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The Fire at Longbourn: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Elizabeth discovers that Mr. Darcy is not the cold-hearted, arrogant man that she thought he was – all in the aftermath of a catastrophe at Longbourn.
When the fire alarms are raised, Darcy demonstrates that he is a man of action, who deserves much credit for his selfless efforts on the Bennets’ behalf. Elizabeth’s poor opinion of him is quickly changed to one of gratitude, and she slowly comes to realize he is a truly admirable man.
Mary Bennet is a heroine! Mrs. Bennet decides that Mary is now her favorite daughter, and Lydia struggles with her new position in the family. Lydia seeks to regain her mother’s favor by foiling Wickham’s evil plans, but it could lead to a tragic end.
As Darcy falls further and further in love with Elizabeth, he is desperate to ignore his feelings for her. In the end, he realizes that he cannot, but will she return his affections?
When the fire alarms are raised, Darcy demonstrates that he is a man of action, who deserves much credit for his selfless efforts on the Bennets’ behalf. Elizabeth’s poor opinion of him is quickly changed to one of gratitude, and she slowly comes to realize he is a truly admirable man.
Mary Bennet is a heroine! Mrs. Bennet decides that Mary is now her favorite daughter, and Lydia struggles with her new position in the family. Lydia seeks to regain her mother’s favor by foiling Wickham’s evil plans, but it could lead to a tragic end.
As Darcy falls further and further in love with Elizabeth, he is desperate to ignore his feelings for her. In the end, he realizes that he cannot, but will she return his affections?
547 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 31, 2023
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Laraba Kendig
44 books107 followersI am a scientist by training, but a writer at heart. I have always loved reading with a passion and turned my hand to fanfiction a few years ago. I write stories similar to the ones I enjoy reading. They are interesting but light, romantic but not steamy. I am a super fan of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, and have been having a wonderful time writing P&P variations, exploring how new circumstances affect the beloved characters. So far I have published two novel-length Pride and Prejudice variations plus one short story via Amazon. My books include ‘I am Jael’ and ‘The Blind Will See’.
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April 17, 2023
This story ended at 92% on my Kindle and at 93% on my Kindle app on my computer. We are then given several chapters from Peacocks of Pemberley.
I did enjoy this story. Longbourn burns.
I think one of my favorite events is that Mr. Bennet is shocked into making an about-face in his behaviors. This after not only having an entire wing of Longbourn burn down but also almost losing his wife and Mary in the blaze. Both of the latter are saved due to Mary's heroics although she and her mother are seriously injured. Bennet's entire library with its books is lost, also.
As the blaze erupts one of Longbourn's men is sent into Meryton to recruit help to quench the fire. Darcy hears the shouts for help and becomes a hero as he not only rushes to aid but also organizes the bucket line and directs the wetting down of walls and the removal of paintings and artifacts, etc.
Bingley offers Netherfield's unused hunting lodge as a residence into which Mary, Kitty and Mrs. Bennet move. Mr. Bennet and the other three sisters stay at Longbourn trying to organize and restock the household. Fortunately, there is the summer kitchen which is detached from the main house, so they are able to have food prepared to sustain them.
Obviously, Darcy now is looked upon with much more respect by the Bennets and the entire community.
Bingley shows some backbone and Caroline reaps well-earned consequences. Lydia surprises us. First, I must say that as the family decides she was responsible for the fire she is now Mrs. Bennet's scape goat. She also learns quickly that the family cannot afford new wardrobes to replace what was lost in the fire. And she takes steps trying to earn her way back into favor. That plan is almost disastrous! Not only to Lydia but to several others.
I have perhaps given too many hints about the threads in this story but there is so much more going on that you really need to read it for yourself. There is an epilogue, which I always enjoy.
I did enjoy this story. Longbourn burns.
I think one of my favorite events is that Mr. Bennet is shocked into making an about-face in his behaviors. This after not only having an entire wing of Longbourn burn down but also almost losing his wife and Mary in the blaze. Both of the latter are saved due to Mary's heroics although she and her mother are seriously injured. Bennet's entire library with its books is lost, also.
As the blaze erupts one of Longbourn's men is sent into Meryton to recruit help to quench the fire. Darcy hears the shouts for help and becomes a hero as he not only rushes to aid but also organizes the bucket line and directs the wetting down of walls and the removal of paintings and artifacts, etc.
Bingley offers Netherfield's unused hunting lodge as a residence into which Mary, Kitty and Mrs. Bennet move. Mr. Bennet and the other three sisters stay at Longbourn trying to organize and restock the household. Fortunately, there is the summer kitchen which is detached from the main house, so they are able to have food prepared to sustain them.
Obviously, Darcy now is looked upon with much more respect by the Bennets and the entire community.
Bingley shows some backbone and Caroline reaps well-earned consequences. Lydia surprises us. First, I must say that as the family decides she was responsible for the fire she is now Mrs. Bennet's scape goat. She also learns quickly that the family cannot afford new wardrobes to replace what was lost in the fire. And she takes steps trying to earn her way back into favor. That plan is almost disastrous! Not only to Lydia but to several others.
I have perhaps given too many hints about the threads in this story but there is so much more going on that you really need to read it for yourself. There is an epilogue, which I always enjoy.
April 3, 2023
Lydia burns down half of Longbourn
After Lydia burns down half of Longbourn the family dynamics are greatly changed. The library is nothing but ash. Lydia is no longer Mrs Bennets favorite child. Darcy brings all of his leadership to the problem and with the work of most of Meryton men to fighting the fire and half of Longbourn is saved.
Consequences, Lydia no longer is allowed to be ignorant slut.
Mr. Bennet has no books and begins to be a husband and a father.
Mr. Darcy gains a good reputation.
Good what-if feels like the story is believable. Good yarn.
After Lydia burns down half of Longbourn the family dynamics are greatly changed. The library is nothing but ash. Lydia is no longer Mrs Bennets favorite child. Darcy brings all of his leadership to the problem and with the work of most of Meryton men to fighting the fire and half of Longbourn is saved.
Consequences, Lydia no longer is allowed to be ignorant slut.
Mr. Bennet has no books and begins to be a husband and a father.
Mr. Darcy gains a good reputation.
Good what-if feels like the story is believable. Good yarn.
February 8, 2024
“We all live in a house on fire, no fire department to call; no way out, just the upstairs window to look out of while the fire burns the house down with us trapped, locked in it.” –Tennessee Williams, The Milk Train Doesn’t Stop Here Anymore
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen due to violence, death, a violent attack, and injuries due to the fire and the attack.
>>Angst Level: stress for sure. This was high angst during the fire and the violent attack [nonsexual]
>>Source: Borrowed KU 1-9-24: I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. I first read this as it was posted on FF. It is just as exciting now as it was then. What a story. Darcy is my hero. Wow!
The house was quiet and Bennet was enjoying a new acquisition in his study when he smelled smoke. Longbourn was on fire. They wouldn’t learn the source until later. Mrs. Bennet and Mary were injured and Darcy and Bingley arrived to help rally the servants and militia. Due to their efforts, and the onset of rain, they were able to save most of the manor. The east wing would be lost along with Bennet’s library. There were many heroes that day and my poor little heart did a pitter-patter whenever I encountered them—heavy sigh. Of course, there were also many zeroes. You-know-who had arrived that very day in Meryton. Naturally, he did not soil or dirty his uniform—just saying.
Many things would change for the Bennet family. However, with change comes a new start and a new beginning. Bennet would learn much about who he was as a husband, father, and landowner. Mrs. Bennet would also learn much about her daughters. Not that she would completely change her ways. No, that would be asking too much even from her.
Wickham: “There is no fire like passion, there is no shark like hatred, there is no snare like folly, there is no torrent like greed.” –Siddharta Gautama
Our resident bad boy arrived in Meryton on the very day of the fire. His attitude of entitlement was beyond anything I’ve read in a while. What a self-serving so-and-so. He barked up the wrong tree and paid a heavy price for it. He never saw it coming because his greed had pushed him to the edge of his limits. This was beyond the pale.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen due to violence, death, a violent attack, and injuries due to the fire and the attack.
>>Angst Level: stress for sure. This was high angst during the fire and the violent attack [nonsexual]
>>Source: Borrowed KU 1-9-24: I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. I first read this as it was posted on FF. It is just as exciting now as it was then. What a story. Darcy is my hero. Wow!
The house was quiet and Bennet was enjoying a new acquisition in his study when he smelled smoke. Longbourn was on fire. They wouldn’t learn the source until later. Mrs. Bennet and Mary were injured and Darcy and Bingley arrived to help rally the servants and militia. Due to their efforts, and the onset of rain, they were able to save most of the manor. The east wing would be lost along with Bennet’s library. There were many heroes that day and my poor little heart did a pitter-patter whenever I encountered them—heavy sigh. Of course, there were also many zeroes. You-know-who had arrived that very day in Meryton. Naturally, he did not soil or dirty his uniform—just saying.
Many things would change for the Bennet family. However, with change comes a new start and a new beginning. Bennet would learn much about who he was as a husband, father, and landowner. Mrs. Bennet would also learn much about her daughters. Not that she would completely change her ways. No, that would be asking too much even from her.
Wickham: “There is no fire like passion, there is no shark like hatred, there is no snare like folly, there is no torrent like greed.” –Siddharta Gautama
Our resident bad boy arrived in Meryton on the very day of the fire. His attitude of entitlement was beyond anything I’ve read in a while. What a self-serving so-and-so. He barked up the wrong tree and paid a heavy price for it. He never saw it coming because his greed had pushed him to the edge of his limits. This was beyond the pale.
April 14, 2023
One reason I love this Pride and Prejudice variation is that it provides a character arc for Lydia, who seems to me to just be high spirited, young, and spoiled, even a bit naive. In this variation her carelessness touches off the initial twist in the story, which changes many characters' lives quite a lot, including her own.
The story begins soon after Mr. Collins's arrival at Longbourn. The Bennet sisters, all but Mary, walk with him into Meryton, and Collins already seems to be claiming Elizabeth for himself, which irritates her. They make Mr. Wickham's acquaintance on the street. While they are talking, shortly after Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy ride up and greet them, a stable boy from Longbourn rides up with the news that Longbourn is on fire. Then they all see the plume of smoke rising from the house in the distance. Mr. Darcy, who had been about to ride away in disgust after spotting Wickham, turns and takes charge of first the immediate situation, the sisters' reactions and their safety, and then the situation at Longbourn.
I don't want to go into more detail, because this story has a complex plot, and I'd have to butcher the events a bit to provide a synopsis of them without spoilers. It's all much better taken in organically from the story itself, and well worth reading for anyone who loves P&P variations. I don't usually enjoy epilogues, but I found the one provided here fascinating and touching.
The story begins soon after Mr. Collins's arrival at Longbourn. The Bennet sisters, all but Mary, walk with him into Meryton, and Collins already seems to be claiming Elizabeth for himself, which irritates her. They make Mr. Wickham's acquaintance on the street. While they are talking, shortly after Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy ride up and greet them, a stable boy from Longbourn rides up with the news that Longbourn is on fire. Then they all see the plume of smoke rising from the house in the distance. Mr. Darcy, who had been about to ride away in disgust after spotting Wickham, turns and takes charge of first the immediate situation, the sisters' reactions and their safety, and then the situation at Longbourn.
I don't want to go into more detail, because this story has a complex plot, and I'd have to butcher the events a bit to provide a synopsis of them without spoilers. It's all much better taken in organically from the story itself, and well worth reading for anyone who loves P&P variations. I don't usually enjoy epilogues, but I found the one provided here fascinating and touching.
April 5, 2023
Interesting variation
This 'what if ' enables changes in most of the characters while keeping their personalities. I liked how most of them chose the better option. Worth reading.
This 'what if ' enables changes in most of the characters while keeping their personalities. I liked how most of them chose the better option. Worth reading.
May 18, 2023
True and uplifting
Pretty prose and a great message told through a new version of Pride and Prejudice. I respect this author's perspective.
Pretty prose and a great message told through a new version of Pride and Prejudice. I respect this author's perspective.
April 7, 2023
Balanced and delightful
Kendig’s novels are dependably well-written, but this one is my favorite so far. Challenges and conflict grow our favorite P&P characters, but we see them becoming stronger and closer with each adversity. There are difficulties presented, but approached courageously, they lead to joy not angst.
Kendig’s novels are dependably well-written, but this one is my favorite so far. Challenges and conflict grow our favorite P&P characters, but we see them becoming stronger and closer with each adversity. There are difficulties presented, but approached courageously, they lead to joy not angst.
April 6, 2023
Enjoyable Pride and Prejudice variation
The Fire at Longbourn reminds me of another along the same lines, at least in the early chapters. There are enough differences that I didn't feel any deja vu.
There are a minimum of errors that I wasn't annoyed, unlike several KU offerings of late.
Recommend.
The Fire at Longbourn reminds me of another along the same lines, at least in the early chapters. There are enough differences that I didn't feel any deja vu.
There are a minimum of errors that I wasn't annoyed, unlike several KU offerings of late.
Recommend.
April 2, 2023
A family strengthened by disaster.
The blaze that destroys a part of Longbourn creates the opportunity for the growth and redemption of many of our favorite characters. Good dialogue, nicely edited, interesting plot twists and an extended Epilogue. Very nice!
The blaze that destroys a part of Longbourn creates the opportunity for the growth and redemption of many of our favorite characters. Good dialogue, nicely edited, interesting plot twists and an extended Epilogue. Very nice!
April 3, 2023
Such feeling
This is well written with a unique take on the beloved story. Such feeling is betrayed on its pages. There are tears but as many laughs. Just enough Caroline to hate as well as other horrible characters. I do love to see them set down.
A very good book, I will be telling my friends about it
This is well written with a unique take on the beloved story. Such feeling is betrayed on its pages. There are tears but as many laughs. Just enough Caroline to hate as well as other horrible characters. I do love to see them set down.
A very good book, I will be telling my friends about it
August 21, 2023
The Fire at Longbourn
Another good story by Laraba Kendig. Unfortunately the Meryton Assembly remark was still made, but overlooked by Elizabeth when Darcy stepped up to help the family when fire broke out at Longbourn. His command of the fire brigade helped save Longbourn except the east wing where the fire started. Mary rushed to save her mother still in her bedroom. As the Bennets rebuild Longbourn, Bingley and Darcy become everyday fixtures helping as much as they can to give moral support and helpful guidance. As time goes by, Darcy falls more in love with Elizabeth. As Wickham’s situation becomes more desperate, he begins to make plans to elope with Mary King. Lydia overhears his plans and decides to be a heroine and save Mary from the scoundrel hoping that she’ll make her mother proud. She’s still not been forgiven for starting the fire. The night of the elopement, she confronts Wickham’s in front of Mary. Angry, he begins to choke Lydia. Luckily, Elizabeth has followed her and stops him from killing her, but not before Wickham punches her. Finding a brick in the snow, she clobbers him. Jane upset has contacted Bingley since her father was in London. Darcy and Bingley both show up and Darcy is infuriated with what Wickham has done. As Wickham’s life ebbs away, the three young ladies lives are hanging in the balance of being compromised. Darcy ends that for Elizabeth by proposing. When Wickham’s deeds are brought to light, everything but his death is hushed up. Elizabeth and Lydia are taken to London to heal away from the prying eyes of Meryton. Confrontation with Lady Catherine was interesting and Elizabeth’s parting words left her speechless. Mr. Bennet becomes a better husband and father since the fire took his beloved library. The east wing which was the oldest part of the home was not rebuilt, but a new kitchen and renovated rooms were installed. Good read.
Another good story by Laraba Kendig. Unfortunately the Meryton Assembly remark was still made, but overlooked by Elizabeth when Darcy stepped up to help the family when fire broke out at Longbourn. His command of the fire brigade helped save Longbourn except the east wing where the fire started. Mary rushed to save her mother still in her bedroom. As the Bennets rebuild Longbourn, Bingley and Darcy become everyday fixtures helping as much as they can to give moral support and helpful guidance. As time goes by, Darcy falls more in love with Elizabeth. As Wickham’s situation becomes more desperate, he begins to make plans to elope with Mary King. Lydia overhears his plans and decides to be a heroine and save Mary from the scoundrel hoping that she’ll make her mother proud. She’s still not been forgiven for starting the fire. The night of the elopement, she confronts Wickham’s in front of Mary. Angry, he begins to choke Lydia. Luckily, Elizabeth has followed her and stops him from killing her, but not before Wickham punches her. Finding a brick in the snow, she clobbers him. Jane upset has contacted Bingley since her father was in London. Darcy and Bingley both show up and Darcy is infuriated with what Wickham has done. As Wickham’s life ebbs away, the three young ladies lives are hanging in the balance of being compromised. Darcy ends that for Elizabeth by proposing. When Wickham’s deeds are brought to light, everything but his death is hushed up. Elizabeth and Lydia are taken to London to heal away from the prying eyes of Meryton. Confrontation with Lady Catherine was interesting and Elizabeth’s parting words left her speechless. Mr. Bennet becomes a better husband and father since the fire took his beloved library. The east wing which was the oldest part of the home was not rebuilt, but a new kitchen and renovated rooms were installed. Good read.
April 3, 2023
Wonderful
The story begins after Elizabeth's stay at Netherfield nursing Jane. The very day that Jane, Elizabeth and Lydia are in Meryton being introduced to the new militia recruit, Mr Wickham, they receive word that Longbourn is on fire. The fire destroys an entire wing of the mansion, and results in changes for everyone in the Bennett family. Lydia goes from being her mother's favorite to being reviled as the person whose recklessness caused the fire. Mary Bennett goes from being the most ignored daughter to being hailed as a heroine for her courage during the blaze. Mr Bennett has a wakeup call after almost losing a wife and daughter in the fire, and he sheds his lazy and indolent ways. Jane and Elizabeth are forced to economize, and to enforce budgets on their mother and sisters. Kitty becomes the caretaker and comforter of her mother. The daughters all learn to have a much more active role in the chores and management of the household.
Darcy has a major role during and after the fire, and this is definitely a swoon worthy Darcy. He is, however, still fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth. Elizabeth thinks Darcy is too proud, but she hasn't yet been poisoned against him by Wickham's lies. When she learns what a vital role Darcy played in saving Longbourn from much worse damage, she begins to change her attitude, and comes quickly to esteem him. Bingley is given more backbone in this version, and his dealings with Caroline are superb.
There are some nice little dramas in the story that make things interesting. As usual with this author, there are a fair amount of religious references, but not enough to get preachy. The profound changes to the Bennett family are satisfying, as are the ways that the usual villains are dealt with. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
The story begins after Elizabeth's stay at Netherfield nursing Jane. The very day that Jane, Elizabeth and Lydia are in Meryton being introduced to the new militia recruit, Mr Wickham, they receive word that Longbourn is on fire. The fire destroys an entire wing of the mansion, and results in changes for everyone in the Bennett family. Lydia goes from being her mother's favorite to being reviled as the person whose recklessness caused the fire. Mary Bennett goes from being the most ignored daughter to being hailed as a heroine for her courage during the blaze. Mr Bennett has a wakeup call after almost losing a wife and daughter in the fire, and he sheds his lazy and indolent ways. Jane and Elizabeth are forced to economize, and to enforce budgets on their mother and sisters. Kitty becomes the caretaker and comforter of her mother. The daughters all learn to have a much more active role in the chores and management of the household.
Darcy has a major role during and after the fire, and this is definitely a swoon worthy Darcy. He is, however, still fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth. Elizabeth thinks Darcy is too proud, but she hasn't yet been poisoned against him by Wickham's lies. When she learns what a vital role Darcy played in saving Longbourn from much worse damage, she begins to change her attitude, and comes quickly to esteem him. Bingley is given more backbone in this version, and his dealings with Caroline are superb.
There are some nice little dramas in the story that make things interesting. As usual with this author, there are a fair amount of religious references, but not enough to get preachy. The profound changes to the Bennett family are satisfying, as are the ways that the usual villains are dealt with. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
April 27, 2023
Absolutely wonderful
I was following this story on a fan fiction site while it was being written but wasn't able to read past the 24th chapter so was pleased to see it published. I absolutely love this story!
This is possibly the first time I didn't hate Lydia and actually felt sorry for her!
My favorite part was the last few chapters were we are shown what happens in the future!
I highly recommend this story because the writer has given us a great tale ( as usual!)
I was following this story on a fan fiction site while it was being written but wasn't able to read past the 24th chapter so was pleased to see it published. I absolutely love this story!
This is possibly the first time I didn't hate Lydia and actually felt sorry for her!
My favorite part was the last few chapters were we are shown what happens in the future!
I highly recommend this story because the writer has given us a great tale ( as usual!)
July 3, 2025
I feel mislead by other reviews
This story was more about Lydia than it was about Darcy and Elizabeth's love story. While Mr. Bennet did become more involved in his family after the fire, he certainly didn't take charge of anything with enthusiasm. If his book room wasn't destroyed, I felt like he wouldn't have changed much. while Mary was very heroic, it did not change who she was. If anything, she was somewhat more withdrawn. Mrs. Bennet did not change, except for who her favorite was. After the Wickham incident, sending Lizzy and Lydia to London would have probably caused more gossip than if they stayed home in hiding. Also, Caroline really didn't get much of a comeuppance. It was a good premise that could have been taken farther.
This story was more about Lydia than it was about Darcy and Elizabeth's love story. While Mr. Bennet did become more involved in his family after the fire, he certainly didn't take charge of anything with enthusiasm. If his book room wasn't destroyed, I felt like he wouldn't have changed much. while Mary was very heroic, it did not change who she was. If anything, she was somewhat more withdrawn. Mrs. Bennet did not change, except for who her favorite was. After the Wickham incident, sending Lizzy and Lydia to London would have probably caused more gossip than if they stayed home in hiding. Also, Caroline really didn't get much of a comeuppance. It was a good premise that could have been taken farther.
October 13, 2023
I liked the plot overall with the fire since it changes characters' actions in a smart and interesting way. I especially liked the resolution of Wickham's plotline. He rarely gets what he deserves in these stories but this time he does. The romance makes sense but it's more like we hear about it than experience it. There are very few situations with just Darcy and Lizzie. I liked the way events affect Lydia and almost wished she had been the central character of this story. A coming of age story like this would've worked way better than romance since, like I said, there's very little by way of stoking the romantic development.
I also didn't find the writing to be that compelling. It has a trudging, methodical quality, with scenes following closely after one another in time. The plot takes place over the course of a few weeks and it feels like we attend every dinner, meeting in the sitting room, and get-together any of the characters have. The dialogue is also pretty casual and American sounding at points. While it won't bother most people, there's also a religious undertone to this story that I rarely read in these books. Mr Bennet "thanking the Almighty" is hardly something I would expect in his characterization. His mocking attitude (notably of Mr Collins), general disdain for Mary's moralizing, and humanist tendencies as a reader make any thoughts of active piousness seem more reflective of writer than character. She also notably recuperates Mary, the most unlikable Bennet sister besides Kitty.
Overall, not bad, but also not something I would necessarily recommend, having read a lot of JAFF books. The premise is good, but the execution isn't that compelling. The last 20% of the book is also very boring and difficult to get through, since the conflict is basically over. I don't know why the Catherine de B confrontation, for instance, always needs to happen when it's always the exact same as Austen's version.
I also didn't find the writing to be that compelling. It has a trudging, methodical quality, with scenes following closely after one another in time. The plot takes place over the course of a few weeks and it feels like we attend every dinner, meeting in the sitting room, and get-together any of the characters have. The dialogue is also pretty casual and American sounding at points. While it won't bother most people, there's also a religious undertone to this story that I rarely read in these books. Mr Bennet "thanking the Almighty" is hardly something I would expect in his characterization. His mocking attitude (notably of Mr Collins), general disdain for Mary's moralizing, and humanist tendencies as a reader make any thoughts of active piousness seem more reflective of writer than character. She also notably recuperates Mary, the most unlikable Bennet sister besides Kitty.
Overall, not bad, but also not something I would necessarily recommend, having read a lot of JAFF books. The premise is good, but the execution isn't that compelling. The last 20% of the book is also very boring and difficult to get through, since the conflict is basically over. I don't know why the Catherine de B confrontation, for instance, always needs to happen when it's always the exact same as Austen's version.
January 25, 2024
I loved it!
The story is well written, and canvases, the viewpoints of all of the sisters at various points. It also covers the time gaps well and it doesn’t have those linger forever chapters. As a P&P fan, I am always drawn in by how changing just a few details and character interactions with the plot can lead to a domino effect of a completely new story. I found that through the experience of the fire at Longbourn, there was just so much more focus on the Bennett family and in particular their reactions to this situation. While there may have been a bit less focus on the romantic aspect of Darcy and Elizabeth, there was certainly more exploration into the lives and personalities of them, plus many more characters. I found this made for a much more rounded story as we learn more about all of the people involved. I too have always enjoyed watching the love story of Darcy and Elizabeth unfold and feel this plot tapped into more of the deeper aspect of their connection and not just the initial romance. As with any HEA, it is always quite satisfying to see snippets into the future for many of the characters and see that their happiness and lives have been fulfilled. This Pride and Prejudice variation while holding true to key details brought out a different/more complete level of reading satisfaction in the end. Highly recommend to everyone!
The story is well written, and canvases, the viewpoints of all of the sisters at various points. It also covers the time gaps well and it doesn’t have those linger forever chapters. As a P&P fan, I am always drawn in by how changing just a few details and character interactions with the plot can lead to a domino effect of a completely new story. I found that through the experience of the fire at Longbourn, there was just so much more focus on the Bennett family and in particular their reactions to this situation. While there may have been a bit less focus on the romantic aspect of Darcy and Elizabeth, there was certainly more exploration into the lives and personalities of them, plus many more characters. I found this made for a much more rounded story as we learn more about all of the people involved. I too have always enjoyed watching the love story of Darcy and Elizabeth unfold and feel this plot tapped into more of the deeper aspect of their connection and not just the initial romance. As with any HEA, it is always quite satisfying to see snippets into the future for many of the characters and see that their happiness and lives have been fulfilled. This Pride and Prejudice variation while holding true to key details brought out a different/more complete level of reading satisfaction in the end. Highly recommend to everyone!
October 15, 2023
I liked that in this dramatic story the careless characters in P&P see the truth of their behavior and work to be better. Growth arcs are pretty huge. It is strange that in the book I read before this, Wickham was a good guy and in this one he is about as opposite to that as he can be. The whole situation was pretty horrific but I do like that he doesn't get away with his behavior. We get some of the story told from Wickham's point of view so the reader is really aware of the darkness around him.
I also loved that Caroline gets the consequences of her actions too.
The romance between Elizabeth and Darcy is like they fall in love without spending much time together. It is more that they are aware of who the other person truly is and fall in love with that knowledge. Still, I rather like variations where it doesn't take months and separations for them to get to be together. I prefer the big conflicts to come from outside their relationship which is the case in this one.
I enjoyed the book.
Light Christian themes
Sex: no
Language: no
Violence: yes
I also loved that Caroline gets the consequences of her actions too.
The romance between Elizabeth and Darcy is like they fall in love without spending much time together. It is more that they are aware of who the other person truly is and fall in love with that knowledge. Still, I rather like variations where it doesn't take months and separations for them to get to be together. I prefer the big conflicts to come from outside their relationship which is the case in this one.
I enjoyed the book.
Light Christian themes
Sex: no
Language: no
Violence: yes
May 12, 2023
A mostly Lydia story...and good
The book focused on the changes in the various characters due to a fire at Longbourn. There are great changes primarily in Lydia, Mr. Bennett, and Elizabeth. Mr. Darcy, having helped significantly during the fire, develops a closer relationship with the Bennetts. Lydia deals with not being a pampered brat and trues to turn her fortunes around, greatly to her detriment. I liked seeing the relationship build between Darcy and Elizabeth as well as Bingley's character development with Jane. However this was one of the few books I've read where I enjoyed reading about Lydia, mainly because you get to see how she thinks and decides on things that lead to changes in her character. Overall a great book.
The book focused on the changes in the various characters due to a fire at Longbourn. There are great changes primarily in Lydia, Mr. Bennett, and Elizabeth. Mr. Darcy, having helped significantly during the fire, develops a closer relationship with the Bennetts. Lydia deals with not being a pampered brat and trues to turn her fortunes around, greatly to her detriment. I liked seeing the relationship build between Darcy and Elizabeth as well as Bingley's character development with Jane. However this was one of the few books I've read where I enjoyed reading about Lydia, mainly because you get to see how she thinks and decides on things that lead to changes in her character. Overall a great book.
May 21, 2023
Not What I Expected
This story is wonderfully written. While there were some grammar glitches, the feel and flow were wonderful.
Elizabeth is her strong assuming self. Darcy is his enduring arrogant take charge self.
The twist was Mr. Bennett, Mrs. Bennett, Mary, and Lydia.
These drastic in some or subtle changes in others made this a charming story.
Mr. Wickham was worse then most stories and Caroline was dealt with by Charles extremely well.
Yes they all had a happily ever after. Sometimes with the changes characters under go and the hardships they are dealt they deserve a HEA.
I did tend to skip around but found myself going back and reading those parts.
My only complaint was the ending - I wanted more.
This story is wonderfully written. While there were some grammar glitches, the feel and flow were wonderful.
Elizabeth is her strong assuming self. Darcy is his enduring arrogant take charge self.
The twist was Mr. Bennett, Mrs. Bennett, Mary, and Lydia.
These drastic in some or subtle changes in others made this a charming story.
Mr. Wickham was worse then most stories and Caroline was dealt with by Charles extremely well.
Yes they all had a happily ever after. Sometimes with the changes characters under go and the hardships they are dealt they deserve a HEA.
I did tend to skip around but found myself going back and reading those parts.
My only complaint was the ending - I wanted more.
September 13, 2023
4/5 - Sweet and Unique
I liked this book. A fire at Longbourn gives Lizzy an opportunity to see Darcy at his best, changing their relationship and the trajectory of the story. The excitement of the fire is over quickly, and most of the story is about the aftermath/cleanup. There's also some drama with Wickham, but overall, it's a fairly sweet, low-angst read.
However, there were a couple of things I wasn't crazy about. First, the POV jumped around too much. I guess it was third person omniscient, but the location / main subject changed often. There'd be maybe a page of Lydia, then Mr. Bennett, then Lizzy for longer, etc. It wasn't badly written, it just wasn't my favorite style. Also, I thought the resolution at the end went on a bit too long.
I liked this book. A fire at Longbourn gives Lizzy an opportunity to see Darcy at his best, changing their relationship and the trajectory of the story. The excitement of the fire is over quickly, and most of the story is about the aftermath/cleanup. There's also some drama with Wickham, but overall, it's a fairly sweet, low-angst read.
However, there were a couple of things I wasn't crazy about. First, the POV jumped around too much. I guess it was third person omniscient, but the location / main subject changed often. There'd be maybe a page of Lydia, then Mr. Bennett, then Lizzy for longer, etc. It wasn't badly written, it just wasn't my favorite style. Also, I thought the resolution at the end went on a bit too long.
June 29, 2024
Your world changes after a house fire!
I haven’t read books by this author recently but am very glad I decided to start again. It is enjoyable to read a story where at least one of E’s younger sisters is highlighted and her character developed. All members of the Bennet family experience profound changes as a result of the fire and the following events. The “villains” are similar in personality to canon, though the context is different. The epilogue was very good.
There were some editing errors that temporarily disrupted the flow, such as missing or extra words. Overall the writing and editing were well done.
Recommended for JAFF readers for a day when you could read without interruptions.
I haven’t read books by this author recently but am very glad I decided to start again. It is enjoyable to read a story where at least one of E’s younger sisters is highlighted and her character developed. All members of the Bennet family experience profound changes as a result of the fire and the following events. The “villains” are similar in personality to canon, though the context is different. The epilogue was very good.
There were some editing errors that temporarily disrupted the flow, such as missing or extra words. Overall the writing and editing were well done.
Recommended for JAFF readers for a day when you could read without interruptions.
February 20, 2024
When true tragedy is averted, healthy changes occur which, eventually, benefit many.
Sometimes, it takes a wake-up call to truly make one aware of a need to adjust, not only one's behavior but one's attitude. Such was the case for the Bennet family members after the fire at Longborn. Rising to action, Mr. Darcy was able to see Miss Elizabeth as a capable, brave,loyal woman worthy of his affection. He began to gain insight as to, the real Mr. Bennet , and appreciate, each individual member of the family. Each one spurred on to do better and help others. This was an upbuilding, wonderful story. Enjoy!
Sometimes, it takes a wake-up call to truly make one aware of a need to adjust, not only one's behavior but one's attitude. Such was the case for the Bennet family members after the fire at Longborn. Rising to action, Mr. Darcy was able to see Miss Elizabeth as a capable, brave,loyal woman worthy of his affection. He began to gain insight as to, the real Mr. Bennet , and appreciate, each individual member of the family. Each one spurred on to do better and help others. This was an upbuilding, wonderful story. Enjoy!
May 2, 2023
3.5 Stars rounded up. Took me a few days to read through this because I kept picking it up and putting it down as it didn't hold my interest as much as I wanted it too. I did like this variation, the changes made to the characters made sense and worked well. My biggest complaint is (spoiler) not processing their involvement with the death of (spoiler). It was glossed over which I really think wouldn't have happened had this happened with this character in canon.
September 15, 2023
An interesting what-if variation that highlights just how much people change after going through traumatizing events. I greatly enjoyed seeing the Bennet family come together and grow as they tried to overcome the challenges presented by a fire at Longbourn. Wickham's part in the story seemed a bit out of character as he never read as violent to me, but I loved Lydia's character arc and seeing her grow into an adult.
April 5, 2023
Very enjoyable, different and engaging
I really enjoyed this book. A nicely paced, unique varietion of JAFF books.
The usual suspects, but Wickham is way worse! (don't worry the author resolves him nicely!)
Due to a dramatic plot twist, the trajectories of most of the characters shifts abruptly.
Darcy to the rescue!
I highly recommend this book, and the author.
I really enjoyed this book. A nicely paced, unique varietion of JAFF books.
The usual suspects, but Wickham is way worse! (don't worry the author resolves him nicely!)
Due to a dramatic plot twist, the trajectories of most of the characters shifts abruptly.
Darcy to the rescue!
I highly recommend this book, and the author.
April 19, 2023
A Lovely Story
For such a fearful title, this is a lovely book. The heroines and heroes fill you with pride and fear and awe at how they do what they must do. And watching the changes that the characters go through is quite wonderful. I enjoyed this book very much. Said with a deep sigh of satisfaction.
For such a fearful title, this is a lovely book. The heroines and heroes fill you with pride and fear and awe at how they do what they must do. And watching the changes that the characters go through is quite wonderful. I enjoyed this book very much. Said with a deep sigh of satisfaction.
April 21, 2023
Excellent Book
Lydia accidentally caused a fire at longborn, and everyone helps to put it out in sliding Mr Darcy who takes charge getting a bucket line going. Mr Wickham shows himself a scoundrel as he gets to run away with Miss King and Lydia tried to stop him he then turns violently on her and Elizabeth.
Lydia accidentally caused a fire at longborn, and everyone helps to put it out in sliding Mr Darcy who takes charge getting a bucket line going. Mr Wickham shows himself a scoundrel as he gets to run away with Miss King and Lydia tried to stop him he then turns violently on her and Elizabeth.
August 29, 2025
another good one from this author
I love the variations from Kendig. You really get to know the characters and the twists are always interesting. I love that Lydia is quite redeemed in this one. Well done!
Definitely great fit for those looking for low angst between ODC and a clean read.
I love the variations from Kendig. You really get to know the characters and the twists are always interesting. I love that Lydia is quite redeemed in this one. Well done!
Definitely great fit for those looking for low angst between ODC and a clean read.
April 6, 2023
Different and wonderful
I greatly enjoyed this particular book and the various ways our dear couple found themselves in a difficult situation. I recommend it for a good read. I read it in a day.
I greatly enjoyed this particular book and the various ways our dear couple found themselves in a difficult situation. I recommend it for a good read. I read it in a day.
April 7, 2023
Wonderful
Laraba Kendig has a great style. Relaxing to read BUT with enough spice that you don’t get bored. The story was interesting but the characters behaved in a believable way.
Laraba Kendig has a great style. Relaxing to read BUT with enough spice that you don’t get bored. The story was interesting but the characters behaved in a believable way.
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