I'm forced to conclude that the author, who is really the usually very talented Daniel Abraham, who's two fantasy series are great and who is half of James S.A. Corey, writers of the fun science fiction The Expanse series, has written this series just to make money without putting much effort or thought into it. He did minimal research on what he thought an urban fantasy series should be, checked off a few boxes, and dashed off a bunch of dreck. I was hoping this book would be an improvement over the last one, that he'd have settled into the genre or decided to take it more seriously or something, but it wasn't good. The heroine is immature, the writing is bad, and the author's basic idea of what urban fantasy readers want to see feels insulting. It's repetitive (how many times did it mention Chogyi Jake's head hair stubble?) and emotionally shallow.
But it did have a couple of upsides. At first I was very leery about it being located in New Orleans, I thought it was a shaky choice for a shaky series. You have to be super strong and original to make something that's been done that many times work. But the idea of being "ridden" by loa was logical for this series and it worked. And I always like the little bits of science/biology that he puts in these books. Last time it was the parasite that makes mice permanently unafraid cats, (and possibly effects people's behavior too?). It's pretty fascinating stuff, check it out. This time it was parasitic wasps who lay their eggs in caterpillars and that changes the caterpillars' behavior so that they actually defend the eggs that have been implanted into their bodies. In this story it translated to people falling in love with their riders even when they're evil serial killers who've destroyed their lives.
The biggest downfall to this book was still the relationships, Jayné's incredible immaturity, and the shallowness of all of the characterizations. I can't even deal with Aubrey's ex giving Jayné their divorce papers to deliver whenever she felt like it, and Jayné sitting on them for months, somehow on the strength of their one night together and the inklings of a relationship starting. Too much immaturity for me to deal with. I can't grasp at all what Jayné (I still hate that name) was thinking. How did she have a right to hold on to the papers until she figured out how she felt about them? For even a minute much less months, no matter what Kim said. That's his life she was playing with. Is that what a male author thinks women want to read about, idiot immature women who treat people like shit? Abraham is married, how would he have felt if someone kept something like that from him for even a minute. Aubrey wouldn't have had a chance to talk to Kim about it, or finally get closure about his marriage and start to move on with his life, he wouldn't be able to trust Jayné, this woman who is in major danger with him all of the time because who knows what else she'd hide from him if it's inconvenient for her. You don't do that to people you supposedly care about, or anyone for that matter, it's a matter of respect. And then she decided to tell him because of her guilt, out of selfishness and not for any other reason, at a time when he's recovering for a huge incident and the last thing he needed is having that dumped on him, because she waited too long already and it's all about her, it's always all about her. And then when she did finally tell him it was when Jake was right outside the door waiting to drive home with them, because how did she think that conversation would go? She couldn't wait for privacy at the hotel in forty-five minutes? And he didn't even care, he just shrugged and signed the papers. Really? I can't deal with any of it, It's too much stupidity, it's horrible writing.
And the more than heavy-handed foreshadowing? So lame. Ending chapters with, "As it was, I didn't figure out what it was until it was way too late." Or, "if I'd understood what he'd actually been trying to say it would have saved us both a lot of pain." Crap writing. On the other hand, he's not moving the overall story arc along nearly fast enough. There are only very, very small signs that something is going on with Jayné, probably that she's actually being ridden and that's why she has these mysterious powers,. But instead of it being interesting it's just annoying because she her out of the blue perfection (she can run the table at pool when she's never played before) makes her feel like a Mary Sue, which of course makes no sense. And two books in i still have no idea what the series name, The Black Sun's Daughter, is even hinting at, it hasn't been referenced in the slightest. But the characterizations are the worst part, so shallow and jumbled.
I guess I did like this book more than the first one. Past the half way point it got better, minus anything that had Jayné and Aubrey in it. Or Ex, Ex and Jayné was awful too. All of the relationships were awful. But the story wasn't bad. The New Orleans setting and characters worked out much better than I thought they would, the loa were a great fit for the concept of this series and he used the setting really well without overdoing it. And it did suck me into wanting to see what happens next. But only because i can do it for free thanks to my library. I wouldn't pay for it. I'm giving the book three stars rounded up from 2.5 because it was better than the first book, which got two stars rounded down from two and a half.