Rapunzel

by Leila Bryce Sin

In order to save her mother’s life, Rapunzel becomes a slave to a wicked witch. When Marek, the handsome hunter, spies her in her tower he becomes enamored of her. Marek scales the tower to rescue Rapunzel, but first she wants to show him how grateful she is. This is an erotic short story with explicit imagery.

Genres: Erotica, BDSM, Fairy Tale Retellings, Short Stories, Fairy Tales

14 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 22, 2011

Reviews

[Charity · Rating 2 out of 5]

Interesting take on a classic fairy tale, but it just doesn’t do it for me. A virgin who has only read about romance, not graphic sex, ultimately has no reservations about getting rough. The light bondage and spanking was a little awkward for me. This would have been a much better story had it been more romantic and sensual.

[BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme · Rating 1 out of 5]

My expectation is a fairy tale retold. The first 3/4 of the book is almost identical to the original telling. This is disappointing. I kept waiting for the deviance into erotic smexiness. When it happens, don't blink. The book is not bad, it is just a disappointment. 1.5 star.

[Amanda · Rating 1 out of 5]

This wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great either. Parts of this short story seemed icky to me, with murky issues of consent -- Marek does ask for it, but I just felt entirely uncomfortable with his approach.

[Dragana · Rating 2 out of 5]

Short free story I downloaded on my Kindle from Amazon.
It starts like a simple retelling of Rapunzel without any twists and we have one not-very-exiting sex scene with her rescuer and then the end...

[Sarah Carp · Rating 1 out of 5]

The story was rather short and not as well written as it could have been. Rapunzel's "prince" comes off creepy and doesnt have appeal. The story goes downhill from the entrance of creepy and the sex scence wasnt well written. I wouldn't recommend this book.

[Angie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Very short interesting take on the beloved fairy tale. With Rapunzel being a virgin I feel that she should have been more frightened than she was presented, even if she had read some romance books, they couldn't have been to erotic if she hadn't read about blow jobs before.

[Joellen Ramsey · Rating 1 out of 5]

I like the idea of naughty fairytales, however this one seemed too unoriginal. It seemed like the it was written out of a children's book and the erotic parts might have been an afterthought. Not something I would read again or recommend.

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[Ruby · Rating 3 out of 5]

an *interesting* take on the Rapunzel tale, for adults. i liked it. nice little bedtime read.

[Beckey · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting but could have had a BETTER ending & bondage with her hair for her first time.... so so story....
Seen a couple of errors

[Mary · Rating 3 out of 5]

It's a juicy read... does this relate to a one-night stand? ;)

[Kelley · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute book

[janie love · Rating 4 out of 5]

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