I Will Never be Yours

by Melan Pamp

Genres: Paranormal Romance

Unknown Binding

Reviews

[An]

Good story. Bud im going to stop reading on these apps because it so time consuming and addictive for some people, what can cause you to spend money on this stuff. It is better to just buy a book.

[Olivia Clark · Rating 2 out of 5]

I don’t even know where I find these books.

The actual story line is pretty good! With some edits and adjustment Kians character it would be much more solid.

The MMC is hard to like. And every time I warmed up a bit he did something else horrible.

Also I believe this may have been written in a different language and then translated to English based on All the typos.

[Missoula · Rating 2 out of 5]

With A LOT of clean up and editing this book could easily be at least four stars. The amount of typos is abysmal, it like it was originally written in another language and then poorly translated. However I really enjoyed the story line and eventually the characters. Fortunately I was able to read this book from a website and not the pay per chapter app. I'm not sorry I read this book, it was entertaining although a bit on the long side for what was going on with the plot.

[J-Me Jamie · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a really good book. Yes there are a tone of typos in it. However, you can tell that the only reason there are typos is because it happened when it was translated into English from its original language. I really hope there is a second book coming soon!!!

[Alyson Buxey · Rating 3 out of 5]

Is there anything more annoying than a vanishing review?
2.5 ⭐️
I rounded up as it felt only fair for a story that was compelling, I wanted to see what happened, how characters were redeemed. It had a cast of characters that the reader felt invested in and provided an epic adventure.
Unfortunately there were also quite a few problems with the story and text. It clearly had a spell check and no other editing. I try not to be petty but if words like inhales and intoxicating are overused and then appear every time as in hail and in toxic, it becomes extremely irritating.
I expect more violence in paranormal than my usual reads but this still managed to push the boundaries, extending into sexual assault and the FMC as a victim were hard.
My biggest complaint however are the toxic elements of their relationship. It is not excusable to banish your mate, leave her with nothing and no one, aware that she may die because you are grieving.
It is not ok to imprison your mate because you were scared.
It is not ok to kiss your mate when she has expressly stated she doesn’t want it because of the mate bond
It is not ok to desert your mate because you are busy with other things and leave her feeling dejected and alone. Kian is a lovely partner at the end but I didn’t really accept the character arc. I felt like he was a jerk for an extraordinarily long time and then abruptly realised he was being a jerk and is lovely ever after. It felt inauthentic after being truly awful and frankly irredeemable he realises the error of his ways and is a supportive partner from then on. I guess those who like alpha holes might appreciate his character
Selene is not perfect, but I don’t expect my MCs to be perfect but to have her shame and guilt compounded by him for an extended period of time was hard to take

[Tea Green · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book reads like it was translated from another language, hence the amount of typos. The story line was great and the novel did not get boring or drag on. The FMC was the right combination of badass and feminine, but the MMC...was too alpha hole. Wish there was more redemption and change. Loved how the FMC stayed strong and independent up to point. Wouldn't be a romance if she kept telling him to piss off. Love how the ending wrapped everything up but still sets up the for a sequel. Overall, great story. Would love for a sequel!

[jellyttea · Rating 2 out of 5]

The storyline is quite good as an entry book to Alpha/Werewolf genres but it was a little predictable at times. There were many grammatical errors due to translations and/or language barriers. With some further editing I think it could be a really good book.

[Candice · Rating 1 out of 5]

Just way too many typos. Story is not smooth. The plot was good but many holes. I am not fond of thr main character.

[Cedelia Triggs · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a really good book. I enjoyed reading it and it kept my attention.

[Maggie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good story. Bad grammar.

[Hailey Collins · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great story line with great plot twist! With the right proofreading and edits this book will be really good!

[Laurie GREEMAN · Rating 3 out of 5]

The base of the story is good but the book is only available on app who you pay by chapter and the one you found on internet are full of mistakes !

[Victoria Higdon · Rating 2 out of 5]

The story itself was good. The grammatical errors made it difficult to read.

[Emy · Rating 4 out of 5]

after not reading a werewolf story in a while this was a good story make me feel comfy in the genre again. I actually liked it and will be searching for similar stories to read!
It probably is very standard to those that read this type of stuff regularly but the twist of her having to get to know the two challengers (them having some substance) and the vampires joining the story kept me entertained and sucked in.