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Bite Me
Never say 'Bite me' to a vampire.
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Status: Complete
Word count: approx. 65,700
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Status: Complete
Word count: approx. 65,700
115 pages, Online Fiction
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August 30, 2011
Ugh, I don't feel like writing a review; I'm pissed off, but the blurb gives nothing away so I'd better summarize the story.
The story starts off with Justin nearly dying of blood loss. What seemed a nice customer (yes, he's a hooker) turned out to be a vampire determined to make him his blood servant. The problem is, Justin refuses to be "exclusive" even when the vamp, Gideon, is willing to meet all his needs and treat him as a lover would. As if Gideon's plans blowing up on his face weren't enough, the vampires' laws don't allow blood servants to be cognizant, so he has to choose between his life or Justin's.
If you decide to read this, you'll need patience. Tons of it. The story has potential; the plot opens a range of possibilities that, sadly, aren't fully explored. It's almost like the author was in rush to finish the story.
The story starts off with Justin nearly dying of blood loss. What seemed a nice customer (yes, he's a hooker) turned out to be a vampire determined to make him his blood servant. The problem is, Justin refuses to be "exclusive" even when the vamp, Gideon, is willing to meet all his needs and treat him as a lover would. As if Gideon's plans blowing up on his face weren't enough, the vampires' laws don't allow blood servants to be cognizant, so he has to choose between his life or Justin's.
If you decide to read this, you'll need patience. Tons of it. The story has potential; the plot opens a range of possibilities that, sadly, aren't fully explored. It's almost like the author was in rush to finish the story.
February 7, 2013
I could barely finish this one, it was that bad.
The story of ok for the first 8 chapters or so but after that the whole plot just disintegrated completely. There was no point what so ever in anything anyone did and half of the time the way plot (or what there was of it) seemed to be going changed between chapters and reader was left to try and think why MC is now here watching that man when in the last chapter he was running away from him as fast as he could.
You could drive a semi through those plot holes.
Really bad waste of time and if it hadn't been one of my challenge books I have stop reading it after the first plot hole appeared.
The story of ok for the first 8 chapters or so but after that the whole plot just disintegrated completely. There was no point what so ever in anything anyone did and half of the time the way plot (or what there was of it) seemed to be going changed between chapters and reader was left to try and think why MC is now here watching that man when in the last chapter he was running away from him as fast as he could.
You could drive a semi through those plot holes.
Really bad waste of time and if it hadn't been one of my challenge books I have stop reading it after the first plot hole appeared.
November 18, 2012
Great build up and then it feels like the author got bored and threw three chapters together to end it, so much potential thrown down the drain.
March 27, 2013
2.5 stars round up to 3
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