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540 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 28, 2023
"As soon as the stone touched her neck, it sealed itself around her. Ciaran draped the lead in such a way it looked like an intricate necklace. She looked slightly uncertain and softly touched the stone around her neck."The following was taken from Kes's POV about Anin at 49%
"Kes saw the look of surprise when the collar locked into place and she could barely feel it. He slowly took the lead and draped it in a way around her neck and shoulders that made it look like an ornate piece of jewelry."Then there were aspects of the actual writing style I didn't like. The dialogue felt very "old fashioned". Like it fell into the trap that to make us believe they were royal and Fae they needed to talk in Victorian English - there was not one contraction in the book. Any shouldn't, wouldn't, couldn't, hadn't, was should not, would not, could not, had not. Now I take it that this might have been a very cognisant decision in the writing style, but it led to dialog sounding forced and unnatual.