Well, it ended. And it tried, it really tried (I looked back and said this exact thing for the first volume), and I appreciate that. Even with such a quick wrap-up, I even appreciated the ending, as unearned as it felt. But this was kind of a mess the whole time and never felt believable.
It starts off on what I’d suggest is the wrong foot, with Ayaka loudly proclaiming her love for Hiroko in front of the whole office. Even if everybody just brushes it off as Ayaka’s own feelings, that’s perilously close to outing somebody against their wishes just so you can date.
Ayaka is meant to be depicted as headstrong, but I felt like her dominant characterization was being thoughtless and pushy. She acts like she’s never heard of the term ‘in the closet’ before, which makes sense since it wouldn’t fit beneath the rock she must be living under.
Ayaka pursues Hiroko relentlessly and tries everything in the book, including dressing up as Hiroko’s old boss who was forced out of the company in the last flashback. None of it makes sense or reads terribly well - some of her outfits feel like no company in Japan would let her work there.
This series focuses on the wrong thing, expecting this pairing with basically zero chemistry to draw the audience in. For my money, it’s actually Hiroko who’s the interesting one and this should have been more focused on her and her journey.
While I’m really not fussed with the story, I did say it tried hard and, well, it does. It wants to be making a point about old values versus new and showing how all the department supports Hiroko no matter who she is or what she does.
I mean, I know Japan has gotten a little better and all, but this doesn’t feel likely for a second and it’s all just kind of meandering. Does Hiroko’s old flame show up in a surprise cameo? Of course! And for no good reason? Also of course!
My major complaint is the total lack of chemistry here, as noted. Minus one hell of a move by Hiroko at the end, there’s nothing here that feels like these two really want one another. Part of that is definitely down to Ayaka’s lack of emotional maturity.
Still, the very ending is interesting because of where it leaves our leads. It’s where you think, but also not quite where you think and its quiet message that love doesn’t solve every problem was rather unique.
Was it worth the trip to get here though? Eh, it’s tough, I don’t know that I would read this a second time (the perils of buying all these out of pocket). There are a couple of moments here - Hiroko’s past as a womanizer made for an amusing side story - but it fell a bit flat overall.
3 stars - points for effort, as they say. It came, it saw, it tried its best. Much better than the alternative, even if the outcome is much the same.
Geez, this one was tough to read. And while I do get some parts on how Hiroko got to be who she is... geez, lord, girl. At least give it a shot before acting like a total bitch. I am happy to see that they were able to talk things out and things got a happy ending, but gosh, lord, it took way too long and I am done. Not recommended.
Really cute and a little frustrating how oblivious Hiroko can be. Ayaka literally throwing herself at her and she’s still talkin herself down. Still an interesting story of self discovery, love, acceptance of yourself and others. Definitely some triggers to with age gap, boss and subordinate as well as possibly not respecting a boundary of no? But then there’d be no story so… *shrugs* 8/10
Loved this final volume. I really liked the way some things came full circle, such as Ayaka getting help from Chinatsu, with neither woman actually aware of the connection. I will complain that there was a moment in the second volume where Risa and the bar owner seemed to be vibing, so I’m a bit sad that didn’t pay off. But I loved it otherwise.
puta que pariu esperava bem mais... a mona tinha a faca e o queijo na mão. extremamente repetitivo, a história simplesmente não anda. desperdiçou ótimas personagens e um plot promissor. podia ter muito mais smut tbm (basicamente não tem)
Urgh. I'm happy for them, understood their worries, actually enjoyed the social commentary, but at the same time, this was quite the frustrating read. Good job for Ayaka for staying strong.
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I will buy anything this woman makes. No one does lesbian angst and ennui with enough comic overtones to keep it from being pitch-black depressing like Sal Jiang.