The story line was interesting and quite enthralling.
However it was seriously marred by missed out words, duplicated words, poor grammar, and particularly a significant lack of punctuation. I was frustrated and confused by very long sentences (many over 70 words) with no commas, which resulted in losing the meaning intended. Also, the chapters expounding the political viewpoint of the story were decidedly confusing, and I found the ending too short and limiting.
Nevertheless, the novel had sufficient merit to keep me interested until the end, but it would really benefit from a proof-read rewrite.