Ummmm....I have a hate/love relationship with this story. It’s like half of me says it’s good bad and then it’s terrible and full of stupid cliches that made me want to scream out loud.
I don’t know how I am going to be able to actually write this review while not screaming and typing and jabbing my fingers at the screen so I am gonna do a bullet point review. (Who doesn’t like bullet points?)
• The cover and plot. Okay mind you the plot really would stick out to a fourth grader looking for a good book to read. And it sounds cool and the cover looks nice to. Sleek and edgy. But can I say that the story felt like there wasn’t even any direction added to it? It was like this happened, then boom. “We all get worried, we fight, and boom! Yay we reached the end of the story.” No I didn’t buy it one bit.
• The main character. Now don’t get me wrong, Ashlee does grow in the end as the story develops but she was so annoying and the stereotypical popular girl at the start, I just had to gag. She doesn’t want her brother anywhere near her in school, afraid he will destroy her social status. She always cares about being popular, and is confused when someone tells her in a basic way “popular isn’t every thing.” She was just so clueless, I wanted to scream. Again.
• Stereotypes and the like. As if the main character hasn’t already pissed me off, the story also deals with mean popular girls and teenagers acting all cheesy and cringey. It really just made the story seem more confusing then it already was. I don’t want to hear the word “popular” every single page. This basically just throws the wrong message at the reader. Especially giving them a false image of middle school, which is no way like the story tries to make it look like.
• Romance? Why don’t you just write it? The main character falls for some dude of her best friend and always feels a little different around him. This could have been developed into something more. I was tired of the main character saying she had a “crush.” Why don’t you just ask the guy out? Raise the standard. Sure it’s a book for elementary kids but you can make it real if you want. It wasn’t bad, but the romance could have been done right.
• Vampires? How? Why not Assassins...Or Vampire Slayers? The whole plot centers on vampires and bats and all that fluff. Frankly I don’t buy it. Also, instead why not write about the main character slaying vampires? Just write it in a fun action way suited for the right audience (this time it’s elementary school graders.) I will admit, that premise sounds way better then being a vampire.
• Could be better. All in all, take in these points and you got yourself a good book, and if not, then better. I will admit, this book sounds neat and all that, it just wasn’t executed properly. It was another one of those chapter books for elementary readers. Even if it’s not meant to be better (considering this is for elementary readers, which lets be honest, no one really reads in elementary school) still could have been better. Period. 👏