. I never judge it too harshly on free books though, the big error that should have been caught is a reference to Daniel where the name given is Dylan.
The rest of the review devolves into a series of dot points. Okay, it's mostly quotes and there are way more than I expected.
• Pip and Squeak, Tommy's sugar gliders, are so very cute. They are an unusual pet that suits what is a bit of an unusual parenting situation.
• Delia drooling over firefighters is a total mood. 😅 I'm not even certain what it is about them that is so appealing but yeah I get it.
• Cal is such a good friend. And I like the way he approached Daniel.
• “Why would Deadpool kiss Spiderman?”
I blinked. “Er…”
Lena stared at Ryan, her eyebrows lifted. “What are you talking about?”
“Elliott says he saw it on his brother’s phone. It was a picture of Deadpool hanging upside down and kissing Spiderman.”
Lena’s eyes gleamed. “You can explain that one, bro.”
I responded with a mock glare. “Thanks.” I gave Ryan a grin. “Because Spiderman’s hot?”
“That’s not an explanation!” That earned me a full-on glare from Lena. — I never thought I would see Spideypool turn up in a novella like this but I guess I should have. I mean that is the best response though to what is a fairly innocent question from a 9-year-old. Lena's last line is perfect too. Exasperated older sister vibes for the win. (Ryan Mayweather, Daniel Tremont and Lena Mayweather)
• “All that proves is that he’s not firing blanks, and his dick works. Besides, no one is one hundred percent straight these days. Didn’t you know? We’re all on some sort of sliding scale or something.” — Lena is a queen and I adore her. This just feels like an absolute truth to me. Especially among younger generations (Daniel and Charlie are about my age) we've just become confident in being who we are. Expressing attraction when it is there or just not. (Lena Mayweather)
We were only two weeks into July, and already I could see a change in Tommy. When the sun shone, so did he. — This is just a super endearing trait and a pleasingly descriptive passage. (Charlie Munroe)
• “It pays the bills. Of course, working from home has its drawbacks.”
“Such as?”
I grinned. “I talk to my computer a lot. Alexa is my best friend.”
He laughed. “Okay, that’s scary.” — Look what can I say I laughed out loud at the Alexa is my best friend (Charlie Munroe and Daniel Tremont)
There is homophobia in this story it is in the past of both main characters to different degrees. One knows what it was the other does not. It isn't extreme but it is there, There is some trauma discussed that readers need to be aware of. Tommy is the son of Charlie and Kara. Kara is no longer part of their lives after suffering what sounds like severe post-partum depression leading to suicidal thoughts and formal treatment. She and Charlie realised that Kara wasn't going to be able to be a mother to Tommy. But I am fully aware this could be a problematic plot line for some readers.
My granddad used to say plans were written in sand at low tide—yeah, he was a sailor, what gave it away? I guess I missed that one, because I thought that was it, a done deal. I was going to be a cop with a wife and a kid, and Tommy was my world.
Then that world blew up. — Charlie Munroe
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