2.5 stars - Spoilers
Meh. The plot, action and secondary characters were okay but the romance was fucking awful.
-The heroine, Zoe, was mostly likeable — though there were parts of her personality that I disliked. I hated the amount of dumb things she did — like shifting into a dragon at school in front of loads of humans. She could have risked exposing her race but she did it anyway. It was idiotic and selfish.
-The worst thing about Zoe was her patheticness when it came to Jared. It was obvious that he was messing with her feelings but the silly cow kept thinking he had strong feelings for her. She had no self-respect whatsoever when it came to him. I rolled my eyes at her many embarrassing and naive assumptions — like her assuming that the reason Jared wasn't texting her was because he wanted to protect her. She didn't even pause to consider that maybe he just wasn't interested in her. Also, the idiot heard one of his songs and she instantly thought it was about her and for her. How she came to that conclusion, I don't know. It was all so cringey, and it seemed like Zoe was living in her own little fantasy land. There was no evidence whatsoever that supported her idiotic theories - Jared ignored her and didn't give a fuck about her but the silly cow was too much of a silly cow to notice that. Ugh.
-The love interest, Jared, was rubbish. I've never liked him, all he's ever done is string Zoe along. It was really off-putting that he was in his twenties and in college whilst Zoe was only 15/16. Why can't he find a girl his own age? Why does he prey on innocent schoolgirls?
Jared actually seemed to fancy Zoe's BFF, Meghan, more than he did Zoe. He kept in contact with Meghan, helped her when she needed it, and took her on rides on his motorbike. He barely did anything for Zoe.
When Jared left his band to help everyone fight the bad guys, the sly dick claimed he did it for Zoe. But that was bullshit — he never showed any concern for her, and he left her a number of times when she was in danger, and he never once bothered to check up on her. He only came back to help because he wanted to act like a hero and a good guy — the bastard couldn't admit that though instead he had to fuck around with Zoe's feelings and act like a perv. Ugh.
What really pissed me off was that Jared told Zoe that she should put everyone else's life above her own, and risk her own life for her lame friends. And when she said no, he was disappointed in her because instead of stupidly sacrificing herself she wanted to work as a team. He was such a dick. What was so bad about a teenager not wanting to risk her life for her selfish friends? Not everyone wants to be a martyr. Why did Jared even say he cared about Zoe when all he cared about were her friends? Jared was a rubbish hero.
-The Disappearing Parent Syndrome was ridiculous. I didn't buy Zoe's parents going on holiday and leaving her without any protection. Her dad was meant to be this super protective alpha dragon, yet he just up and left his daughter when she was so recently attacked by a bunch of evil mages. He never would have swanned off on holiday after that. The author obviously just wanted the adults to disappear so the plot could play out a certain way but she could have at least written the parents out in a believable way!
-I HATED that Nick and Isabelle reunited. He chased after her and then dumped her and then fucked around with loads of other girls. WTF?! Why would Isabelle want him back after that? It was clear that she meant little to him, he couldn't even be bothered to fight for her. Why would she want such a loser?
-I liked Sigmund's character — his interactions with Zoe were quite sweet.
-Nick and the other dragons were lame — they were meant to be protecting Zoe but they were bloody useless. Maybe, it was because they just didn't give a shit about Zoe. No-one seemed to care about her at all.
-I was annoyed at Zoe's friends for not believing her whenever she told them something was off. She'd already proven herself a few times before but everyone kept dismissing her — it was irritating.
-Zoe's lists were boring. They just felt like convenient info-dumps.
-The thing that pissed me off most was that if Zoe should lose her virginity she would lose her unique dragon powers. Really? WTF?! The male dragons don't lose anything when they have sex. I hate it when authors write female characters who aren't able to lose their virginity without them becoming weaker or less somehow. It's fucked up.
-The ending was a little vague. I'm hoping Zoe gets some sense and dumps paedo Jared.
All in all, disappointing.