Do not waste your time!
I tried. I really did. I got to the first paragraph of book 3 and just couldn’t torture myself any longer.
The MC ruins this book the way she’s written. I should have realized her inner monologue that starts off in book 1 was not just for world building and getting us up to speed on the current scene. The author has her inner monologu-ing all over the damn place. ***Spoiler Alert*** She’s an alpha wolf. That’s a joke. She says “I’m an alpha wolf” about every other freaking sentence! She talks about what she can do, her dominance level and pack hierarchy over and over again throughout the two books that I read to the point that it’s just annoying.
The thing is, despite how she constantly says she’s an alpha wolf and that she has training, she acts like the dumbest person in the world and doesn’t act like an alpha at all. She has no protective instinct, no self preservation, she doesn’t really care about anyone but herself… she acts like the bio dad she despises, if I’m honest. And when she finally become the alpha mate at the end of book 2, she clearly has no training in pack politics and doesn’t seem to care about the well being of the pack, only sex with Ryker and getting back to Muncie. She’s so gullible, being taken advantage of left and right and then she says, “I’m an alpha wolf” in her incessant inner monologue and goes off on a tangent of recaps of things we just read last chapter and continues for another chapter!
It’s like the author was just trying to reach a word count quota, repeating the same things over and over like we wouldn’t notice the storyline stalled… and stalled it did! Gemma could be talking to (or arguing with) someone and then we’d go off in Gemma’s head on a tangent, which always includes and usually starts with… you guessed it! “I’m an alpha”!
Then there are the inconsistencies. Alpha can scent a sour smell when someone lies to them, yet Shane lied to Ryker for years. It’s passed off as him just circumventing the truth but, YEARS? His best friend? Um, no. I don’t see that with his ability. Then Gemma outright lies to Ryker and says Aleks didn’t kick her out after just moments before meeting up with Ryker she said during an inner monologue while talking to Aleks that he as kicking her out in response to what he said.
Then there’s the whole Trish conversation that began the whole storyline and was obviously lies, yet “I’m an alpha Gemma” didn’t scent Trish’s deception and left mad to confront Ryker. And also, the story falls apart there in the beginning if you think about it because if Trish already knew that Gemma was an alpha, why would she be brave enough to walk into her cabin, her space, and tell her that Ryker was hers and that she’s been sleeping with him and was his chosen mate? An alpha. I believe Trish was supposed to be a delta!
In book 1, the author wrote that Aleks lived on the twelfth floor of a twenty story building, in book two, he’s suddenly on the twentieth floor.
Gemma is so annoyingly stupid in almost every decision she makes and since the chapters are from her POV, she sound’s especially dumb when she explains something to us and then says, does, or ignores the knowledge we have just gained from her insight. Then the author has the audacity to say things like, “it doesn’t take a genius to figure out” or “only an idiot would”… and I’m like…👀 Did you really just right that? And when Gemma finally figure’s something out after all the information was spelled out for her so the answer was completely obvious, she says, “I hate when I’m right” or some crap like that and it’s like “girl, if you were wrong after all of that evidence then I don’t know what to tell you.”
I believe this story could have been condensed into one good book if all the repetitive sentences were removed. There was a recap for a recap anytime something that previously happened related to the current scene, even if it happened in the last chapter! So yeah, the scene you were in took forever to unfold. Some of the dialogue was pointless and shouldn’t have even have made it into the book.
See my notes, highlights and commentary on Goodreads. Happy reading… if you’re brave and patient. After getting to book 3 chapter 1 para 1… or 2, I realized that it wasn’t even worth it to see how it ended. At least they were finally mated at that point.