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King Alfred's Daughter: The remarkable story of Æthelflæd, Lady of the Mercians, the heroine who was written out of history
King Alfred is dead and the achievements that made him great are in jeopardy. Rebels challenge the succession of his son Edward to the Wessex throne, and his old ally in Mercia is sick. The Vikings in the Danelaw sense the time has come to complete their conquest of England. It falls on Alfred’s firstborn, his daughter, Æthelflæd, to unite the Anglo-Saxons. Reluctantly, she takes up the challenge. But can a woman rebuild ruined towns and lead men into battle against hardened Viking warriors? And can Æthelflæd fulfil her father’s dream of uniting England? Based on contemporary sources and archaeological evidence, King Alfred’s Daughter is rich in drama, family conflict and historical achievement.
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Published March 22, 2023
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May 12, 2023
'It tells of a woman who brought the Angles and the Saxons together to create England. Yes, it was a woman. Not a king nor a warlord, nor a magician. A woman.'
'King Alfred's Daughter', brings to life Aethelflaed's key contribution to England's history during the 10th Century when not only were there still regular Viking invasions, but England had not yet unified as a country or as Christians. When her husband, Lord of Mercia becomes incapacitated due to ill health, Aethelflaed increasingly takes on his leadership responsibilities. When you have the wild Welsh sharing one border and the Vikings of Danelaw sharing another, defense and military prowess are key. It isn't long before Aethelflaed must make life-and-death decisions for her and her people. When her husband finally dies, the Witan and King of Wessex decide that Aethelflaed should continue to lead her people as Lady of the Mercians.
I'm so glad I read this book. I was aware of Aethelflaed and some of her military contributions but there is so little written about her - both fiction and non-fiction. I enjoyed the way David Stokes brought Aethelflaed's story to life using a memoir, reflection style. By writing in the first person, Stokes is able to highlight the nuanced ways in which Aethelflaed may have approached and thought about leadership, military tactics, and war, 'They should fear the force of my tongue, not my sword.' Further, Stokes includes a map, family tree, list of names, historical timeline, and notes to not only wrap the story with accurate context but to highlight what is ultimately fact and fiction within his story. For me, the story had a couple of lulls in pacing but I still am more than happy to recommend it to all history lovers and Anglophiles - especially those taken with stories from The Last Kingdom and Vikings. Well worth a read.
'King Alfred's Daughter', brings to life Aethelflaed's key contribution to England's history during the 10th Century when not only were there still regular Viking invasions, but England had not yet unified as a country or as Christians. When her husband, Lord of Mercia becomes incapacitated due to ill health, Aethelflaed increasingly takes on his leadership responsibilities. When you have the wild Welsh sharing one border and the Vikings of Danelaw sharing another, defense and military prowess are key. It isn't long before Aethelflaed must make life-and-death decisions for her and her people. When her husband finally dies, the Witan and King of Wessex decide that Aethelflaed should continue to lead her people as Lady of the Mercians.
I'm so glad I read this book. I was aware of Aethelflaed and some of her military contributions but there is so little written about her - both fiction and non-fiction. I enjoyed the way David Stokes brought Aethelflaed's story to life using a memoir, reflection style. By writing in the first person, Stokes is able to highlight the nuanced ways in which Aethelflaed may have approached and thought about leadership, military tactics, and war, 'They should fear the force of my tongue, not my sword.' Further, Stokes includes a map, family tree, list of names, historical timeline, and notes to not only wrap the story with accurate context but to highlight what is ultimately fact and fiction within his story. For me, the story had a couple of lulls in pacing but I still am more than happy to recommend it to all history lovers and Anglophiles - especially those taken with stories from The Last Kingdom and Vikings. Well worth a read.
February 21, 2025
Being a huge fan of the time period and from Mercia myself, I was convinced this would be the perfect book for me.
I was really looking forward to reading about Æthelflæd’s story (acknowledging that the lack of primary evidence necessitates there having to be some gaps filled in) and in terms of the history and what I learned in this book, I certainly felt like I did get a lot of the history I wanted.
Unfortunately though, I can’t say that the book is amazing or that I loved it, even though it has its positives. This is one of the harder reviews I’ve had to write. Mainly because I can’t quite pinpoint exactly why it didn’t click perfectly with me or flow how I wanted it to.
There was nothing that really drove me to want to pick the book up; I wasn’t invested in the characters or desperate to know what happened next. I can’t point out some tangible example of poor writing (and I’m not saying the writing is poor) but it just didn’t really work for me as much as I expected it to.
What the author does excel in is his knowledge of the period and that alone is one reason to give this book a chance. It made me want to research further but perhaps this is at the detriment to the story. Stokes has a great respect for Æthelflæd and for the forgotten women of history and I really like that. I love that her story has been given voice here. But when I compare it to other historical fiction that has made me feel emotional, passionate and on the edge of my seat, unfortunately this book just never got its claws into me in a meaningful way.
I say this, but I was hooked on the battle scenes, which are really exciting and visceral. I know not all the book can be action, but I feel I would have liked to have felt this way through the book’s quieter moments too rather than just being impressed with the historical accuracy and opportunities to show this. In one respect we shouldn’t wish for less historical accuracy in a world where some historical fiction leaves a lot to be desired, but it really would have benefited from a little more excitement and even taking a few more liberties perhaps.
Maybe if I read this book on holiday or somewhere really relaxing, it would be easier to enjoy without the need for more edge of your seat moments or characters that you really want to spend time with.
I would recommend this book to some readers, and going by the existing reviews I’m glad there were a lot of readers who loved it, seeing as so much work evidently went into the writing and research! Enthusiasts for the time period will certainly appreciate how the author has woven the existing research into a narrative which is certainly an undertaking I can appreciate.
I was really looking forward to reading about Æthelflæd’s story (acknowledging that the lack of primary evidence necessitates there having to be some gaps filled in) and in terms of the history and what I learned in this book, I certainly felt like I did get a lot of the history I wanted.
Unfortunately though, I can’t say that the book is amazing or that I loved it, even though it has its positives. This is one of the harder reviews I’ve had to write. Mainly because I can’t quite pinpoint exactly why it didn’t click perfectly with me or flow how I wanted it to.
There was nothing that really drove me to want to pick the book up; I wasn’t invested in the characters or desperate to know what happened next. I can’t point out some tangible example of poor writing (and I’m not saying the writing is poor) but it just didn’t really work for me as much as I expected it to.
What the author does excel in is his knowledge of the period and that alone is one reason to give this book a chance. It made me want to research further but perhaps this is at the detriment to the story. Stokes has a great respect for Æthelflæd and for the forgotten women of history and I really like that. I love that her story has been given voice here. But when I compare it to other historical fiction that has made me feel emotional, passionate and on the edge of my seat, unfortunately this book just never got its claws into me in a meaningful way.
I say this, but I was hooked on the battle scenes, which are really exciting and visceral. I know not all the book can be action, but I feel I would have liked to have felt this way through the book’s quieter moments too rather than just being impressed with the historical accuracy and opportunities to show this. In one respect we shouldn’t wish for less historical accuracy in a world where some historical fiction leaves a lot to be desired, but it really would have benefited from a little more excitement and even taking a few more liberties perhaps.
Maybe if I read this book on holiday or somewhere really relaxing, it would be easier to enjoy without the need for more edge of your seat moments or characters that you really want to spend time with.
I would recommend this book to some readers, and going by the existing reviews I’m glad there were a lot of readers who loved it, seeing as so much work evidently went into the writing and research! Enthusiasts for the time period will certainly appreciate how the author has woven the existing research into a narrative which is certainly an undertaking I can appreciate.
May 2, 2023
A historical novel based on the life of Æthelflæd, the Lady of the Mercians. It’s well researched with a timeline of events and historical note at the end. Written in the first person, almost like a diary or a chronicle of events, it gives a good overview of her life and a view of King Edward and the future King Athelstan, and of course all the battles with the Danes, and Norse and the Welsh!
May 16, 2023
I was incredibly excited to read King Alfred's Daughter: The Remarkable story of Aethelflaed, Lady of the Mericans, the heroine was written out of history. I first discovered Aethelflaed through the tv show The Last Kingdom, which inspired be to read more about this real life historical figure who is largely unknown by many.
Unfortunately, this book really let me down and I had to drag myself through start to finish. I just don't think this book could decide what it wanted to be - I felt Stokes struggled to balance and blend an academic/historian voice with that of a fictional writer. Due to this, the prose, and therefore the characterisation, felt disjointed and inconsistent. The multiple time jumps did the characters no favour either - we'd jump ahead in time and the characters would be different (but also not really) and it felt so hard to connect with them when we had missed out on so much of their story.
Overall, I just found the writing really weak. It lacked any type of complexity and just felt really poor, and again, I'm really disappointed by this.
I also found it interesting (and I wonder if this is Stokes making a point with the use of irony) that this book was written to give Aethelflaed the recognition she deserves for her role she played in uniting England, 'King Alfred's Daughter' failing to call her by her own name! I am hoping this was an intentional choice (like I said earlier, using irony/satire) and not just because it wasn't well thought out, therefore being unintentionally ironic.
My two stars were awarded because I did like the start of this novel, and I did find it interesting that this was written like a diary/chronicle. However, this wasn't always executed the best . . .
I also did like how some of the events were interpreted/fictionalised and I appreciated the notes at the end explaining why these choices were made.
Thank you to the Book Guild for sending me this e-arc in exchange for an honest review.
All in all, just didn't really like this, I expected a lot better.
Unfortunately, this book really let me down and I had to drag myself through start to finish. I just don't think this book could decide what it wanted to be - I felt Stokes struggled to balance and blend an academic/historian voice with that of a fictional writer. Due to this, the prose, and therefore the characterisation, felt disjointed and inconsistent. The multiple time jumps did the characters no favour either - we'd jump ahead in time and the characters would be different (but also not really) and it felt so hard to connect with them when we had missed out on so much of their story.
Overall, I just found the writing really weak. It lacked any type of complexity and just felt really poor, and again, I'm really disappointed by this.
I also found it interesting (and I wonder if this is Stokes making a point with the use of irony) that this book was written to give Aethelflaed the recognition she deserves for her role she played in uniting England, 'King Alfred's Daughter' failing to call her by her own name! I am hoping this was an intentional choice (like I said earlier, using irony/satire) and not just because it wasn't well thought out, therefore being unintentionally ironic.
My two stars were awarded because I did like the start of this novel, and I did find it interesting that this was written like a diary/chronicle. However, this wasn't always executed the best . . .
I also did like how some of the events were interpreted/fictionalised and I appreciated the notes at the end explaining why these choices were made.
Thank you to the Book Guild for sending me this e-arc in exchange for an honest review.
All in all, just didn't really like this, I expected a lot better.
January 24, 2024
A well written page turner. For fans of historical fiction and for those who loved the series The Last Kingdom, this book is a must. The book begins in 899 with the death of Alfred the Great and the succession of his son Edward. Æthelflæd is the daughter of Alfred and sister to Edward. She was married off to the much older King of Mercia, Æthelflæd comes in to her own. She leads Mercia intelligently, builds up Mercia's defences against the Danes and her brother Edward's expansion plans. Æthelflæd takes Athelstan, Edwards first born son who was discarded on Edwards remarriage in favour of a second son. She leads her armies into battled, founded new towns, was an excellent diplomat.
Our titular character is well fleshed out by the author, bringing her to life by using contemporary sources and archaeological evidence.. She was a trailblazer who the first woman to govern an Anglo Saxon state.An excellent blend of history and fiction. The information lists at the start of the book are invaluable of keeping track of who is who. Particularly with names that are similar. The historical notes at the end give a timeline of events that helps put the story into the historical context. as is the map showing England at the time of Æthelflæd and showing the places of battle.
I was gifted a copy of this book by Netgalley for an honest review. Opinions are my own.
Our titular character is well fleshed out by the author, bringing her to life by using contemporary sources and archaeological evidence.. She was a trailblazer who the first woman to govern an Anglo Saxon state.An excellent blend of history and fiction. The information lists at the start of the book are invaluable of keeping track of who is who. Particularly with names that are similar. The historical notes at the end give a timeline of events that helps put the story into the historical context. as is the map showing England at the time of Æthelflæd and showing the places of battle.
I was gifted a copy of this book by Netgalley for an honest review. Opinions are my own.
February 16, 2025
Wow! I absolutely loved this! One of my favourite females in history - this book truly shone light on her impact which is rarely told.
October 28, 2023
I was thrilled to find this novel about the life of Aethelflaed as she's a historical figure I've become fascinated with in the last few years. Stokes sets his narrative from the death of Alfred the Great where we see Aethelflaed come in to her real power as Lady of the Mercians. This is a fast flowing and energetic story that breathes life into these long dead people and their time.
November 7, 2023
In "King Alfred’s Daughter", British author David Stokes suffuses meticulous research with vibrant storytelling to tell the story of Æthelflæd, Lady of the Mercians (c. 870 – June 12, 918). The daughter of King Alfred the Great and his wife Ealhswith, Æthelflæd lives during a tumultuous time in history, fraught with volatile geopolitics, the slow but progressive creation of a unified England, and Viking raids. Our tenacious, intelligent, devout, and occasionally naïve heroine must step into the boots of her legendary father and fulfill his dream: uniting the Anglo-Saxon peoples under one leader.
"King Alfred’s Daughter" presents readers with a historically authentic portrayal of Anglo-Saxon England through the eyes of a devout, intelligent, and loyal heroine. Though few sources survive, historians know Æthelflæd through a few documents including the Mercian Register (also called the Annals of Æthelflæd), a pro-Mercian chronicle detailing events during the reign of King Edward. Author David Stokes takes the frayed ends of these sources and rumors and weaves them together into a plausible tapestry.
Generally, Anglo-Saxon noblewomen yielded little power outside abbeys. Tim Clarkson notes in his biography of Æthelflæd that queens occasionally appeared as witnesses to charters, but beyond that, history relegates these remarkable women as footnotes in a firmly patriarchal society. Æthelflæd proves an exception to this rule, and Stokes admirably fleshes her out while remaining true to the historical record and historiography.
The novel’s Æthelflæd must balance her loyalty to her father’s memory and legacy, the blade’s edge of Mercian sovereignty and Wessexian oversight, and various incursions to ensure the survival of herself, her family, and her people. Of course, it’s impossible to assuredly know Æthelflæd’s feelings in the circumstances in which she found herself. Despite this, I found Stoke’s characterization of the princess believable and realistic. Indeed, the story reads almost as a memoir or journal, a type of narrative structure which works well.
"King Alfred’s Daughter" is a solid piece of historical fiction. Readers will find themselves drawn to the history of the period, written in a very approachable manner which lends well to further exploration. They’ll also appreciate the cast of nuanced characters, from the wise-beyond-his-years Æthelstan and gruff and ursine Æthelred to the heroine herself. History ascribes many great deeds to Lady Æthelflæd, and I highly recommend learning about them for yourself.
Thank you to Mr. Stokes for a copy of his wonderful novel!
"King Alfred’s Daughter" presents readers with a historically authentic portrayal of Anglo-Saxon England through the eyes of a devout, intelligent, and loyal heroine. Though few sources survive, historians know Æthelflæd through a few documents including the Mercian Register (also called the Annals of Æthelflæd), a pro-Mercian chronicle detailing events during the reign of King Edward. Author David Stokes takes the frayed ends of these sources and rumors and weaves them together into a plausible tapestry.
Generally, Anglo-Saxon noblewomen yielded little power outside abbeys. Tim Clarkson notes in his biography of Æthelflæd that queens occasionally appeared as witnesses to charters, but beyond that, history relegates these remarkable women as footnotes in a firmly patriarchal society. Æthelflæd proves an exception to this rule, and Stokes admirably fleshes her out while remaining true to the historical record and historiography.
The novel’s Æthelflæd must balance her loyalty to her father’s memory and legacy, the blade’s edge of Mercian sovereignty and Wessexian oversight, and various incursions to ensure the survival of herself, her family, and her people. Of course, it’s impossible to assuredly know Æthelflæd’s feelings in the circumstances in which she found herself. Despite this, I found Stoke’s characterization of the princess believable and realistic. Indeed, the story reads almost as a memoir or journal, a type of narrative structure which works well.
"King Alfred’s Daughter" is a solid piece of historical fiction. Readers will find themselves drawn to the history of the period, written in a very approachable manner which lends well to further exploration. They’ll also appreciate the cast of nuanced characters, from the wise-beyond-his-years Æthelstan and gruff and ursine Æthelred to the heroine herself. History ascribes many great deeds to Lady Æthelflæd, and I highly recommend learning about them for yourself.
Thank you to Mr. Stokes for a copy of his wonderful novel!
October 18, 2025
The story of Aethelflaeda had always been close to me. My mom told me stories of the fort or burgh she built in my hometown against the Vikings (which is true) and a ghost story of her haunting a secret tunnel between Dudley castle and Wednesbury (which isn't true..or is it?) carrying her head under her arm; which would be weird as she wasn't beheaded and died of natural causes. But when I saw this at my local library it was a must read for me.
Aethelflaeda was the eldest daughter of King Alfred; Alfred the Great, and was known as the Lady of Mercia, the kingdom she ruled, a rarity across Europe that a woman solely commanded both a kingdom and army.
Starting at the death of her father, Aethelflaeda is caught between her brother Edward, crowned as the new king of Wessex and essentially the high king of the kingdoms free from the Vikings – ruling the Danelaw. Desperate to keep the autonomy of Mercia, even if it’s under the overall rule of Edward, Aethelflaeda has to navigate the ambitions of Edward to replace the lord of Mercia with a closer ally, internal rebels that carry old bitter feuds and the constant threats from the Danes as they plan to expand their dominion.
This was an enjoyable read. If you are into Anglo-Saxon history and/or like me, you have a geographical link to the story I think you’ll get something out of it. While some of this book has its embellished parts, much of it is based on actual accounts at the time. While Chroniclers in England downplayed her role, seemingly to elevate Edward, however records from Wales and Ireland show that Aethelflaeda was much more of a war leader and diplomat than Edward’s records gave credit for. There’s enough action here, to give it an excitement kick when needed.
The one thing I feel holds the book back is that, while the story is compelling and interesting the writing holds it back a little. While not bad, its feel it lacks a bit of energy or some sort of spark that could have really help push the story along. I’m not sure if this was deliberate to have a more historical feeling to it or not, to be more placed within that time. The pace of story and style is good though, and the story never really drags, and I read it at quite a quick pace.
I certainly enjoyed it, and I think if you've got an interest in this time of history you'd probably get something out it as well. Would it be enough to draw in readers not big history nerds? I’m not sure, the history is the biggest part, while the characters are strong enough, especially Aethelflaeda, the writing lacks an “edge” that really could have helped it be more impact full. Overall, a good book but the side note that it misses being better by the writing at times feeling a little flat.
Aethelflaeda was the eldest daughter of King Alfred; Alfred the Great, and was known as the Lady of Mercia, the kingdom she ruled, a rarity across Europe that a woman solely commanded both a kingdom and army.
Starting at the death of her father, Aethelflaeda is caught between her brother Edward, crowned as the new king of Wessex and essentially the high king of the kingdoms free from the Vikings – ruling the Danelaw. Desperate to keep the autonomy of Mercia, even if it’s under the overall rule of Edward, Aethelflaeda has to navigate the ambitions of Edward to replace the lord of Mercia with a closer ally, internal rebels that carry old bitter feuds and the constant threats from the Danes as they plan to expand their dominion.
This was an enjoyable read. If you are into Anglo-Saxon history and/or like me, you have a geographical link to the story I think you’ll get something out of it. While some of this book has its embellished parts, much of it is based on actual accounts at the time. While Chroniclers in England downplayed her role, seemingly to elevate Edward, however records from Wales and Ireland show that Aethelflaeda was much more of a war leader and diplomat than Edward’s records gave credit for. There’s enough action here, to give it an excitement kick when needed.
The one thing I feel holds the book back is that, while the story is compelling and interesting the writing holds it back a little. While not bad, its feel it lacks a bit of energy or some sort of spark that could have really help push the story along. I’m not sure if this was deliberate to have a more historical feeling to it or not, to be more placed within that time. The pace of story and style is good though, and the story never really drags, and I read it at quite a quick pace.
I certainly enjoyed it, and I think if you've got an interest in this time of history you'd probably get something out it as well. Would it be enough to draw in readers not big history nerds? I’m not sure, the history is the biggest part, while the characters are strong enough, especially Aethelflaeda, the writing lacks an “edge” that really could have helped it be more impact full. Overall, a good book but the side note that it misses being better by the writing at times feeling a little flat.
May 15, 2023
This is one of those times where you need to have half a star on Goodreads! I would definitely put this at 3.5, 4 feels a little too much but 3 doesn’t quite convey the interest I had in it. Let me explain further.
Before reading this book my knowledge of Anglo-Saxon England was basic. Most of my thoughts/knowledge has come from watching The Last Kingdom (based on Bernard Cornwall’s Saxon Stories). I was interested to know whether this book would give a slightly different view for me or just build upon the existing mental picture that I had. I found it was a bit of a mixture - in the cases of Aethflaed, Edward & Aelfwyn definitely not but Aethlered was completely different & much more likeable. Anyway, enough of the comparison and onto the most likeable points of the author’s book.
Stokes’ characterisation is very good. The main characters are distinct and have their own qualities which make you root for them, or not, as the case arises. They aren’t wishy-wishy or bland (which normally turns me off of a book quite early). The prose is also good - interesting enough to want you to read on without being too wordy or with a lot of jargon. Considering the period of history being written about & how different that time was to now (including language differences) I would say that pitching the tone right would be a challenge. Stokes deals with the challenge well.
The plot is interesting and is enough of a story to keep you wanting to read. However (and you knew there had to be one of those to explain the half a star!) for me the last part of the book seemed rushed. There was plenty of set up with a younger Aethlflaed negotiating her position and her relationship with others and it really helped to get me into the story. However the latter years of her life seemed glossed over a bit more quickly & I’d have preferred this to be treated more in the same way the start was. I also found the epilogue left me wanting more. It was nice to know what happened but it almost felt a bit rushed, like it was the only way to tie up the loose ends. To me though it felt like the cliff hanger in the last few episodes of a tv series where they quickly have to tie up loose ends because the series hasn’t been renewed. If it wasn’t for this feeling I’d have definitely put it at 4 stars.
All of the above being said, I would pick this book up if you like historical fiction & you get the chance. It’s different to see something in this time period & I did enjoy it.
Thank you to the publishers & NetGalley for this ARC.
Before reading this book my knowledge of Anglo-Saxon England was basic. Most of my thoughts/knowledge has come from watching The Last Kingdom (based on Bernard Cornwall’s Saxon Stories). I was interested to know whether this book would give a slightly different view for me or just build upon the existing mental picture that I had. I found it was a bit of a mixture - in the cases of Aethflaed, Edward & Aelfwyn definitely not but Aethlered was completely different & much more likeable. Anyway, enough of the comparison and onto the most likeable points of the author’s book.
Stokes’ characterisation is very good. The main characters are distinct and have their own qualities which make you root for them, or not, as the case arises. They aren’t wishy-wishy or bland (which normally turns me off of a book quite early). The prose is also good - interesting enough to want you to read on without being too wordy or with a lot of jargon. Considering the period of history being written about & how different that time was to now (including language differences) I would say that pitching the tone right would be a challenge. Stokes deals with the challenge well.
The plot is interesting and is enough of a story to keep you wanting to read. However (and you knew there had to be one of those to explain the half a star!) for me the last part of the book seemed rushed. There was plenty of set up with a younger Aethlflaed negotiating her position and her relationship with others and it really helped to get me into the story. However the latter years of her life seemed glossed over a bit more quickly & I’d have preferred this to be treated more in the same way the start was. I also found the epilogue left me wanting more. It was nice to know what happened but it almost felt a bit rushed, like it was the only way to tie up the loose ends. To me though it felt like the cliff hanger in the last few episodes of a tv series where they quickly have to tie up loose ends because the series hasn’t been renewed. If it wasn’t for this feeling I’d have definitely put it at 4 stars.
All of the above being said, I would pick this book up if you like historical fiction & you get the chance. It’s different to see something in this time period & I did enjoy it.
Thank you to the publishers & NetGalley for this ARC.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 19, 2023
This book frustrated me to no end. It was everything I wanted from an Aethelflaed book, exploring the beginning of her reign as Lady of Mercia, touching on a spicy Aethelflaed/Aethelwold/Aethelgifu love triangle, being one of the FEW books to depict Aelfwynn as someone who had Mercia's best interests at heart and not an airhead as so many historical fiction writers are somehow wont to do.
At the same time, I felt like I was reading a first draft. David Stokes thanks a slew of beta readers in his acknowledgements, but I find it hard to believe anyone offered constructive feedback. Aethelflaed pours over papers, and finds herself short of breathe. Quotation marks come and go as they please. The typos were constant. I don't believe an editor came close to this book. The story is also written in first person from Aethelflaed's point of view, which makes it all the more confusing when she calls her mother by her first name (Ealhswith did this, Ealhswith did that) and talks about how a lock of her hair fell on so-and-so's face while she slept. There were times that Aethelflaed's voice suddenly gave way to David Stokes the historian in his eagerness to explain a location's historical relevance to his readers. Ideas are touched upon but never expanded upon - Aelfwynn and Aethelgifu, for example, are both exiled into Shaftesbury Abbey for near identical reasons, but the book just kind of ho-hums the epilogue. Aethelgifu's entire existence is hand-waved once she's no longer relevant to the plot, as are many of the characters.
Overall, I loved the meat of the story, but I do feel that Stokes could have benefited from investing in a professional editor. I would have loved to read a final draft of this story.
At the same time, I felt like I was reading a first draft. David Stokes thanks a slew of beta readers in his acknowledgements, but I find it hard to believe anyone offered constructive feedback. Aethelflaed pours over papers, and finds herself short of breathe. Quotation marks come and go as they please. The typos were constant. I don't believe an editor came close to this book. The story is also written in first person from Aethelflaed's point of view, which makes it all the more confusing when she calls her mother by her first name (Ealhswith did this, Ealhswith did that) and talks about how a lock of her hair fell on so-and-so's face while she slept. There were times that Aethelflaed's voice suddenly gave way to David Stokes the historian in his eagerness to explain a location's historical relevance to his readers. Ideas are touched upon but never expanded upon - Aelfwynn and Aethelgifu, for example, are both exiled into Shaftesbury Abbey for near identical reasons, but the book just kind of ho-hums the epilogue. Aethelgifu's entire existence is hand-waved once she's no longer relevant to the plot, as are many of the characters.
Overall, I loved the meat of the story, but I do feel that Stokes could have benefited from investing in a professional editor. I would have loved to read a final draft of this story.
April 22, 2023
This novel tells the story of Æthelflæd, the daughter of King Alfred. The story is set in the 9th century of mediaeval England. The death of a king, a change of power, foreign and domestic threats, Vikings and war. This novel has it all.
The prologue instantly draws you into the novel. The story starts with the death of king Alfred. Æthelflæd returns home after being away for many years. I love the flashbacks of Æthelflæd’s childhood memories. It makes her charter so alive. Her brother is the King now. Her return home comes with some new challenges.
After her visit, she returns to her home in Mercia. At the request of her mother, she takes her Nephew (the first born son of her brother) with her. His name is Æthelstan. She will raise, teach and educate him.
In the book you really get to know Æthelflæd in the different phases of her life. Her thoughts and memories are very well described. You get to know her in so many different roles. I also love the navigation of the diplomacy and the war battles. She really is a brave and strong women. The reader learns her story and how she became the leader of the Mercians.
Rating: 4 stars. I really enjoyed reading this story. Form the first minute you start reading you stay engaged in Æthelflæd’s story. The only difficulty I had, was with some of the names in the story. Fortunately, there was a list with names provided in the book, which helped a lot. The author did a lot of historical research in order to write this story. The historical facts have been very well included in the novel. If you love to learn more about the history of England, this book is a must read for you.
Fans of the tv series Vikings will love to read this novel.
Thank you Netgalley & The Book Guild for a copy of this novel.
The prologue instantly draws you into the novel. The story starts with the death of king Alfred. Æthelflæd returns home after being away for many years. I love the flashbacks of Æthelflæd’s childhood memories. It makes her charter so alive. Her brother is the King now. Her return home comes with some new challenges.
After her visit, she returns to her home in Mercia. At the request of her mother, she takes her Nephew (the first born son of her brother) with her. His name is Æthelstan. She will raise, teach and educate him.
In the book you really get to know Æthelflæd in the different phases of her life. Her thoughts and memories are very well described. You get to know her in so many different roles. I also love the navigation of the diplomacy and the war battles. She really is a brave and strong women. The reader learns her story and how she became the leader of the Mercians.
Rating: 4 stars. I really enjoyed reading this story. Form the first minute you start reading you stay engaged in Æthelflæd’s story. The only difficulty I had, was with some of the names in the story. Fortunately, there was a list with names provided in the book, which helped a lot. The author did a lot of historical research in order to write this story. The historical facts have been very well included in the novel. If you love to learn more about the history of England, this book is a must read for you.
Fans of the tv series Vikings will love to read this novel.
Thank you Netgalley & The Book Guild for a copy of this novel.
May 3, 2023
When I first saw that a fictionalised story of Aethelflaed, Lady of the Mercians had been created, I was very excited to read it, as I had learnt of her story through podcasts and some histories of the Anglo-Saxon period and her pivotal role in the creation of England, as we know it today.
The vast majority of the book focuses on Aethelflaed's life prior to her taking sole rule of Mercia. It details the securing of her region against Anglo-Saxon rebellions and the Danes, whilst her husband was battling a debilitating illness. It shed more of a light on what was going on than I had previously realised and the leadership qualities that led her to be selected as the Mercian's leader after her husband had died.
The detail in the various battle scenes was vivid and allowed you to envision yourself fighting alongside her army during these events. The novel demonstrated well the challenges and setbacks that a woman in a leadership role faced in the time period and the need to be exceptional, just to get the recognition at the time. The author's note at the end was fascinating, showing the discrepancies between the source material and the propaganda involved that made her almost a footnote in history.
I did find that the ending of the book was all a bit rushed, as the final seven years of her life were very quickly dealt with, with the exception of a final battle. The events that took place during those years are some that enabled Athelstan to build and create his own legacy on and I just feel a bit more could have been done with this to highlight her pivotal role.
Thank you NetGalley and David Stokes for sending this book for review consideration. All opinions are my own.
The vast majority of the book focuses on Aethelflaed's life prior to her taking sole rule of Mercia. It details the securing of her region against Anglo-Saxon rebellions and the Danes, whilst her husband was battling a debilitating illness. It shed more of a light on what was going on than I had previously realised and the leadership qualities that led her to be selected as the Mercian's leader after her husband had died.
The detail in the various battle scenes was vivid and allowed you to envision yourself fighting alongside her army during these events. The novel demonstrated well the challenges and setbacks that a woman in a leadership role faced in the time period and the need to be exceptional, just to get the recognition at the time. The author's note at the end was fascinating, showing the discrepancies between the source material and the propaganda involved that made her almost a footnote in history.
I did find that the ending of the book was all a bit rushed, as the final seven years of her life were very quickly dealt with, with the exception of a final battle. The events that took place during those years are some that enabled Athelstan to build and create his own legacy on and I just feel a bit more could have been done with this to highlight her pivotal role.
Thank you NetGalley and David Stokes for sending this book for review consideration. All opinions are my own.
April 20, 2025
Aethelflaed was once a forgotten warrior queen. However, she emerged into popular culture due to the hit tv show, The Last Kingdom. Aethelflaed was the Lady of Mercia who fought the Vikings to unite Anglo-Saxon England. King Alfred’s Daughter retells Aethelflaed’s story from her perspective. After the death of her father, King Alfred the Great, Aethelflaed takes up arms to wage a war against the Vikings.
I found Aethelflaed to be a very fascinating character. She was a very strong woman. She has to carry her father’s torch and fulfill his dream of a united England. I also like how the novel shows Aethelflaed as a ruler. She has to make tough choices for the good of her kingdom. Aethelflaed proved to be a formidable figure. I admired her courage, strength, and wisdom. I also like how this novel portrays her various roles other than a ruler. I like how it shows Aethelflaed as a daughter, wife, and mother. This showed her as a woman who loves and cares for those around her. Thus, Aethelflaed was a very fleshed out character. I was very invested in her story to see how it would end.
Overall, this book is about war, choices, and ambitions. I thought that all of the characters were well-developed. I also loved how the story is told in first person because it was more engaging and accessible! I also loved the writing, especially when depicting gritty battle scenes! Therefore, Mr. Stokes made Anglo-Saxon England come alive! The only thing I did not like about this book was that it seemed a bit rushed in certain areas. Nevertheless, King Alfred’s Daughter was a very engrossing read! I recommend this for Swords Across the Thames, To Be a Queen, and The King’s Daughter!
(Note: I read an ARC copy of this book in courtesy of Netgalley.)
I found Aethelflaed to be a very fascinating character. She was a very strong woman. She has to carry her father’s torch and fulfill his dream of a united England. I also like how the novel shows Aethelflaed as a ruler. She has to make tough choices for the good of her kingdom. Aethelflaed proved to be a formidable figure. I admired her courage, strength, and wisdom. I also like how this novel portrays her various roles other than a ruler. I like how it shows Aethelflaed as a daughter, wife, and mother. This showed her as a woman who loves and cares for those around her. Thus, Aethelflaed was a very fleshed out character. I was very invested in her story to see how it would end.
Overall, this book is about war, choices, and ambitions. I thought that all of the characters were well-developed. I also loved how the story is told in first person because it was more engaging and accessible! I also loved the writing, especially when depicting gritty battle scenes! Therefore, Mr. Stokes made Anglo-Saxon England come alive! The only thing I did not like about this book was that it seemed a bit rushed in certain areas. Nevertheless, King Alfred’s Daughter was a very engrossing read! I recommend this for Swords Across the Thames, To Be a Queen, and The King’s Daughter!
(Note: I read an ARC copy of this book in courtesy of Netgalley.)
April 1, 2023
I was hooked on this novel from the prologue alone, which provided the necessary introductions to the story, while creating a sense of both historical context and immersion.
Aethelflaed was an enjoyable protagonist to share the story with, she is observant, but to the point. The writing style was authentic and the story had great flow and the pacing was perfect, sometimes I find in historical fiction the pacing can be a bit slow, or we spend a lot of time in the characters youth and I get frustrated and bored, this didn’t happen here. Furthermore, Aethelflaeds thoughts and memories were so well described, that at times I thought this would make a really good film or mini-series, as these scenes felt like they were playing out in my head as I read them.
My only (and incredibly minor) issue, is as it is written as a reflection, there was very little opportunity for a twist or surprise in the story, with Aethlflead musing “I would come to regret it in the end” throughout. It was great foreshadowing, but it made the story feel a bit predictable at times.
This book is great for fans of The Last Kingdom and Vikings, an engaging trip through time, told from a feminine perspective. Aethelflaed is so often a footnote in tales from this period, is was satisfying to read about her being the power player that she was. It is clear that this book has been incredibly well researched and it puts forward events of the past in an entertaining and accessible manner.
Thank you NetGalley and The Book Guild Publishing for giving me the opportunity to read and share my thoughts about this book in exchange for an honest review.
Aethelflaed was an enjoyable protagonist to share the story with, she is observant, but to the point. The writing style was authentic and the story had great flow and the pacing was perfect, sometimes I find in historical fiction the pacing can be a bit slow, or we spend a lot of time in the characters youth and I get frustrated and bored, this didn’t happen here. Furthermore, Aethelflaeds thoughts and memories were so well described, that at times I thought this would make a really good film or mini-series, as these scenes felt like they were playing out in my head as I read them.
My only (and incredibly minor) issue, is as it is written as a reflection, there was very little opportunity for a twist or surprise in the story, with Aethlflead musing “I would come to regret it in the end” throughout. It was great foreshadowing, but it made the story feel a bit predictable at times.
This book is great for fans of The Last Kingdom and Vikings, an engaging trip through time, told from a feminine perspective. Aethelflaed is so often a footnote in tales from this period, is was satisfying to read about her being the power player that she was. It is clear that this book has been incredibly well researched and it puts forward events of the past in an entertaining and accessible manner.
Thank you NetGalley and The Book Guild Publishing for giving me the opportunity to read and share my thoughts about this book in exchange for an honest review.
April 24, 2023
King Alfred's daughter is about King Alfred the Great's his eldest daughter Aethelflaed, who was Lady of the Mercians.
The books starts with Alfred's death, as Aethelflaed's younger brother Edward presumes succession to the throne and starts to make controversial changes. His claim to the throne disregards a pact that his father made with his uncle and it emerges that perhaps the title should have passed to Edward's cousin Aethelwold. This causes much political conflict and Edward's increasing intereference in matters over Mercia also makes life difficult for for his sister. To make matters worse Aethelflaed's husband Athelred's health is declining and his status as ruler of Mercia hangs in the balance.
The unstability within the Anglo-Saxons kingdom could weaken them, particularly with the increasing attacks from the Danes. Unusually for a woman at the time Aethelflaed takes on many of her husbands roles and bravely attempts to strengthen their boundaries and ward off attacks
The story is told from the perspective of Aethelflaed, in a diary-type narrative. The voice of powerful women from this era of history is almost unknown of so this is an interesting slant on events.
I must admit that I got a bit confused in the middle as there are a lot of names to remember, all of which sound quite similar! The author does helpfully provide a list of names and explanation of their roles at the start of the book, which can be referred to.
A fascinating read for those interested in the political and social history of England.
The books starts with Alfred's death, as Aethelflaed's younger brother Edward presumes succession to the throne and starts to make controversial changes. His claim to the throne disregards a pact that his father made with his uncle and it emerges that perhaps the title should have passed to Edward's cousin Aethelwold. This causes much political conflict and Edward's increasing intereference in matters over Mercia also makes life difficult for for his sister. To make matters worse Aethelflaed's husband Athelred's health is declining and his status as ruler of Mercia hangs in the balance.
The unstability within the Anglo-Saxons kingdom could weaken them, particularly with the increasing attacks from the Danes. Unusually for a woman at the time Aethelflaed takes on many of her husbands roles and bravely attempts to strengthen their boundaries and ward off attacks
The story is told from the perspective of Aethelflaed, in a diary-type narrative. The voice of powerful women from this era of history is almost unknown of so this is an interesting slant on events.
I must admit that I got a bit confused in the middle as there are a lot of names to remember, all of which sound quite similar! The author does helpfully provide a list of names and explanation of their roles at the start of the book, which can be referred to.
A fascinating read for those interested in the political and social history of England.
May 25, 2023
This is a NetGalley Review Copy.
Interesting historical study. Stokes writes with a sense of agency, spinning through historical events to shape the formation of England - if you've read Cornwell's The Last Kingdom, you'll be in familiar ground here, multiple of the same figures crop up. It's not hard to make the comparison, and I like the first person narrative that Stokes gave Æthelflæd - it's more of a character being used to show the events that happened than an exploration of the character; I would have liked more development with most of them but they're distinctive enough to stand on their own.
We get to explore the weight of leadership in these times and Æthelflæd's decisions; and the book feels a bit rushed with the pacing having to tie everything together, breezing over the end of her life - I almost think this could've been a duology, there's too much to cover in one book.
Yet what we do get is worth the read: the battle sequences are compelling, engrossing and had me enthralled. The author's note at the end gives more context to why so little is known about Æthelflæd - there was plenty of propaganda that diminished her impact, and it's good to see it executed here in a way that gives a spotlight to the character that's ultimately, a refreshing perspective compared to Bernard Cornwell's and has me keen to read more of David Stokes. The voice of certain historical key women from history is so little told any perspective helps; and the diary approach lends a touch of authenticity.
Interesting historical study. Stokes writes with a sense of agency, spinning through historical events to shape the formation of England - if you've read Cornwell's The Last Kingdom, you'll be in familiar ground here, multiple of the same figures crop up. It's not hard to make the comparison, and I like the first person narrative that Stokes gave Æthelflæd - it's more of a character being used to show the events that happened than an exploration of the character; I would have liked more development with most of them but they're distinctive enough to stand on their own.
We get to explore the weight of leadership in these times and Æthelflæd's decisions; and the book feels a bit rushed with the pacing having to tie everything together, breezing over the end of her life - I almost think this could've been a duology, there's too much to cover in one book.
Yet what we do get is worth the read: the battle sequences are compelling, engrossing and had me enthralled. The author's note at the end gives more context to why so little is known about Æthelflæd - there was plenty of propaganda that diminished her impact, and it's good to see it executed here in a way that gives a spotlight to the character that's ultimately, a refreshing perspective compared to Bernard Cornwell's and has me keen to read more of David Stokes. The voice of certain historical key women from history is so little told any perspective helps; and the diary approach lends a touch of authenticity.
April 16, 2023
This is a beautifully written story about Æthelflæd and how she became a beloved leader of the Mercians. When you start with a prologue like this you are instantly drawn into the story.
‘Do not read on if you prefer living quietly by the rules and staying out of trouble. Our lords do not want you to hear this story. It tells of a woman who brought the Angles and Saxons together to create England. Yes, it was a woman. Not a king, nor a warlord, nor a magician. A woman.
There are men who want her story to remain untold so they can take the glory. Have courage. Turn the page. Read the truth.’
This book was written almost like journal entries format which helped with the flow of the story and kept you turning pages. It was really well researched and the battles were written extremely well. We follow Æthelflæd as she has to step up as leader after her husband falls ill to her becoming the queen of Merica bringing up Æthelstan who would go on to become the first king of England.
It tells a story that so many times has tried to be re-written in history to involve men instead of showing the true strength of Æthelflæd and everything she did and how pivotal her decisions were to making England become a reality.
I loved reading this book and will definitely be reading more books by David Stokes.
‘Do not read on if you prefer living quietly by the rules and staying out of trouble. Our lords do not want you to hear this story. It tells of a woman who brought the Angles and Saxons together to create England. Yes, it was a woman. Not a king, nor a warlord, nor a magician. A woman.
There are men who want her story to remain untold so they can take the glory. Have courage. Turn the page. Read the truth.’
This book was written almost like journal entries format which helped with the flow of the story and kept you turning pages. It was really well researched and the battles were written extremely well. We follow Æthelflæd as she has to step up as leader after her husband falls ill to her becoming the queen of Merica bringing up Æthelstan who would go on to become the first king of England.
It tells a story that so many times has tried to be re-written in history to involve men instead of showing the true strength of Æthelflæd and everything she did and how pivotal her decisions were to making England become a reality.
I loved reading this book and will definitely be reading more books by David Stokes.
May 24, 2023
As someone who loves history and the Anglo-Saxon Era I was thrilled to find a book about Aethelflaed, Lady of the Mercians. David Stoakes has clearly done his research because at times I could almost smell the air in his writing. Although much of the knowledge of this period is based on the official chronicles of kings and battles, of which sadly the Lady Aethelflaed is not part of, Stoakes has created in this book a woman that reflects the values and visions that I have learned about in this era. It was helpful to have an index of names at the front of the book, and even in my Kindle edition I had a very well used bookmark for this page because so many of the names reflect their lineages and oftentimes fathers and sons can be confused. But this does not take away from Stoakes’ authorship and style. His prose style was engaging, and the voices of these historical figures jumped off the page. This was a great book that enabled me to be an armchair time traveler to the Anglo Saxon Era and see the figures that I have read in dry historical documents come to life.
If shows like The Last Kingdom or The Vikings appeal to you, take a moment to visit with the Lady Aethelflaed and see the often hidden world of personal conflict and court intrigue through a woman’s perspective that history books of this era did not include for a long time.
If shows like The Last Kingdom or The Vikings appeal to you, take a moment to visit with the Lady Aethelflaed and see the often hidden world of personal conflict and court intrigue through a woman’s perspective that history books of this era did not include for a long time.
June 13, 2023
A well written page turner. For fans of historical fiction and for those who loved the series The Last Kingdom, this book is a must. The book begins in 899 with the death of Alfred the Great and the succession of his son Edward. Æthelflæd is the daughter of Alfred and sister to Edward. She was married off to the much older King of Mercia, Æthelflæd comes in to her own. She leads Mercia intelligently, builds up Mercia's defences against the Danes and her brother Edward's expansion plans. Æthelflæd takes Athelstan, Edwards first born son who was discarded on Edwards remarriage in favour of a second son. She leads her armies into battled, founded new towns, was an excellent diplomat.
Our titular character is well fleshed out by the author, bringing her to life by using contemporary sources and archaeological evidence.. She was a trailblazer who the first woman to govern an Anglo Saxon state.An excellent blend of history and fiction. The information lists at the start of the book are invaluable of keeping track of who is who. Particularly with names that are similar. The historical notes at the end give a timeline of events that helps put the story into the historical context. as is the map showing England at the time of Æthelflæd and showing the places of battle.
I was gifted a copy of this book by Netgalley for an honest review. Opinions are my own.
Our titular character is well fleshed out by the author, bringing her to life by using contemporary sources and archaeological evidence.. She was a trailblazer who the first woman to govern an Anglo Saxon state.An excellent blend of history and fiction. The information lists at the start of the book are invaluable of keeping track of who is who. Particularly with names that are similar. The historical notes at the end give a timeline of events that helps put the story into the historical context. as is the map showing England at the time of Æthelflæd and showing the places of battle.
I was gifted a copy of this book by Netgalley for an honest review. Opinions are my own.
April 19, 2023
I have to say I was really looking forward to this novel because it promised a well researched historical theme with a strong female protagonist seemingly forgotten by historical tomes.
I think the author did a good job of taking a very dense topic and making a believable story with fair amount of action dialogue and great pacing . I fully appreciate that this story could have become quite dry with the shear amount of dates and people that made up the historical events but it remained on target.
My only issue was the amount of end-of-chapter foreshadowing which made the story somewhat predictable that being said any story that is an actual event in history is unavoidably predictable but I think it could have been better placed within the story rather than at obvious junctions in the story.
This is otherwise a very well researched historical fiction with great characters and plenty of action - I haven’t read a book from solely this genre for a while and it was a nice change for me to delve into the time of the Anglo Saxons Danes and early Briton.
This review was made possible by Net Galley and The Book Guild Publishing - always appreciated never a chore.
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I think the author did a good job of taking a very dense topic and making a believable story with fair amount of action dialogue and great pacing . I fully appreciate that this story could have become quite dry with the shear amount of dates and people that made up the historical events but it remained on target.
My only issue was the amount of end-of-chapter foreshadowing which made the story somewhat predictable that being said any story that is an actual event in history is unavoidably predictable but I think it could have been better placed within the story rather than at obvious junctions in the story.
This is otherwise a very well researched historical fiction with great characters and plenty of action - I haven’t read a book from solely this genre for a while and it was a nice change for me to delve into the time of the Anglo Saxons Danes and early Briton.
This review was made possible by Net Galley and The Book Guild Publishing - always appreciated never a chore.
#kingalfredsdaughter #netgalley
www.instagram.com/thedeadrosesbookclub
May 12, 2023
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for a copy of this book in exchange for a genuine review.
As a lover of The Last Kingdom, I was desperate to read this book as soon as I saw it. Aethelflaed was a powerful and incredible woman, her story was a joy to read. The novel depicts her life as she progressively gains power as the leader of Mercia as her husband begins to fall ill. We follow her as she combats the new world of military and political decisions. The firsthand account was wonderful and I especially loved the points where Aethelfaed would internally react to others (mostly her brother) underestimating her simply because she is a woman.
It’s clear a lot of research went into the novel and it was fascinating to hear about the groups of the time.
I’ve seen other reviewers say they were uncertain about the battle descriptions. I loved them. I don’t often read historical fiction but if I do, I want to feel as though I’m watching the events take place in my mind - the authors description does this perfectly. I found the battles so interesting and I surprised myself by how much I enjoyed them! I loved this book and I think it may have unlocked a new love for historical fiction that I can’t wait to explore.
As a lover of The Last Kingdom, I was desperate to read this book as soon as I saw it. Aethelflaed was a powerful and incredible woman, her story was a joy to read. The novel depicts her life as she progressively gains power as the leader of Mercia as her husband begins to fall ill. We follow her as she combats the new world of military and political decisions. The firsthand account was wonderful and I especially loved the points where Aethelfaed would internally react to others (mostly her brother) underestimating her simply because she is a woman.
It’s clear a lot of research went into the novel and it was fascinating to hear about the groups of the time.
I’ve seen other reviewers say they were uncertain about the battle descriptions. I loved them. I don’t often read historical fiction but if I do, I want to feel as though I’m watching the events take place in my mind - the authors description does this perfectly. I found the battles so interesting and I surprised myself by how much I enjoyed them! I loved this book and I think it may have unlocked a new love for historical fiction that I can’t wait to explore.
April 1, 2023
I was hooked on this novel from the prologue alone, which provided the necessary introductions to the story, while creating a sense of both historical context and immersion.
Aethelflaed was an enjoyable protagonist to share the story with, she is observant, but to the point. The writing style was authentic and the story had great flow and the pacing was perfect, sometimes I find in historical fiction the pacing can be a bit slow, or we spend a lot of time in the characters youth and I get frustrated and bored, this didn’t happen here. Furthermore, Aethelflaeds thoughts and memories were so well described, that at times I thought this would make a really good film or mini-series, as these scenes felt like they were playing out in my head as I read them.
My only (and incredibly minor) issue, is as it is written as a reflection, there was very little opportunity for a twist or surprise in the story, with Aethlflead musing “I would come to regret it in the end” throughout. It was great foreshadowing, but it made the story feel a bit predictable at times.
This book is great for fans of The Last Kingdom and Vikings, an engaging trip through time, told from a feminine perspective. Aethelflaed is so often a footnote in tales from this period, is was satisfying to read about her being the power player that she was. It is clear that this book has been incredibly well researched and it puts forward events of the past in an entertaining and accessible manner.
Thank you NetGalley and The Book Guild Publishing for giving me the opportunity to read and share my thoughts about this book in exchange for an honest review.
Aethelflaed was an enjoyable protagonist to share the story with, she is observant, but to the point. The writing style was authentic and the story had great flow and the pacing was perfect, sometimes I find in historical fiction the pacing can be a bit slow, or we spend a lot of time in the characters youth and I get frustrated and bored, this didn’t happen here. Furthermore, Aethelflaeds thoughts and memories were so well described, that at times I thought this would make a really good film or mini-series, as these scenes felt like they were playing out in my head as I read them.
My only (and incredibly minor) issue, is as it is written as a reflection, there was very little opportunity for a twist or surprise in the story, with Aethlflead musing “I would come to regret it in the end” throughout. It was great foreshadowing, but it made the story feel a bit predictable at times.
This book is great for fans of The Last Kingdom and Vikings, an engaging trip through time, told from a feminine perspective. Aethelflaed is so often a footnote in tales from this period, is was satisfying to read about her being the power player that she was. It is clear that this book has been incredibly well researched and it puts forward events of the past in an entertaining and accessible manner.
Thank you NetGalley and The Book Guild Publishing for giving me the opportunity to read and share my thoughts about this book in exchange for an honest review.
May 22, 2023
I enjoyed this book. I love historical fiction and I am a huge fan of The Last Kingdom. The research was very well done, it was nice to see Æthelflæd's side of things. I am also so glad to have seen the The tv series based around Utrid and her father which allowed the reading to go smoothly for me. It helped me develop better accents to the names in the story as well as being able to pronounce the names without a struggle.
Æthelflæd as a woman her story was overshadowed by the males in her life so it was nice to bring forth the story of a Queen who is often forgotten. Well Done. Unfortunately in history such as these men get away with a lot of things and immediately we see that. Her brother taking away her right to be at her father's funeral by rushing it so he can claim king rights faster and treating her and everyone else as lowly. You can't help but be so angry for the woman in these stories even if they are strong and make history. The fact they went through what they do is terrible.
I received an arc copy of this book all thoughts and opinions are my own.
Æthelflæd as a woman her story was overshadowed by the males in her life so it was nice to bring forth the story of a Queen who is often forgotten. Well Done. Unfortunately in history such as these men get away with a lot of things and immediately we see that. Her brother taking away her right to be at her father's funeral by rushing it so he can claim king rights faster and treating her and everyone else as lowly. You can't help but be so angry for the woman in these stories even if they are strong and make history. The fact they went through what they do is terrible.
I received an arc copy of this book all thoughts and opinions are my own.
May 25, 2023
Restoring Æthelflæd, daughter of King Alfred, to her rightful place in history.
Stokes's knowledge of his subject is undeniable. And fictionalising an historical character or event can bring that person or event to life.
The battle scenes are truly vivid, and I loved the detail about the beehive as a weapon. However, the quieter moments are less engaging, with wooden dialogue and rather too much exposition giving the impression that the author is shoehorning all his expertise into the narrative at every opportunity. So much so that at times the narrative becomes less of Æthelflæd than of Stoke's own voice, such as when she refers to her mother as 'mother' and Ealhswith on the same page. Elsewhere, the author deems it necessary to over-explain, as when Æthewold is deceived by the reeve of Braydon.
As much as I was invested in this moment in history, the voice of King Alfred's eldest daughter fails to convince.
My thanks to Netgalley and Troubador Publishing Ltd for the ARC.
Stokes's knowledge of his subject is undeniable. And fictionalising an historical character or event can bring that person or event to life.
The battle scenes are truly vivid, and I loved the detail about the beehive as a weapon. However, the quieter moments are less engaging, with wooden dialogue and rather too much exposition giving the impression that the author is shoehorning all his expertise into the narrative at every opportunity. So much so that at times the narrative becomes less of Æthelflæd than of Stoke's own voice, such as when she refers to her mother as 'mother' and Ealhswith on the same page. Elsewhere, the author deems it necessary to over-explain, as when Æthewold is deceived by the reeve of Braydon.
As much as I was invested in this moment in history, the voice of King Alfred's eldest daughter fails to convince.
My thanks to Netgalley and Troubador Publishing Ltd for the ARC.
April 12, 2023
This is a really beautifully written book about the Lady of Mercia, Æthelflæd. I had a vague idea of who she was and got a better sense of her through The Last Kingdom, where I find her character to be fascinating so I was intrigued to read this book.
As expected from the era, Æthelflæd's life is a complicated and cautious one. Very often the chess piece to be moved at others will, she treads a fine line between family and loyalty.
The book is easy to read, almost snippets of journal entries, however if you are brand new to this era of history and are not prepared for the amount of Æthel's you are about to face, then the information lists at the start of the book of invaluable!
This is a brilliant book, highlighting the life of a wonderfully brave woman, who has been largely lost to history until very recently. Thank you to the author for writing her story.
Thank you also to Netgalley for the chance to read and review this ARC.
As expected from the era, Æthelflæd's life is a complicated and cautious one. Very often the chess piece to be moved at others will, she treads a fine line between family and loyalty.
The book is easy to read, almost snippets of journal entries, however if you are brand new to this era of history and are not prepared for the amount of Æthel's you are about to face, then the information lists at the start of the book of invaluable!
This is a brilliant book, highlighting the life of a wonderfully brave woman, who has been largely lost to history until very recently. Thank you to the author for writing her story.
Thank you also to Netgalley for the chance to read and review this ARC.
May 19, 2023
As the daughter of the great King Alfred, Aethelflaed is from a noble line and her marriage to the King of Mercia has brought her power. However after her father's death her brother Edward takes control of Wessex and starts to assert his authority. Aethelflaed's husband is old and increasingly incapable of ruling so she takes the reins of power. Whilst many mistakes are made, Aethelflaed proves herself more that a match for warring nobles and invading Danes.
Based on the true story of Aethelflaed, the daughter of King Alfred who ruled Mercia for many years, this book is a light but very enjoyable romp through 10th century history. Although Aethelflaed has been written out of many histories (well, she is woman!) Stokes has conducted enough research to make this believable. Although the writing is very clunky at times, the comments at the end of every chapter are annoying, this is an entertaining piece of history.
Based on the true story of Aethelflaed, the daughter of King Alfred who ruled Mercia for many years, this book is a light but very enjoyable romp through 10th century history. Although Aethelflaed has been written out of many histories (well, she is woman!) Stokes has conducted enough research to make this believable. Although the writing is very clunky at times, the comments at the end of every chapter are annoying, this is an entertaining piece of history.
June 13, 2023
I'm a big fan if The Last Kingdom and the happenings of England at that time. While the women in that appear strong they are over shadowed by the men. So seeing Æthelflæd's story from historical research was an interesting book I couldn't pass up.
And it doesn't disappoint. Strong, fierce and worthy of her own history been told. King Alfred's daughter is an insightful read for English history and female history.
As the times were so tumultuous it does lurch from battle to skirmish, but avoids filling in lulls with fictional melodrama. Several time jumps push the story to the next conquest some that the casual history lover may recognise. Along with places I certainly didn't know had paid such an important role in history.
Grab this book for a weekend historical jaunt and prepare to learn about the read figure who united England.
Thanks to Netgalley for the chance to read in return for an honest review.
And it doesn't disappoint. Strong, fierce and worthy of her own history been told. King Alfred's daughter is an insightful read for English history and female history.
As the times were so tumultuous it does lurch from battle to skirmish, but avoids filling in lulls with fictional melodrama. Several time jumps push the story to the next conquest some that the casual history lover may recognise. Along with places I certainly didn't know had paid such an important role in history.
Grab this book for a weekend historical jaunt and prepare to learn about the read figure who united England.
Thanks to Netgalley for the chance to read in return for an honest review.
June 19, 2023
I really enjoyed reading this book - a well-researched blend of historical fact and fiction.
Although I've read several books where Æthelflæd was mentioned, I had no idea of the full extent of her achievements. It is a great shame that she was in effect written out of the "official" records in the Anglo Saxon Chronicle, but lucky that her achievements were recorded in other texts such as the Mercian Register. I could understand her brother - Edward - wanting to downplay her role, but would have expected Athelstan (who described her as his "beloved foster mother") to give her due credit.
The author has obviously spent a great deal of time researching the background to this novel, and this book has inspired me to read further into the history of these distant times.
My thanks to NetGalley and the publishers for an ARC. All opinions my own.
Although I've read several books where Æthelflæd was mentioned, I had no idea of the full extent of her achievements. It is a great shame that she was in effect written out of the "official" records in the Anglo Saxon Chronicle, but lucky that her achievements were recorded in other texts such as the Mercian Register. I could understand her brother - Edward - wanting to downplay her role, but would have expected Athelstan (who described her as his "beloved foster mother") to give her due credit.
The author has obviously spent a great deal of time researching the background to this novel, and this book has inspired me to read further into the history of these distant times.
My thanks to NetGalley and the publishers for an ARC. All opinions my own.
January 14, 2024
An interesting account of the most active years of the Lady of Mercia Æthelflæd. Whist battles naturally feature heavily there is enough character to keep the reader interested. A list of the characters at the start of the book certainly helped me keep track in the early stages of reading whilst familiarising myself with Anglo-Saxon names of these historical characters, many of which were very similar. You can tell the author is a historian and so whilst this is a novel I felt like I was also having an engaging history lesson. I did get irritated by the use of statements like 'it was a decision I would regret' but wonder if this was done to ensure the reader would remember events to ensure the story flowed (especially with the complex character names).
Interesting timeline and historical notes at the end.
Interesting timeline and historical notes at the end.
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