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Lost Mages #1
Lost Mages 1
They were once the most powerful mages in the land, but they were betrayed. Their crafted weapons and armor were stolen and they were exiled.
Now, with war on the horizon, the king needs them again. But they won't be wielding magic for the king. Not this time.
The Lost Mages are coming home, and this time, they're out for vengeance.
Now, with war on the horizon, the king needs them again. But they won't be wielding magic for the king. Not this time.
The Lost Mages are coming home, and this time, they're out for vengeance.
386 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 22, 2023
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January 28, 2024
Killing children with no warning!!
Shame, shame, I would never have even started this book if I had known the author planned on killing children! I only made it through chapter 2, but there is no way I will read any more of this. Killing children is NOT entertainment, for normal people anyway.
Shame, shame, I would never have even started this book if I had known the author planned on killing children! I only made it through chapter 2, but there is no way I will read any more of this. Killing children is NOT entertainment, for normal people anyway.
April 10, 2023
Excellent!
This book surprised me. The magic system was very interesting. The plot was well paced. Great battles with the promise of more to come in the next book in the series. Hopefully it is soon to come.
This book surprised me. The magic system was very interesting. The plot was well paced. Great battles with the promise of more to come in the next book in the series. Hopefully it is soon to come.
April 17, 2023
FANTASTIC FANTASY
Well written as well as well proofed ... character development clean and distinctive with strong individual characteristics.
Storyline carries the reader throughout the text ... making the book very hard to put down.
My compliments to DB King and Shawn Whitney ... keep them coming ... I will be looking for more.
Well written as well as well proofed ... character development clean and distinctive with strong individual characteristics.
Storyline carries the reader throughout the text ... making the book very hard to put down.
My compliments to DB King and Shawn Whitney ... keep them coming ... I will be looking for more.
July 30, 2026
Gritty, a bit dark, being a war time. Excellent deep characters with real personality and motives. Vivid world building with its culture, history, gods demons, monsters, and magics. Luckiky for me this random library find has the next book in the series available for check out just as I've finished it.
April 19, 2023
So disappointing
If you like self mutilation and inconsistent story lines, this book is for you. Towards the end the book reads like a bumpy road as the authors strive to bring this book to a close. I'm sad to have read this book as I will never get those moments back
If you like self mutilation and inconsistent story lines, this book is for you. Towards the end the book reads like a bumpy road as the authors strive to bring this book to a close. I'm sad to have read this book as I will never get those moments back
May 18, 2023
Excellent. Really different.
What a great book. I had read hundreds of fantasy books but this really hooked me with its mix of demons , bone magic and the fall of a kingdom. Well worth a read. Looking forward to starting next in series.
What a great book. I had read hundreds of fantasy books but this really hooked me with its mix of demons , bone magic and the fall of a kingdom. Well worth a read. Looking forward to starting next in series.
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May 29, 2023Just shy of gory
A very good concept, a bit on the gory side. I wouldn't suggest that you read it before you eat it could ruin your meal. Zhe was a good character, as were the others.
A very good concept, a bit on the gory side. I wouldn't suggest that you read it before you eat it could ruin your meal. Zhe was a good character, as were the others.
May 30, 2023
loved the new rules of magic
The authors did a wonderful job of building a world using a new form of magic with characters that come to life through our imagination. Looking forward to the next chapter.
The authors did a wonderful job of building a world using a new form of magic with characters that come to life through our imagination. Looking forward to the next chapter.
June 4, 2023
Epic reading enjoyable on every level!
Great charactors,epic battles,believable enemies,nonstop ac tion,betrayals on several levels,intrigues within intrigues,recommended for fantasy readers at any level thorough enjoyable. A must read!
Great charactors,epic battles,believable enemies,nonstop ac tion,betrayals on several levels,intrigues within intrigues,recommended for fantasy readers at any level thorough enjoyable. A must read!
August 3, 2023
Hooked from the start!
I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I started this book but I'm glad I read it. Hooked from the first chapter the characters and the world building was great. Very good read!
I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I started this book but I'm glad I read it. Hooked from the first chapter the characters and the world building was great. Very good read!
August 20, 2023
DNF 86%
Had the bones of a good story there…. But the story felt a little contrived. More like the cast was people being moved as opposed to moving on their own. Decent. Just not for me.
Had the bones of a good story there…. But the story felt a little contrived. More like the cast was people being moved as opposed to moving on their own. Decent. Just not for me.
November 24, 2023
Ok book
I kinda liked it but the MC got really stupid after he found his friend and it went down hill from there ,instead of rushing thru the gate he told his enemy that he was a bone mage just not bright on the writer part
I kinda liked it but the MC got really stupid after he found his friend and it went down hill from there ,instead of rushing thru the gate he told his enemy that he was a bone mage just not bright on the writer part
July 22, 2026
Lost Mages book 1
Many places traveled with a lot of cultures, people, & Much mythology coming alive here and the stories pull it all together. A wild ride as well. I'm looking forward to the next book.
Many places traveled with a lot of cultures, people, & Much mythology coming alive here and the stories pull it all together. A wild ride as well. I'm looking forward to the next book.
March 31, 2023
Wow
It is scary to think how 2 people can write a book like this! Fantastic and well written! It will be hard to wait for book 2!
It is scary to think how 2 people can write a book like this! Fantastic and well written! It will be hard to wait for book 2!
April 9, 2023
A good find. Dark gritty engaging
Really enjoyed world backstory and the magic mechanics and back story. Dark,gritty and engaging fantasy. Look forward to next in series
Really enjoyed world backstory and the magic mechanics and back story. Dark,gritty and engaging fantasy. Look forward to next in series
April 11, 2023
Kept my interest
Enjoyed the characters. They really went through hell. The magic was interesting and their world is very dangerous. Overall a good beginning to a series.
Enjoyed the characters. They really went through hell. The magic was interesting and their world is very dangerous. Overall a good beginning to a series.
April 12, 2023
Quite good, but dark
I quite enjoyed this book, but it is pretty dark. The characters are well done, and the story moves along pretty well.
Highly recommended.
I quite enjoyed this book, but it is pretty dark. The characters are well done, and the story moves along pretty well.
Highly recommended.
April 15, 2023
Great book
This is a good read. Loved the characters and the storyline. Cannot wait for the next book of this series to come out and more from this Author
This is a good read. Loved the characters and the storyline. Cannot wait for the next book of this series to come out and more from this Author
April 15, 2023
Read 10%
Not for me. Tragic loss too early in the storyline and poor writing style and a vengeance trip plot that was simply boring.
Not for me. Tragic loss too early in the storyline and poor writing style and a vengeance trip plot that was simply boring.
April 17, 2023
Good story
Too much description without enough action. I like the story but feel it needs to speed up. Although I will say what is being described is cool. I just want to go faster!
Too much description without enough action. I like the story but feel it needs to speed up. Although I will say what is being described is cool. I just want to go faster!
May 6, 2023
Good Book
Interesting take on magic, reminds me of the shaman in Diablo, but told in the first person. I look forward to the next book.
Interesting take on magic, reminds me of the shaman in Diablo, but told in the first person. I look forward to the next book.
May 8, 2023
Cracking Read
So pleased to find a book that isn't full f sex. Dragonds, demons, magic and warfare. What more could you ask for.
So pleased to find a book that isn't full f sex. Dragonds, demons, magic and warfare. What more could you ask for.
May 12, 2023
Riveting
The characters were well thought. The locations I could envision. The plot left me wanting sequel.
Death is but a part of life, was well presented.
The characters were well thought. The locations I could envision. The plot left me wanting sequel.
Death is but a part of life, was well presented.
May 20, 2023
Great book.
Great book. I can't wait to read more from this series.
I enjoy the characters as well as the storyline.
Great book. I can't wait to read more from this series.
I enjoy the characters as well as the storyline.
June 11, 2023
Great read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action.
August 14, 2023
Excellent
Great book loved it. Cannot wait till the next one comes out. I have read numerous of your books and enjoyed them all
Great book loved it. Cannot wait till the next one comes out. I have read numerous of your books and enjoyed them all
September 20, 2023
Truly different
The characters are fully developed. Their magics are unusual. The plot is great. Can't wait to see what the twice born son is all about.
The characters are fully developed. Their magics are unusual. The plot is great. Can't wait to see what the twice born son is all about.
October 6, 2023
A good read!
I liked the characters. They were very diverse & except for Zhe not very nice people. However underneath their broken exteriors they had good hearts
I liked the characters. They were very diverse & except for Zhe not very nice people. However underneath their broken exteriors they had good hearts
April 20, 2024
Excellent
Wow what an original story and adult. This wasn't absolutely epic book. I devoured it all the way to my bones
Wow what an original story and adult. This wasn't absolutely epic book. I devoured it all the way to my bones
July 25, 2026
I know that other readers will love this book. The story was too bleak for me. It's not a fantasy world I want to escape too. I can see how others will like the story, but it wasn't for me.
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