mixed feelings
I have mixed feelings about this book, although I mostly enjoyed it. The basic story is the h is studying to be a nurse and is the home health aide for an older wealthy woman with a pro hockey player grandson. The aide gets the tickets to the family seats on her birthday and is spotted by the grandson who was expecting his grandmother in the stands. They have an agreed ONS and the h anonymously sneaks out the next morning. Of course the jig is up as soon as the H visits his grandmother and “meets” her aide. The guy fell first as instalove/instalust after spotting her in the stands the hockey game. I prefer a slower roll to a relationship, but if you like a good “love at first sight” then you’ll like that part. I was a little confused by the underlying Cinderella theme. At times it seemed like a reimagining of Cinderella, complete with selfish aunt and two cousins that treated her poorly and made her do chores, but then the h would try to excuse their behavior and the author softened their personalities by the end of the book. If it hadn’t been for the constant references to Cinderella by multiple characters, including the H, I would have ignored that underlying implication as it was not consistent in several areas. There was a lot of push pull regarding the disparity in their wealth, harped on by the h for their mismatch and her not belonging in his world. I got a bit tired of the repetition and her pushing him away, even when he had the support of his family. Apparently the h was the only one objecting to their relationship! Rory was a fantastic boyfriend. Attentive, sweet, caring, hot, talented, faithful, respectful, etc. Most the of family, teammates, friends, etc. were likable and supportive. Like I said, overall I liked this book, hence the 4 stars. There were a few editing errors that jumped out at me. One example is the h is making a luncheon salad for the grandmother and makes a point of adding canned shrimp for healthy protein as she tried to cook salmon one time and it was a cooking failure. On the next page, she offers Rory a salad with poached salmon. Sloppy editing. I know this sounds picky but this happened several times. She turns her phone off and a few minutes later gets a text is another example. That sort of thing. It can be a bit distracting and a bit annoying that no one proofread the book. Feels unprofessional. I hope the author reads these comments and takes them as constructive criticism from someone who loves romance and wanted this to be 5*.